CHAPTER V

VERBOTEN

The field of the short story is first of all the field of the magazine.

To be a successful story writer requires a comprehensive knowledge

of the policies and preferences of the various periodicals that buy

stories. It is natural to assume that literary agents, commercial

critics, and teachers should be well aware of these editorial policies

and preferences, and should make every effort to inspire the amateur

with the respect and deference due such essential knowledge. We use

this knowledge to stem any inclination to mischief. We hold it aloft,

over the heads of the unmanageable ones, threatening them with failure,

unless they become manageable. Thus we preserve the dignity of the

profession and help stragglers on their weary pilgrimage to the golden

calf.

For us the task is after all an easy one. It is but necessary to

tabulate the good old taboos as to the content of our stories and

then be-write and be-lecture them to make our words impressive. We do

that in our teaching of photoplaywriting; we do it in the teaching of

fiction-writing. But no one has ever seriously labeled the photoplay

as it is finally produced on the screen as a form of literature, while

our fiction undeniably is a form, if not _the_ form, of our national

literature. It behooves us, therefore, to bring forward all the pomp

and pride and glory we are capable of and point out the peculiar

characteristics that distinguish our fiction as a national product from

the fiction of other nations. And we usually find it more advisable

to do it by the negative method of pointing out what our fiction is

not rather than by the positive method of pointing out what it is.

Crystallizing the more-important undesirable and therefore absent

elements in our fiction into single words, we can say that it is not

_pessimistic_; that it is not _lewd_; that it is not _irreverent_; that

it is not “_red_”; that it is not _un-American_.

This does not mean that our literature abstains from all discussion of

the topics of pessimism, sex, religion, politics and economics, and

Americanism. It is merely the extent to which they are discussed and

the angle of discussion that elevate our fiction to a position of what

passes for national expression. Like the vicious circle that governs

photoplay scripts--adaptation of fiction stories being adapted in turn

from the screen and re-adapted back again into scripts--our opinions

on the phenomena of life are adaptations of the opinions imprisoned

within covers of best sellers and our million-and-more-circulation

magazines, only the circle is somewhat more complicated. Scripts

are written to meet the prejudices of all moving-picture patrons;

stories, to meet the needs of a particular type of reader. And this

much must be said for our magazines: The variety of types has made

possible whatever untrammelled literature we have. For after all there

is a wide difference between the moral tone of _Harper’s_ and the

arch-sophistication of the _Smart Set_, or between the big-business

glorification of the _Saturday Evening Post_ and the _New Success_ and

the artistic quiet and rebelliousness of the _Dial_ and the _Little

Review_.

Whatever untrammelled literature we have, however, is little enough.

The tone-givers, the guides, the molders are the magazines of power

with public opinion and millions of dollars behind them, with

unbreakable traditional prejudices and taboos. And so long as the

humblest critic and the highest-paid institutional authority unite in

upholding these traditional taboos as glittering marks of Americanism,

public opinion will continue to demand a literature that is for the

most part infantile, insipid and lifeless. The generations that rise

to pound the typewriter keys in the production of stories are for the

most part imbued with this negative conception of our literature and

unquestionably the most dangerous instrument for the perpetuation of

this degrading conception is the literary teaching profession. Again,

in not a single textbook on story-writing have I been able to find an

intelligent, fearless analysis of our national taboos and their effect

of sterility upon our literature. I have found warnings and admonitions

and scarecrows. “Thou shalt not!” is the sum and substance of our

learned attitude on these mummifying influences. The vacillating feet

of the aspirant are directed toward the proper, well-trodden roads at

the very outset, and the punishment for straying is stressed to the

point where it requires a superhuman courage to brave it.

1. _Optimism_

Our first dictate is “Thou shalt not be morbid!” Depressing stuff

may be characteristic of the Russians, the Germans, the French, the

Italians, the Scandinavians, but not of the Americans. Ours is a young

country, a free country, a happy country, full of the joy of existence.

Ours is a hopeful people, cheerful and gay and proud; glad to be alive.

“People have all the gloom they want,” says the editor of _The American

Magazine_ in his “Fourteen Points” to contributors. “They manufacture

it on their own premises. You cannot sell them gloom. What they want

to buy is a cure for their gloom. They don’t want to buy more gloom.”

And Dr. Frank Crane in his ever-buoyant style exclaims: “_The Saturday

Evening Post_ and _The American Magazine_ have what I call ‘good

literature.’”[18]

Since salability is the only criterion of worth, any story that

violates our fundamental optimistic tone is at once intercepted,

revamped, “improved” or pronounced hopeless and condemned to

extinction. “Not salable,” is a phrase as ominous as a jury’s “Guilty!”

on a charge of murder in the first degree, and the only appeal possible

is for the defendant to plead a sudden seizure of passionate desire

to “pack up his troubles in his old kit bag and smile, smile, smile!”

And so the law of supply and demand operates once more. The “calamity

howler” is eliminated and the man or woman with the “smile that won’t

come off” gets to the top. American literature becomes enriched by the

advent of another “genius” imbued with the gospel that “life is great

fun, after all!”

That no literature can thrive on such a barren optimism seems

to be a statement so obvious as to challenge even the mere

ordinary intelligence offering it. Yet pedants carry forward this

optimism-tradition and preach, and lecture, and prate about the spirit

of America, and threaten and punish and outlaw the few unfortunate

rebels. What literature can a country produce which refuses to take

even the most timid peep at life as it is, which shuts its eyes in

very horror at the most fundamental problems of the land, which does

not brood, contemplate or inquire, which does not know the benediction

of a tear or the relief of a sigh? Can a steady diet of sugar produce

anything more invigorating than diabetes? And literary sugar is what

we think and preach and worship. All heroines are pretty; all heroes

succeed; all complications are solved; wedding bells ring; promotions

are given out; only bad people die young; the good live to a mellow age

of four score and ten; life is a fairy-tale in which all the fairies

are sweet young things waving magic wands over honest young brokers of

their choice; the world, and America especially, is a Vale of Tempe

where limousines are passed out as the reward of virtue and endeavor

and where successful matches are consummated.

Our writers must be either inanimate machines or sorry human beings

trained to suppress their instincts and moods. They must be on

their guard not to succumb to the “blues”; quick to inhibit any sad

reflection or discouraging thought. “If you can’t see the sun is

shining,” wrote one editor very bluntly, rejecting a “depressing”

story, “take Epsom salts and sleep it over.” And whether they are

drowsy or not, sleep it over our writers must. Those who suffer with

insomnia find their good neighbors either snoring peacefully or

stamping about in infuriated protest. Our writers must sift their

experience; if it is tragic or insufficiently uplifting they must

dispatch it to oblivion. It is really most advisable not to draw upon

experience at all. Not of such stuff can optimistic fiction be made.

For is there life without tears and heartache and doubt; without

innumerable deaths of precious fragile dreams; without graying of

heads; without perplexity? Hence arises what Van Wyck Brooks calls “the

doctrine of the fear of experience.... It assumes that experience is

not the stuff of life but something essentially meaningless; and not

merely meaningless but an obstruction which retards and complicates our

real business of getting on in the world and getting up in the world,

and which must, therefore, be ignored and forgotten and evaded and

beaten down by every means in our power.”[19]

Here again the inconsistency in our theory of optimistic fiction is

glaring. We shriek anathemas at any native product that repudiates it,

yet we bow with respect to importations. We acclaim all the morbid

geniuses of Europe; we accord their works places of special privilege

in our curricula; we consider it a mark of culture to mention the

titles of at least a half-dozen depressing books. Even our most

respectable magazines are proud on occasion to publish a story by an

eminent European author with the flamboyant legend placed upon it or

boxed in the center of its first page by the editor: “No one but Gorki

(or Maeterlink, or D’Annunzio, or D. H. Lawrence, or whoever else it

might be) would have the courage to write a story such as this, and no

magazine in America but _The_---- would have the courage to publish

it.” The same legend is placed sometimes upon the work of a native

writer, but after reading the story one finds that either the writer

did not dare, after all, or that the editor of the brave magazine

edited the contribution; that both the writer and the worthy editor had

been so frightened at the mere flap of a wing that they had to offer an

apology for attempting to soar.

This inconsistency is particularly reflected in our current criticism

and literary textbooks. With the same breath a reviewer will praise

Dostoyevski and chastise some native youngster for his horrible

morbidity. In the same chapter the text will refer to Chekhov and

Maupassant and Zola and Poe with almost cringing reverence and

eloquently preach the gospel of cheap optimism as the supreme message

of the story writer. And the young would-be procures copies of the

great masters, reads them, and comes back perplexed. “Why do _they_

write about such horrid things?” asks one young student. I look into

her large, innocent eyes and smile. The Great Creator must have been in

a diplomatic mood when he invented a smile. I glance down at my copy

of _The Literary News_, lying on my desk and note that an editor of a

prominent and liberally-paying magazine is in the market for “stories

of rapid action--cheery short stories, encouraging, helpful--the kind

that makes the world better,” and I proceed to discuss how this kind of

story is written....

2. _Sex_

Of all our taboos none has contributed so large a share in keeping our

literature swathed in baby blankets as that on sex. In its essence

it is merely a direct irradiation of taboo No. 1 on optimism. If

everything in the universe is good and beautiful and holy and the

writer’s business is to chant incessant halleluiahs, then sex is all

of these and must be treated reverently. Its unsavory aspects as well

as those leading to unhappiness must be passed by, and since in the

muddled world we are living in sex has felt most severely the combined

forces of bigotry, suppression and inhibition, of pathologic social and

moral conditions, its aspects are most frequently unsavory and unhappy

and therefore must be either ignored entirely or made savory and happy.

We have a hoary phrase perpetually playing upon our glib lips--it is

to the effect that we are a “clean-living, moral people.” The phrase

itself has long lost its meaning, even to the most uninformed of

citizens, but it has remained a sacred fetish forever, it seems.

Again it is not in the total abstaining from any treatment of sex that

our taboo is expressed, but in our peculiar angle of treatment. Total

abstaining were indeed impossible, for any literature, and least of all

for our literature. The truth is that ours is, in the main, essentially

a sex-literature--largely because of our “reverent” attitude.

Strong elemental forces long suppressed erupt in irrepressible,

if furtive, curiosity. No country on earth can boast of as many

periodicals specializing in the risque, the sexually-sensational, the

cheaply suggestive, as the land of the “clean-living.” The fact is

incontrovertible. Where there is a continued supply there must be a

continued demand. Our publishers know their market. Even the titles of

a host of our periodicals exploit, not too artistically, this crude

reaction of a sex-conscious people. “Saucy Stories,” “Breezy Stories,”

“Snappy Stories,” “Live Stories,” “Droll Stories,” “The Parisienne,”

“True Stories,” “The Follies,” “Telling Tales,” “Secrets,” “I Confess,”

“True Confessions,” “High Life,” “Hot Dog,”--these are some of the

titles that wink mischievously at the purchaser timid with guilt. But

the purchaser is rarely pleased with his dissipation. He finds the

wine exceedingly mild. Most of the stories under the suggestive cover

bearing the inviting title and a still more inviting pretty girl,

usually attired in very becoming _négligé_, are, after all, “clean.”

And this “cleanness” is the characteristic blight of nine-tenths

of our entire literature. It is vulgar with the lowest kind of

sex-consciousness but it doesn’t go “too far.” It is the “cleanness” of

our moving pictures. Is there any reason why a production entitled “Du

Barry” in Europe should be rechristened to read “Passion” for American

exhibition? Is there any reason why Barrie’s “Admirable Crichton”

should become “Male and Female” as a photoplay? Is there any reason for

such titles as “Sex,” “The Restless Sex,” “His Wedded Wife,” “The First

Night,” “The She Woman,” “The Leopard Woman,” “Wedded Husbands,” “Why

Wives Go Wrong,” “Forbidden Fruit,” “The Primrose Path,” “What Happened

to Rosa,” “Why Change Your Wife?” “The Woman Untamed,” etc., etc? It

surely does not require an erudite psychoanalyst to find the reason for

this avalanche of suggestiveness.

Perhaps, if they deemed it wise to speak, our motion-picture producers

could shed some light on the subject. Seemingly their opinion of our

“clean-living, moral people” is not very flattering. And their judgment

is substantially founded upon the generous reports they receive from

the distributing exchanges.

Here, too, carefully as the titles are selected the pictures themselves

are “clean.” If they were not, the various Boards of Censorship would

have seen to it that they become so. At most a director will manage

to show the heroine plunging into her morning’s rose-water bath, as in

“Male and Female,” for instance, or an exotic harem partially disrobing

for a cold dip into the perfumed waters of the Rajah’s pool, as in

“Kismet.” Whether the scenes are vitally necessary to the unfolding of

the plot is immaterial. They constitute an irresistible attraction in

themselves, and must be smuggled in, if possible. A couple of feet of

nakedness results in thousands of dollars’ worth of advertising.

What is true of the moving pictures is equally true of our spoken

stage. Think of “Twin Beds” and “Up in Mabel’s Room” and “Parlor,

Bedroom and Bath” and “Mary’s Ankle” and “Nighty, Nighty” and

“Scrambled Wives” and “Ladies’ Night in a Turkish Bath” and

“Getting Gertie’s Garter” and the various “Follies” and “Scandals”

and a hundred-and-one other titles which were surely chosen for a

purpose--the same purpose which impelled some years ago the manager

of the old Academy of Music in New York to advertise a stock company

production of Daudet’s “Sapho” as the “greatest immoral play ever

written.” And again the plays themselves are not remotely as licentious

as the titles would intimate.

What, then, is this “cleanness” of ours? What are its impositions and

how far can they be stretched? The answer is simple and more than a

trifle sad. Our “cleanness” excludes serious thought. “Something

audacious suits us, but nothing salacious,” writes one editor of a

well-known publication of the frothy type. “Salacious” stands for

thought, reflection, analysis. A little suggestiveness, a hint, a

double-edged joke, a farcical situation, a vulgar thrust, will do.

But a deep, sincere analysis, a fearless uncovering of a cowering

conscience--that is salacious, immoral, lewd, unclean. That accounts

for the free and open dissemination of so much debasing, lurid stuff

and the hypocritical suppression of Dreiser and Cabell. That accounts

for the popularity of Bertha M. Clay _et al._ and the unpopularity

of Sherwood Anderson _et al._ Sex is a fit subject to jest about, to

inject breezily as a gently-naughty stimulant. Sex as an elemental

force which shapes the lives of men and women, which actuates their

struggles in this terrestrial sphere of ours, making for success or

failure, for happiness or despair, for sinner or saint, is vile,

lascivious, and therefore taboo.

The literary teaching profession has not passed this degrading scene

unnoticed. It has broken up in two camps. The great mass of instructors

have simply adopted the position that a writer must give whatever is

demanded of him. Would a tailor refuse to accept an order calling for

a fabric he personally does not approve of and a fashion he detests?

Granted that this is not a particularly lofty conception of literary

art, it is still less pernicious than the conception held by the

smaller group of so-called idealists in the profession. To these the

sex aspect of our literature calls for stormy denunciation. They would

impress upon the future writer the sanctity of his mission. The pen

must not be polluted. Sex must be left alone entirely. The moral tone

must be preserved in all productions. Laws for the ruthless suppression

of the unclean must be fought for and their enactment obtained.

What these honest Puritans cannot understand is that the entire

class of bawdy, sex-reeking literature is a product of the very laws

they have been fortunate enough to have enacted; that the complete

abolition of these laws and the absolute cessation from persecution

in the interests of morality of any expression of sex would purge our

literature of the curse as nothing else. If any one could purchase

a mature, intelligent literary expression of the mysterious passion

that animates nature and moves the world, the profane effusions of

shriveled minds would appear shocking and abhorrent by comparison. All

literature that has ever been written has dealt directly or indirectly

with the relation of men and women--for the very trite reason that all

life that has ever been lived has been the life of this relation of

men and women. To place the yellow ticket of evil upon this relation

as a literary subject is to degrade it beyond words of contempt. The

prevailing spectacle of our literary sewage is perfectly natural: the

thought of uncleanness wrapped around the stuff of life is bound to

pollute it.

But the pernicious influence of this immoral taboo goes beyond its

direct inhibition of the most legitimate of themes. It perpetuates

an æsthetic literary tenet which is a relic of the Age of Darkness.

It is to the effect that the morality or unmorality of its contents

determines the value of a literary production. “It is a shame that such

splendid writing should be wasted on such an atrocious theme,” said

a sweet little lady student apropos Sherwood Anderson’s “The Other

Woman.”[20] The remark at once characterized her as a member of the

Second-Grade Bigots. The First-Grade Bigots would not permit themselves

to see any excellences in a work so pronouncedly unorthodox. When

cornered, the little lady admitted that there might be sound psychology

in Anderson’s story--and a large measure of unsavory truth. “But why

choose such horrid themes when there are so many nice, clean ones?”

It is the cry of all Pollyanna-nurtured readers. It’s the cry of the

author of “Pollyanna” herself. “Is there, then, no human experience

that deals with the good, the happy, the beautiful?” she asks, in a

circular issued by her publishers. “Are joy, faith and purity utterly

illogical? Is only the thunder-cloud real?--the sunshine a sham?”

In such cases argument is impossible. The criterion of moral and

optimistic content is deep-rooted and well-nourished by authority. Is

it not largely this same criterion that for more than a half century

prevented the acceptance by the Judges of Walt Whitman as a poet, and

that is excluding the name of Theodore Dreiser from its rightful place

in our scholarly histories of the modern American novel?

To counteract this blind perpetuation of a fallacious doctrine

demands a complete severance with old school criticism and old-age

pedagogy. Not until authority-worship is mightily shaken can this

be accomplished. But that would be a hopeless task to undertake.

The great mass must have and will have its Great Authorities to bow

to. It is easier than to depend upon one’s own critical faculties.

Besides, habit has become second nature. We have always been taught

that knowledge is merely to know where to find what we want to know.

No, we must be merciful; our literary apostles must remain. But among

them there are those that are blind with senility and those that are

glowing with fresh vision. Let us follow the more musical of the new

criers until they, in their turn, reach their dotage and truth turns

to ashes in their toothless mouths. In no other way can we hope to

uproot the puerile beliefs that art can be judged by its optimistic

or uplifting message, by its morality, or by any other of, what Joel

Elias Spingarn terms, the “Seven confusions.” We have not yet reached

the stage where the relativity of the term “morality” can be discussed

with impunity and to any considerable advantage. But we can bring to

bear upon a rising generation of readers and writers all the force of

our warm logic to combat the notion that any standard of morality, no

matter how sublime, has any determining value in art. We can insist

that a story might be entirely devoid of any moral significance and yet

be an immortal masterpiece; that the whole notion is merely another

one of the confusions we have inherited from an age which was too busy

developing the raw resources of a vast young continent--a task which

necessitated the invocation of Providential aid--to pay attention to

literature.

“To say that poetry (or any other art) is moral or immoral is as

meaningless as to say that an equilateral triangle is moral and an

isosceles triangle immoral. Surely we must realize the absurdity of

testing anything by a standard which does not belong to it or a purpose

for which it was not intended. Imagine these whiffs of conversation at

a dinner table: ‘This cauliflower would be excellent if it had only

been prepared in accordance with international law.’ ‘Do you know why

my cook’s pastry is so good? He has never told a lie or seduced a

woman.’ But why multiply obvious examples? We do not concern ourselves

with morals when we test the engineer’s bridge or the scientist’s

researches; indeed we go farther, and say that it is the moral duty of

the scientist to disregard morals in his search for truth. As a man he

may be judged by moral standards, but the truth of his conclusions can

only be judged by the standard of science.... Art is expression, and

poets succeed or fail by their success or failure in completely and

perfectly expressing themselves. If the ideals they express are not

the ideals we admire most, we must blame not the poets but ourselves;

in the world where morals count we have failed to give them the proper

material out of which to rear a nobler edifice. To separate art and

morality is not to destroy moral values but to augment them--to give

them increased powers and a new freedom in the realm in which they have

the right to reign.”[21]

3. _Religion_

It is literally true that American literature is not irreverent.

The penalty for meddling with religion in any unconventional way is

contemptuous obscurity. But meddling with religion in a way that brings

out its blessings to humanity is praiseworthy and leads to opulence and

glory. For that reason nine-tenths of our literature has a strain of

religious righteousness running through it. In the main the specters

of Cotton Mather and Jonathan Edwards still hover over our literary

output, imparting to it a theological tint. Our fictionists are still

obsessed with the idea that a story or a novel must preach, must

instill the right kind of ideals, must exert a redeeming influence

upon its reader. To be sure, the experienced ones among them are fully

aware of the dangers of obvious moralizing, but they have mastered the

devious ways of preaching without arousing the reader’s suspicion that

he is being preached to.

It is this last point--the devious ways of unsuspected preaching--that

my profession is concerned with. Either we are altogether silent on the

subject of religion in literature, deeming it too ticklish a subject

upon which to commit ourselves, or we are zealous in our efforts to

perpetuate the tradition that literature must complement the work of

the church, only in a less outspoken way. Perhaps we do not do it

consciously but the results obtained are the same. We merely advise

students as to what subjects may be exploited and what subjects may

not. Surely a subject bordering on the atheistic could never be made

salable; not more than two or three periodicals would be open to such

a story--and these of the obscure, “freaky” kind. Without a doubt even

such a mild story as Balzac’s “An Atheist’s Mass” could never have seen

the light of publication in an American periodical. The fact that

the hero remains unconverted to the end would be fatal. We may write

a story about an atheist, and have written such, but in our story,

when the dénouement comes, the hero must exclaim to the assembled

multitude, that he had tried to live without God and had found it

unprofitable. The fact that there might be some poor wretch of a hero

in this queer wide world who would not issue such a proclamation does

not detract from the urgency of such a dénouement. It is one of our

devious ways; without it the story can hope to travel no farther than

the return-to-author basket. The characters we create must ultimately

come to know God and the church--or they never come to know the reader.

It is doubtful if an American Flaubert could hope for as cordial a

reception of an atheistic character of his as the French have accorded

the mediocre M. Homais of “Madame Bovary” fame.

It is far from my purpose to leave the implication that literature

should preach atheism; but neither should it preach religion, theology,

or anything else, for that matter, except in so far as life itself is

a sermon to whomever it pleases to view it as such. “As a rule we may

say that nothing in the world improves one less than sermonizing books

and conversations; nothing is more wearisome, quite apart from the fact

that nothing is more inartistic.... We do not demand of an author that

he should work to make us better.... All that we can demand of him

is that he work conscientiously.”[22] The moment an author stoops to

uplift us he loses his balance as an artistic observer, recorder, and

interpreter.

The attitude of our literature toward religion is based on a churchy

interpretation of life and character which was unconsciously but none

the less comprehensively expressed in a magazine article by Dr. Frank

Crane. “Church people,” he wrote, “as a rule, pay their debts, observe

the decencies of life, are clean of mind and body, cultivate those

qualities that make for a successful and contented life, and get along

together peacefully. And, as a rule, the embezzlers, thugs, drunkards,

harlots, rascals, adulterers, gamblers, and swindlers do not cultivate

church-going to any great extent.”[23]

This is a safe and sane doctrine to embrace when writing fiction for

the popular magazines. Our editors, almost universally, have embraced

it, and even though the Reverend Doctor specifically states that

he speaks of people “as a rule,” which would permit of exceptions,

editors at large will not recognize the existence of such exceptions.

Truth does not count and experience is an illusion. If a writer has in

his life had the misfortune of coming across a man or woman who was

kind, charitable, gentle, moral, and noble and yet instead of being

affiliated with a church was a member of the Secular League and a

subscriber to the Truth Seeker he would best suppress the latter two

points. If a writer has read statistics of extra-generous donations

made to various church funds and has found among the names of donors

not a few of universally notorious embezzlers, he must ignore the fact,

if only in the interests of his career. His motto must be: Never write

anything about church that could not be turned into an advertisement of

the institution. If the motto conflicts with life, scratch life.

And yet religion, like sex, is one of the basic forces of life; it has

helped to shape the course of human history and civilization. To deny

the artist the prerogative to touch upon it unless it be in praise

is to deny him the means to probe the human soul. To compel him to

accept any institution as infallible and therefore beyond question of

imperfection is to fetter his spirit. That a man who is a respected

member of a respected church cannot be a thief in his business life or

a brute at home is a more prostituting doctrine, the more so if not

actually believed in but adopted for commercial purposes only, than

any harlot was ever guided by, because it is so flagrantly contrary to

truth. That the call of sex can never prove stronger than the holiest

of religious precepts is a malicious canon of hypocritical dogmatism.

This is the natural stuff of literature--the dramatic conflicts and

seeming paradoxes, physical, psychic and intellectual, the eternal

clash of nature and dogma, of passion and idea, of man and the world.

Puny fledgelings come to us for instruction in aerial literary

navigation and we look in the tome of Thou Shalt Nots and clip their

weak little wings. “Never dare to lift yourself more than a yard

above the earth,” we admonish; “and you’ll find it easier if you use

this trick and that,” we add. If, perchance, one of them after awhile

finds the fawning breath of the earth too close and spreads its wings

and begins to soar up into the clear ether we shrug our shoulders

compassionately and say to the rest: “Another young bird gone wrong.”

It has broken the limits of our taboos; it has tasted the wine of pure

ozone; it has heard the call of exploration; it has turned irreverent.

Should it succeed in growing a few dazzling feathers by the time it

comes back in sight we may meet it with music and shout to it the

hospitality of our gardens--as a mark of our ability to appreciate fine

feathers; but more frequently we let it starve to death and keep the

music for a touching funeral. During their lifetime we have nothing to

do with the irreverent....

4. _Social and Political Problems_

No literature is more afraid of a courageous presentation of the social

welter which America, in common with all the rest of the world, is

undergoing in this age of reconstruction, than American literature.

Not that it entirely fails to touch upon the mighty problems that have

shaken our national life, but it still clings to an ancient sense of

delicacy and an orthodox point of view which determines what may and

may not be said. Whether a writer really subscribes to the point of

view which colors nearly all of our efforts is immaterial; in order

to sell his product he must adopt it, irrespective of any protesting

personal scruples he might feel. Thus we find our literature, with the

exception of a small and highly unprofitable part, expressing no more

advanced views on the social phenomena of the day than our forefathers

held, and most frequently less advanced.

The editor of _The Coming Nation_, discussing the kind of stories that

are not wanted by film companies, mentions, among others, stories

“where the hero arises and makes a soap-box speech on Socialism

converting all by-standers.”[24] This statement applies with equal

force to our magazine fiction as well. That no respectable editor of a

fiction periodical will take such stories is a fact universally known

among people acquainted with prevailing policies of our magazines.

There would be nothing sinister in this policy, it would even be

highly laudable, were it based on the logical assumption that men’s

minds are not so easily swayed and that therefore no audience of

by-standers can be converted by a single speech. But it is based on

no such reasoning. The fact is that the story depicting a speaker

converting by a few eloquent phrases, let us say, a body of strikers,

to the employer’s point of view, impelling them to forsake their

scheming leaders, tainted by European gold, of course, and return to

work will and does find a ready market. Even the lack of story values

are frequently overlooked where such a fictive incident occurs. The

greatest of our national weeklies and monthlies will open their columns

to the padded dissertation in story disguise on the unreasonableness of

workingmen, or the inefficiency of government control of industries, or

the blessings of a Big Business Administration.

What really determines the policy of exclusion of certain topics or

angles of presentation is the safe-guarding of the interests of the

big advertisers and the personal prejudices of the publishers. Our

experienced writers, as well as the instructors of student-writers who

know their business, know these prejudices perfectly. They know that

popular views “get by” even if the artistry is not so very obstrusive.

They know that unless one can fall in with the established views of

the great majority it is best to leave social and political problems

alone and to write about the South Seas, or Alaska, or the romantic

story of John Jones, Jr., a son of a village blacksmith, who, after

many thrilling hardships finally married Ivy Van Schyler, the pampered

heiress of noble lineage and a huge block of sound railroad stock. They

even know such small details as that if a hero uses soap, it is best

not to mention it by an existing brand, for it may offend advertisers

trying to fasten upon the public rival brands; that “talking machine”

is safer than “Victrola” or “Grafonola” or any other patented name;

that, in a word, no free advertising be given any company, thus causing

other advertisers to complain. They know that it is dangerous to make

a character intimate that his health has been impaired as a result of

drinking too much ginger-ale, or taking headache powders, or yeast, or

tobacco, or anything else, for that matter, that advertisers sell. It

makes no difference whether a writer has accumulated a fund of personal

observation to corroborate his statement. There are people who are

trying to sell these products and will surely lodge a protest with the

advertising manager of the publication in which such a story appears.

In fact, numerous cases where such inadvertent remarks have resulted in

diminished advertising space are on record.

It is to the interest of these same all-powerful advertisers to see

that no aspersions be cast in our magazine fiction upon the inalienable

rights and dignities of Business and that no dangerous views be

expressed which might sway a vigilantly guarded public mind in

undesirable directions. Existing social and political institutions may

be defended in our fiction but not attacked or criticized; their merits

may be extolled, but their demerits must not be betrayed to an innocent

world. Private property is sacred; the State is always right--except

when it attempts to interfere with Property; then a thinly veiled story

decrying this interference as autocratic, tyrannous and un-American

might get by and bring a fair price. Progress is a generality that

affects us but little; the laws of change are suspended when applied to

our literary reactions to our social life. Other nations may develop

new schools of fictionists, young, virile, boldly speaking their minds

on the moot problems of the day. We have no room for such impudence.

Our literature is “pure,” level-headed, conservative. Some isolated

muck-rakers appear here and there, but we give them no outlet for their

muck-raking, and they must either reform or perish or, at best, when we

are helpless to prevent it, get a measure of barren notoriety.

An army officer, an advanced student, once handed in a splendidly

written story of army life, in which he gave a graphic portrayal of

court-martial proceedings. The apathy and criminal nonchalance with

which helpless boys were sentenced to long-term imprisonment, in

the name of discipline, was so artistically woven into a thrilling

plot that it made interesting reading even to the most avid fiction

devotees. Yet the story had gone the rounds of nearly all the

paying magazines without finding a market. A few friendly editors

wrote the author personal letters, one editor going so far as to

express his appreciation of the work, but admitting that the story

was deemed “unavailable because it does not meet with the policy of

this publication.” I supplied the discouraged author with a list of

unconventional publications--for fortunately we do have a fighting

number of them with us--that might welcome his story but could afford

to pay either very little or not at all. He refused to waste his work

on the “freaks,” and wanted to know if he could not revise the story

to make it salable to a standard magazine. I told him that elimination

of all incidents reflecting unfavorably upon the administration of law

in our army would undoubtedly help. He protested that the incidents

had been taken from life and held out for a while, but finally he

succumbed to his intense desire to “get in.” The story was revised

and made perfectly harmless--“sweet” and happy; it sold on its first

trip. The officer has never again attempted to use life as a basis

for fiction--indiscriminately. It was his first altercation with

policies--and probably his last. It requires greater powers than he was

blessed with to put up a more valiant resistance.

It is a sad comment on education that under existing circumstances,

instructors of writers are obliged to help undermine this natural

resistance a few rebellious spirits occasionally display. One whose

entire stock in trade is a knowledge of markets and policies and an

ability to expound existing standards is not in a very advantageous

position to encourage disregard of immutable taboos. We must say, on

reading a story which is off-standard, that it won’t sell, and why.

We must formulate and enforce the rules that make for “success” in

fiction writing. We must be vestals of the sacred fires. I am aware

that “vestals” is not exactly the right word one should use in this

connection; perhaps another word connoting less virtue would be more

apt. But, after all, most of us are honest, and zealously believe that

the fires are sacred and must not be allowed to go out or be polluted.

Vision? Well,--aren’t the blind happy?

5. _Americanism_

As applied to our literature the term American has come to mean

everything and anything. It compliments the mediocre twaddle of

mediocre minds. To earn the compliment a story must be neither sad nor

“fresh” nor irreverent nor “red.” It must not be burdened with too much

thought or sincere emotion. It must have no glimmer of an original

idea. It must “kiss the hand that feeds it,”--which means in this case

that it must breathe a sweet humility to all our institutions, from

the First Law of the land to the American Legion and Babe Ruth. It

must be “glad to be alive and carry on”--everything that is old and

respectable and decrepit and green with mold.

Let a piece of literary art reflect an unhackneyed thought, let it

break any one of our ancient taboos, let it dare to belittle any one of

our glorified generalities and dogmas--and it is promptly howled down

as un-American. The literature of every other country on earth affords

an interpretative and critical view of the psychology of the national

mind it reflects, while American literature is least reflective of the

American national mind, except in one particular: its cringing fear

of the truth. Were it not for this fear to face the truth, and the

inability of the average American to stand criticism, the great bulk

of our “literature” would find no buyers and its content would undergo

a radical change. It is this national trait that has given rise to the

sublime injunction, “Don’t knock!” We may have heard of Matthew Arnold,

but surely never of his heretic doctrine that literature is a criticism

of life. To us literature is largely a matter of so many words at so

much per word, or so many hugs and kisses and careers attained per

magazine page.

Is it to be wondered at that with us we have the interminable problem:

What shall we write about? With one of the largest countries in the

world in which to live; with over one hundred millions of people

living and working and battling and dreaming all about us; with a

multitude of perplexing problems, international, national, municipal,

class, clan, and individual, clamoring for solution; with a rich,

ever-shifting panorama of a young, virile, national existence before

us; with a million comedies and a million tragedies avidly looking at

our typewriter keys--with all this to be had for the taking, isn’t it

pathetically absurd that we must voyage the seven seas and scour all

the corners of the earth in search of material? Open any magazine any

month and note the proportion of stories located in far, out-of-the-way

places. Even our best writers are following this romantic bent.

Twenty-five per cent. of the stories contained in O’Brien’s “Year-book”

for 1919 had a foreign setting; his “Year-book” for 1920 contained

over thirty per cent. of stories with foreign settings--mostly exotic

and bizarre. No serious objections could be taken to transcribing

the life of foreign places, if we had first become aware of our own.

But we have not. We hunt for foreign material simply because we are

afraid to sift our own. We are only now beginning to realize that our

young continent--this huge, crude meltingpot--is filled with brass

and copper and gold, and that these metals are melting and fusing

into some homogeneous substance, which we vaguely term America. We

want this burst of consciousness to grow and sweep us along to great

revelations, but a false pride and obsolete traditions and hypocritical

dogmas are blocking the way. Parrot-like we shout from pulpit and

rostrum and cathedra the old banality: “Boost! All the world loves a

booster!” And because we like to be loved we dare not touch upon the

wounds of life--the hunger, the passions, the buffets, the defeats

that purge its sordidness, gild its drabness, and actuate us to nobler

aspirations.

We pride ourselves that we have developed the short story to

perfection. It has become our national form of literary expression. It

has reached an unparalleled vogue. But, in truth, if we are entitled

to pride, it is on account of our remarkable achievement of an ability

to tell an entertaining tale without telling anything worth while.

Paradoxically, we squeeze amusement out of nothing. We have attained

an excellence of workmanship without the least depth of substance.

But I am anticipating. This phase of the subject is so important that

it deserves a chapter for itself, which it will receive later on. The

real perfection of our short story is yet to come. The signs are that

it is having its birth pangs at this time. Writers of rich promise

have come to the fore recently--and here and there a magazine, either

new or an old one with a new policy, to receive their product. Our

perfected short story will be bold, fearless, vital; beating with

the vigorous pulse of a giant nation stretching its limbs. It will be

truly American--optimistic, with the rugged optimism of a Walt Whitman;

brave, with the courage of an impetuous youth; rich, with the colors of

a fertile soil and a blending humanity. Perhaps our short story is to

fulfill the hopes H. G. Wells once had for the novel:

“The novel,” he wrote in _An Englishman Looks at the World_, “is to be

the social mediator, the vehicle of understanding ... the criticism of

laws and institutions and of social dogmas and ideas.... We are going

to write ... about the whole of human life. We are going to deal with

political questions and religious questions and social questions ...

until a thousand pretenses and ten thousand impostures shrivel in the

cold clear air of our elucidations.... Before we have done we will have

all life within the scope of the novel.”

A lofty assignment, this, for a form of literature that is rooted, as

our short story always has been, in the precept that to be interesting

it must eschew reality. But we can carry it out--and will. Our pioneers

are already on the trail--weak as yet, not a full-grown Chekhov among

them--but gaining in hardihood, and singing. The hordes behind them are

waiting in safety; let the trail become a bit smoother, the hardships

lessened, and they will follow. In the meantime who that is filled

with that eternally human envious admiration for pluck can keep back

his “Good cheer!” and “Godspeed!”?

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