III.iii.467 (453,3)

Let him command,

And to obey, shall be in me remorse,

What bloody business ever]

[Pope: Not to obey] [T: Nor, to obey.] [W: me. Remord] Of these two

emendations, I believe, Theobald's will have the greater number of

suffrages; it has at least mine. The objection against the propriety of

the declaration in Iago is a cavil; he does not say that he has no

principle of remorse, but that it shall not operate against Othello's

commands. _To obey shall be in me_, for _I will obey you_, is a mode of

expression not worth the pains here taken to introduce it; and the word

_remords_ has not in the quotation the meaning of _withhold_, or _make

reluctant_, but of _reprove_, or _censure_; nor do I know that it is

used by any of the contemporaries of Shakespeare.

I will offer an interpretation, which, if it be received, will make

alteration unnecessary, but it is very harsh and violent. Iago devotes

himself to wronged Othello, and says, _Let him command whatever bloody

business_, and in me it shall be an act, not of cruelty, but _of

tenderness, to obey him_; not of malice to other, but of _tenderness_

for him. If this sense be thought too violent, I see nothing better than

to follow Pope's reading, as it is improved by Theobald.

III.iv.26 (457,5) cruzadoes] [A Portugueze coin, in value three

shillings sterling. Dr. GREY.] So called from the cross stamped upon it.

III.iv.46 (458,6) The hearts, of old, gave hands] [Warburton explains

this is an allusion to James the First's practice of creating baronets

for money and emends to "The hands of old gave hearts"] The historical

observation is very judicious and acute, but of the emendation there is

no need. She says, that her hand gave away _her heart_. He goes on with

his suspicion, and the hand which he had before called _frank_, he now

terms _liberal_; then proceeds to remark, that _the hand was formerly

given by the heart_; but now it neither gives it, nor is given by it.

III.iv.51 (459,7) salt and sullen rheum]--_salt and_ sorry rheum] The

old quarto has,

--_salt and_ sullen _rheum_---

That is, a _rheum obstinately troublesome_. I think this better.

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