Yet there is no necessity of alteration. (see 1765, I,106,1)

II.i.40 (24,6) [Those that Hobgoblin call you, and sweet Puck, You

do their work] To those traditionary opinions Milton has reference

in L'Allegro,

_Then to the spicy nut-brown ale,

With stories told of many a feat.

How Fairy Mab the junkets eat;

She was pinch'd and pull'd she said.

And he by Frier's lapthorp led;

Tells how the drudging goblin sweat

To earn his cream-bowl duly set,

When in one night ere glimpse of morn

His shadowy flail had thresh'd the corn

Which ten day-labourers could not end.

Then lies him down the_ lubber _fiend_.

A like account of Puck is given by Drayton,

_He meeteth Puck, which most men call

Hobgoblin, and on him doth fall.--

This Puck seems but a dreaming dolt,

Still walking like a ragged colt,

And oft out of a bed doth bolt,

Of purpose to deceive us;

And leading us makes us to stray.

Long winter's nights out of the way.

And when we stick in mire and clay.

He doth with laughter leave us._

It will be apparent to him that shall compare Drayton's poem with

this play, that either one of the poets copied the other, or, as

I rather believe, that there was then some system of the fairy

empire generally received, which they both represented as accurately

as they could. Whether Drayton or Shakespeare wrote first,

I cannot discover.

II.i.42 (25,7) [_Puck_. Thou speak'st aright] I have filled up the

verse which I suppose the author left complete,

It seems that in the Fairy mythology Puck, or Hobgoblin, was

the trusty servant of Oberon, and always employed to watch or detect

the intrigues of Queen Mab, called by Shakespeare Titania.

For in Drayton's Nynphidia, the same fairies are engaged in the

sane business. Mab has an amour with Pigwiggen; Oberon being

jealous, sends Hobgoblin to catch them, and one of Mab's nymphs

opposes him by a spell.

II.i.54 (26,8) [And _tailor_ cries] The custom of crying _tailor_ at a

sudden fall backwards, I think I remember to have observed. He

that slips beside his chair falls as a taylor squats upon his

board. The Oxford editor and Dr. Warburton after him, read _and

rails or cries_, plausibly, but I believe not rightly. Besides,

the trick of the fairy is represented as producing rather merriment

than anger.

II.i.56 (26,9) [And waxen] And _encrease_, as the _moon waxes_.

II.i.58 (26,1) [But room, Faery] All the old copies read--_But room

Fairy_. The word Fairy or Faery, was sometimes of three syllables,

as often in Spenser.

II.i.84 (28,5) [paved fountain] A fountain laid round the edge with

stone.

II.i.88 (28,6) [the winds, piping] So Milton,

_While rocking winds are piping loud._

II.i.91 (28,7) [pelting river] Thus the quarto's: the folio reads

_petty_.

Shakespeare has in Lear the same word, _low pelting farms_. The

meaning is plainly, _despicable, mean, sorry, wretched_; but as it

is a word without any reasonable etymology, I should be glad to

dismiss it for _petty_, yet it is undoubtedly right. We have _petty

pelting officer_ in Measure for Measure.

II.i.92 (28,8) [over-born their continents] Born down the banks

that contained then. So in Lear,

_Close pent guilts

Rive their concealing_ continents.

II.i.98 (29,1) [The nine-men's morris] This was some kind of rural

game played in a marked ground. But what it was more I have not

found.

II.i.100 (29,2) [The human mortals want their winter here] After all

the endeavours of the editors, this passage still remains to me

unintelligible. I cannot see why winter is, in the general confusion

of the year now described, more wanted than any other season.

Dr. Warburton observes that he alludes to our practice of

singing carols in December; but though Shakespeare is no great

chronologer in his dramas, I think he has never so mingled true

and false religion, as to give us reason for believing that he

would make the moon incensed for the omission of our carols. I

therefore imagine him to have meant heathen rites of adoration.

This is not all the difficulty. Titania's account of this calamity

is not sufficiently consequential. _Men find no winter_, therefore

they sing no hymns; the moon provoked by this omission, alters the

seasons: that is, the alteration of the seasons produces the alteration

of the seasons. I am far from supposing that Shakespeare

might not sometimes think confusedly, and therefore am not sure

that the passage is corrupted. If we should read,

_And human mortals want their_ wonted year,

yet will not this licence of alteration much mend the narrative;

the cause and the effect are still confounded. Let us carry

critical temerity a little further. Scaliger transposed the

lines of Virgil's Gallus. Why may not the same experiment be

ventured upon Shakespeare.

_The human mortals want_ their wonted year,

_The seasons alter; hoary-headed frosts

Fall in the fresh lap of the crimson rose;

And on old_ Hyems' _chin, and icy crown,

An od'rous chaplet of sweet summer buds

Is, as in mock'ry set. The spring, the summer,

The chiding autumn, angry winter, change

Their wonted liveries; and the 'mazed world,

By their increase, now knows not which is which.

No night is now with hymn or carol blest;

Therefore the moon, the governess of floods,

Pale in her anger, washes all the air;

And thorough this distemperature, we see

That rheumatick diseases do abound.

And this same progeny of evil comes

From our debate, from our dissension._

I know not what credit the reader will give to this emendation,

which I do not much credit myself.

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