(St. LXXXI.) If this and the following stanza are, as Lachmann thinks,

an addition, they no doubt were added to supply a palpable defect in the

narrative. If it were not for them, the company would be spoken of as

rising from table (St. LXXXIV) when it is nowhere mentioned that they

had sat down.

I must venture to remark that Lachmann's note to the next stanza is not

very satisfactory. Though the knights and ladies may usually have eaten

apart, it seems to have been allowable for the mistress of the house at

least to be present when the knights were feasting (St. XXVI, this

Adventure, to St. XXIII, Twenty-seventh Adventure), and there is nothing

unreasonable in supposing that the married sister of the host might have

accompanied her husband. This seems more natural than to assume that the

queens left their apartments and went to the hall (probably a detached

building) just to show themselves before they retired to bed. I must own

I do not see the difficulty about _coming_ and _going_ noticed by

Lachmann. Everybody, who goes to a place, comes to it when he gets

there. As the poem stands, everything is consistent. The queens cross

the palace court and go to the hall for the good substantial reason of

getting their suppers. They come back to their private apartments, or

bowers, where they remain awhile with their immediate attendants, and

during the short interval, that elapses before dismissing the latter and

going to bed, Siegfried slips through his wife's fingers, and goes to

Gunther's private apartments.

I should add that, at St. XXIV, Twenty-seventh Adventure, the young

margravine and her damsels are brought back into the eating hall after

the men have finished their repast, but that depends on the correctness

of the reading _die schœnen_ (see note to St. XXXI, Twenty-seventh

Adventure) and on the consequent expulsion of the latter stanza. If we

retain the latter stanza, the young margravine is sent for _ze hove_,

like Kriemhild at St. XXXI, Tenth Adventure. But we can scarcely apply

to young married women and their near female connections, also married,

passages like these, that relate to young spinsters. In the passages

quoted in the note to St. XXIV, Twenty-seventh Adventure, men and women

are mentioned as eating apart, but it is stated to be an old custom, and

is noted as an ancient peculiarity.

(St. LXXXV, Tenth Adventure.) It appears from this description that the

wearer of the cloak must have had the power of being visible orinvisible as he

chose. He might have on the mantle, and yet be visible.

Siegfried does not here leave his wife in the ordinary way, and then put

on the cloak. He seems to disappear miraculously. This differs from the

account given in stanzas XLIII, Seventh Adventure, and LXXXIV, of the

same, where Siegfried puts on the cloak before he becomes invisible, and

remains so till he puts it off, but agrees with St. XXI, Nineteenth

Adventure, where it is distinctly stated that Siegfried wore the cloak

at all times. I should however add that, in the original, there is what

appears to my ignorance a difficulty, though, as the commentators take

no notice of it, I suppose there is really none. The original stands

thus:--

Sî trûte sîne hende mit ir vil wîzen hant,

Unz er vor ir augen, sine wesse wenne, verswant,

literally, "She fondled his hands with her very white hand, till he

before her eyes, she knew not when, vanished." As to the interpreters,

Braunfels simply modernizes the old dialect, rendering _wenne_ by

_wann_; Simrock and Marbach are equally literal, except that they put

_wie_, how, where Braunfels has _wann_; Beta, who here as elsewhere is

less rigorously literal than his comrades, merely says, "then it

happened that he suddenly vanished before her sight." I must confess I

cannot understand how Kriemhild could not know _when_ a thing happened

that passed before her eyes, though she might well be puzzled how to

account for it. It is remarkable that the Lassberg manuscript, which is

said by Lachmann and other competent judges to contain a revised and

remodelled text, omits altogether St. LXXXVI, Tenth Adventure, and

alters the stanza before it, and that after it in such a way, that the

supernatural seems to disappear, and Siegfried is merely represented as

stealing away from the women, and coming secretly and mysteriously (_vil

tougen_) to Gunther's chamber. This manuscript however mentions the

tarnkappe at St. LXXVII, same Adventure. Did the reviser of this

manuscript wish it to be inferred, that Siegfried, after leaving his

wife, went and put on the tarnkappe?

(St. CX.) In the Volsunga Saga Brunhild is a Valkyrie, or Chooser of the

Slain, a sort of Northern Bellona, endowed with supernatural strength.

This superhuman prowess is connected with her virgin state, and by

becoming a wife she is reduced to the ordinary weakness of woman. In the

Nibelungenlied this circumstance comes upon us by surprise, for we are

nowhere told that the strength of Brunhild differed from that of other

women, except in degree, and no reason is given why matrimony should

produce any greater change in Brunhild than in the rest of her sex. The

passage is in fact derived from the Scandinavian form of the legend, and

seems scarcely in harmony with the spirit of the German poem.

ELEVENTH ADVENTURE

(St. XIV.) Worms beyond the Rhine, _Wormez über Rîn_. The writer here as

elsewhere speaks of Worms with reference to his own situation to the

east of the Rhine, whereas Xanten, like Worms, is on the west side of

that river.

(St. XVI.) Newsman's bread, _botenbrôt_, was the term for the present

given to a messenger.

(St. XXXI.) Lachmann's Sixth Lay begins here and ends with St. XLIX,

Fourteenth Adventure.

TWELFTH ADVENTURE

(St. XLVIII.) Gary, like a shrewd courtier, avoids praising Kriemhild's

good looks to a rival beauty.

(St. LIV.) A difference of opinion exists in united Germany as to the

interpretation of this passage, Lachmann, Simrock, Marbach, and Beta

being on one side, and von der Hagen and Braunfels on the other. I

readily vote with the majority. Rumolt's understrappers, as I conceive,

are not the pots and pans, but the subaltern cooks, the scullions and

other drudges of the royal kitchen.

THIRTEENTH ADVENTURE

(St. II.) I follow Lachmann's conjecture of _het_ for _heten_ in the

third line of this stanza.

(St. XXII.) Chaucer in like manner says of the carpenter's wife,

"Canterbury Tales," v. 3255--

Full brighter was the shining of hire hewe, Than in the tower the noble

yforged newe.

For the brilliant addition to the simile he is perhaps indebted to

Dante's

Fresco smeraldo in l'ora che si fiacca.

The comparison of the brilliant color of a blooming northern beauty to

gold, "red gold," as it is constantly called in old German and old

English poetry, forms a curious contrast with the phrases of Catullus,

"_inaurata pallidior statua_" "_magis fulgore expalluit, auri_," and

that of Statius, "_pallidus fossor redit erutoque concolor auro_," not

to mention the saying of Diogenes, that gold was pale through fear of

those who had a design upon it.

(St. XXIII.) Lachmann interprets the _gesinde_ or followers to be

Gunther's, and rejects the stanza as spurious, and manufactured for the

purpose of introducing Dankwart, who is represented as seeking out new

quarters, without necessity, for people who were already quartered in

the city. But are not the followers of Siegfried meant?

(St. XXVII.) A curious instance of awkwardness in the service of the

highest tables.

(St. XXXII.) The original has in the first verse _in dem lande_, in the

country, _i.e._, just outside the city walls, close under the castle,

from the windows of which the ladies might see the tournament. The

minster was in a separate part of the city, just as in London St. Paul's

is at a certain distance from the Tower. Here the horses are sent for,

which seems to show that the castle and the minster could not have been

contiguous, yet they could not have been very far apart, as Kriemhild

was in the habit of going to the minster before daybreak. (St. III,

Seventh Adventure.)

FOURTEENTH ADVENTURE

(St. IV.) The same simile is applied to Kriemhild herself at St. XX,

Fifth Adventure.

(St. XXX.) In the dialogues that follow the queens are not particularly

complimentary, but they at least use no weapons but their tongues. I do

not know what authority the writer of "Murray's Handbook for Northern

Germany" has for the following statement. "The combat between Chrimhelda

and Brunhelda is supposed to have been fought on the south side of the

Dom."

(St. XXIII.) Wind, a mere nothing; this phrase is not uncommon in the

poem.

The prophets shall become wind.--Jer. v. 13.

(St. XL.) Brunhild had been asserting that Siegfried was Gunther's

vassal, or, in feudal language, his man. Kriemhild sarcastically alludes

to this with more bitterness than delicacy.

(St. XLI.) Brunhild seems as much annoyed by this usurpation of her

trinkets as by the scandalous imputation mentioned in the preceding

stanza.

(St. L.) I have followed Professor Lachmann's explanation of the first

line of this stanza. He makes the Seventh Lay open here, and end with

St. XXXI, Fifteenth Adventure, but whatever we may think of his general

theory of the poem, his prefatory remarks here are well worth an

attentive perusal. It is clear that some stanzas, probably a good many,

have been lost. As the work stands at present, even if we interpret the

first line of this stanza to mean that many a fair woman departed,

Siegfried is left behind to hear his brother-in-law and his friends

discuss the expediency of knocking him on the head. In the part that is

lost there was probably an account of the breaking up of the assemblage

at the church door, and of the immediate summoning of a council in some

more convenient place. It was no doubt explained how Siegfried's denial,

which at first seemed so satisfactory, was afterward made of no account,

and possibly a good deal, of which we have now only a fragment in

stanzas L--LI, passed between Brunhild and Hagan, her husband's

principal adviser. Probably, too, as Lachmann has observed, the

invulnerability of Siegfreid was considered.

FIFTEENTH ADVENTURE

(St. XVIII.) The stanza, which contains this example of ancient

discipline, is rejected by Lachmann on account of the _innere reim_,

which, however, he thinks, suits perfectly with the "somewhat

over-charged coloring" which the author has adopted. Pictures of

domestic happiness in the same style of coloring are, I suppose, rarely

to be met with in Germany in the present liberal and enlightened age.

(St. XXIV.) See note to St. V, Third Adventure.

(St. XXXVI.) The Wask forest is the mountainous range called in French

the Vosges, which, as well as Worms, is to the west of the Rhine; this

stanza is therefore at variance with St. I, Seventeenth Adventure, where

the hunters cross the Rhine to return to Worms. Lachmann gets over the

difficulty by his theory of separate lays. According to his arrangement

St. XXXVI, this Adventure, is in the Seventh Lay, and St. I, Seventeenth

Adventure, in the Eighth, and these two Lays are the work of different

poets. Two points are certain; the first, that there were two traditionsas to

the place of Siegfried's death, one fixing it in the Waskenwald,

the other in the Odenwald; the second, that Gunther and Hagan were

generally believed to have attacked Walter of Spain in the Waskenwald.

Now there appears to me nothing improbable in supposing, either that a

minstrel with his head full of Walter's history and the connection of

Gunther and Hagan with the Waskenwald, might have recited _Waskenwalde_

for _Otenwalde_, or, on the other hand, that one, who was familiar with

the tradition that Siegfried was killed in the Odenwald, might have

found _an den Rîn_ at St. XXXVII, Sixteenth Adventure, and altered it to

_über Rîn_. At any rate I cannot help thinking that either of these

suppositions is less improbable than that a poet should first tell us

how Gunther and Hagan plotted against Siegfried, how the latter accepted

their treacherous invitation to the hunt, and how he went to take leave

of his wife, and that then the provoking rogue should immediately close

his poem without informing us what passed between Siegfried and his

wife, whether the hunt took place, or whether the plot succeeded.

SIXTEENTH ADVENTURE

(St I.) Lachmann's Eighth Lay begins here and ends with St. I,

Seventeenth Adventure.

(St. XXII.) The _schelch_ or shelk seems by the description in

Braunfels's Glossary to have been a kind of tragelaphus, with hair down

the breast.

(St. XXIII.) _Des gejeides meister_, I presume, means Siegfried himself,

who at St. XXXIX is called _jegermeister_.

(St. XXVII.)

Tryst. Ye shall be set at such a tryst

That hart and hind shall come to your fist.

Squire of Low Degree.--Ellis's "Specimens," v. 1, p. 341.

Tryst is a post or station in hunting, according to Cowell as quoted in

Tyrwhitt's Glossary to Chaucer, but Walter Scott uses it for a place of

appointment generally.

(St. XXXVIII.) For the sweetness of "the panther's breath or rather

body" I refer the reader to Gifford's note in his edition of Ben Jonson,

v. 3, p. 257. It is worth while however to quote the following passage

on panthers from Pliny's Natural History, 1. 8, c. 17, as it is not

noticed by Gifford. "_Ferunt odore earum mire sollicitari quadrupedes

cunctas, sed capitis torvitate terreri; quamobrem, occultato eo, reliqua

dulcedine invitatas corripiunt._"

(St. XXXIX.) I scarcely know whether I have translated this stanza

properly. The variegated work (expressed by _geströut_ in the original)

seems to have been produced by different sorts of fur. The _grâ unde

bunt_ of St. XVI, Third Adventure, seems to mean the same thing. Gold

thread or wire, and something like gold lace appear to have been

fashionable ornaments in the dress of both sexes. Precious stones, too,

were in great request. But I own I have been much puzzled by the

milliners' and tailors' work in the poem, and I dare say have made

mistakes. I may observe that the women were both tailors and milliners.

Kriemhild herself was an accomplished cutter (see St. XLIV, Sixth

Adventure), and, if it had not been for her assistance, her brother and

his companions would not have been fit to be seen at the splendid court

of Brunhild. The men were expert cutters in their line, but their

instrument was the broadsword.

(St. XL.) In this poem the edges of a sword are constantly spoken of in

the plural. The warriors seem to have had only two-edged swords.

(St. LIV.) The fourth line of this stanza, which is admitted as genuine

by Professor Lachmann, is one of those passages which are at variance

not merely with his theory, but with that which attributes the two parts

of the poem to two different authors. It refers to the slaughter toward

the close of the second part, and would be impertinent and out of place

in a poem that concluded with the death of one hero only.

(St. LVIII.) The poet says _the_ broad linden, according to Lachmann,

assuming that the story of Siegfried's death under a linden tree was

generally known.

(St. LXII.) _Intelletto veloce più che pardo._--"Petrarch, Sonn." 286.

(St. LXIV.) Johnson quotes from Ecclesiasticus, "I have no thank for all

my good deed." So in St. Luke vi. 33--"If ye do good to them that do

good to you, what thank have ye?"

SEVENTEENTH ADVENTURE

(St. II.) Lachmann's Ninth Lay begins here and ends with St. LXXI,

Seventeenth Adventure. The Professor has no objection to considering

this and the preceding Lay as works of the same author.

(St. IX.) The two last lines of this stanza and the two first of the

next are rejected by Professor Lachmann, because, as he thinks, they

contradict the last line of St. XI, where Kriemhild professes her

ignorance of the murderer. But Kriemhild is not a witness on oath, but a

woman in a frenzy of grief, who does not weigh her words, but one moment

utters an obvious suspicion, as if it were an ascertained fact, and the

next confesses that she has no positive proof, and cannot act upon what

she feels to be true. There is no very great inconsistency in saying,

"A. and B. are at the bottom of this: if I could only bring it home to

them, I'd make them smart for it." But the neuter pronoun in the third

line, referring to _houbet_ in the second, proves that the second line

is not interpolated. Professor Lachmann, indeed, gets over the

difficulty by altering the gender of the pronoun to the masculine.

(St. XI.) The last verse of this stanza seems a preparation for the

display of Kriemhild's character in a new point of view. The softer

parts of her character have been exhibited thus far; her revengeful and

unforgiving spirit will gradually swallow up every other feeling, and at

last close the poem with a general massacre. See, too, stanzas

XXIII--XXXII--XLV.

(St. XXI.) I have translated the second line of this stanza according to

Simrock's version, but it is impossible to make any satisfactory sense

of it. Professor Lachmann has justly printed the stanza in italics.

(St. XLIII.) On this curious superstition, which is as much English and

Scotch as German, see Nare's Glossary under the word "Wounds," and the

notes to "Earl Richard" in the second volume of the "Minstrelsy of the

Scottish Border." The whole passage is condemned as spurious by

Lachmann, principally on account of the discrepancy in the mention of

wounds in the plural, while only one wound was given by Hagan. There

are, however, two similar discrepancies in the poem. Kriemhild is killed

by Hildebrand apparently with a single blow, and immediately after is

spoken of as hewn in pieces; and Rudeger is killed by a single blow at

St. XXXVII, Thirty-seventh Adventure, while at St. L, same Adventure, he

is described as _verhouwen_, and at St. XXXII, Thirty-eighth Adventure,

as lying with severe death-wounds fallen in blood.

EIGHTEENTH ADVENTURE

(St. I.) Lachmann's Tenth Lay begins here and ends with St. XLV,

Nineteenth Adventure.

(St. XXI.) _They_ in the last line of this stanza seems to mean the

Burgundians.

(St. XXVI.) Here they go home to Netherland; before, in this Adventure,

the Nibelungers' land is spoken of as the country of Siegmund. This has

not escaped the hawk's eye of Lachmann.

NINETEENTH ADVENTURE

(St. XVIII.) The _morning gift_ was a present bestowed by the husband on

the wife the morning after the wedding. It was often promised before

marriage.

(St. XXI.) This passage, which states that Siegfried wore the

cloud-cloak at all times, agrees with the description of its mode of

operation at St. LXXXV, Tenth Adventure, but is inconsistent with

stanzas XLIII-LXXXIV, Seventh Adventure, from which last it would seem

to have been necessary for Siegfried to put on the cloak in order to

become invisible, and to put it off when he wished to become visible

again. The inconsistent passages probably arose from varying traditions

as to the operation of this miraculous garment. There is another

difficulty here. From Alberic's words it would seem that the possession

of the treasure depended on the possession of the cloud-cloak. If he and

his fellows had not lost the cloak _together with Siegfried_ (by which

last words he seems to refer not to the original loss of the cloak, when

Siegfried first won it, but to its loss in consequence of that hero's

death), the Burgundians should not have had the treasure, but we are

nowhere told what became of the cloak after Siegfried's death, and

Kriemhild claims the treasure as a gift from Siegfried, not as depending

on the possession of the cloak.

TWENTIETH ADVENTURE

(St. I.) Lachmann's Eleventh Lay begins here, and ends with St. III,

Twenty-first Adventure. "The historical relation of Etzel to Attila,"

says Professor W. Grimm ("Deutsche Heldensage," p. 67), "is quite

clear." It is here strengthened by the "mention of his brother

Blœdelin, who answers to the Bleda of Priscus and Jornandes, and is

found in the Klage, in Biterolf, in the Vilkina Saga, and other later

poems. Helche, otherwise Erka, Herche, Herriche, and Hariche, reminds us

of the Kerka of Priscus." Priscus was secretary to Maximin, the

ambassador of Theodosius the Younger at the court of Attila, and wrote a

history, of which extracts are still extant. The following is his

account of an interview with Kerka, the "_frou Helche_" of our poem.

Ἐνταῦθα τῆς Ἀττήλα ἐνδιαίτουμενης γαμετῆς, διὰ τῶν πρὸς τῇ θύρᾳ

βαρβάρων ἔτυχον εἰσόδου, καὶ αὐτὴν ἐπὶ στρώματος μαλακοῦ κειμένην

κατέλαβον, τοῖς ἐκ τῆς ἐρέας πιλωτοῖς τοῦ ἐδάφους σκεπομένου, ὥστε ἐπ'

αὐτῶν βαδίζειν. περιεῖπε δὲ αὐτὴν θεραπόντων πλῆθος κύκλῳ καὶ θεράπαιναι

ἐπὶ τοῦ ἐδάφους ἀντικρὺ αὐτῆς καθήμεναι ὀθόνας χρώμασι διεποίκιλλον,

ἐπιβληθησομένας πρὸς κόσμον ἐσθημάτων βαρβαρικῶν· προςελθῶν τοίνυν καὶ τὰ

δῶρα μετὰ τὸν ἀσπασμὸν δοὺς ὑπεξήειν. Gibbon in the 34th chapter of his

History has given almost a translation of Priscus. "The wife of Attila

received their visit sitting, or rather lying, on a soft couch; the

floor was covered with a carpet; the domestics formed a circle round the

queen, and her damsels, seated on the ground, were employed in working

the variegated embroidery which adorned the dress of the barbaric

warriors." There is a full account of Attila and the Huns with much

relating to the Nibelungenlied in the late Hon. and Rev. William

Herbert's Historical Treatise subjoined to his Poem on Attila.

(St. V.) The Margrave Rudeger is perhaps the most interesting characterin the

poem, but there is no one, with regard to whom the historical,

the legendary, and the mythical are more unintelligibly jumbled. Whether

he was an historical Austrian Margrave of the tenth century, a mere

legendary hero, or "a divine being," as Lachmann is disposed to think

him, is more than any plain Englishman can venture to decide. It seems

that his native country was Arabia, but whether by that name is meant

the region commonly so called, or a district in the centre of Spain, is

as yet anything but a settled point. Wherever it was, he was driven from

it by a king of Toledo, and took refuge with Etzel.

(St. XX.) I am uncertain whether I have given the true meaning of this

stanza, which is rejected by Lachmann, and, indeed, can scarcely be

reconciled with the rest. I have used _Hun_ and _Hungarian_

indifferently. The Hungarians were of a different race from the Huns,

but Mr. Hallam says of them, "The memory of Attila was renewed in the

devastations of these savages, who, if they were not his compatriots,

resembled them both in their countenances and customs."

(St. XXXI.) See Lachmann (St. 1113, L.) who conjectures _ersiwet_ for

_erfüllet_ or _ir sulet_.

(St. XLVII.) This refers to something not related in this poem.

(St. LIX.) Here again is an allusion to something not mentioned in the

poem, namely, to some service rendered by Rudeger to Hagan.

(St. LXIV.) The poet, who put this speech into the mouth of Gunther,

could have had no notion of the real history and extensive power of

Attila.

(St. CXX.) King Etzel appears to have been a truly liberal and

enlightened monarch.

(St. CXLV.) In the last line of this stanza, the plural of the verb is

authorized by three manuscripts, and, though they may be none of the

best, their readings deserve attention, when they are commanded by

necessity and common sense. The plural (_in_ for _ihnen_) in the

preceding line requires the plural in this. The young ladies cried at

leaving home, but were soon reconciled to their lot by the gayeties of

King Etzel's court. If the reader is not satisfied with this, he can

replace _they_ by _she_. Kriemhild will then be meant.

TWENTY-FIRST ADVENTURE

(St. III.) Vergen. Veringen in Suabia, on the Lauchart, three leagues

from the junction of that river with the Danube.--Lachmann, St. 1231, L.

(St. VII.) This good bishop Pilgrin, who is an historical personage,

died in the tenth century, and therefore could scarcely have been

Attila's wife's uncle, if chronology is to pass for anything with

popular poets. All that relates to him is rejected as spurious by

Lachmann and W. Grimm. See the latter's "Deutsche Heldensage," p. 71.

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