The description of her is thus continued--

"On her face, then and for ever, was the seriousness within.

Her sweetest smiles (and sweeter did a lover never win)

_Ere half-done grew so absent, that they made her fair cheek thin._

"On her face, then and for ever, thoughts unworded used to live;

So that when she whisper'd to me, 'Better joy earth cannot give'--

Her lips, though shut, continued, 'But earth's joy is fugitive.'

"For there a _nameless something_, though suppress'd, still spread

around;

The same was on her eyelids, if she look'd towards the ground;

When she spoke, you _knew directly_ that the same was in the sound;"

By and by, a young gentleman, of the name of Winton, comes to visit

Lilian and her father:--

"A formerly-loved companion--he was fresh from sprightly France,

And with many volumes laden, essay, poem, and romance."

He, and his pursuits after leaving school, are thus elegantly

described:--

"When free, all healthy study was put by, that he might rush

To his favourite books, French chiefly, that his blood might boil

and gush

Over scenes which set his visage glowing crimson--_not a blush_."

This gentleman and Lilian's lover strike up a strong friendship for one

another, and the latter makes Winton his confidant. As yet no suspicions

arise to break the blind sleep of the infatuated dreamer.

"Delights were still remaining--hate--shame--rage--_I can't tell what_,

Comes to me at their memory; none that, _more or less_, was not

The soul's _unconscious incest_, on creations self-begot."

He still continues to doat on Lilian.

"Oh friend, if you had seen her! heard her speaking, felt her grace,

When serious looks seem'd filling with the smiles which, in a space,

Broke, sweet as Sabbath sunshine, and lit up her _shady_ face.

"Try to conceive her image--does it make your brain reel round?

But all of this is over. Well, friend--various signs (I found

Too late on rumination) then and thenceforth did abound,

"Wherefrom--but that all lovers look too closely to see clear--

I might have gather'd matter fit for just and jealous fear.

From her face, _the nameless something_ now began to disappear.

"What I felt for her I often told her boldly to her face;

_Blushes used to blush at blushes flushing on in glowing chace!_

But latterly she listen'd, bending full of bashful grace.

"It was to hide those blushes, I thought then, _but I suspect

It was to hide their absence_."

How great this writer is on the subject of blushing we shall have

another opportunity of showing.--(See Lady Mabel's shoulders, in the

poem of Sir Hubert.) Meanwhile, the fair deceiver is now undergoing a

course of French novels, under the tuition of young Winton. The

consequence was,

"_Her voice grew louder_"--no great harm in that--

"Her voice grew louder--losing the much meaning it once bore,

_The passion in her carriage_, though it every day grew more,

Was now the same to all men--and that was not so before."

We suppose that there was now "heavy passion in her walk," whoever the

man might be that approached her.

"And grosser signs, _far grosser_ I remember now; but these

I miss'd of course, and counted _with those light anomalies,

Too frequent to disturb us into searching for their keys_."

These misgivings, which might have ripened into suspicions, are suddenly

swept away by a stroke of duplicity on the part of his mistress,

inconceivable in any woman except one inclined naturally, and without

any prompting, to practise the profoundest artifices of vice.

"Even the dreadful glimpses now began to fade away,

And disappear'd completely, when my Lilian asked one day,

If I knew what reason Winton had to make so long a stay

"In England--'For,' said Lilian, with untroubled countenance,

'Winton of course has told you of the love he left in France.'

I seized her hand, and kiss'd it--joy had left no utterance."

Winton, according to the account of the false Lilian, having _a love_ in

France, could not, of course be supposed to be paying court to her. Thus

the lover is thrown off the scent, and his doubts are entirely laid

asleep. He is again in the seventh heavens of assured love, and

continues thus:--

"Another calm so perfect I should think is only shed

On good men dying gently, who recall a life well led,

Till they cannot tell, _for sweetness_, if they be alive or dead.

"_I'll stop here._ You already have, I think, divined the rest.

There's a prophetic moisture in your eyes:--yet, tears being blest

And delicate nutrition, apt to cease, too much suppress'd,

"_I'll go on_; but less for your sake than my own:--my skin is hot,

And there's an arid pricking in my veins; their currents clot:

Tears sometimes soothe such fever, where the letting of blood will

not."

At length his eyes are opened, and the whole truth flashes upon him, on

overhearing an acquaintance ask Winton whether his suit with Lilian has

been successful. Upon this he writes out his opinion of the lady's

behaviour, presents it to her, and watches her while she peruses it,

occupying himself at intervals as follows:--

"I turn'd a volume, waiting her full leisure to reply,

The book was one which Winton had ask'd me to read, and I

Had stopp'd halfway for horror, _lest my soul should putrify_."

When Lilian has finished the perusal of the document, she endeavours at

first to stand on the defensive,--

"She stood at bay, _depending on that crutch made like a stilt_,

The impudent vulgarity wherewith women outstare guilt."

But she finally succumbs under the influence of the following refined

vituperation:--

"Don't speak! You would not have me unacquainted with what led

To this result? No! listen, and let _me_ relate what bred

Thy tears and cheapen'd chasteness--(_we may talk now as if wed._)

"This book here, that lay open when I came in unaware,

Is not the first--I thought so!--but the last of many a stair

Of easy fall. Such only could have led you to _his lair_.

"These drugs, at first, had scarcely strength to move your virgin

blood;

They slowly rose in action, till they wrought it to a flood,

Fit for their giver's purpose, who--_who turn'd it into mud!_"

The lover then leaves Lilian to her own meditations, and commences to

rant and rave against her seducer in good set terms, of which the

following is a specimen:--

"Pardon, Heaven! that I doubted whether there was any hell.

Oh! but now I do believe it! Firmly, firmly! I foretell

Of one that shall rank high there: he's a scoffer, and must dwell

"Where worms are--ever gnawing scoffers' hearts into belief;

Where weepings, gnashings, wailings, thirstings, groanings, ghastly

grief,

For ever and for ever pay the price of pleasures brief;

"Where Gallios, who while living knew but cared for none of these,

Now amazed with shame, would gladly, might it God (_Fate there_)

appease,

Watch and pray a million cycles for a single moment's ease."

After having thus breathed his passion, in a diatribe which beats in

abomination any slang that was ever ranted out of a tub by a mountebank

saint, he harps back upon the prodigious attractiveness of his mistress,

in the following pathetic, though not very consistent terms--

"Ah but had you known my Lilian! (a sweet name?) Indeed, indeed,

I doted on my Lilian. None can praise her half her meed.

Perfect in soul; too gentle--others' need she made her need;

"_Quite passionless_, but ever bounteous-minded even to waste;

Much tenderness in talking; very urgent, yet no haste;

_And chastity--to laud it would have seem'd almost unchaste._

"Graced highly, too, with knowledge; versed in tongues; a queen of

dance;

An artist at her playing; a most touching utterance

In song; her lips' mild music could make sweet the _clack_ of France."

Amid such outpourings of feculent folly, it is scarcely worth our while

to take notice of the minor offences against good taste that abound in

these poems; yet we may remark, that the writer who here condescends to

use such a word as _clack_, and who, on other occasions, does not

scruple to talk of _a repeat_ and _a repay_, instead of "a repetition,"

and "a repayment," does not consider the word _watch-dog_ sufficiently

elevated for his compositions. Whenever he alludes to this animal, he

calls him a _guard-hound_--a word which we do not remember ever to have

encountered either in conversation or in books, but which, for ought we

know, may be drawn from those "pure wells of English undefiled," which

irrigate with their fair waters the provincial districts of the modern

Babylon.

The author of "Lillian" evidently piques himself on the fidelity with

which he has adhered to nature in his treatment of that story. But there

are two ways in which nature may be adhered to in verse; and it is only

one of these ways which can be considered poetical. The writer may

adhere to the truth of _human_ nature, while he elevates the emotions of

the heart in strains which find a cordial echo in the sentiments of all

mankind. Or, if his whole being is sicklied over with silliness and

affectation, he may adhere to the truth of _his own_ nature, and while

writing perfectly naturally _for him_, he may unfold his delineations of

character in such a manner as shall strip every passion of its dignity,

and every emotion of its grace. Now, it is only by reason of their

adherence to the latter species of nature, that "Lillian" and the other

compositions of Mr Patmore can be considered natural, and, viewed under

this aspect, they certainly are natural exceedingly.

The story of "Sir Hubert" finishes the volume. This tale is versified

from Boccacio's story of the Falcon, with which many of our readers may

be acquainted; if not, they will find it in the fifth day, novel ninth,

of the _Decameron_. We can only afford space for a short outline of its

incidents, and shall substitute Mr Patmore's names for those of the

personages who figure in Boccacio's story. This will save both ourselves

and readers the trouble of threading the _minutiae_ of Mr Patmore's

senseless and long-winded version of the tale. A few specimens will

suffice to exhibit the manner in which he deals with it. Sir Hubert is a

rich gentleman, who squanders almost all his substance in giving grand

entertainments to the Lady Mabel, whom he makes love to without meeting

with any return. Finding his suit unsuccessful, and his money being all

spent, he retires to a small and distant farm, having nothing left but

one poor hawk, upon which he depends for his means of subsistence.

Meanwhile, the Lady Mabel marries, and has a son. After a time, (her

husband being dead,) she comes to reside in a castle in the

neighbourhood of Sir Hubert's cottage, where her son, who has often

remarked the prowess and beauty of the above-mentioned hawk, falls sick,

assuring his mother that nothing can save his life except the possession

of the bird. The lady very reluctantly pays a visit to Sir Hubert, and

tells him that she has a request to proffer, which she will make known

to him after dinner. Though Sir Hubert is delighted to see her, the

mention of dinner throws him into a state of great perplexity, as he has

nothing in the house which they can make a meal of. Going out of doors,

"he espies his hawk upon the perch, which he seizes, and finding it very

fat, judges it might make a dish not unworthy of such a lady. Without

further thought, then, he pulls his head off, and gives it to a girl to

dress and roast carefully."

This being done, the lady and her admirer sit down to dinner, and make

an excellent repast. When their meal is over, then comes the

_eclaircissement_. The lady proffers her petition for the hawk; and

discovers from Sir Hubert's answer, and to her own consternation, that

she has eaten the very article she came in quest of, and which she had

expected to carry home alive; as the only means of saving the life of

her son. The young gentleman dies on finding that he cannot obtain what

he wants; and Mabel marries Sir Hubert, and settles upon him all her

possessions, as a reward for his magnanimity in sacrificing that which

(next to herself) he held dearest in the whole world, rather than that

she should go without a dinner.

Such is a short sketch of Boccacio's tale of the Falcon--a good enough

story in its way; and more creditable than many that were circulated

among the loose fish, male and female, that play their parts in the

_Decameron_. This novel has been versified by Mr Patmore, and versified

(as our specimens shall show) as he alone could have versified it. The

following is his description of the much-longed-for, but

sorely-ill-treated, hawk of Sir Hubert.

"It served him, too, of evenings:

On a sudden he would rise,

From book or simple music,

And awake his hawk's large eyes,

(_Almost as large as Mabel's_)

Teasing out its dumb replies,

"In sulky sidelong glances,

And reluctantly flapp'd wings,

Or looks of slow communion,

To the lightsome questionings

That broke the drowsy sameness,

And the sense, like fear, which springs

"At night, when we are conscious

Of our distance from the strife

Of cities; and the memory

Of the spirit of all things rife,

_Endues the chairs and tables

With a disagreeable life_."

A Scotch lyrist, who, we are told, sings his own songs to perfection,

has also recorded the very singular fact of various articles of

household furniture (not exactly tables) being occasionally endued "with

a disagreeable life." One of his best ballads, in which he describes the

bickerings which, even in the best-regulated families, will at times

take place between man and wife, and in which various domestic missiles

come into play, contains the following very excellent line--

"_The stools pass the best o' their time i' the air_"--

than which no sort of life appertaining to a stool can be more

disagreeable, we should imagine--to the head which it is about to come

in contact with. We doubt whether Mr Patmore's, or rather Sir Hubert's,

chairs and tables ever acquired such a vigorous and unpleasant vitality

as that. What may have happened to the "stools" after Mabel was married

to Sir Hubert, we cannot take it upon us to say. At any rate, we prefer

the Scotch poet's description, as somewhat the more pithy, and graphic,

and intelligible of the two. The coincidence, however, is remarkable.

After Sir Hubert has retired to his farm, the state of his feelings is

described in the following stanzas. We suspect that the metaphysical

acumen of Boccacio himself would have been a good deal puzzled to

unravel the meaning of some of them.

"He gather'd consolation,

As before, where best he might:

But though there was the difference

That he now could claim a right

To grieve as much as pleased him,

It was six years, since his sight

"Had fed on Mabel's features;

So that Hubert scarcely knew

What traits to give the vision

Which should fill his eyes with dew:--

For she must needs, by that time,

Have become another, who,

"In girlhood's triple glory,

(For a higher third outflows

Whenever Promise marries

With Completion,) troubled those

That saw, with trouble sweeter

Than the sweetest of repose.

"It, therefore, was the business

Of his thoughts to try to trace

The probable fulfilment

Of her former soul and face,--

From buds deducing blossoms.

For, although an easy space

"Led from the farm of Hubert

To where Mabel's castle stood,

Closed in, a league on all sides.

With wall'd parks and wealthy wood,

No chance glimpse could be look'd for,

So recluse her widowhood.

"Hence seasons past, and Hubert

Earn'd his bread, but leisure spent

In loved dissatisfaction,

Which he made his element

Of choice, as much as, till then,

He had sought it in content."

If the verses above would have baffled the sagacity of the father of

Italian literature, what would he have thought of the following, in

which the interview between Sir Hubert and Mabel is described, when the

lady comes to negotiate with him about the hawk? She accosts him, "Sir

Hubert!" and then there is presented to our imaginations such a picture

of female loveliness, as (thank Heaven!) can only be done justice to in

the language which is employed for the occasion.

"'Sir Hubert!'--and, that instant,

_Mabel saw the fresh light flush

Out of her rosy shoulders_,

And perceived her sweet blood _hush

About her_, till, all over,

_There shone forth a sumptuous blush_--

"'Sir Hubert, I have sought you,

Unattended, to request

A boon--the first I ever

Have entreated.' Then she press'd

_Her small hand's weight of whiteness

To her richly-sloping breast_."

At first we thought that it should have been Hubert, and not Mabel, who

saw "the fresh light flush out of her rosy shoulders"--particularly if

the blush extended, as no doubt it did, to the lady's back: but on

further consideration we saw that we were wrong; for Sir Hubert could

not have perceived "her sweet blood _hush_ about her"--this _hushing_ of

the blood about one being, as all great blushers know, a fact

discernible only by the person more immediately concerned in the blush.

The propriety, therefore, of making Mabel perceive the blush, rather

than Sir Hubert, is undeniable. The writer must either have left out the

_hushing_ altogether, which would have been a great blemish in the

picture, or he must have written as he has done. How profoundly versed

in the physiology of blushing he must be! We are doubtful, however,

whether the costume of the picture is altogether appropriate; for we

question very much whether the Italian ladies of the thirteenth, or any

other century, were in the habit of paying forenoon visits in low-necked

gowns; and whether Mabel could have walked all the way from her castle

to Sir Hubert's cottage, in an attire which revealed so many of her

charms, without attracting the general attention of the neighbourhood.

She had no time, be it observed, to divest herself of shawl or mantilla

in order to show how _sumptuously_ she could blush--for her salutation

is made to Sir Hubert, and its roseate consequences ensue the very first

moment she sees him. But let that pass. We should have been very sorry

if such a "splendiferous" phenomenon had been obscured by envious boa or

pelisse, or lost to the proprieties of costume. The Lady then

"Said that she was wearied

With her walk--would stay to dine,

And name her wishes after."

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