USE OF VIVID DESCRIPTION

There can not be a greater perfection than to express the things we

speak of in such lively colors as to make them seem really to take place

in our presence. Our words are lacking in full effect, they assume not

that absolute empire they ought to have, when they strike only the ear,

and when the judge who is to take cognizance of the matter is not

sensible of its being emphatically exprest.

One manner of representation consists in making out of an assemblage of

circumstances the image we endeavor to exhibit. An example of this we

have in Cicero's description of a riotous banquet; he being the only one

who can furnish us with examples of all kinds of ornaments: "I seemed to

myself to see some coming in, others going out; some tottering with

drunkenness, others yawning from yesterday's carousing. In the midst of

these was Gallius, bedaubed with essences, and crowned with flowers. The

floor of their apartment was all in a muck of dirt, streaming with wine,

and strewed all about with chaplets of faded flowers, and fish-bones."

Who could have seen more had he been present?

In this manner pity grows upon us from hearing of the sacking of a town.

Undoubtedly he who acquaints us of such an event, comprehends all the

incidents of so great a calamity, yet this cursory piece of intelligence

makes but a languid impression upon the mind. But if you enter into

descriptive pictures of all that was included in one word, as it were,

flames will appear spreading through houses and temples; the crash of

falling houses will be heard; and one confused noise formed out of all

together. Some will be seen striving to escape the danger, but know not

where to direct their flight; others embracing for the last time their

parents and relations; here the dismal shrieks of women and piercing

cries of children fill one with pity; there the sighs and groans of old

men, lamenting their unhappy fate for having lived so long as to be

witnesses of their country's desolation. A further addition to these

scenes of woe is the plunder of all things, sacred as well as profane;

the avidity of the soldier prowling after and carrying away his prey;

the wretched citizens dragged away in chains before their haughty

conquerors; mothers struggling to keep with them their children; and

slaughter still exercising its cruelties wherever there is the least

expectation of booty. Tho all these details are comprehended in the idea

of the sacking of a town, yet it is saying less to state merely that the

town was sacked than to describe its destruction in this circumstantial

manner.

Such circumstances may be made to appear vivid if they retain a likeness

to truth. They may not have happened in reality, yet, as they are

possible, the descriptive evidence is not objectionable. The same

evidence will arise also from accidents, as in the following examples:

... me horror chills,

Shudd'ring, and fear congeals my curdling blood.

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... to their bosoms press'd,

The frighted mothers clasp'd their crying babes.

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This perfection, the greatest, in my opinion, a discourse can have, is

very easily acquired by only considering and following nature. For

eloquence is a picture of the happenings of human life, every one

applying to himself what he hears, by making the case in some measure

his own, and the mind receives very willingly that with which it has

become familiar.

To throw light, also, upon things, similes have been invented, some of

which by way of proof are inserted among arguments, and others are

calculated for expressing the images of things, the point we are here

explaining.

... Thence like wolves

Prowling in gloomy shade, which hunger blind

Urges along, while their forsaken whelps

Expect them with dry jaws.

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... Thence with all his body's force

Flings himself headlong from the steepy height

Down to the ocean: like the bird that flies

Low, skimming o'er the surface, near the sea,

Around the shores, around the fishy rocks.

TRAPP.

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