Act ii. sc. 1. Senator’s speech:—

... “Nor then silenc’d with

“Commend me to your master”—_and the cap_

_Plays in the right hand, thus_.”

Either, methinks, “plays” should be “play’d,” or “and” should be changed

to “while.” I can certainly understand it as a parenthesis, an

interadditive of scorn; but it does not sound to my ear as in

Shakespeare’s manner.

_Ib._ sc. 2. Timon’s speech (Theobald):—

“And that unaptness made _you_ minister,

Thus to excuse yourself.”

Read _your_;—at least I cannot otherwise understand the line. You made my

chance indisposition and occasional inaptness your minister—that is, the

ground on which you now excuse yourself. Or, perhaps, no correction is

necessary, if we construe “made you” as “did you make;” “and that

unaptness did you make help you thus to excuse yourself.” But the former

seems more in Shakespeare’s manner, and is less liable to be

misunderstood.

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