Maecenas, born of grandsire kings—

Quite right: “grandsire kings” is very good. It is not, of course,

literally correct, but one may, in poetry, fairly write the particular

term “grandsire” for the general “ancestor”—

O my defense and proud delight!

“Proud delight.” Now I think I shall correct that to “dear delight.” I

think the alliteration is well worth securing, and you may allow yourself

a familiarity in literature, Horatius, where all men are equal, which,

as I have no doubt you felt in writing, would be highly unbecoming in

society. “Proud delight” does you credit as a man, my good Horatius; as

a poet I permit—nay, I invite you to write “dear.”

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