In _Les Freres ennemies_ of Racine, the second act is opened with a

love-scene. Hemon talks to his mistress of the torments of absence, of

the lustre of her eyes, that he ought to die no where but at her feet,

and that one moment of absence was a thousand years. Antigone on her

part acts the coquette, and pretends she must be gone to wait on her

mother and brother, and cannot stay to listen to his courtship. This is

odious French gallantry, below the dignity of the passion of love. It

would scarce be excusable in painting modern French manners; and is

insufferable where the ancients are brought upon the stage. The manners

painted in the _Alexandre_ of the same author are not more just. French

gallantry prevails there throughout.

* * * * *

Third. Sentiments that agree not with the tone of the passion; as where

a pleasant sentiment is grafted upon a painful passion, or the

contrary. In the following instances the sentiments are too gay for a

serious passion.

No happier talk these faded eyes pursue;

To read and weep is all they now can do.

_Eloisa to Abelard, l. 47._

Again,

Heav’n first taught letters for some wretch’s aid,

Some banish’d lover, or some captive maid;

They live, they speak, they breathe what love inspires,

Warm from the soul, and faithful to its fires;

The virgin’s wish without her fears impart,

Excuse the blush, and pour out all the heart;

Speed the soft intercourse from soul to soul,

And waft a sigh from Indus to the pole.

_Eloisa to Abelard, l. 51._

These thoughts are pretty; they suit Pope extremely, but not Eloisa.

* * * * *

Satan, enraged by a threatening of the angel Gabriel, answers thus:

Then when I am thy captive talk of chains,

Proud limitary cherub; but ere then

Far heavier load thyself expect to feel

From my prevailing arm, though Heaven’s King

Ride on thy wings, and thou with thy compeers,

Us’d to the yoke, draw’st his triumphant wheels

In progress through the road of heav’n _star-pav’d_.

_Paradise Lost, book 4._

The concluding epithet forms a grand and delightful image, which cannot

be the genuine offspring of rage.

* * * * *

Fourth. Sentiments too artificial for a serious passion. I give for the

first example a speech of Piercy expiring:

O, Harry, thou hast robb’d me of my growth:

I better brook the loss of brittle life,

Than those proud titles thou hast won of me;

They wound my thoughts, worse than thy sword my flesh.

But thought’s the slave of life, and life time’s fool;

And time, that takes survey of all the world,

Must have a stop.

_First part, Henry IV. act 5. sc. 9._

Livy inserts the following passage in a plaintive oration of the

Locrenses accusing Pleminius the Roman legate of oppression.

“In hoc legato vestro, nec hominis quicquam est, Patres Conscripti,

præter figuram et speciem; neque Romani civis, præter habitum

vestitumque, et sonum linguæ Latinæ. Pestis et bellua immanis,

quales fretum, quondam, quo ab Sicilia dividimur, ad perniciem

navigantium circumsedisse, fabulæ ferunt[53].”

Congreve shows a fine taste in the sentiments of the _Mourning Bride_.

But in the following passage the picture is too artful to be suggested

by severe grief:

_Almeria._ O no! Time gives increase to my afflictions.

The circling hours, that gather all the woes

Which are diffus’d through the revolving year,

Come heavy-laden with th’ oppressing weight

To me; with me, successively, they leave

The sighs, the tears, the groans, the restless cares,

And all the damps of grief, that did retard their flight,

They shake their downy wings, and scatter all

The dire collected dews on my poor head;

Then fly with joy and swiftness from me.

_Act 1. sc. 1._

In the same play, Almeria seeing a dead body, which she took to be

Alphonso’s, expresses sentiments strained and artificial, which nature

suggests not to any person upon such an occasion:

Had they, or hearts, or eyes, that did this deed?

Could eyes endure to guide such cruel hands?

Are not my eyes guilty alike with theirs,

That thus can gaze, and yet not turn to stone?

--I do not weep! The springs of tears are dry’d,

And of a sudden I am calm, as if

All things were well; and yet my husband’s murder’d!

Yes, yes, I know to mourn! I’ll sluice this heart,

The source of wo, and let the torrent loose.

_Act 5. sc. 11._

_Lady Trueman._ How could you be so cruel to defer giving me that

joy which you knew I must receive from your presence? You have

robb’d my life of some hours of happiness that ought to have been

in it.

_Drummer, act 5._

Pope’s Elegy to the memory of an unfortunate lady, expresses delicately

the most tender concern and sorrow for the deplorable fate of a person

of worth. A poem of this kind, deeply serious and pathetic, rejects all

fiction with disdain. We therefore can give no quarter to the following

passage, which is eminently discordant with the subject. It is not the

language of the heart, but of the imagination indulging its flights at

ease. It would be a still more severe censure, if it should be ascribed

to imitation, copying indiscreetly what has been said by others.

What though no weeping loves thy ashes grace,

Nor polish’d marble emulate thy face?

What though no sacred earth allow thee room,

Nor hallow’d dirge be muttered o’er thy tomb?

Yet shall thy grave with rising flow’rs be drest,

And the green turf lie lightly on thy breast:

There shall the morn her earliest tears bestow,

There the first roses of the year shall blow;

While angels with their silver wings o’ershade

The ground, now sacred by thy reliques made.

Fifth. Fanciful or sinical sentiments, sentiments that degenerate into

point or conceit, however they may amuse in an idle hour, can never be

the offspring of any serious or important passion. In the _Ierusalem_

of Tasso, Tancred, after a single combat, spent with fatigue and loss of

blood, falls into a swoon. In this situation, understood to be dead, he

is discovered by Erminia, who was in love with him to distraction. A

more happy situation cannot be imagined, to raise grief in an instant to

its highest pitch; and yet, in venting her sorrow, she descends most

abominably to antithesis and conceit, even of the lowest kind.

E in lui versò d’inessicabil vena

Lacrime, e voce di sospiri mista.

In che misero punto hor qui me mena

Fortuna? a che veduta amara e trista?

Dopo gran tempo i’ ti ritrovo à pena

Tancredi, e ti riveggio, e non son vista,

Vista non son da te, benche presente

E trovando ti perdo eternamente.

_Cant. 19. st. 105._

Armida’s lamentation respecting her lover Rinaldo[54], is in the same

vitious taste.

_Queen._ Give me no help in lamentation,

I am not barren to bring forth complaints:

All springs reduce their currents to mine eyes,

That I, being govern’d by the wat’ry moon,

May send forth plenteous tears to drown the world.

Ah, for my husband, for my dear Lord Edward.

_King Richard III. act 2. sc. 2._

_Jane Shore._ Let me be branded for the public scorn,

Turn’d forth, and driven to wander like a vagabond,

Be friendless and forsaken, seek my bread

Upon the barren wild, and desolate waste,

_Feed on my sighs, and drink my falling tears_;

Ere I consent to teach my lips injustice,

Or wrong the orphan who has none to save him.

_Jane Shore, act 4._

Give me your drops, ye soft-descending rains,

Give me your streams, ye never-ceasing springs,

That my sad eyes may still supply my duty,

And feed an everlasting flood of sorrow.

_Jane Shore, act 5._

Jane Shore utters her last breath in a witty conceit.

Then all is well, and I shall sleep in peace----

’Tis very dark, and I have lost you now----

Was there not something I would have bequeath’d you?

But I have nothing left me to bestow,

Nothing but one sad sigh. Oh mercy, Heav’n! [_Dies._

_Act 5._

Gilford to Lady Jane Gray, when both were condemned to die:

Thou stand’st unmov’d;

Calm temper sits upon thy beauteous brow;

Thy eyes that flow’d so fast for Edward’s loss,

Gaze unconcern’d upon the ruin round thee,

As if thou hadst resolv’d to brave thy fate,

And triumph in the midst of desolation.

Ha! see, it swells, the liquid crystal rises,

It starts in spight of thee---- but I will catch it,

Nor let the earth be wet with dew so rich.

_Lady Jane Gray, act 4. near the end._

The concluding sentiment is altogether sinical, unsuitable to the

importance of the occasion, and even to the dignity of the passion of

love.

* * * * *

Corneille, in his _Examen of the Cid_[55], answering an objection, that

his sentiments are sometimes too much refined for persons in deep

distress, observes, that if poets did not indulge sentiments more

ingenious or refined than are prompted by passion, their performances

would often be low; and extreme grief would never suggest but

exclamations merely. This is in plain language to assert, That forced

thoughts are more relished than such as are natural, and therefore ought

to be preferred.

* * * * *

The second class is of sentiments that may belong to an ordinary

passion, but are not perfectly concordant with it, as tinctured by a

singular character. In the last act of that excellent comedy, _The

Careless Husband_, Lady Easy, upon Sir Charles’s reformation, is made to

express more violent and turbulent sentiments of joy, than are

consistent with the mildness of her character.

_Lady Easy._ O the soft treasure! O the dear reward of

long-desiring love---- Thus! thus to have you mine, is something

more than happiness, ’tis double life, and madness of abounding

joy.

If the sentiments of a passion ought to be suited to a peculiar

character, it is still more necessary that sentiments devoid of passion

be suited to the character. In the 5th act of the _Drummer_, Addison

makes his gardener act even below the character of an ignorant credulous

rustic: he gives him the behaviour of a gaping idiot.

* * * * *

The following instances are descriptions rather than sentiments, which

compose a third class.

Of this descriptive manner of painting the passions, there is in the

_Hippolytus_ of Euripides, act 5. an illustrious instance, _viz._ the

speech of Theseus, upon hearing of his son’s dismal exit. In Racine’s

tragedy of _Esther_, the Queen hearing of the decree issued against her

people, instead of expressing sentiments suitable to the occasion, turns

her attention upon herself, and describes with accuracy her own

situation.

Juste Ciel? Tout mon sang dans mes veines se glace.

_Act 1. sc. 3._

Again,

_Aman._ C’en est fait. Mon orgueil est forcé de plier,

L’inexorable Aman est reduit a prier.

_Esther, act 3. sc. 5._

_Athalie._ Quel prodige nouveau me trouble et m’embarrasse?

La douceur de sa voix, son enfance, sa grace,

Font insensiblement à mon inimitié

Succéder---- Je serois sensible a la pitié?

_Athalie, act 2. sc. 7._

_Titus._ O de ma passion fureur desesperée!

_Brutus of Voltaire, act 3. sc. 6._

What other are the foregoing instances than describing the passion

another feels?

* * * * *

An example is given above of remorse and despair expressed by genuine

and natural sentiments. In the fourth book of _Paradise Lost_, Satan is

made to express his remorse and despair in sentiments, which though

beautiful, are not altogether natural. They are rather the sentiments of

a spectator, than of a person who actually is tormented with these

passions.

The fourth class is of sentiments introduced too early or too late.

Some examples mentioned above belong to this class. Add the following

from _Venice preserv’d_, act 5. at the close of the scene betwixt

Belvidera and her father Priuli. The account given by Belvidera of the

danger she was in, and of her husband’s threatening to murder her, ought

naturally to have alarmed her relenting father, and to have made him

express the most perturbed sentiments. Instead of which he dissolves

into tenderness and love for his daughter, as if he had already

delivered her from danger, and as if there were a perfect tranquillity.

Canst thou forgive me all my follies past?

I’ll henceforth be indeed a father; never,

Never more thus expose, but cherish thee,

Dear as the vital warmth that feeds my life,

Dear as these eyes that weep in fondness o’er thee:

Peace to thy heart.

Immoral sentiments exposed in their native colours, instead of being

concealed or disguised, compose the fifth class.

* * * * *

The Lady Macbeth projecting the death of the King, has the following

soliloquy:

---- The raven himself’s not hoarse

That croaks the fatal entrance of Duncan

Under my battlements. Come all you spirits

That tend on mortal thoughts, unsex me here,

And fill me from the crown to th’ toe, top-full

Of direct cruelty; make thick my blood,

Stop up th’ access and passage to remorse

That no compunctious visitings of nature

Shake my fell purpose.

_Macbeth, act 1. sc. 7._

This speech is not natural. Murder under trust was never perpetrated

even by the most hardened miscreant without compunction. And that the

lady here must have been in horrible agitation appears, from her

invoking the infernal spirits to fill her with cruelty, and to stop up

all avenues to remorse. But in this state of mind, it is a never-failing

device of self-deceit, to draw the thickest veil over the wicked action,

and to extenuate it by all circumstances that imagination can suggest.

And if the crime cannot bear disguise, the next attempt is, to thrust it

out of mind altogether, and to rush on to action without thought. This

last was the husband’s method.

Strange things I have in head, that will to hand;

Which must be acted, ere they must be scann’d.

_Act 3. sc. 5._

The lady follows neither of these courses, but in a deliberate manner

endeavours to fortify her heart in the commission of an execrable crime,

without even attempting a disguise. This I think is not natural. I hope

there is no such wretch to be found, as is here represented. In the

_Pompey_ of Corneille[56], Photine counsels a wicked action in the

plainest terms without disguise.

Seigneur, n’attirez point le tonnerre en ces lieux,

Rangez-vous du parti des destins et des dieux,

Et sans les accuser d’injustice, ou d’outrage,

Puis qu’ils font les heureux, adorez leur ouvrage;

Quels que soient leurs decrets, déclarez-vouz pour eux,

Et pour leur obéir, perdez le malheureux.

Pressé de toutes parts des coléres celestes,

Il en vient dessus vous faire fondre les restes;

Et sa tête qu’à peine il a pû dérober,

Tout prête de choir, cherche avec qui tomber.

Sa retraite chez vous en effet n’est qu’un crime;

Elle marque sa haine, et non pas son estime;

Il ne vient que vous perdre en venant prendre port,

Et vous pouvez douter s’il est digne de mort!

Il devoit mieux remplir nos vœux et notre attente,

Faire voir sur ses nefs la victoire flotante;

Il n’eût ici trouvé que joye et que festins,

Mais puisqu’il est vaincu, qu’il s’en prenne aux destins

J’en veux à sa disgrace et non à sa personne,

J’exécute à regret ce que le ciel ordonne,

Et du même poignard, pour César destiné,

Je perce en soupirant son cœur infortuné.

Vouz ne pouvez enfin qu’aux dépens de sa tête

Mettre à l’abri la vôtre et parer la tempête.

Laissez nommer sa mort un injuste attentat,

La justice n’est pas une vertu d’etat.

Le choix des actions, ou mauvaises, ou bonnes,

Ne fait qu’anéantir la force des couronnes;

Le droit des rois consiste à ne rien épargner;

La timide équité détruit l’art de regner,

Quand on craint d’être injuste on a toûjours à craindre,

Et qui veut tout pouvoir doit oser tout enfraindre,

Fuir comme un deshonneur la vertu qui le pert,

Et voler sans scrupule au crime qui lui fert.

In the tragedy of _Esther_[57], Haman acknowledges, without disguise,

his cruelty, insolence, and pride. And there is another example of the

same kind in the _Agamemnon_ of Seneca[58]. In the tragedy of

_Athalie_[59], Mathan, in cool blood, relates to his friend many black

crimes he had been guilty of to satisfy his ambition.

* * * * *

In Congreve’s _Double-dealer_, Maskwell, instead of disguising or

colouring his crimes, values himself upon them in a soliloquy:

Cynthia, let thy beauty gild my crimes; and whatsoever I commit of

treachery or deceit, shall be imputed to me as a merit.----

Treachery! what treachery? Love cancels all the bonds of

friendship, and sets men right upon their first foundations.

_Act 2. sc. 8._

In French plays, love, instead of being hid or disguised, is treated as

a serious concern, and of greater importance than fortune, family, or

dignity. I suspect the reason to be, that in the capital of France,

love, by the easiness of intercourse, has dwindled down from a real

passion to be a connection that is regulated entirely by the mode or

fashion[60]. This may in some measure excuse their writers, but will

never make their plays be relished among foreigners.

_Maxime._ Quoi, trahir, mon ami!

_Euphorbe._---- L’amour rend tout permis, Un véritable amant ne

connoît point d’amis.

_Cinna, act 3. sc. 1._

_Cesar._ Reine, tout est paisible, et la ville calmée,

Qu’un trouble assez leger avoit trop alarmée,

N’a plus à redouter le divorce intestin

Du soldat insolent, et du peuple mutin.

Mais, ô Dieux! ce moment que je vous ai quittée,

D’un trouble bien plus grand à mon ame agitée,

Et ces soins importuns qui m’arrachoient de vous

Contre ma grandeur même allumoient mon courroux.

Je lui voulois du mal de m’être si contraire,

De rendre ma presence ailleurs si necessaire.

Mais je lui pardonnois au simple souvenir

Du bonheur qu’a ma flâme elle fait obtenir.

C’est elle dont je tiens cette haute espérance,

Qui flate mes desirs d’une illustre apparence,

Et fait croire à Cesar qu’il peut former de vœux,

Qu’il n’est pas tout-à-fait indigne de vos feux,

Et qu’il peut en pretendre une juste conquête,

N’ayant plus que les Dieux au dessus de sa tête.

Oui, Reine, si quelqu’un dans ce vaste univers

Pouvoit porter plus haut la gloire de vos fers;

S’il étoit quelque trône où vous puissiez paroître

Plus dignement assise en captivant son maître,

J’irois, j’irois à lui, moins pour le lui ravir,

Que pour lui disputer le droit de vous servir;

Et je n’aspirerois au bonheur de vous plaire,

Qu’aprés avoir mis bas un si grand adversaire.

C’etoit pour acquerir un droit si précieux,

Que combatoit par tout mon bras ambitieux,

Et dans Pharsale même il a tiré l’epée

Plus pour le conserver, que pour vaincre Pompée.

Je l’ai vaincu, Princesse, et le Dieu de combats

M’y favorisoit moins que vos divins appas.

Ils conduisoient ma main, ils enfloient mon courage,

Cette pleine victoire est leur dernier ouvrage,

C’est l’effet des ardeurs qu’ils daignoient m’inspirer;

Et vos beaux yeux enfin m’ayant fait soûpirer,

Pour faire que votre ame avec gloire y réponde,

M’ont rendu le premier, et de Rome, et du monde;

C’est ce glorieux titre, à présent effectif,

Que je viens ennoblir par celui de captif;

Heureux, si mon ésprit gagne tant sur le vôtre,

Qu’il en estime l’un, et me permette l’autre.

_Pompée, act 4. sc. 3._

The last class comprehends sentiments that are unnatural, as being

suited to no character nor passion. These may be subdivided into three

branches: first, sentiments unsuitable to the constitution of man and

the laws of his nature; second, inconsistent sentiments; third,

sentiments that are pure rant and extravagance.

* * * * *

When the fable is of human affairs, every event, every incident, and

every circumstance, ought to be natural, otherwise the imitation is

imperfect. But an imperfect imitation is a venial fault, compared with

that of running cross to nature. In the _Hippolytus_ of Euripides[61],

Hippolytus, wishing for another self in his own situation, How much

(says he) should I be touched with his misfortune! as if it were natural

to grieve more for the misfortunes of another than for one’s own.

_Osmyn._ Yet I behold her--yet--and now no more.

Turn your lights inward, Eyes, and view my thought,

So shall you still behold her--’twill not be.

O impotence of sight! mechanic sense

Which to exterior objects ow’st thy faculty,

Not seeing of election, but necessity.

Thus do our eyes, as do all common mirrors,

Successively reflect succeeding images.

Nor what they would, but must; a star or toad;

Just as the hand of Chance administers!

_Mourning Bride, act 2. sc. 8._

No man, in his senses, ever thought of applying his eyes to discover

what passes in his mind; far less of blaming his eyes for not seeing a

thought or idea. In Moliere’s _L’Avare_[62], Harpagon being robbed of

his money, seizes himself by the arm, mistaking it for that of the

robber. And again he expresses himself as follows:

Je veux aller querir la justice, et faire donner la question à

toute ma maison; à servantes, à valets, à fils, à fille, et à moi

aussi.

This is so absurd as scarce to provoke a smile if it be not at the

author.

* * * * *

Of the second branch the following are examples.

---- Now bid me run

And I will strive with things impossible,

Yea get the better of them.

_Julius Cæsar, act 2. sc. 3._

Vos mains seules ont droit de vaincre un invincible.

_Le Cid, act 5. sc. last._

Que son nom soit beni. Que son nom soit chanté.

Que l’on celebre ses ouvrages

Au de la de l’eternité.

_Esther, act 5. sc. last._

Me miserable! which way shall I fly

Infinite wrath and infinite despair?

Which way I fly is hell: myself am hell:

And in the _lowest_ deep, a _lower_ deep

Still threat’ning to devour me, opens wide;

To which, the hell I suffer seems a heav’n.

_Paradise Lost, book 4._

Of the third branch, take the following samples.

* * * * *

Lucan, talking of Pompey’s sepulchre,

---- Romanum nomen, et omne

Imperium Magno est tumuli modus. Obrue saxa

Crimine plena deûm. Si tota est Herculis Oete,

Et juga tota vacant Bromio Nyseia; quare

Unus in Egypto Magno lapis? Omnia Lagi

Rura tenere potest, si nullo cespite nomen

Hæserit. Erremus populi, cinerumque tuorum,

Magne, metu nullas Nili calcemus arenas.

_L. 8. l. 798._

Thus in Rowe’s translation:

Where there are seas, or air, or earth, or skies,

Where-e’er Rome’s empire stretches, Pompey lies.

Far be the vile memorial then convey’d!

Nor let this stone the partial gods upbraid.

Shall Hercules all Oeta’s heights demand,

And Nysa’s hill for Bacchus only stand;

While one poor pebble is the warrior’s doom

That fought the cause of liberty and Rome?

If fate decrees he must in Egypt lie,

Let the whole fertile realm his grave supply,

Yield the wide country to his awful shade,}

Nor let us dare on any part to tread,}

Fearful we violate the mighty dead.}

The following passages are pure rant. Coriolanus speaking to his mother,

What is this?

Your knees to me? to your corrected son?

Then let the pebbles on the hungry beach

Fillop the stars: then let the mutinous winds

Strike the proud cedars ’gainst the fiery sun:

Murd’ring impossibility, to make

What cannot be, slight work.

_Coriolanus, act 5. sc. 3._

_Cæsar._---- Danger knows full well,

That Cæsar is more dangerous than he.

We were two lions litter’d in one day,

And I the elder and more terrible.

_Julius Cæsar, act 2. sc. 4._

_Almahide._ This day----

I gave my faith to him, he his to me.

_Almanzor._ Good Heav’n, thy book of fate before me lay

But to tear out the journal of this day.

Or if the order of the world below,}

Will not the gap of one whole day allow,}

Give me that minute when she made that vow.}

That minute ev’n the happy from their bliss might give,

And those who live in grief a shorter time would live.

So small a link if broke, th’ eternal chain

Would like divided waters join again.

_Conquest of Granada, act 3._

_Almanzor._---- I’ll hold it fast

As life; and when life’s gone, I’ll hold this last.

And if thou tak’st it after I am slain,

I’ll send my ghost to fetch it back again.

_Conquest of Granada, part 2. act 3._

_Lynairaxa._ A crown is come, and will not fate allow.

And yet I feel something like death is near.

My guards, my guards----

Let not that ugly skeleton appear.

Sure Destiny mistakes; this death’s not mine;

She doats, and meant to cut another line.

Tell her I am a queen---- but ’tis too late;

Dying, I charge rebellion on my fate;

Bow down, ye slaves----

Bow quickly down and your submission show;

I’m pleas’d to taste an empire ere I go. [_Dies._

_Conquest of Granada, part 2. act. 5._

_Ventidius._ But you, ere love misled your wand’ring eyes,

Were, sure, the chief and best of human race,

Fram’d in the very pride and boast of nature,

So perfect, that the gods who form’d you wonder’d

At their own skill, and cry’d, A lucky hit

Has mended our design.

_Dryden, All for Love, act 1._

Not to talk of the impiety of this sentiment, it is ludicrous instead of

being lofty.

* * * * *

The famous Epitaph on Raphael is not less absurd than any of the

foregoing passages:

Raphael, timuit, quo sospite, vinci

Rerum magna parens, et moriente mori.

Imitated by Pope in his Epitaph on Sir Godfrey Kneller:

Living, great Nature fear’d he might outvie

Her works; and dying, fears herself may die.

Elements of Criticism, Volume II. · 第 7 / 19 段