HARF. finds this rough Homeric trait too strong for him. MED. has--

"With her black horn she buts him.

What is that wrapt round his head?"

But, though there is some colour for this translation in the old

Scholiast, I think the reader will scarcely judge very favourably of it,

after considering what PEILE and CON. have judiciously said on the

point. As for authority, {353} all the translators, except MED. and

HUMB., from POT. downwards, English and German, are with me. It is

scarcely necessary to remark against Harford's squeamishness, that the

bull in ancient symbolical language (see poets and coins, _passim_) was

an animal in every respect as noble and kingly as the lion and the eagle

still remain.

Note 76 (p. 75).

"Crieth Itys! Itys! aye."

Procne and Philomele, according to one of the most familiar of old Greek

legends, were daughters of Pandion, king of Athens; and one of them

having been given in marriage to Tereus, a king of the Thracians, in

Daulis, who, after the marriage, offered violence to her sister--the

result was, that the wife, in a fit of mad revenge, murdered her own son

Itys, and gave his flesh to her husband to eat; and, being afterwards

changed into a nightingale, was supposed in her melodious wail

continually to repeat the name of this her luckless offspring.

Note 77 (p. 75).

"The thick blossoms of its woe."

ἀμφιθαλῆ κακοῖς βίον. I hope this expression will not be considered too

strong by those who consider as well the general style of our poet, as

the ὁρῶμεν ἀνθουν πέλαγος Ἀιγᾶιον νεκρ(ο)ις, v. 645 of this play (see

my translation, _supra_, p. 61), and the μανίας δεινόν ὰποστάζει ἀνθηρόν

τε μένος of Sophocles.--Antig. v. 960.

Note 78 (p. 77).

"Soon my reeking heart shall cast."

If the reader thinks this a bold phrase, he must bear in mind that it

is Cassandra who speaks, and Æschylus who writes. The translation,

indeed, is not literal, but the word "θερμόνους," as CON. says, "has

all the marks of genuineness," and I was more afraid of weakening it

in translation than of exaggerating it. Other translations are--

"And I my warm blood soon on earth shall pour."--SYM.

"But I shall soon press my hot heart to Earth."--CON.

"Ich aber stúrze bald zur Erd im heissen Kampf."--FR.

"Ich aber sinke bald im heissen Todeskampf."--DROYS.

Note 79 (p. 77).

"Waves shall it dash from the west in the sun's face."

"The beauty of this image can only be properly appreciated by those

who have observed the extraordinary way in which the waves of the sea

appear to rush towards the rising sun."--English Prose Tr. Oxon.

Note 80 (p. 77).

". . . though I should wedge them

As stark as ice?"

I read πῆγμα with WELL. and the majority of editors and translators.

SYM., who is sometimes a little too imperative in his style, calls

this to "obtrude an unnecessary piece of frigidity or fustian on

Æschylus." The reader, of course, will judge for himself; but there

are many things in our poet more worthy of the term "fustian" than the

word πῆγμα, applied to ὁρκος.

Note 81 (p. 78).

"Implacable breath of curses on her kin."

WELL. forgets his usual caution, when he receives ἄρην into his text,

and rejects ἀρὰν, the reading of the MS. It is paltry to object to the

phrase {354} ἄσπονδον ἀρὰν in an author like Æschylus. FRANZ receives

the emendation of LOBECK, modified into Ἄρη.

Note 82 (p. 80).

"Bravely thou praisest; but the happy hear not

Such commendations."

I have here, in opposition to FR., SYM., MED., and even the

cautious WELL., reverted to the original order of this and the next

line, as they appear in the MSS., being chiefly moved by what is said

by CON. "The words ὰλλ ἐυκλεῶς τοι κατθαν(ε)ιν χάρις βροτῷ could

never have been put by Æschylus into the mouth of Cassandra, who is as

far as possible from cherishing the common view of a glorious death,

and, indeed, shows in her next speech very plainly what feelings such

a thought suggests to her."

Note 83 (p. 80).

"Not with vain screaming, like a fluttering bird."

"Fearing a wild beast about its nest," says the Scholiast; fearing the

fowler with "its limed wings," says MED. The original is short and

obscure; but there is no need of being definite; nothing is more common

than to see a bird fruitlessly fluttering about a bush, and uttering

piteous cries. A fit image of vain lamentation without purpose or

result.

Note 84 (p. 81).

". . . From bad to worse

Our changes run, and with the worst we end."

This translation is free, because it did not occur to me that the

laconism of the Greek, if literally translated, would be sufficiently

intelligible. I have no doubt as to the correctness of this version of

a passage which is certainly not a little puzzling at first sight. Two

phases of human life are spoken of in the previous lines; one is the

change from prosperity to adversity, the other, from adversity down to

utter ruin and death. The preference expressed in the line καὶ ταῦτ

ἒκέινων κ.τ.λ. can refer to nothing but these two. So PEILE and

CON.; and there is a terrible darkness of despair about Cassandra's

whole tone and manner, which renders this account of human life

peculiarly natural in her parting words.

Note 85 (p. 81).

"Who of mortals will not pray."

The line τίς ἀν ἔυξαιτο βροτῶν ἀσιν(ε)ι, being deficient in metre, one

may either supply ὄυκ, with CANTER., which gives the meaning expressed

in the text, or, retaining the affirmative form, read βροτός, ὤν, with

BOTH. and FR., which gives an equally good sense thus--

"Who of mortals then may hope

To live an unharmed life, when he

Fell from such height of honor?"

so POT., MED., HUMB., DROYS., FR., and VOSS.

Note 86 (p. 81).

"Weave we counsel now together, and concert a sure design."

I follow MÜLLER here in dividing the Chorus among twelve, not fifteen

speakers. The internal evidence plainly points to this; and for any

external evidence of scholiasts and others in such matters, even if it

were uncontradicted, I must confess that I think it is worth very

little.

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Note 87 (p. 82).

"So wisely spoken."

Most lame and impotent conclusion!--so the reader has no doubt been all

the while exclaiming. Our great poet has here contrived to make one of

the most tragic moments of the play consummately ridiculous; and it is

in vain to defend him. No doubt, old men are apt enough to be

irresolute, and to deliberate, while the decisive moment for action

slips through their fingers. So far in character. But why does the poet

bring this vacillation so laboriously forward, that it necessarily

appears ludicrous? This formal argumentation turns the character of the

Chorus into caricature. Nor will it do to say with CON. that this

impotent scene was "forced on Æschylus, by the fact of the existence of

a Chorus, and the nature of the work he had to do." A short lyrical ode

might have covered worthily that irresolution, which a formal

argumentation only exposes. No one blames the Chorus for doing nothing;

that is all right enough; but every one must blame the poet for making

them talk with such a show of solemn gravity and earnest loyalty about

doing nothing.

Note 88 (p. 82).

"Here, where I struck, I take my rooted stand

Upon the finished deed."

The natural attitude of decision. So when Brutus administered the

famous oath to the Roman people, "_neminem Romæ regnare passuros_," he

and his colleagues are described by Dionysius (V. 1) as σταντες ἐπι των

τομίων.

Note 89 (p. 83).

"Thou hast cast off: thou hast cut off

Thine own husband."

I have endeavoured to express the repetition of the _off_ three times

as in the original; but the Greek is far more emphatic, the repetition

taking place in the same line, ἀπέδικες, ἀπέταμες ἀπόπολις δ ἕσῃ.

Note 90 (p. 83).

"But mark my words."

There is much difficulty in settling the reading and the construction

of the Greek here; but having compared all the translations, I find

that, from POT. down to MED. and FR., substantially the same

sentiment is educed. SYM. who praises BLOM.'s arrangement, gives--

"Threaten away, for I too am prepared

In the like manner. Rule me if thou canst,

Get by thy hand the mastery--rule me then.

But if," etc.

WELL. whom I follow, and who objects to BLOM.'s construction,

gives--

"Jubeo antem te, quum et ego ad similes minas paratas sim, victoria vi

reportata, mihi imperare; sin minus, et si contraria Dii perfecerint,

damno edoctus sero sapere disces."

Note 91 (p. 84).

"And thine eyes with fatness swell."

I do not know whether I may not have gone too far in retaining the

original force of λίπος in this passage. I perceive that few of the

translators, not even SEW., so curious in etymological translation,

keep me in countenance. However, I am always very loath to smooth down

a strong phrase in Æschylus, merely because the modern ear may think it

gross. In this case, I am glad to find that I am supported by DROYS.

"Ueber dem Auge glänzt fett Dir das Tropfenblüt,"

though my rendering is a little more free.

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Note 92 (p. 84).

STROPHE I. In the arrangement of the following lyric dialogue, I have

followed BUT., BLOM., and PEILE, in opposition to that given by

HERM., WELL., and FR., not for any metrical reasons sufficiently

strong to influence me either one way or other in constituting the text;

but because I find the sense complete and continuous after νῦν δε

τελειάν, and this alone is a sufficient reason why I, in my subordinate

function of a translator, should not suppose anything to have fallen out

of the text in this place. How much, however, we are all in the dark

about the matter appears from this, that in the place where BLOM. and

PEILE suppose an immense _lacuna_, the sense in the mouth of

Clytemnestra νῦν δ᾽ ὤρθωσας runs on with a continuous allusion to the

preceding words of the Chorus. For which reason I have not hinted the

existence of an omission, nor is it at all likely that the reader has

lost much. These are matters which belonged to the ancient symmetrical

arrangement of the Chorus before the eyes and ears of the spectators,

and which I much fear it it impossible for us, readers of a dry MS., to

revive at this time of day.

Note 93 (p. 85).

"O god that o'er the doomed Atridan halls."

I am afraid I stand alone, among the translators, in translating δαῖμον

in this and similar places, by the English word _god_; but persuaded as

I am that the English words _Fiend_ and _Demon_ are steeped in modern

partly Gothic, partly Christian associations of a character essentially

opposed to the character and genius of the Greek theology, I choose

rather to offend the taste than to confound the judgment of my reader in

so important a matter. The Greeks habitually attributed to their _gods_

actions and sentiments, which we attribute only to devils and demons.

Such beings (in the English sense) were, in fact, altogether unknown to

the Greeks. Their gods, as occasion required, performed all the

functions of our Devil; so that, to use a familiar illustration, instead

of the phrase, _what the devil are you about?_ so familiar to a genuine

English ear, the Athenians would have said, _what the god are you

about?_ Hence the use of δαιμόνιε in Homer.

Note 94 (p. 86).

"The unrelenting old Alastor."

Along with SYM. and CON. I retain the Greek word here, partly from

the reason given in the previous note with regard to δαίμων, partly

because the word is familiar to many poetical ears from Shelley's

poetry, partly, also, because I take care so to explain it in the

context, that it cannot be misunderstood by the English reader. The

Greek word ἀλάστωρ means an _evil genius_. Clement of Alexandria, in a

passage quoted by SYM. (Protrept c. II.) classes the Alastors of the

ancient tragedy with the Furies and other terrible ministers of heaven's

avenging justice. About the etymology of the word the lexicographers

and critics are not agreed. Would there be any harm in connecting it

with ἀλαστέω (Il. XII. 163), and ἐπαλαστέω (Odys. I. 252), so that it

should signify _an angry or wrathful spirit_.

Note 95 (p. 88).

"Falling he fell, and dying died."

I have here taken advantage of a Hebraism familiar, through the pages

of the Bible, to the English ear, in order to give somewhat of the

force of the fine alliteration in the original κάππεσε, κάτθανε. καὶ

καταθάψομεν. In the next three lines I have filled up a blank in the

text, by what must obviously have been the import of the lost lines,

if, indeed, PALEY, KLAUSEN, and CON. are not rather right in not

insisting on an exact response of stanza to stanza in the anapæstic

systems of the musical dialogue.

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Note 96 (p. 88).

"While great Jove lives."

μίμνοντος ὲν χρόνῳΔιὸς. "The meaning is sufficiently plain, if we do

not disturb it by any philosophical notions about the difference

between time and eternity."--CON. The reader will note here the grand

idea of retributive justice pursuing a devoted family from generation

to generation, and, as it were, entailing misery upon them, concerning

which see Sewell's remarks above, p. 349. Sophocles strikes the same

keynote in the choric chaunt of the Antigone, ἀρχαῖα τα Δαβδακιδᾶν

ὄικων ὁρῶμαι.

Note 97 (p. 90).

". . . in a separate dish concealed

Were legs and arms, and the fingers' pointed tips."

Editors have a great difficulty in settling the text here; but there is

enough of the meaning visible--especially when the passage is compared

with Herod. I. 119, referred to by SCHÜTZ--to enable the translator

to proceed on the assumption of a text substantially the same as that

given by FR., where the second line is supplied--

Τὰ μὲν ποδήρη και χ(ε)ρων ἄκρους κτένας

[Ἔθετο κάτωθεν πὰντα συγκρύψας τὰ δ ἀυ]

Ἔθρυπτ ἄνωθεν ὰνδρακὰς καθημένοις

Ἄσήμ᾽· ὁ δ ἄυτῶν ἀυτικ᾽ αγνόιᾳ λαβὼν.

The reader will observe that in these and such like passages, where,

after all the labours of the learned, an uncertainty hangs over the

text, I think myself safer in giving only the general undoubted meaning

that shines through the passage, without venturing on the slippery

ground of translating words of which the proper connection may be lost,

or which, perhaps, were not written at all by the poet.

Note 98 (p. 90).

". . . while with his heel he spurned

The supper."

I quite agree with CON. that there is not the slightest reason for

rejecting the natural meaning of λακτίσμα δείπνου in this passage. Such

expressions are quite Æschylean in their character, and the analogy of

the feast of Tereus in Ovid, Met. VI. 661,

"Thracius ingenti mensas clamore repellit,"

adduced by CON. is very happy. To push the table away, whether with

hand or heel, or with both, in such a case, is the most natural action

in the world.

Note 99 (p. 90).

"And no diviner vends more potent balms

To drug a doting wit."

I have here expanded the text a little, to express the whole force of

the Greek word Ἱατρομάντεις, concerning which see Note to the Eumen. v.

62, below.

Note 100 (p. 91).

"Ho! my gallant co-mates, rouse ye!"

These two lines in the mouth of the Chorus make a good consecutive

sense; but the symmetrical response of line to line, so characteristic

of Greek tragedy, has led HERM., WELL., and the other editors of

note, to suppose that a line from Ægisthus has fallen out between these

lines of the Chorus. Blanks of this kind, however, the translator will

wisely overlook, so long as they do not seriously disturb the sense.

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