In all writing, but in military writing particularly, there is no

excuse for vague terminology or phrases which do not convey an

exact impression of what was done or what is intended. The

military vocabulary is laden with words and expressions which

sound professional but do not have definite meaning. They vitiate

speech and the establishment would gladly rid itself of them if a

way could be found. Men fall into the habit of saying

"performed," "functioned" or "executed" and forget that "did" is

in the dictionary. A captain along the MLR (main line of

resistance) notifies his battalion commander that he has "advanced

his left flank" when all that has actually occurred is that six

riflemen from the left have crawled forward to new, and possibly,

untenable ground.

It is better at all times to _rein in_. The strength of military

writing, like the soundness of military operations, does not gain

through overstatement and artificial coloring. The bigger the

subject, the less it needs embroidery.

For lucidity and sincerity, the important thing is to say what you

have to say in whatever words most accurately express your own

thoughts. That done, it is pointless to worry about the effect on

the audience.

The list of suggestions could be extended indefinitely. But enough has

already been said to stake out a main line for those who have already

decided that this subject deserves their interest.

A majority of the world's most gifted writers would in all probability

be struck dumb if put before an audience; though dealing confidently

with ideas, they lack confidence when dealing with people. The

military officer has need of both talents, and as to where the accent

should be placed, it is probably more important that he should speak

well than that his writing prose should be polished. A unit commander

may permit a clerk or a subordinate to do the greater part of his

paper work, either because his own time is taken with other duties or

because he is awkward at it, but if he permits any other voice to

dominate the councils of the organization, he soon ceases to exercise

moral authority over it.

Of this there is no question. The judgment men take of their superior

is formed as much by what he says and how he says it as by his action.

The matter of nerve is a main element in speaking. When an officer is

ill at ease, fidgety and not to the point, the vote of his command for

the time being is "no confidence," and so long as he remains that

way, they will not change, no matter though his good will shines forth

through other acts.

On the other hand, the military crowd is an extremely sympathetic

audience. It has to be; it is drawing pay for so being. But even if

that were not true, the ranks have a generous spirit and are ever

disposed to give the newcomer an even break. If he meets them

confidently and calmly, measures his words, smiles at his own mistakes

and breaks it off when he has covered his subject, they'll pay no

attention to his little fumbles, and they'll approve him. There is no

better way to pick up prestige than through instruction or discourse

which commands attention, for despite all that is said in favor of the

"strong, silent man," troops like an officer who is outgiving, and who

has an intelligence that they can respect because they have seen it at

work.

As for _how_ an officer should talk to men, his manner and tone should

be no different than if he were addressing his fellow officers, or for

that matter, a group of his intellectual and political peers from any

walk of life. If he is stuffy, he will not succeed anywhere. If he

affects a superior manner, that is a mark of his inferiority. If he is

patronizing, and talks to grown men as a teacher might talk to a class

of adolescents, the rug, figuratively, will be pulled from under him.

His audience will put him down as a chump.

It is curiously the case that the junior officer who can't get the

right pitch when he talks to the ranks will also be out of tune when

he talks to his superiors. This failing is a sign mainly that he needs

practice in the school of human nature. By listening a little more

carefully to other men, he may himself in time attain maturity.

Concerning subject matter, it is better always to aim high than to

take the risk of shooting too low. It is too often the practice to

spell out everything in words of one syllable so that the more witless

files in the organization will be able to understand it. When that is

done, it insults the intelligence of the keenest men, and nothing is

added to their progress. The target should be the intellect of the

upper 25 or 30 percent. When they are stimulated and informed, they

will bring the others along, and even those who do not fully

understand all that was under discussion will have heard something to

which to aspire. _The habit of talking down to troops is one of the

worst vices that can afflict an officer._

There are no dull lecture topics; there are only dull lecturers. A

little eager research will enliven any subject under the sun. Good

lecturing causes men's imaginations to be stirred by vivid images.

Real good is accomplished only when they talk to each other of what

they have heard and sharpen their impressions. Schopenauer somewhere

observes that "people in general have eyes and ears, but not much

else--little judgment and even little memory," which isn't far wrong.

Consequently, competent lecturing entails the employment of every

technique which can be used to hammer a point home. In this way, a

truth or a lesson has a better chance of adhering because it is

identified with some definite image. Simply to illuminate this point,

it is noted that the jests which best stick in the memory are those

which are associated with some incongruous situation. To relate a

pertinent anecdote, to provide an apt quotation from some well-known

authority and to draw upon our own rich battle history for

illustrative materials are but a few of the means of freshening any

discussion and sharpening its purpose. Men are always ready to listen

to the story of other men's experience provided that it is told with

vigor. And insofar as combat is concerned, such teaching is in point,

for what has happened once will happen again.

For his way as an instructor of young infantry officers of the A. E.

F. in 1918, Lt. Col. H. M. Hutchinson of the British Army was awarded

our D. S. M. Officers who sat at his feet at Gondrecourt were unlikely

ever to forget the point of such an anecdote as:

"There will be no 'Stack arms' in my army. It is a thing one sees on a

brewer's calendar--The Soldier's Dream--showing a brave private

sleeping under a stack of rifles which it will take him a good

half-hour to untangle when the call comes to stand to. No, a soldier

had better carry the rifle with him to his meals, have it beside him

always, lavish his care upon it, and in short treat it more like a

wife than a weapon.

"I am reminded of the times in South Africa when we would come to a

country inn where a chap could stop for beer. Well, a soldier would

walk into the place, and immediately he would stand his rifle in a

corner--like an umbrella, you know--'We've arrived!'--and he'd get

well into his beer and a song, say, and suddenly firing would break

out on the inn from four sides.

"It seemed that a Boer had slipped into the entry and picked up all

the rifles and passed them around to his mates in the bushes,

and--well--there you are!"

As a cadet and later as an instructor at Sandhurst, Colonel Hutchinson

well knew the usefulness of the anecdote in catching and holding the

attention of the young. Who could forget the lesson in this, related

at Gondrecourt:

"In my youth I was a dashing ignoramus with clearer ideas than I now

have on the line of demarcation between the officer and his men. They

sent me out to South Africa during the trouble and I brought a

detachment into a country village. It seemed quite unpromising but I

was told of a sort of place 3 miles in the country that you would call

a chateau in France. So I cantered out and spent the night, turning my

men over to a sergeant-major. After a refreshing breakfast along in

the middle of the morning--the late middle of the morning--I rode back

into town, but try as I might I could not locate a single one of my

men.

"Now nothing, you know, is as ineffective in a war as an officer

without his men. Well, I spent the day in agony and it was not until

along at dusk that the first of the blighters straggled in--quite

drunk, all of them, and swearing to a man that they had engaged in

five ferocious battles. It seems that about 2 miles away, in a barn,

they had come on a hogshead of ginger brandy, and had stayed with it

to the bitter end. Need I say that it was a great lesson to me, and

that from then on I was never billeted farther than 15 rods from my

men.

"As a matter of fact, I love ginger brandy."

Or this, in which the whole lesson of exactitude in the written

communication is implicit:

"Now on the subject of messages, it might be well to say immediately

that as far as I know no one ever received a written message during a

battle. They may be written, but that I think is as far as it goes.

However, they are occasionally received before and after battles, and

in this connection let me say that it is no earthly good writing

generalities to signify times and places.

"I mean to say, suppose you are writing a message and you write

'Report after breakfast.' Well, to Sergeant Ramrod it might mean

stand-to at 3 in the morning; while to Captain Brighteyes it would

mean, say, 8 o'clock. But to Colonel Blue-fish it would signify some

time after 11, depending quite a bit on how the old fellow felt.

"So it is better to say 7 o'clock in the morning, if that is what you

mean, for after all there is only one 7 o'clock in the morning. And,

by the way, I must warn you chaps against the champagne on sale in the

Cafe de l'Univers down here in the square. It is made in the

basement--of potatoes."

On as simple and basic a thing as continuing liaison between small

units, the Colonel's listeners never forgot his elementary parable:

"One rule is about all a chap can handle in a battle, and as good a

one as any to remember is to keep in some sort of touch with the chaps

to your right and left. If you do this--and I dare say you Americans

will have as much trouble as ourselves in remembering to--then a great

deal of distress to yourselves and all hands will be obviated.

"Now here we have a triangular wood. There is to be an attack, and the

objective is this line beyond the wood. So on this side of the wood at

the hour of attack the Welsh Guards go forward--and on this side,

here, the Inniskilling Fusiliers, and a tremendous battle ensues.

Well, after an hour or two, with not much progress, it is discovered

that the Welsh Guards have been firing into the Inniskilling

Fusiliers, and the Fusiliers have been firing into the Welsh. This is

thought a bit thick, you know, even in the confusion of battle. So

eventually it is stopped."

Some of the experts warn the lecturer who is only a beginner against

the use of humor, commenting that if a joke is unlaughed at, it is

disconcerting to all concerned. The only intelligent answer to that

is: "Well, what of it?" The speaker who is going to cringe every time

one of his passages falls a little flat had best not start. This

happens at times to every lecturer; there are good days and bad days,

live audiences and sour ones. If a man takes his work seriously, it is

hardly within nature for him to harden his emotions against an

unexpectedly dull reaction. But he can keep from ever showing that he

is upset if as a speaker he consciously forms the habit of rapidly

driving on from one point to another.

Thus as to the use of humor in public address, it is not only an asset

but almost a necessity. It is better to try with it, and to fall flat

occasionally, thereby sharpening one's own wit through better

understanding of what goes and what does not, than to attempt to go

along humorlessly. Said William Pitt: "Don't tell me of a man's being

able to talk sense. Everyone can talk sense. Can he talk a little

nonsense?" Even more to the point is the remark of Thomas Hardy that

men thin away to insignificance quite as often by not making the most

of good spirits when they have them as by lacking good spirits when

they are indispensable. Fighting is much too serious a trade to have a

large place for men who are dry as dust.

One of the spellbinders of ancient Greece, we are told, orated on the

sands with his mouth filled with pebbles. In World War I, it was the

custom of many higher commanders to take their officers out for voice

exercises and have them talk through 150 feet of thicket; they were

not satisfied unless the words came through distinctly on the far

side. If, under average acoustical conditions, a military officer

cannot get across to five hundred men, he needs to improve his voice

placement. It is remarkable what miracles can be worked by consistent

exercise of the vocal cords.

The final thought is that it is all a matter of buildup. An officer

can cut his audience to his own size, and strengthen his powers and

his confidence as he goes along. That is his supreme advantage. He can

start with a short talk to a minor working detail and move from that

to a more formal address before a slightly larger group. By taking it

gradually, and increasing his store of knowledge in the interim

period, he will see the time come when he can hold any audience in the

hollow of his hand. This is precisely the routine which was followed

by most of the military leaders who have been celebrated for their

command of speech.

CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE

THE ART OF INSTRUCTION

_Keep it simple._

_Have but one main object._

_Stay on the course._

_Remain cheerful._

_Be enthusiastic._

_Put it out as if the ideas were as interesting and novel to you,

as to your audience._

By abiding by these few simple rules you will keep cool, preserve

continuity and hold your audience.

Instruction is just about the begin-all and end-all of every military

officer's job. He spends the greater part of his professional life

either pitching it or catching it, and the game doesn't stop until he

is at last retired. Should he become a Supreme Commander, even, this

is one thing that does not change; it remains a give-and-take

proposition. Part of his time is taken instructing his staff as to

what he wants done and just as much of it is spent in being instructed

by his staff as to the means available for the doing of it.

Instruction is the generator of unified action. It is the transmission

belt by which the lessons of experience are passed to untrained men.

Left uninstructed, men may progress only by trial-and-error and the

hard bumps which come of not knowing the way.

Need more than that be said to suggest that the officer who builds a

competent skill in this field, so that it becomes a part of his

reputation, has at the same time built the most solid kind of a

foundation under his service career?

The services do not discard that kind of man when the economy pinch

comes and the establishment has to contract. The Reservist, who is

known as a good instructor, is always on the preferred list. In any

period of emergency, such officers move rapidly to the top; there are

always more good jobs than there are good men. Look back over the

lineup of distinguished commanders from World War II! It will be found

that the high percentage of them first attracted notice by _being good

school men_.

Within the services, in all functions related to the passing on of

information, the accent is on "knowing your stuff." The point is

substantial, but not conclusive. It is upon the way that instruction

is delivered rather than upon its contents as such that its moral

worth rests. The pay-off is not in what is said, but in what sinks in.

_A competent instructor will not only teach his men but will increase

his prestige in the act._ There are many inexpressibly dull bores who

know what they're talking about, but still haven't learned how to say

it, because they are contemptuous of the truth that it is the dynamic

flow of knowledge, rather than the static possession of it, which is

the means to power and influence. As technicians, they have their

place. As instructors, they would be better off if they knew only half

as much about their subject, and twice as much about people.

To know where truth lies is not more important than knowing how to

pitch it. Take the average American military audience: what can be

said fairly of its main characteristics? Perhaps this--that it is

moderately reflective; that it is ready to give the untried speaker a

break; that it does not like windiness, bombast or prolonged

moralizing; that it refuses to be bullied; and that it can usually be

won by the light touch and a little appeal to its sporting instinct.

It is the little leavening in the bread which makes all the difference

in its savor and digestibility.

In World War I an American major, name now long forgotten, was given

the task of making the rounds of the cantonments, talking to all

combat formations, and convincing them that the future was bright--no

Boy Scout errand. But wherever he went, morale was lifted by his

words. In substance, what he said was this:

"None of us cares about living with any individual who wants every

break his own way. But when the odds are even, the gamble is worth

any good man's time. So let's look at the proposition. You now have

one chance in two; you may go overseas, you may not. Suppose you do.

You still have one chance in two. You may go to the front, or you may

not. If you don't, you'll see a foreign country at Uncle Sam's

expense; if you do, you'll find out about war, which is the toughest

chance of them all. But up there, you still have one chance in two:

you may get hit, or you may not. If you breeze through it, you'll be a

better man for all the rest of your life. And if you get hit, you

still have one chance in two. You may get a small wound, and become a

hero to your family and friends. Or there is always the last chance

that it may take you out altogether. And while that is a little

rugged, it is at least worth remembering that very few people seem to

get out of this life alive."

There was as simple an idea as any military instructor ever unloaded,

and yet troops cheered this man wherever he went.

Lt. Col. H. M. Hutchinson, of the British Army, already described in

this book as an instructor who made a powerful impression on the

American Army in World War I because of his droll wit, was a master

hand at taking the oblique approach to teach a lesson. Old officers

still remember the manner and the moral of passages such as this one:

"On the march back from Mons--and I may say that a very good army

sometimes must retreat, though no doubt it wounds the sensibilities to

consider it--we did rather well. But I noticed often the confusion

caused by marching slowly up one side of a hill and dashing down the

other. It is a tendency of all columns on foot.

"A captain is sitting out in front on a horse, with a hell of a great

pipe in his mouth and thinking of some girl in a cafe, and of course

he moves slowly up the hill. He comes to the top and his pace

quickens. Well, then, what happens? The taller men are at the top of

the column, and they lengthen their stride--but what becomes of Nipper

and Sandy down in the twentieth squad? Half the time, you see, they

are running to catch up. So the effect is to jam the troops together

on an upgrade and to stretch them out going down--you know--like a

concertina."

Where then is the beginning of efficiency in the art of instruction?

It resides in becoming diligent and disciplined about self-instruction.

No man can develop great power as an instructor, or learn to talk

interestingly and convincingly, until he has begun to think deeply.

And depth of thought does not come of vigorous research on an

assignment immediately at hand, but from intensive collateral study

throughout the course of a career. We are all somewhat familiar with

the type of commander who, when asked: "What are your officers doing

about special studies, so that they may better their reading habits

and further their powers of self-expression?" will puff himself up by

replying, "They are kept so busily employed that they have no time for

any such exercise." This is one way of saying that his subordinates

are kept too busy to get essential work done.

Research, on the spot and at the time, is vital and necessary so that

the presentation of any subject will be factually freshened and

documented. But its nature and object should not be overrated. The

real values can be compared to what happens to a pitcher when he warms

up before a game. This is merely an act of suppling the muscles; the

real conditioning process has already taken place, and it has been

long and arduous.

Even so is it with immediate research, in its relation to continuing

military study, in the perfecting of instructorship. That which gives

an officer power, and conviction, on the platform, or before a group,

is not the thing which he learned only yesterday, having been

compelled to read it in a manual or other source, but the whole body

of this thought and philosophy, as it may be directed toward the

invigorating of any presentation of any subject. If he forms the habit

of careful reflection, then almost everything that he reads and hears

other people say that arouses his own interest becomes grist for his

mill.

Like 10 years in the penitentiary, it's easy to say but hard to do. So

much time, seemingly, has to be wasted in profitless study to find a

few kernels amid much chaff. Napoleon said at one point that the

trouble with books is that one must read so many bad ones to find

something really good. True enough but, even so, there are perfectly

practical ways to advance rapidly without undue waste motion. Consider

this: Among one's superiors there are always discriminating men who

have "adopted" a few good books after reading many bad ones. When they

say that a text is worthwhile, it deserves reading and careful study.

The junior who starts building a working library for his professional

use cannot do better than to consult those older men who are scholars

as well as leaders, and ask them to name five or six texts which have

most stimulated their thought. It comes as a surprising discovery that

some of the titles which are recommended with the greatest enthusiasm

are not among the so-called classics on war. The well-read man need

not have more than a dozen books in his home, provided that they all

count with him, and he continues to pore over them and to ponder the

weight of what is said. On the other hand, the ignorant man is

frequently marked by his bookshelf stocked with titles, not one of

which suggests that he has any professional discernment.

The notebook habit is invaluable, nay, indispensable, to any young

officer who is ambitious to perfect himself as an instructor. Most men

who are distinguished for their thinking ability are inveterate

keepers of scrapbooks and of reference files where they have put

clippings and notes which jogged their own thoughts. This is not a

cheap device leading to the parroting of other men; the truth is that

the departure line toward original thinking by any man is established

by the mental energy which he acquires by imaginative observation of

other men's ideas.

To get back to the notebook, it should be loose-leaf and well-bound,

else it is not likely to be given permanent use. Whether it is kept at

home or the office is immaterial. What matters is that it be made a

receptacle for everything that one hears, reads or sees which may be

of possible future value in the preparation of classroom work. Books

can't be clipped; but short, decisive passages can be copied, and

longer ones can be made the subject of a reference item. Copying is

one way of fixing an idea in the memory. While on the subject of

books, it is all right to quote the classics and to be able to refer

to the great authorities on the science of war. But it is more

effective by far to read deeply into such writers as Clausewitz, Mahan

and Fuller, and to find some of their strongest but least-known

passages for one's self, than to rely on the more popular but

shop-worn quotations which are in general circulation. Such old

chestnuts as, "The moral is to the material as three to one," do not

refresh discourse.

Even so, the classics are only one small field worth cultivating.

Nearly every major speech by current military leadership contains a

passage or two well worth salting away. The writings of the

philosophers, the publications of the industrial world, the daily

press and the scientific journals are goldmines containing rich

nuggets of information and of choice expression worth study and

preservation.

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