HOW TO EMPLOY SIMILES AND METAPHORS

We must be exceedingly cautious in regard to similitudes, that we do not

use such as are either obscure or unknown. For that which is assumed for

the sake of illustrating another thing, ought indeed to be clearer than

that which it so illustrates.

In speaking of arguments I mentioned a kind of similitude which, as an

ornament to a discourse, contributes to make it sublime, florid,

pleasing, and admirable. For the more far-fetched a similitude is, the

more new and unexpected it will appear. Some may be thought commonplace,

yet will avail much for enforcing belief; as, "As a piece of ground

becomes better and more fertile by cultivation, so does the mind by good

institutions." "As physicians prescribe the amputation of a limb that

manifestly tends to mortification, so would it be necessary to cut off

all bad citizens, tho even allied to us in blood." Here is something

more sublime: "Rocks and solitudes echo back the melody, and the

fiercest beasts are often made more gentle, being astonished by the

harmony of music." But this kind of similitude is often abused by the

too great liberties our declaimers give themselves; for they use such as

are false, and they do not make a just application of them to the

subjects to which they would compare them.

In every comparison the similitude either goes before, and the thing

follows; or the thing goes before, and the similitude follows. But the

similitude sometimes is free and separate: sometimes, which is best, it

is connected with the thing of which it is the image, this connection

being made to aid and correspond mutually on both sides. Cicero says in

his oration for Murena: "They who have not a genius for playing on the

lyre, may become expert at playing on the flute (a proverbial saying

among the Greeks to specify the man who can not make himself master of

the superior sciences): so among us they who can not become orators,

turn to the study of the law." In another passage of the same oration,

the connected comparison is conceived in a sort of poetical spirit. "As

storms are often raised by the influence of some constellation, and

often suddenly and from some hidden cause which can not be accounted

for, so the stormy agitations we sometimes behold in the assemblies of

the people are often occasioned by a malign influence easily

discoverable by all; and often their cause is so obscure as to seem

merely the effect of chance." There are other similes, which are very

short, as this, "Strolling and wandering through forests like beasts."

And that of Cicero against Clodius, "From which judgment we have seen

him escape naked, like a man from his house on fire." Such similes

constantly occur in common discourse.

Of a similar kind is an ornament which not only represents things, but

does so in a lively and concise manner. Undoubtedly a conciseness in

which nothing is lacking, is deservedly praised; that which says

precisely only what is necessary, is less estimable; but that which

expresses much in a few words is of all the most beautiful.

Eloquence does not think it enough to show of what it speaks, in a clear

and evident manner; it uses, besides, a variety of other expedients for

embellishing a discourse. Thus it is that a simple and unaffected style

is not without beauty, but it is a beauty entirely pure and natural,

such as is admired in women. Beauty is also annexed to propriety and

justness of expression, and this beauty is the more elegant as it shows

but little care. There is an abundance that is rich, an abundance that

smiles amidst the gaiety of flowers, and there is more than one sort of

power, for whatever is complete in its kind can not be destitute of its

proper strength and efficacy.

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