CHAPTER VI

THE ARTIFICIAL ENDING

One of the surest tags of the American short story has been its

happy ending. No matter what vicissitudes the hero or heroine may

have undergone, what problems and tragedies may have overtaken them,

what unmendable exploits of circumstance or fate they may have been

subjected to, in the end all must be well with them. The happy ending

is a direct result of our uplift optimism, of our Pollyanna philosophy

of life, of our fear of reality. We have always justified it on the

ground of our national psychology, which, we claim, is buoyant and

aggressive and won’t accept defeat. We have insisted that the American

always “gets what he wants when he wants it.” And even the cynics among

us did not dispute our last claim; they pointed to the happy ending.

It is true that of late, since it has become the fashion to question

everything, the happy ending has come in for its share of blasphemous

discussion. Here and there views have been expressed that a happy

ending is not absolutely necessary to make a story readable; some

of these views are so decidedly antagonistic as to maintain that a

happy ending is invariably inartistic, which simply proves, again,

that rebound is directed with equal force but in opposite direction as

the original bound. Even aspiring story writers come in occasionally

inoculated with doubt of the very propriety of the happy ending. To

such, we the votaries of the perfect short story, having exhausted all

our erudite arguments in a vain attempt at reconversion, finally apply

the one unfailing argument--the threat of the editorial rejection slip.

The happy ending, we admit, may not always be artistic, and it may not

always bring an acceptance, but the unhappy ending almost invariably

brings a rejection.

The fallacy of the happy ending clearly illustrates the lack of any

sound system of thought or reasoning underlying the exposition and

production of American fiction. We have the support of venerable

theories and formulas and high-sounding abstractions, but not of

facts and logic. It is as if we dared not examine the result of the

application of our theories and the filling of our formulas. Glibly

we state the psychology of the average American reader, which we

profess to know so well, but do not care to assure ourselves whether

our deductions, and even our major premises are correct. For if it

were true that the average reader always demands a happy ending, we

would have no explanation of the popularity of most of the works of

Poe, Bret Harte, Jack London, Kipling, Conrad, Maupassant, and even

the gray Russians. Doubtless there are individual characteristics in

the writings of these gentlemen that have appealed to our happily

disposed readers, but how much of the appeal has been due to a vogue

created by official O. K.’ers? The inchoate reversion to an insistence

on the unhappy ending, which is becoming apparent among some layers

of our reading public, tends to confirm this suggestion. For it is

not probable that the same people who have never been able to enjoy a

story unless it ended happily should suddenly have been seized with a

passionate amour for the “morbid” ending; and, from any rational point

of view, it is just as fallacious to accept the unhappy ending as an

invariable rule as it is to accept the happy ending. One may be as

artificial as the other.

Manifestly there are kinks in the average reader’s psychology of which

we have not been aware, or if we have, have paid little attention to.

This psychology which we have taken for granted and builded upon is not

after all so solid as we have supposed it to be. It can be and is being

molded. It appears that the present-day average reader fears nothing

so much as the imputation of being average. Here and there a brave

soul may vociferously boast of being a “low-brow,” thus betraying a

troubled consciousness of mediocrity, but on the whole the tendency is

to deplore the tastes of the average, thereby imputing to one’s self,

by implication of contrast, the possession of tastes above those of the

average. Hence the sudden ability to enjoy an unhappy ending. Hence

also the distrust of the average editor of this sudden growth in taste.

He knows its make-believe nature: the average reader may learn to

pretend a dislike for the good old happy ending, but in truth he enjoys

it as much as he ever did. Hence the continued demand for stories with

happy endings.

This may not be such a cheering view of the average reader’s

psychology, but neither is it entirely cheerless. By exploiting its

hypocritical vein of pretended admiration for good literature, we may

hope ultimately to develop a genuine admiration. People of habitual

coarse tastes, for beverages, delicacies, clothes or arts, usually

begin the refining process by affecting the tastes of those whom they

think their betters. The process itself is rather long and tedious and

often disheartening. But the aping instinct helps measurably. We cannot

hope to have a discriminating reading public in a day. Too long have we

impressed upon our public the blessings of a happy disposition and the

artistry of reflecting it in our literature. Too long have we brazened

about our pride in Pollyanna, Wallingford, Torchy, and a hundred other

fictive chasers of the blues, who won’t take defeat but go on singing

on their way. The happy story, with its breezy style, its giggling

climax, and its smacking dénouement has become a fixed type from which

our readers’ affection cannot be so quickly alienated.

D. W. Griffith, one of the ablest producers of moving pictures, is

reported to have made the statement that the average spectator of

cinema drama has the intelligence of a nine-year-old child.[25] That

Mr. Griffith is justified in his statement may be assumed from the

huge success he has had in purveying cinema entertainment. He has made

millions where others have made scanty half-millions. Verily, he knows

his public and is in a position to estimate its mental powers with

some measure of accuracy. His contempt of its intelligence does him

credit....

One of his greatest successes has been his production of “Way Down

East,” a spectacular melodrama of the old angel-girl-Satan-man variety,

with a resulting illegitimate baby which happily sees fit to die,

leaving the little mother to find work with a good Christian family.

But her past is against her and she is finally driven out into a

terrible snow-storm by a man who quotes the Bible by the yard, and the

women in the audience wet their little handkerchiefs, and the men hawk

and cough and blow their noses. The big scene of the picture, and which

is probably responsible for seventy-five per cent. of the picture’s

phenomenal success, shows a whole river of ice floating down toward a

furiously-dashing waterfall. The poor little heroine is on one of the

huge cakes of ice fast nearing the watery precipice, while the good

boy who loves her honestly is jumping like an acrobat after her in the

teeth of a raging storm.

Now, all the moving-picture patrons in the country, from the past

experience of having witnessed one thousand pictures and read ten

thousand magazine stories, ought to know that there is not one chance

in a million that the plucky lover will not arrive in time to rescue

his sweetheart--such things have not happened and do not happen (in

our stories, of course!), yet they become wide-eyed and panting with

excitement, as if they were in doubt about the outcome. Griffith

uses the “cut-back” every ten or twenty feet, showing the thundering

falls, the crashing ice with the limp figure of the girl upon it,

the boy precariously maintaining his balance, then back again to the

falls; thus prolonging the agony until he thinks the public has got

its money’s worth; then the boy arrives, clasps the girl in his arms,

his erring Christian father asks her forgiveness and welcomes her as

a prospective daughter-in-law, and the public file out in the lobby,

exclaiming ecstatically to one another: “What a masterpiece!” Verily,

this Mr. Griffith knew whereof he spoke.

Our public is still thrilled with a climax of whose outcome there

ought to be not the slightest doubt. Which merely proves that if our

fiction still has a measure of suspense it is not due to our clever

technique but to the almost fabulous stupidity of the large mass of

readers. We have evolved our tricks of technique for the prime purpose

of maintaining a keen suspense, of keeping the outcome of the conflict

which every story must have in the balance, of heightening the reader’s

curiosity to follow the destiny of the hero or heroine in whose behalf

his sympathies have been enlisted to a satisfactory end. But if after,

let us say, twenty years of reading fiction, there should suddenly dawn

upon our average reader’s mind the idea that as the hero or heroine

of a story is always immortal and unconquerable in the end, no matter

how circumstances may appear to be against him or her for the moment,

would not our skillfully woven suspense suffer a severe jolt? Of what

use would it be to fear for the safety of the trapped little girl when

a dogged confidence, gained by profitable experience in reading, would

suggest that she is due at the altar on page five and would inevitably

keep her appointment? Of what use would be taking seriously the

pugilistic encounters of the Man-Who-Can’t-Be-Knocked-Out? Why thrill

with anxiety over an overturned automobile when it is certain that the

hero pinned underneath it will have sustained nothing more serious than

a few scratches that must heal before the final sentence is completed?

What would become of all our tricks and ingenuity and inventiveness?

Would not this one convention of the invariably happy ending then

defeat all our efforts at creating suspense? And if that happened would

it not be the direst calamity to all we have worked for, to the entire

mechanism of our “perfect” story?

The preceding paragraph is prophetic of what ultimately must happen. As

yet that day may be far off in the hazy distance, but when it comes the

philosophy of our short story must undergo a complete metamorphosis.

Its own glaring contradictions, if not external influences, must

ultimately bring that about. To preach Suspense as the highest law,

then kill it at its very inception by another law of the happy

ending is an absurdity that cannot long remain unapparent even to a

nine-year-old intelligence.

Meantime the reaction noted in some quarters toward the invariably

unhappy ending is just as sinister an influence toward the rise of

another absurdity. Whether this reaction be sincere--as in the case

of those who have been fed with glucose fiction ad nauseam--or merely

fashionable--as in the case of most of the Left Wing of our present-day

average reading public--if crystallized and perpetuated as a dogma it

is bound to constitute a serious hindrance in the evolution of the

short story. Once and for all we must come to an acceptance of the

truth that there can be but one kind of an ending to a story--whether

happy or unhappy--and that is the logical one, an ending which is a

direct inevitable outgrowth of the story itself. No law can be made

that would apply to all stories; each story generates its own laws.

The question of repugnance or preferences of the reader does not

enter here at all. The question of cause and effect, of intelligent

probability gaged by a keen observation of the laws or lack-of-laws of

reality--this question alone must become paramount and decisive.

It is true that the noblest literary works, from the dramas of Æschylus

to the present day, have all been tinged with sadness--Maupassant’s

definition of literature as being a mirror of life, proving a true

one. Also that other one--is it by Goethe?--that literature is the

conscience of the human race. In the world of men, with the dark

mystery of death as an ever-present certainty, thus sowing a sense of

the futility of all human aspirations and achievement in the hearts

of even the most aggressive of us; with a lurking consciousness of

insurmountable limitations besetting our fondest dreams; with a still

more pronounced consciousness that the maturing of dreams frequently

marks their decay, and almost always marks the thawing of their dewy

glitter--in such a world, literature, welling up from the depths of

inner consciousness, cannot help being tinged with sadness. In fact,

the vast bulk of the world’s literary masterpieces consists of

tragedies. The sooner this fundamental fact is woven into the fiber of

American fiction the sooner will American fiction become the mirror of

American life and the conscience of the American people.

But this solemn historic consideration does not justify the adoption

of a rigid rule that an unhappy ending of a story is artistic and that

a happy one is always inartistic. Least of all could it be justified

in its application to the short story, which frequently deals with

but a single incident in the life of a character rather than with a

complete history. There are infinitely more probabilities of ultimate

defeat in a complete history than in a single experience. Death is

not always the price of an adventure, nor disillusionment that of an

undertaking. Conrad’s “Youth,” melancholy as it is with the breath of

finiteness of all our glorious epochs, has no tragic ending. The young

commander has dared through stress and storm and adversity, has pitted

the strength of his youth against that of the sea and has come out

victorious, glowing with the symbolic message: “Do or Die!” And though,

when he recounts the narrative of that first command of his, youth is

far behind him, he is filled with lyric memories of it far sweeter

than his distant exploit itself. Mary E. Wilkins Freeman’s “Revolt

of Mother” ends happily and yet logically and artistically. Perhaps

in her next encounter with her hard-hearted and hard-headed husband

Mother won’t be as successful, but in this one which Mrs. Freeman had

chosen to relate, she carries the day. Maupassant’s “Moonlight” ends

well. The old Abbé realizes that “God perhaps has made such nights

as this to clothe with his ideals the loves of men,” and the young

couple can henceforth love unmolested. James Branch Cabell’s “Wedding

Jest” ends happily, although satirically--the point of the story--not

a happy one by any means--being contained particularly in the ending.

An enumeration of all the great short stories that have happy endings

would make a paragraph of considerable length.

From any technical point of view the unhappy ending, when canonized

into a convention, will defeat any skill and ingenuity or even natural

artistry in the maintenance of suspense. After a while readers will

learn that every story must end unhappily and will be on their guard.

Already the few periodicals that have made a convention of the

unconventional ending are suffering a depressing monotony. There really

is no reason for following the love illusions of the unsophisticated

heroine when it is certain that disillusionment awaits her in the

end. Nor is there reason for feeling elated over the success of our

hero when we know that it is temporary, that it is only a matter of

paragraphs or pages before this success will be turned into defeat.

If then we arrive at the conclusion that neither the happy ending nor

the tragic ending is in itself an indication of artistry, but must be

considered in its relation to the story it ends, we arrive at a view

which is at once rational and simple--so simple, in fact, that it seems

banal to emphasize it. In the matter of endings we have been thinking

in terms of producing the greatest effect, totally ignoring their

inevitability as culminating points of given sets of plot influences.

We know that the end of a story marks an emphatic place which leaves

the greatest impression upon the reader’s mind; it is, rhetorically, a

strategic point, and therefore we concentrate all our surprises, our

jugglery, our uplift message and our disposition upon this point. We

want the reader to go away smiling, or pleasantly startled, or, if we

write for the conventionally unconventional publication, unpleasantly

satisfied. The fact that a writer after having set his characters in

motion and allowing them to act and react upon the various forces of

the plot, to mold and be molded, has no power over the ending other

than that of guiding the threads of his story--characters, motives

and circumstances--to the end they are logically bound for, is as yet

obscure among us. We are associating the ending with its impressions

upon the reader, with its gallery value--rather than with the soul

of the story. As Mr. Carl Van Doren, former literary editor of _The

Nation_ and now of _The Century_ has expressed it: “According to all

the codes of the more serious kinds of fiction, the unwillingness--or

the inability--to conduct a plot to its legitimate ending implies some

weakness in the artistic character.”[26]

This weakness that Mr. Van Doren refers to in reality arises from

our very conception of the function of fiction and the motives that

govern its birth. In a majority of cases the prime motive for writing

a story is to obtain a check from a publisher; the dazzling figures

cited in our newspapers and writers’ magazines as the incomes of some

fictionists exert an irresistible appeal. The constant hammering upon

literature as a commodity which can be and is being produced as any

other commodity at such and such a price, the size being determined

upon its ability to perform the clownish function of supplying a laugh

or a thrill to the largest number of T. B. M.’s or T. B. W.’s, is

another influence responsible for this weakness. That fiction is a

medium for the expression of a writer’s reactions to his business of

living is a view that mighty few of our writers, editors, and literary

savants seem to hold. So that the fallacy of the happy ending, and of

the unhappy ending as well, is inevitably bound up with the larger

fallacy of mistaking the manufacture of stories for the function of

literature.

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