ORIGINAL VERSION. PARALLEL VERSION.

(44) It will not be impertinent And now, in order to explain, as

nor _unnatural to this_ (50) far as possible, how so prodigious

_present discourse_, to set down an alteration could take place in

in this place the present temper so short a time, and how the[19]

and constitution of both Houses royal power could fall so low as

of Parliament, and (34) of the to be unable to support itself,

court itself, (30) that (5) _it_ its dignity, or its faithful

may be the less wondered at, that servants, it will be of use to set

so prodigious an alteration should down here, where it comes most

be made in so short a time, and naturally, some account of the[20]

(37) the crown fallen so low, that present temper and composition,

it could neither support itself not only of both Houses of

nor its own majesty, nor _those Parliament, but also of the court

who would_ (47 _a_) _appear itself.

faithful to it_.

* * * * * * * * * *

(Here follows a description of the House of Lords.)

In the House of Commons were many In the House of Commons

persons of wisdom and gravity, who there were many men of wisdom

(7) _being possessed_ of great and and judgment whose high

plentiful fortunes, though they position and great wealth disposed

were undevoted enough to the them, in spite of their indifference

court, (19) had all imaginable to the court, to feel

duty for the king, and affection a most loyal respect for the

to the government _established_(47 king, and a great affection for

_a_) _by law_ or ancient custom; the ancient constitutional

(43) and without doubt, the _major government of the country. Indeed,

part of that_ (54) _body_ it cannot be doubted that

consisted of men who had no mind the majority had no intention to

to break the peace of the kingdom, break the peace of the kingdom

or to make any considerable or to make any considerable

alteration in the government of alteration in Church or State.

Church or State: (43) and Consequently, from the very

therefore (18) _all_ inventions outset, it was necessary to resort

were set on _foot from the_ (15) to every conceivable device

_beginning_ to work upon (5) for the purpose of perverting

_them_, and (11) corrupt (5) this honest majority into rebellion.

_them_, (43) (45) by suggestions

"of the dangers (8) _which_ With some, the appeal was

threatened all that was precious addressed to their patriotism.

to the subject (19) in their They were warned "of the

liberty and their property, by dangers that threatened [all

_overthrowing_ (47 _a_) _or that was precious in] the liberty

overmastering_ the law, _and_ (47 and property of the subject,

_a_) _subjecting_ it to _an if the laws were to be made

arbitrary_ (47_a_) _power_, and by subservient to despotism, and

countenancing Popery to the if Popery was to be encouraged

subversion of the Protestant to the subversion of the Protestant

religion," and then, by religion."

infusing terrible apprehensions

into some, and so working upon The fears of others were appealed

their fears, (6 _b_) "of (11 _a_) to. "There was danger," so[21] it

being called in question for was said, "that they might be

somewhat they had done," by which called to account for something

(5) _they_ would stand in need of they had done, and they would then

(5) _their_ protection; and (43) stand in need of the help of those

(45) raising the hopes of others, who were now giving them this

"that, by _concurring_ (47 _a_) timely warning." In others, hopes

_with_ (5) _them_ (5) _they_ were excited, and offices,

should be sure to obtain offices honours, and preferments were held

and honours and any kind of out as the reward of adhesion.

preferment." Though there were too Too many were led away by one or

many corrupted and misled by these other of these temptations, and

several temptations, and (19) indeed some needed no other

others (40 _a_) who needed no temptation than their innate

other temptations than from the fierceness and barbarity and the

fierceness and barbarity _of malice they had contracted against

their_ (47 _a_) _own natures_, and the Church and the court. But the

the malice they had contracted leaders of the conspiracy were not

against the Church and against the many. The flock was large and

court; (43) yet the number was not submissive, but the shepherds were

great _of those in whom the very few.

government of the rest_ (47 _a_)

_was vested_, nor were there many

who had the absolute authority

(13) to lead, though there were a

multitude (13) that was disposed

to follow.

(44) (30) Mr. Pym was looked upon Of these, Mr. Pym was thought

as the man of greatest experience superior to all the rest in

in parliaments, _where he had_ parliamentary experience. To this

(50) _served very long_, and _was advantage he added habits of

always_ (50) _a man of business_, business acquired from his

(7) being an officer in the continuous service in the

Exchequer, (43) and of a good Exchequer. He had also a good

reputation generally, (30) though reputation generally; for, though

known to be inclined to the known to be inclined to the

Puritan party; yet not of those Puritan party, yet he was not so

furious resolutions against the fanatically set against the Church

Church as the other leading men as the other leaders. In this

were, and (44) wholly devoted to respect he resembled the Earl of

the Earl of Bedford, who had Bedford, to whom he was

nothing of that spirit. thoroughly devoted.

(Here follow descriptions of Hampden and Saint John.)

It was generally believed that These three persons, with the

these three persons, with the three peers mentioned before, were

other three lords mentioned united in the closest confidence,

before, were of the most intimate and formed the mainspring of the

and entire trust with each other, party. Such at least was the

and made _the engine which_ (47 general belief. But it was clear

_a_) _moved_ all the rest; (30) that they also admitted to their

yet it was visible, that (15) unreserved confidence two others,

_Nathaniel Fiennes, the second son (45) whom I will now

of the Lord Say, and Sir Harry describe,--Nathaniel Fiennes,

Vane, eldest son to the Secretary, second son of Lord Say, and Sir

and Treasurer of the House_, were Harry Vane, eldest son of the

received by them with full Secretary, and Treasurer of the

confidence and without reserve. House.

The former, being a man of good Nathaniel Fiennes, a man of good

parts of learning, and after some parts, was educated at New

years spent in New College in College, Oxford, where[22] his

Oxford, (43) of which his father family claimed and enjoyed some

had been formerly fellow, (43) privileges in virtue of their

that family pretending[23] and kindred to the founder, and

enjoying many privileges there, as where[22] his father had formerly

of kin to the founder, (43) (19) been a fellow. He afterwards spent

had spent his time abroad in some time in Geneva and in the

Geneva and amongst the cantons of cantons of Switzerland, where[22]

Switzerland, (30) where he he increased that natural

improved his disinclination to the antipathy to the Church which he

Church, with which milk he had had imbibed almost with his

been nursed. From his travels he mother's milk.[24] By a singular

returned through Scotland (52) coincidence, he came home through

(which[24] few travellers took in Scotland (not a very common route

their way home) at the time when for returning travellers) just

(5) _that_ rebellion was in bud: when the Scotch rebellion was in

(30) (43) (44) and was very little bud. For some time he was scarcely

known, except amongst (5) _that_ known beyond the narrow and

people, _which conversed_ (47 _a_) exclusive circle of his sect,

_wholly amongst themselves,_ until until at last he appeared in

he was now (15) _found in Parliament. Then, indeed, it was

Parliament_, (30) (43) (44) when quickly discovered that he was

it was quickly discovered that, likely to fulfil even the fond

as he was the darling of his hopes of his father and the high

father, so (5) _he_ was like to promise of many years.

make good whatsoever _he_ had

for many years promised.

(5) _The other_, Sir H. Vane, was Fiennes' coadjutor, Sir H. Vane,

a man of great natural parts[25] was a man of great natural

(45) and of very profound ability.[25] Quick in understanding

dissimulation, of a quick and impenetrable in dissembling,

conception, and of very ready, he could also speak with

sharp, and weighty expression. He promptness, point, and weight. His

had an (50) unusual aspect, which, singular appearance, though it

though it might naturally proceed might naturally proceed from his

from his father and mother, parents, who were not noted for

neither of which were beautiful their beauty, yet impressed men

persons, yet (19) made men think with the belief that he had in him

there was somewhat in him of something extraordinary, an

extraordinary: and (52) his whole impression that was confirmed by

life made good that imagination. the whole of his life. His

Within a very short time after he behaviour at Oxford, where he

returned from his studies in studied at Magdalen College, was

Magdalen College in Oxford, where, not characterized, in spite of the

(43) though he was under the care supervision of a very worthy

of a very worthy tutor, he lived tutor, by a severe morality. Soon

not with great exactness, (43) he after leaving Oxford he spent some

spent some little time in France, little time in France, and more in

and more in Geneva, and, (43) Geneva. After returning to

after his return into England, England, he conceived an intense

(38) contracted a full prejudice hatred not only against the

and bitterness against the Church, government of the Church, which

both against the form of the was disliked by many, but also

government and the Liturgy, (43) against the Liturgy, which was

which was generally in great held in great and general

reverence, (15 _a_) _even with reverence.

many of those who were not

friends_ to (5) _the other_. In Incurring or seeming to incur, by

his giddiness, which then much his giddiness, the displeasure of

displeased, or seemed to his father, who at that time,

displease, (30) (43) his father, beside strictly conforming to the

who still appeared highly Church himself, was very bitter

conformable, and exceedingly sharp against Nonconformists, the young

against those who were not, Vane left his home for New

(5) _he_ transported himself into England.

New England, (43) a colony within

few years before planted by a This colony had been planted a few

mixture of all religions,[26] which years before by men of all sorts of

disposed the professors to dislike religions, and their

the government of the Church; who differences[26] disposed them to

(30) (43) (44) were qualified by dislike the government of the

the king's charter to choose their Church. Now, it happened that their

own government and governors, privilege (accorded by the king's

under the obligation, "that every charter) of choosing their own

man should take the oaths of government and governors was

allegiance and supremacy;" (30) subject to this obligation, "that

(43) (5) _which_ all the first every man should take the oaths of

planters did, when they received allegiance and supremacy." These

their charter, before they oaths had been taken, not only by

transported themselves from hence, all the original planters, on

nor was there in many years after receiving their charter, before

the least scruple amongst them of leaving England, but also for many

complying with those obligations: years afterwards, without exciting

so far men were, _in the infancy_ the slightest scruple. Indeed,

(15) _of their schism_, from scruples against lawful oaths were

refusing to take lawful oaths. unknown[27] in the infancy of the

(45) He was no sooner landed English schism. But with the

there, but his parts made him arrival of Vane all this was

quickly taken notice of, (26) and changed. No sooner had he landed

very probably his quality, being than his ability, and perhaps to

the eldest son of a some extent his position, as eldest

Privy-councillor, might give him son of a Privy-councillor,

some advantage; _insomuch_ (51) recommended him to notice: and at

_that_, when the next season came the next election he was chosen

for the election of their Governor.

magistrates, he was chosen their

governor: (30) (45) (43) in which In his new post, his restless and

place he had so ill fortune (26) unquiet imagination found

(his working and unquiet fancy opportunity for creating and

raising and infusing a thousand diffusing a thousand conscientious

scruples of conscience, which (5) scruples that had not been brought

_they_ had not brought over with over, or ever even heard of, by the

them, nor heard of before) (19) colonists. His government proved a

that he unsatisfied with failure: and, mutually

them and they with him, dissatisfied, (45) governed and

he retransported himself governor parted. Vane returned

into England; (30) (43) (44) to England, but not till he had

having sowed such seed of accomplished his mischievous task,

dissension there, as grew up too not till he had sown the seeds of

prosperously, and miserably those miserable dissensions which

divided the poor colony into afterwards grew only too

several factions, and divisions prosperously, till they split the

and persecutions of each (15 _a_) wretched colony into distinct,

_other_, (30) (43) which still hostile, and mutually persecuting

continue _to the great_ (54) factions. His handiwork still

_prejudice of that plantation_: remains, and it is owing to (15)

insomuch as some of (5) _them_, _him_ that some of the colonists,

upon the ground of their first on the pretext of liberty of

expedition, liberty of conscience, conscience, the original cause of

have withdrawn themselves from (5) their emigration, have withdrawn

_their_ jurisdiction, and obtained themselves from the old colonial

other charters from the king, by jurisdiction and have obtained

which, (30) (43) in other forms of fresh charters from the king.

government, they have enlarged These men have established new

their plantations, within new forms of government, unduly

limits adjacent to (5) (15 _a_) enlarged their boundaries, and set

_the other_.their plantations, up rival settlements on the

within new limits adjacent to (5) borders of the original colony.

(15 _a_) _the other_.

FOOTNOTES:

[19] The original metaphor uses the crown as a prop, which seems a

confusion. Though the metaphor is so common as scarcely to be regarded

as a metaphor, it is better to avoid the appearance of confusion.

[20] We sometimes say, briefly but not perhaps idiomatically, "the

_then_ sovereign," "the _then_ temper," &c.

[21] The personality of the tempters and organizers of the conspiracy

is purposely kept in the background.

[22] The relative is retained in the first two cases, because it

conveys the _reason why_ Fiennes was educated at New College; and in

the third case, because the increased "antipathy" is regarded as the

natural _consequence_ of the residence in Calvinistic Geneva.

[23] Claiming.

[24] An insinuation of sedition seems intended.

[25] This sentence is a preliminary summary of what follows.

[26] If "which" is used here according to Rule (8), the meaning is,

(_a_) "and their differences;" if it is used for "that," the meaning

will be, (_b_) "all religions that were of a nature to dispose &c." I

believe (_a_) is the meaning; but I have found difference of opinion

on the question.

[27] The following words appear to be emphatic, bringing out the

difference between the _infancy_ and the development of schism.

BURNET.

The principal faults in Burnet's style are (_a_) the use of

heterogeneous sentences (see 43); (_b_) the want of suspense (see 30);

(_c_) the ambiguous use of pronouns (see 5); (_d_) the omission of

connecting adverbs and conjunctions, and an excessive use of _and_

(see 44); and (_e_) an abruptness in passing from one topic to another

(see 45). The correction of these faults necessarily lengthens the

altered version.

ORIGINAL VERSION. PARALLEL VERSION.

And his maintaining the honour of He also gratified the English

the nation in all foreign feeling of self-respect by

countries gratified the (1) maintaining the honour of the

_vanity which is very natural_ nation in all foreign countries.

(50) _to Englishmen_; (30) (43) of So jealous was he on this point

which he was _so_ (15) (17 _a_) that, though he was not a crowned

_careful_ that, though he was not head, he yet secured for his

a crowned head, yet his (40 _a_) ambassadors all the respect that

ambassadors had all the respects had been paid to the ambassadors

paid them which our (15) _kings'_ of our kings. The king, he said,

ambassadors ever had: he said (6 received respect simply as the

_b_) the dignity of the crown nation's representative head,

was upon the account of the and, since the nation was the

nation, _of which the king was_ same, the same respect should

(50) _only the representative be paid to the[28] nation's

head_; so, the nation being the ministers.

same, he would have the same

regards paid to (41) his

ministers.

Another[29] instance of (5) _this_ The following instance of jealousy

pleased _him_ much. Blake with the for the national honour pleased

fleet _happened_ (50) _to be_ at him much. When Blake was at Malaga

Malaga before he made war upon with his fleet, before his war

Spain: (44) _and_ some of his with Spain, it happened that some

seamen went ashore, _and_ met the of his sailors going ashore and

Host carried about; (44) _and_ not meeting the procession of the

only paid no respect to it, but Host, not only paid no respect to

laughed at those who did; (43) it, but even laughed at those who

(30) (51) so one of the priests did. Incited by one of the priests

put the people upon resenting this to resent the indignity, the

indignity; _and_ they fell upon people fell on the scoffers and

(5) _them and_ beat them severely. beat them severely. On their

When they returned to their ship return to the ship the seamen

(5) _they_ complained of (5) complained of this ill-usage,

_this_ usage; and upon that Blake whereupon Blake sent a messenger

sent a trumpet to the viceroy to to the viceroy to demand the

demand the priest who was the priest who was the instigator of

chief (1) _instrument_ in that the outrage. The viceroy answered

ill-usage. The viceroy answered that he could not touch him, as he

_he_ had no authority over the had no authority over the priests.

(15) _priests_, and so could not To this Blake replied, that he did

dispose of him. Blake upon that not intend to inquire to whom the

sent him word that _he_ would not authority belonged, but, if the

inquire who had the (1) power to priest were not sent within three

send the priest to him, but if hours, he would burn the town. The

_he_ were not sent within three townspeople being in no condition

hours, _he_ would burn their town; to resist, the priest was at once

(43) and (5) _they_, being in no sent. On his arrival, he defended

condition to resist _him_, sent himself, alleging the insolence of

the priest to _him_, (43) (44) who the sailors. But the English (50)

justified himself upon the Admiral replied that a complaint

petulant behaviour of the seamen. should have been forwarded to him,

and then he would have punished

(44) Blake answered that, if (5) them severely, for none of his

_he_ had sent a complaint to (5) sailors should be allowed to

_him of_(5) _it_, (5) _he_ would affront the established religion

have punished them severely, since of any place where they touched.

(5) _he_ would not suffer _his_ "But," he added, "I take it ill

men to affront the established that you should set on your

religion of any place at which (5) countrymen to do my work; for I

_he_ touched; but (5) (6) _he_ will have all the world know that

took it ill, that _he_ set on the an Englishman is only to be

Spaniards to do (5) _it_; for _he_ punished, by an Englishman." Then,

would have all the world to know satisfied with having had the (50)

that an Englishman was only to be offender at his mercy, Blake

punished by an Englishman; (43) entertained him civilly and sent

(44) and so he treated the priest him back.

civilly, and sent him back (30),

being satisfied that he had him at

his mercy.

Cromwell was much delighted with Cromwell was much delighted with

(5) _this_, (43) and read the Blake's conduct. Reading the

letters in council with great letters in council with great

satisfaction; _and_ said he (6) satisfaction, he said, "I hope I

hoped he should make the name of shall make the name of an

an Englishman as great as ever Englishman as much respected as

that of a Roman (15 _a_) _had ever was the name of Roman."

been_. (44) The States of Holland Among other countries the States

were in such dread of (5) him that of Holland were in such dread of

they took care to give him no sort Cromwell that they took care to

of umbrage; (43) (44) _and_ when give him no sort of umbrage.

at any time the king or his Accordingly, whenever the king or

brothers came to see their sister his brothers came to see the

the Princess Royal, (23) within a Princess Royal their sister, they

day or two after, (5) _they_ used were always warned in a day or two

to send a deputation to let _them_ by a deputation that Cromwell had

know that Cromwell had required of required of the States to give

the States that (5) _they_ should them no harbourage.

give _them_ no harbour.

* * * * * * * * * *

Cromwell's favourite alliance was The free kingdom of Sweden was

Sweden.[30] (44) Carolus Gustavus Cromwell's favourite ally; not

and he lived in great conjunction only under Charles Gustavus, with

of counsels. (44) Even Algernon whom he was on most confidential

Sydney, (10 _a_) _who_ was not terms, but also under Christina.

inclined to think or speak well of Both these sovereigns had just

kings, commended _him_ (5) to me; notions of public liberty; at

and said _he_ (5) had just least, Algernon Sydney, a man

notions of public liberty; (44) certainly not prejudiced in favour

(43) _and_ added, that Queen of royalty, assured me this was

Christina seemed to have _them_ true of Gustavus. He also held the

likewise. But (44) she was same opinion of Queen Christina;

much changed from that, when but, if so, she was much changed

I waited on her at Rome; for when I waited on her at Rome; for

she complained of us as a factious she then complained of the factious

nation, _that did not readily and unruly spirit of our nation.

comply with the commands_ (47 _a_)

_of our princes_. (44) All Italy All Italy, no less than

trembled at the name of Cromwell, Holland,[31] trembled at the name

and seemed under a (1) _panic_ as of Cromwell, and dreaded him till

long as he lived; (43) his fleet he died. Nor durst the Turks

scoured the Mediterranean; and the offend the great (50) Protector

Turks durst not offend him; but whose fleet scoured the

delivered up Hyde, who kept up the Mediterranean; and they even gave

character of an ambassador from up Hyde, who, for keeping up in

the king there (23) (43), and was Turkey the character of ambassador

brought over and executed for (5) from the king, was brought to

_it_. England and executed.

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