CHAPTER X

TELEGRAMS

Perhaps the most important thing to guard against in the writing of

telegrams is a choice of words which, when run together, may be read two

ways. As there should be no punctuation (and telegraph companies do not

hold themselves responsible for punctuation) the sentences must be

perfectly clear. There are instances where the use of punctuation has

caused trouble.

In cases where punctuation is absolutely necessary, as for instance when

more than one subject must be covered in the same message, the word

"stop" is employed to divide the sentences, as:

Will arrive eight-thirty Wednesday stop telephone Gaines am

coming stop will be at Hotel Pennsylvania

Therefore write sentences so that when they are run together there is

only one interpretation.

Use no salutation or complimentary closing. Leave out all words that are

not necessary to the meaning. Omit first-person pronouns where they are

sure to be understood. Do not divide words in a telegram. Compound words

are accepted as one word. Numbers should be spelled out, principally

because it is more likely to insure correct transmission, and secondly

because it costs less. For example, in the ordinal 24th the suffix _th_

is counted as another word.

The minimum charge for telegrams is the cost of ten words, not counting

the name, address, and signature. Nothing is saved by cutting the

message to less than ten words. There is a certain fixed rate of charge

for every word over ten.

In counting the words, count as one word the following:

I--Every word in the name of an individual or a concern as:

Clive and Meyer Co. (four words) DeForest and Washburn Co.

(four words also, as DeForest is counted as one word).

II--Every dictionary word. In the case of cablegrams, words of

over fifteen letters are counted as two words.

III--Every separate letter as the "M" in "George M. Sykes"

(three words).

IV--Every figure in a number as 598 (three words).

V--Names of states, territories, counties, cities, and villages.

VI--Weights and measures, decimal points, punctuation marks

within the sentence.

To save expense in long messages codes can be used in which one word

stands for several words. The Western Union has an established code--or

private codes can be arranged. Five letters are allowed as one code

word. A word of six or seven letters will thus count as two words.

In cablegrams the use of codes is common on account of the higher rate

for cablegrams. Since the name, address, date, and signature are all

counted, code words are frequently used for the name and address. Code

language is allowed only in the first class of cable messages.

OCCASIONAL TELEGRAMS

A graceful, concise, pertinent, and well-worded "occasional" telegram is

frequently not easy to write. The following forms are suggested for the

composition of some of these telegrams. The longer forms can be sent

most cheaply as Night Letters or Day Letters. A Night Letter of fifty

words can be sent for the cost of a ten-word full-rate telegram, i.e.,

from 30 cents to $1.20, depending on the distance. A Day Letter of fifty

words can be sent for one and one half the cost of a ten-word full-rate

message, i.e., from 45 cents to $1.80, depending on the distance.

_New Year greetings_

Best wishes for the New Year. May it bring to you and your

family health, happiness, peace, and prosperity. May it see your

hopes fulfilled and may it be rich in the successful

accomplishment of your highest aims.

Best wishes for a Happy New Year.

May peace and happiness be yours in the New Year. May fortune

smile upon you and favor you with many blessings.

I (We) wish you a Happy New Year, a year big with success and

achievement, a year rich with the affection of those who are

dear to you, a year mellow with happiness and contentment.

What the coming year may hold we can none of us foresee. It is

my (our) earnest wish that for you it may bring forth a generous

harvest of happiness and good fortune.

May the coming year and all that succeed it deal lightly and

kindly with you.

May the coming year bring you happiness in fullest measure.

We think of you with the affection born of our long friendship

which the recurring year only strengthens.

May the New Year bring you health, happiness, and all other good

things.

Health, happiness, and contentment, may these be yours in the

New Year.

May health, happiness, and prosperity be yours in bountiful

measure in the year to come.

May the New Year be a good year to you and yours--full of health

and happiness.

May each of the three hundred and sixty-five days of the New

Year be a happy one for you.

The happiest of New Years to you and yours.

May the New Year find you in the enjoyment of health and

happiness.

_Easter greetings_

Our thoughts turn to you with affection and best wishes at this

Easter season with the hope that peace, prosperity, and plenty

may attend your life to-day and through all your days to come.

Easter Greeting from a friend who thinks of you with constant

affection.

This Easter Greeting carries to you the affection of an old

friend.

May this Easter Day find you in the enjoyment of health and

happiness.

Best wishes for a happy Easter.

Best wishes for a happy Easter Day. May your future ever be as

bright as the Springtime.

Just a message to a friend, to convey to you my wish that this

Easter may bring you happiness and good fortune.

May Easter gladness fill your heart to-day and may all good

attend you.

I (We) Wish you joy and happiness at this Eastertide.

May happiness and health be yours on this Easter Day and in the

days to come.

We all join in best wishes for a happy Easter Day to you and

your family.

Easter Greetings to you and yours.

May your Easter be a bright and happy one.

We all wish you and yours a happy Easter.

Love and best wishes for a happy Easter.

My (Our) Easter Greetings go to you. May the day be a joyful one

for you.

_Thanksgiving Day greetings_

Best wishes for a happy Thanksgiving Day.

Good cheer and plenty, the love of your dear ones, the affection

of your friends, may all these contribute to a happy

Thanksgiving Day.

May your Thanksgiving Day be a day of happiness and contentment.

May your Thanksgiving Day be full of happiness and all good

cheer.

That I am (we are) not at home to-day to join in the festivities

is a great sorrow to me (us). Love to all the dear family.

I never forget the joy of this day at home. Love from one far

away.

Although I (we) cannot be with you to-day I (we) have the memory

of past Thanksgiving Days at home. God bless you all.

Think of me (us) as being with you in spirit. My (Our) love to

you all.

Let us never fail to be thankful that the years only increase

the strength of our long friendship.

It is with great thanksgiving that I (we) think of my (our) dear

ones at home.

My (Our) one wish this Thanksgiving Day is that I (we) might be

with you. Affectionate wishes for your happiness.

Though I (we) cannot be with you at the Thanksgiving Day board,

my (our) thoughts are with you to-day.

Around the family table think of me (us) as I (we) absent, shall

think of you. My (Our) love to all.

I (We) can picture you all at home. How I (we) long to be with

you. My (Our) love to all the family.

_Christmas greetings_

Every good wish for a Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous

New Year. I need not tell you with what affection we are

thinking of you and yours at this Christmas season. God bless

you all.

Every good wish for a Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous

New Year.

My (Our) very best wishes for a Merry Christmas.

Merry Christmas to you and yours.

May your Christmas be a very happy one.

Merry Christmas to you and all the family.

We all join in wishing you a Merry Christmas.

All affection and good wishes for a Merry Christmas to you and

yours.

That your Christmas be a very happy one is the wish of your

sincere friend.

May Christmas bring you joy and happiness.

You are constantly in my (our) thoughts which carry to you

to-day all affectionate wishes for a Happy Christmas.

A Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Best wishes for a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

Love and a Merry Christmas to you all.

May your Christmas be a merry one and the New Year full of

happiness.

Affectionate greetings for a Merry Christmas and a Happy New

Year.

May this Christmas find you well and happy. Love and best wishes

to you and yours.

May Christmas bring you naught but joy and banish all care and

sorrow.

---- joins me in very best wishes for a Merry Christmas.

A Merry Christmas to all the dear ones at home.

It is my (our) dearest wish that I (we) might be with you at

this season of happiness and good-will--Merry Christmas and

Happy New Year.

_Birthday greetings_

Many happy returns of the day. My (Our) affectionate thoughts

and every good wish go to you on this your birthday.

May each succeeding year bring to you the best satisfaction

which life holds.

Many happy returns of the day.

Best wishes for a happy birthday.

Best wishes for your birthday. May all your ways be pleasant

ways and all your days be happy days.

Birthday greetings. I (We) wish you a long life and everything

that makes a long life worth living.

Best wishes for your birthday. May you live long and prosper.

My (Our) thoughts are with you on your birthday. May all your

days be happy days.

I (We) wish you many happy years blessed with health, success,

and friendship and filled with all the best that life can hold.

We all join in best wishes for a very happy birthday and many

years of health and prosperity.

We all join in best wishes for a very happy birthday.

May your birthday mark the dawn of a year of health, happiness,

and good fortune.

_Wedding messages_

Sincerest congratulations to the bride and groom from an old

friend who wishes you both years of health, happiness, and

prosperity. May the future hold only the best for you that this

world can give.

Heartiest congratulations. I (We) wish you many years of

happiness.

Mrs. ---- and I join in heartiest congratulations.

Hearty congratulations. May your years be many and happy ones.

My (Our) sincerest and best wishes for your happiness.

We all join in hearty congratulations and best wishes.

May happiness, health, and prosperity be with you through the

years to come.

May all good fortune attend you, may your sky ever be bright,

may no clouds of sorrow or trouble shadow it, and may your path

be long and filled with joy.

Every happiness be yours dear ---- on this your Wedding Day.

Let an old family friend send his (her) love and congratulations

to the bride and groom.

May all good fairies watch over you. May they keep far from you

all care and sorrow and brighten your path with sunshine and

happiness.

To the bride and groom, love and congratulations from an old

friend.

May this day be the beginning of a long, happy, and prosperous

life for you both.

_On the birth of a child_

Love to the dear mother and her little son (daughter).

Heartiest congratulations and love to mother and son (daughter).

We rejoice with you in the happiness that has come into your

lives. Love to mother and son (daughter).

My best wishes to the newly arrived son (daughter) and to his

(her) mother.

We are all (I am) delighted to hear the news. Hearty

congratulations.

A warm welcome to the new arrival and best wishes for his (her)

health and happiness.

To the dear mother and her little son (daughter) love and every

good wish.

Hearty congratulations on the arrival of the new son (daughter).

_Messages of condolence_

You have my heartfelt sympathy in this hour of your bereavement.

I wish I might find words in which to express my sorrow at your

loss which is also mine. May you have the strength to bear this

great affliction.

You have my (our) heartfelt sympathy.

My (Our) heartfelt sympathy in your great sorrow.

I (We) want you to know with what tender sympathy I am (We are)

thinking of you in these days of your bereavement.

My (Our) sincere and heartfelt sympathy.

I (We) have just heard of your great affliction. Let me (us)

send to you my (our) heartfelt sympathy.

My (Our) sincere sympathy.

In the death of your dear father

(mother--wife--sister--brother) I (we) have lost one whom it was

my (our) privilege to call my (our) friend. My (our) heartfelt

sympathy goes out to you in your sorrow.

---- joins me in the expression of our deepest sympathy.

My (Our) love and sympathy go out to you in your great sorrow.

I (We) share your sorrow for I (we) have lost a dear friend. All

love and sympathy to you and yours.

I (We) send you my (our) heartfelt sympathy. To have enjoyed the

friendship of your father (husband--brother) I (we) hold one of

the greatest privileges of my life (our lives).

My (Our) sincere sympathy goes out to you in your heavy

affliction.

My (Our) love and sympathy in your sudden affliction.

I am (We are) greatly shocked at the sad news. You have my (our)

deepest sympathy.

My (Our) deepest sympathy in your great loss. If there is

anything I (we) can do, do not hesitate to let me (us) know.

_Congratulation to a school or college graduate_

May your future be as successful as have been your school

(college) days. Heartiest congratulations upon your graduation.

I am (We are) proud of your success. May the future grant you

opportunity and the fulfillment of your hopes.

I (We) hear that you have taken class honors. Sincerest

congratulations and best wishes.

May your Class Day be favored with sunny skies and your life be

full of happiness and success.

Sincerest congratulations upon your graduation.

Congratulations upon your school (college) success, so happily

terminated to-day.

I (We) regret that I (we) cannot be with you to-day to see you

take your new honors. Sincerest congratulations.

_Congratulation to a public man_

Heartiest congratulations on your splendid success.

We have just heard of your success. Sincere congratulations

and best wishes for the future.

Heartiest congratulations on your nomination (election).

Your nomination (election) testifies to the esteem in which you

are held by your fellow citizens. Heartiest congratulations.

Congratulations on your victory, a hard fight, well won by the

best man.

Your splendid majority must be a great satisfaction to you.

Sincerest congratulations on your election.

Congratulations upon your nomination. You will have the support

of the best element in the community and your election should be

a foregone conclusion. I wish you every success.

You fought a good fight in a good cause. Heartiest

congratulations on your splendid success.

Nothing in your career should fill you with greater satisfaction

than your successful election. I congratulate you with all my

heart.

No man deserves success more than you. You have worked hard for

your constituents and they appreciate it. Heartiest

congratulations.

Your nomination (election) is received with the greatest

enthusiasm by your friends here and by none more than myself.

Heartiest congratulations.

I congratulate you upon your new honors won by distinguished

services to your fellow citizens.

Your campaign was vigorous and fine. Your victory testifies to

the people's confidence in you and your cause. Warmest

congratulations.

Congratulations upon your well-won victory and best wishes for

your future success.

You deserve your splendid success. Sincerest congratulations.

I cannot refrain from expressing my personal appreciation of

your eloquent address. Warmest congratulations.

Your address last night was splendid. What a gift you have.

Sincerest congratulations.

Heartiest congratulations on your splendid speech of last

night. Everybody is praising it.

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