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Clytemnestra Castor Polydeuces Helen

[P. 1, l. 1.]—The Watchman, like most characters in Greek tragedy,

comes from the Homeric tradition, though in Homer (Od. iv. 524) he is

merely a servant of Aigisthos.

[P. 2, l. 28, Women’s triumph cry.]—This cry of the women recurs

several times in the play: cf. p. 26, ll. 587 ff., p. 55, l. 1234. It

is conventionally represented by “ololû”; as the cry to Apollo, Paian

is “I-ê,” l. 146, and Cassandra’s sob is “ototoi” or “otototoi,” p.

47.

[Pp. 3 f., ll. 40 ff.]—With this silent scene of Clytemnestra’s,

compare the long silence of Cassandra below, and the silence of

Prometheus in that play until his torturers have left him. See the

criticism of Aeschylus in Aristophanes, _Frogs_, ll. 911-920, pp. 68,

69 in my translation.

[P. 5, l. 104, Sign of the War-Way.]—i.e. an ominous sign seen by the

army as it started on its journey. In Homer, Iliad, ll. 305-329, it is

a snake which eats the nine young of a mother bird and then the

mother, and is turned into stone afterwards.—All through this chorus

the language of the prophet Calchas is intentionally obscure and

riddling—the style of prophesy.

[P. 7, l. 146, But I-ê, i-ê.]—(Pronounce _Ee-ay_.) Calchas, catching

sight in his vision of the further consequences which Artemis will

exact if she fulfils the sign, calls on Apollo Paian, the Healer, to

check her.

[P. 7, l. 160, Zeus, whate’er He be.]—This conception of Zeus is

expressed also in Aeschylus’ _Suppliant Women_, and was probably

developed in the Prometheus Trilogy. See my _Rise of the Greek Epic_,

p. 291 (Ed. 2).

It is connected with the common Greek conception of the _Tritos

Sôtêr_— the Saviour Third. First, He who sins; next, He who

avenges; third, He who saves. In vegetation worship it is the Old

Year who has committed Hubris, the sin of pride, in summer; the

Winter who slays him; the New Year which shall save. In mythology

the three successive Rulers of Heaven are given by Hesiod as

Ouranos, Kronos, Zeus (cf. _Prometheus_, 965 ff.), but we cannot

tell if Aeschylus accepted the Hesiodic story. Cf. note on l. 246,

and Clytemnestra’s blasphemy at l. 1387, p. 63.

[P. 9, l. 192, Winds from Strymon.]—From the great river gorge of

Thrace, NNE; cf. below, l. 1418.

[P. 9, l. 201, Artemis.]—Her name was terrible, because of its

suggestion. She demanded the sacrifice of Agamemnon’s daughter,

Iphigenîa. (See Euripides’ two plays, _Iphigenia in Tauris_ and

_Iphigenia in Aulis_.) In other poets Agamemnon has generally

committed some definite sin against Artemis, but in Aeschylus the

death of Iphigenîa seems to be merely one of the results of his

acceptance of the Sign.

[P. 10, l. 215, ’Tis a Rite of old.]—Literally “it is Themis.” Human

sacrifice had had a place in the primitive religion of Greece; hence

Agamemnon could not reject the demand of the soldiers as an obvious

crime. See _Rise of Greek Epic_, pp. 150-157.

[P. 11, l. 246, The Third Cup.]—Regularly poured to Zeus Sôtêr, the

Saviour, and accompanied by a paean or cry of joy.

[P. 11, l. 256, This Heart of Argos, this frail Tower:]—i.e.

themselves.

[P. 11, l. 264, Glad-voiced.]—Clytemnestra is in extreme suspense, as

the return of Agamemnon will mean either her destruction or her

deliverance. At such a moment there must be no ill-omened word, so she

challenges fate.

[P. 12, l. 276, A word within that hovereth without wings.]—i.e. a

presentiment. “Winged words” are words spoken, which fly from speaker

to hearer. A ‘wingless’ word is unspoken. The phrase occurs in Homer.

[Pp. 13 ff., ll. 281 ff.]—Beacon Speech. There is no need to inquire

curiously into the practical possibility of this chain of beacons.

Greek tragedies do not care to be exact about this kind of detail.

There may well have been a tradition that Agamemnon, like the Great

King of Persia, used a chain of beacons across the Aegean.—Note how

vividly Clytemnestra’s imagination is working in her excitement. She

seems to see before her every leaping light in the chain, just as in

the next speech she imagines the scene in Troy almost with the

intensity of a vision.

[P. 14, l. 314, Victory in the first as in the last.]—All are Victory

beacons; the spirit of Victory infects them all equally. Cf. l. 854

below, where Agamemnon prays that the Victory which is now with him,

or in him, may abide.

[P. 15, l. 348, A woman’s word.]—Her hatred and fear of Agamemnon,

making her feel vividly the horrors of the sack and the peril

overhanging the conquerors, have carried her dangerously far. She

checks herself and apologizes for her womanlike anxiety. Cf. l. 1661,

p. 77.

[P. 18, ll. 409 ff., Seers they saw visions.]—A difficult and

uncertain passage. I think the seers attached to the royal household

(cf. _Libation-Bearers,_ l. 37, where they are summoned to read a

dream) were rather like what we call clairvoyants. Being consulted,

they look into some pool of liquid or the like; there they see

gradually emerging the palace, the injured King, the deserted room,

and at last a wraith of Helen herself, haunting the place.

[P. 21, l. 487.]—This break in the action, covering a space of several

days, was first pointed out by Dr. Walter Headlam. Incidentally it

removes the gravest of the difficulties raised by Dr. Verrall in his

famous essay upon the plot of the _Agamemnon_.

[P. 21, l. 495, Dry dust, own brother to the mire of war.]—i.e. “I can

see by the state of his clothes, caked with dry dust which was once

the mire of battle, that he comes straight from the war and can speak

with knowledge.” The Herald is probably (though perhaps not quite

consistently) conceived as having rushed post-haste with his news.

[Pp. 22 ff., HERALD.]—The Herald bursts in overcome with excitement

and delight, full of love for his home and everything he sees. A

marked contrast to Agamemnon, ll. 810 ff. Note that his first speech

confirms all the worst fears suggested by Clytemnestra. Agamemnon has

committed all the sins she prayed against, and more. The terrible

lines 527 ff., “Till her Gods’ Houses, etc.,” are very like a passage

in the _Persae_, 811 ff., where exactly the same acts by the Persian

invaders of Greece make their future punishment inevitable.

[P. 22, l. 509, Pythian Lord.]—Apollo is often a sinister figure in

tragedy. Cf. Sophocles _Oedipus_ , ll. 915 ff., pp. 52 ff., and the

similar scene, _Electra_, 655 ff. Here it is a shock to the Herald to

come suddenly on the god who was the chief enemy of the Greeks at

Troy. One feels Apollo an evil presence also in the Cassandra scene,

11. 1071 ff., pp. 47 ff.

[P. 23, l. 530, Happy among men.]—The crown of his triumph! Early

Greek thought was always asking the question, What is human happiness?

To the Herald Agamemnon has achieved happiness if any one ever did.

Cf. the well-known story of Croesus asking Solon who was the happiest

man in the world (Herodotus, I. 30-33).

[P. 24, ll. 551 ff., Herald’s second speech.]—The connexion of thought

is: “After all, why should either of us wish to die? All has ended

well.” This vivid description of the actualities of war can be better

appreciated now than it could in 1913.

[P. 25, l. 577, These spoils.]—Spoils purporting to come from the

Trojan War were extant in Greek temples in Aeschylus’ day and later.

[P. 26, l. 595, Our women’s joy-cry.]—There seems to have been in

Argos an old popular festival, celebrating with joy or mockery the

supposed death of a man and a woman. Homer (Od. iii. 309 f.) derives

it from a rejoicing by Orestes over Aigisthos and Clytemnestra; cf.

below, ll. 1316 ff., p. 59; Aeschylus here and Sophocles in the

_Electra_, from a celebration by Clytemnestra of the deaths of

Agamemnon and Cassandra. Probably it was really some ordinary New Year

and Old Year celebration to which the poets give a tragic touch. It

seems to have had a woman’s “Ololugmos” in it, perhaps uttered by men.

See Kaibel’s note, Soph. _Electra_ 277-281.

[P. 26, l. 612, Bronze be dyed like wool.]—Impossible in the literal

sense, but there is after all a way of dying a sword red!

[P. 27, l. 617, Menelaus.]—This digression about Menelaus is due, as

similar digressions generally are when they occur in Greek plays, to

the poet feeling bound to follow the tradition. Homer begins his

longest account of the slaying of Agamemnon by asking “Where was

Menelaus?” (Od. iii. 249). Agamemnon could be safely attacked because

he was alone. Menelaus was away, wrecked or wind-bound.

[P. 28, l. 642, Two-fold scourge.]—Ares works his will when spear

crosses spear, when man meets man. Hence “two-fold.”

[P. 29, CHORUS. The name HELENA.]—There was a controversy in

Aeschylus’ day whether language, including names, was a matter of

Convention or of Nature. Was it mere accident, and could you change

the name of anything at will? Or was language a thing rooted in nature

and fixed by God from of old? Aeschylus adopts the latter view: Why

was this being called Helena? If one had understood God’s purpose one

would have seen it was because she really _was_

“Helenâs”—_Ship-destroyer_. (The Herald’s story of the shipwreck has

suggested this particular idea.) Similarly, if a hero was called Aias,

and came to great sorrow, one could see that he was so called from

‘Aiai,’ “Alas!”—The antistrophe seems to find a meaning in the name

Paris or Alexandras, where the etymology is not so clear.

[Pp. 33 ff.]—Entrance of Agamemnon. The metre of the Chorus indicates

marching; so that apparently the procession takes some time to move

across the orchestra and get into position. Cassandra would be

dressed, as a prophetess, in a robe of white reaching to the feet,

covered by an _agrênon_, or net of wool with large meshes; she would

have a staff and certain fillets or crowns. The Leader welcomes the

King: he explains that, though he was against the war ten years ago,

and has not changed his opinion, he is a faithful servant of the King

… and that not all are equally so. He gave a similar hint to the

Herald above, ll. 546-550, p. 24.

[P. 35, Agamemnon.]—A hard, cold speech, full of pride in the earlier

part, and turning to ominous threats at the end. Those who have dared

to be false shall be broken.—At the end comes a note of fear, like the

fear in Shakespeare’s Julius Caesar. He is so full of triumph and

success; he must be very careful not to provoke a fall.—Victory, Nike,

was to the Greeks a very vivid and infectious thing. It clung to you

or it deserted you. And one who was really charged with Victory, like

Agamemnon, was very valuable to his friends and people. Hence they

made statues of Victory wingless—so that she should not fly away. See

_Four Stages of Greek Religion_, p. 138 note.

[P. 36, Clytemnestra.]—A wonderful speech. It seems to me that

Aeschylus’ imagination realized all the confused passions in

Clytemnestra’s mind, but that his art was not yet sufficiently

developed to make them all clear and explicit. She is in suspense;

does Agamemnon know her guilt or not? At least, if she is to die, she

wants to say something to justify or excuse herself in the eyes of the

world. A touch of hysteria creeps in; why could he not have been

killed in all these years? Why must he rise, like some monster from

the grave, unkillable? Gradually she recovers her calm, explains

clearly the suspicious point of Orestes’ absence, and heaps up her

words and gestures of welcome to an almost oriental fullness (which

Agamemnon rebukes, ll. 918 ff., p. 39). Again, at the end, when she

finds that for the time she is safe, her real feelings almost break

out.

[P. 38.]—What is the motive of the Crimson Tapestries? I think the

tangling robe must have been in the tradition, as the murder in the

bath certainly was. One motive, of course, is obvious: Clytemnestra is

tempting Agamemnon to sin or “go too far.” He tries to resist, but the

splendour of an oriental homecoming seduces him and he yields. But is

that enough to account for such a curious trait in the story, and one

so strongly emphasized? We are told afterwards that Clytemnestra threw

over her victim an “endless web,” long and rich (p. 63), to prevent

his seeing or using his arms. And I cannot help suspecting that this

endless web was the same as the crimson pall.

If one tries to conjecture the origin of this curious story, it is

perhaps a clue to realize that the word _droitê_ means both a bath

and a sarcophagus, or rather that the thing called droitê, a narrow

stone or marble vessel about seven feet long, was in pre-classical

and post-classical times used as a sarcophagus, but in classical

times chiefly or solely as a bath. If among the prehistoric graves

at Mycenae some later peasants discovered a royal mummy or skeleton

in a sarcophagus, wrapped in a robe of royal crimson, and showing

signs of violent death—such as Schliemann believed that he

discovered—would they not say: “We found the body of a King

murdered in a bath, and wrapped round and round in a great robe?”

[P. 39 f.]—Agamemnon is going through the process of temptation. He

protests rather too often and yields.

[P. 39, l. 931, Tell me but this.]—This little dialogue is very

characteristic of Aeschylus. Euripides would have done it at three

times the length and made all the points clear. In Aeschylus the

subtlety is there, but it is not easy to follow.

[P. 40, l. 945, These bound slaves.]—i.e. his shoes. The metaphor

shows the trend of his unconscious mind.

[P. 41, l. 950, This princess.]—This is the first time that the

attention of the audience is drawn to Cassandra. She too is one of

Aeschylus’ silent figures. I imagine her pale, staring in front of

her, almost as if in a trance, until terror seizes her at

Clytemnestra’s greeting in l. 1035, p. 45.

[P. 41, l. 964, The cry.]—i.e. the cry of the possessed prophetess

which rang from the inner sanctuary at Delphi and was interpreted by

the priests.—The last two lines of the speech are plain in their

meaning but hard to translate. Literally: “when the full, or

fulfilled, man walketh his home,—O Zeus the Fulfiller, fulfil my

prayers.”

[P. 42, l. 976.]—The victim has been drawn into the house; the Chorus

sing a low boding song: every audience at a Greek tragedy would expect

next to hear a death cry from within, or to see a horrified messenger

rush out. Instead of which the door opens and there is Clytemnestra:

what does she want? “Come thou also!” One victim is not enough.—In the

next scene we must understand the cause of Clytemnestra’s impatience.

If she stays too long outside, some one will warn Agamemnon; if she

leaves Cassandra, she with her second sight will warn the Chorus. If

Cassandra could only be got inside all would be safe!

[P. 44, l. 1022, “One there was of old.”]—Asklêpios, the physician,

restored Hippolytus to life, and Zeus blasted him for so oversetting

the laws of nature.

[P. 45, l. 1040, Alcmêna’s son.]—Heracles was made a slave to Omphalê,

Queen of Lydia. His grumbles at his insufficient food were a theme of

comedy.

[P. 45, l. 1049, Belike thou canst not yet.]—Cf. below, ll. 1066 ff.

The Elder speaks in sympathy. “Very likely you cannot yet bring

yourself to submit.”

[P. 46, l. 1061, Thou show her.]—It seems odd to think that this

passage has for centuries been translated as if it was all addressed

to Cassandra: “But if you do not understand what I say, please

indicate the same with your barbarous hand!”—What makes Cassandra at

last speak? I think that the Elder probably touches her, and the touch

as it were breaks the spell.

[P. 47, l. 1072, Cassandra.]—“Otototoi” really takes the place of a

stage direction: she utters a long low sob.—The exclamation which I

have translated “Dreams!” seems to occur when people see ghosts or

visions. _Alcestis_, 261; _Prometheus_, 567. Cf. _Phoenissae_

1296.—“Mine enemy!” The name “Apollon” suggested “_apollyon,”_

Destroying … the form which is actually used in the Book of Revelation

(Rev. ix. 11).

Observe how, during the lyric scene, Cassandra’s vision grows

steadily more definite: First vague horror of the House: then the

sobbing of children, slain long ago: then, a new deed of blood

coming; a woman in it: a wife: then, with a great effort, an

attempt to describe the actual slaying in the bath. Lastly, the

sight of herself among the slain. (This last point is greatly

developed by Euripides, _Trojan Women_, ll. 445 ff., pp. 33 f.).

The story of the Children of Thyestes is given below, ll. 1590 ff.,

p. 73. Procnê (or Philomêla) was an Attic princess who, in fury

against her Thracian husband, Tereus, killed their child Itys, or

Itylus, and was changed into a nightingale, to weep for him for

ever.

[P. 52, ll. 1178 ff.]—Dialogue. During the lyrics Cassandra has been

“possessed” or “entranced”: the turn to dialogue marks a conscious

attempt to control herself and state plainly her message of warning.

In order to prove her power, she first tells the Elders of deeds done

in the past which are known to them but cannot have been known to her.

When once they are convinced of her true seercraft, she will be able

to warn them of what is coming!—The short ‘stichom[^y]thia’[**TR: This

is a y with a circumflex, not a superscript.] (line for line

dialogue), dealing in awed whispers with things which can hardly be

spoken, leaves the story of Cassandra still a mystery. Then her

self-control breaks and the power of the God sweeps irresistibly upon

her; cf. below, ll. 1256 ff.; where it comes at her like a visible

shape of fire, a thing not uncommon with modern clairvoyants.

[P. 56, l. 1252, Thou art indeed fallen far astray]—Because they had

said “what _man_”

[P. 56, l. 1265, These wreathed bands, this staff of prophesy.]—Cf.

_Trojan Women_, ll. 451 ff., p. 34.

[P. 60, ll. 1343 ff., The death cry; the hesitation of the

Elders.]—This scene is often condemned or even ridiculed; I think,

through misunderstanding. We knew the Old Men were helpless, like

“dreams wandering in the day.” It is essential to the story that when

the crisis comes they shall be found wanting. But they are neither

foolish nor cowardly; each utterance in itself is natural and

characteristic, but counsels are divided. One would like to know

whether Aeschylus made them speak together confusedly, as would

certainly be done on the modern stage, or whether the stately

conventions of Greek tragedy preferred that each speaker should finish

his say. In any case, what happens is that after a moment or two of

confused counsel the Elders determine to break into the Palace, but as

they are mounting the steps the great doors are flung open and

Clytemnestra confronts them, standing over the dead bodies of

Agamemnon and Cassandra.

The illusion intended is that the Elders have entered the Palace

and discovered Clytemnestra. But, as the mechanical arrangements of

the Greek stage were not equal to this sudden change of scene, and

since also it would, even with perfect machinery, have a tiresome

interrupting effect, a slight confusion or inconsistency is

allowed. We are supposed to be inside the house; but as a matter of

fact the supposition is soon forgotten, and the play goes on

without any attention to the particular place of the action. On

Clytemnestra’s speech see Introduction, p. xiii.

[P. 63, l. 1387, A prayer well sped to Zeus of Hell]—As the third gift

or libation was ritually given to Zeus the Saviour, Clytemnestra

blasphemously suggests that her third and unnecessary blow was an

acceptable gift to a sort of anti-Zeus, a Saviour of Death.

[P. 65, l. 1436, Aigisthos.]—At last the name is mentioned which has

been in the mind of every one!—Chrysêïs was a prisoner of war,

daughter of Chrysês, priest of Apollo. Agamemnon was made to surrender

her to her father, and from this arose his quarrel with Achilles,

which is the subject of the Iliad.

[Pp. 67-72, ll. 1468-1573, Daemon.]—The Genius or guardian spirit of

the house has in this House become a Wrath, an ‘Alastor’ or ‘Driver

Astray.’ See Introduction, pp. x ff.

[P. 68, l. 1513, MOURNERS.]—This attribution of the different speeches

or songs to different speakers is, of course, conjectural. Ancient

dramas come down to us with no stage directions and very imperfect

indications of the speakers.

[P. 72, l. 1579, AIGISTHOS.]—The entry of Aigisthos enlivens the scene

again after the brooding and bewildered end of the dialogue between

Clytemnestra and the Elders. At the same time, it seems, no doubt by

deliberate intention, to reduce it to commonplace. Aigisthos’

self-defence is largely justified, but he is no hero.

[P. 73, l. 1602, Pleisthenês.]—Apparently one of the ancestors of

Atreus, but it is not clear where he comes in the genealogy. He may be

identical with Pelops.

[P. 74, l. 1617, Oarsman of the nether row.]—On an ancient galley,

bireme or trireme, the rowers of the lower bank of oars ranked as

inferior to those who used the long oars from the deck.

[P. 76, l. 1654.]—Clytemnestra, see Introduction, p. xiii. She longs

for peace, yet after all “Had Zimri peace who slew his master?” The

end of the play leaves us waiting for the return of Orestes. In the

first scene of the _Libation-Bearers,_ he is discovered standing by

night at his father’s grave.

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