WHAT MAKES A POEM?

Pope said that a middling poet was no poet at all. Middling things in

art or in any field of human endeavor do not arouse our enthusiasm,

and it is enthusiasm that fans the fires of life. There are all

degrees of excellence, but in poetry one is always looking for the

best. Pope himself holds a place in English literature which he could

not hold had he been only a middling poet. He is not a poet of the

highest order certainly, but a poet of the third or fourth order--the

poet of the reason, the understanding, but not of the creative

imagination. It is wit and not soul that keeps Pope alive.

Nearly every age and land has plenty of middling poets. Probably there

were never more of them in the land than there are to-day. Scores of

volumes of middling verse are issued from the press every week. The

magazines all have middling verse; only at rare intervals do they have

something more. The May "Atlantic," for instance, had a poem by a (to

me) comparatively new writer, Olive Tilford Dargan, that one would

hardly stigmatize as middling poetry. Let the reader judge for

himself. It is called "Spring in the Study." I quote only the second

part:

"What is this sudden gayety that shakes the grayest boughs?

A voice is calling fieldward--'T is time to start the ploughs!

To set the furrows rolling, while all the old crows nod;

And deep as life, the kernel, to cut the golden sod.

The pen--let nations have it;--we'll plough a while for God.

"When half the things that must be done are greater than our art,

And half the things that must be done are smaller than our heart,

And poorest gifts are dear to burn on altars unrevealed,

Like music comes the summons, the challenge from the weald!

'They tread immortal measures who make a mellow field!'

"The planet's rather pleasant, alluring in its way;

But let the ploughs be idle and none of us can stay.

Here's where there is no doubting, no ghosts uncertain stalk,

A-traveling with the plough beam, beneath the sailing hawk,

Cutting the furrow deep and true where Destiny will walk."

Lafcadio Hearn spoke with deep truth when he said that "the measure of

a poet is the largeness of thought which he can bring to any subject,

however trifling." Certainly Mrs. Dargan brings this largeness of

thought to her subject. Has the significance of the plough ever before

been so brought out? She makes one feel that there should be a plough

among the constellations. What are the chairs and harps and dippers in

comparison?

The poetry of mere talent is always middling poetry--"poems distilled

from other poems," as Whitman says. The work of a genius is of a

different order. Most current verse is merely sweetened prose put up

in verse form. It serves its purpose; the mass of readers like it.

Nearly all educated persons can turn it off with little effort. I have

done my share of it myself--rhymed natural history, but not poetry.

"Waiting" is my nearest approach to a true poem.

Wordsworth quotes Aristotle as saying that poetry is the most

philosophical of all writing, and Wordsworth agrees with him. There

certainly can be no great poetry without a great philosopher behind

it--a man who has thought and felt profoundly upon nature and upon

life, as Wordsworth himself surely had. The true poet, like the

philosopher, is a searcher after truth, and a searcher at the very

heart of things--not cold, objective truth, but truth which is its own

testimony, and which is carried alive into the heart by passion. He

seeks more than beauty, he seeks the perennial source of beauty. The

poet leads man to nature as a mother leads her child there--to instill

a love of it into his heart. If a poet adds neither to my knowledge

nor to my love, of what use is he? For instance, Poe does not make me

know more or love more, but he delights me by his consummate art.

Bryant's long poem "The Ages" has little value, mainly because it is

charged with no philosophy, and no imaginative emotion. His "Lines to

a Waterfowl" will last because of the simple, profound human emotion

they awaken. The poem is marred, however, by the stanza that he tacks

on the end, which strikes a note entirely foreign to the true spirit

of the poem. You cannot by tacking a moral to a poem give it the

philosophical breadth to which I have referred. "Thanatopsis" has a

solemn and majestic music, but not the unique excellence of the

waterfowl poem. Yet it may be generally said of Bryant that he has a

broad human outlook on life and is free from the subtleties and

ingenious refinements of many of our younger poets.

I know of only three poets in this century who bring a large measure

of thought and emotion to their task. I refer to William Vaughn Moody,

to John Russell McCarthy (author of "Out-of-Doors" and "Gods and

Devils"), and to Robert Loveman, best known for his felicitous "Rain

Song," a poem too well known to be quoted here. Any poet who has ever

lived might have been proud to have written that poem. It goes as

lightly as thistle-down, yet is freighted with thought. Its philosophy

is so sublimated and so natural and easy that we are likely to forget

that it has any philosophy at all. The fifty or more stanzas of his

"Gates of Silence" are probably far less well known. Let me quote a

few of them:

"The races rise and fall,

The nations come and go,

Time tenderly doth cover all

With violets and snow.

"The mortal tide moves on

To some immortal shore,

Past purple peaks of dusk and dawn,

Into the evermore.

* * * * *

"All the tomes of all the tribes,

All the songs of all the scribes,

All that priest and prophet say,

What is it? and what are they?

"Fancies futile, feeble, vain,

Idle dream-drift of the brain,--

As of old the mystery

Doth encompass you and me.

* * * * *

"Old and yet young, the jocund Earth

Doth speed among the spheres,

Her children of imperial birth

Are all the golden years.

"The happy orb sweeps on,

Led by some vague unrest,

Some mystic hint of joys unborn

Springing within her breast."

What takes one in "The Gates of Silence," which, of course, means the

gates of death, are the large, sweeping views. The poet strides

through time and space like a Colossus and

"flings

Out of his spendthrift hands

The whirling worlds like pebbles,

The meshèd stars like sands."

Loveman's stanzas have not the flexibility and freedom of those of

Moody and McCarthy, but they bring in full measure the largeness of

thought which a true poem requires.

Some of Moody's poems rank with the best in the literature of his time.

He was deeply moved by the part we played in the Spanish-American War.

It was a war of shame and plunder from the point of view of many of the

noblest and most patriotic men of the country. We freed Cuba from the

Spanish yoke and left her free; but we seized the Philippines and

subdued the native population by killing a vast number of them--more

than half of them, some say. Commercial exploitation inspired our

policy. How eloquently Senator Hoar of Massachusetts inveighed against

our course! We promised the Filipinos their freedom--a promise we have

not yet fulfilled.

Moody's most notable poems are "Gloucester Moors," "An Ode in Time of

Hesitation" (inspired by the Shaw Monument in Boston, the work of

Saint-Gaudens), "The Brute," "The Daguerreotype," and "On a Soldier

Fallen in the Philippines." In this last poem throb and surge the

mingled emotions of pride and shame which the best minds in the

country felt at the time--shame at our mercenary course, and pride in

the fine behavior of our soldiers. It is true we made some pretense of

indemnifying Spain by paying her twenty million dollars, which was

much like the course of a boy who throws another boy down and

forcibly takes his jack-knife from him, then gives him a few coppers

to salve his wounds. I remember giving Moody's poem to Charles Eliot

Norton (one of those who opposed the war), shortly after it appeared.

He read it aloud with marked emotion. Let me quote two of its stanzas:

"Toll! Let the great bells toll

Till the clashing air is dim.

Did we wrong this parted soul?

We will make it up to him.

Toll! Let him never guess

What work we set him to.

Laurel, laurel, yes;

He did what we bade him do.

Praise, and never a whispered hint but the fight he fought was good;

Never a word that the blood on his sword was his country's own

heart's-blood.

"A flag for the soldier's bier

Who dies that his land may live;

O, banners, banners here,

That he doubt not nor misgive!

That he heed not from the tomb

The evil days draw near

When the nation, robed in gloom,

With its faithless past shall strive.

Let him never dream that his bullet's scream went wide of its island

mark,

Home to the heart of his darling land where she stumbled and sinned in

the dark."

When I say that every true poet must have a philosophy, I do not mean

that he must be what is commonly called a philosophical poet; from

such we steer clear. The philosophy in a poem must be like the iron in

the blood. It is the iron that gives color and vigor to the blood.

Reduce it and we become an anæmic and feeble race. Much of the popular

poetry is anæmic in this respect. There is no virile thought in it.

All of which amounts to saying that there is always a great nature

back of a great poem.

The various forms of verse are skillfully used by an increasing number

of educated persons, but the number of true poets is not increasing.

Quite the contrary, I fear. The spirit of the times in which we live

does not favor meditation and absorption in the basic things out of

which great poetry arises. "The world is too much with us." Yet we

need not be too much discouraged. England has produced Masefield, and

we have produced John Russell McCarthy, who has written the best

nature poetry since Emerson. The genius of a race does not repeat. We

shall never again produce poets of the type of those that are gone,

and we should not want to. All we may hope for is to produce poets as

original and characteristic and genuine as those of the past--poets

who as truly express the spirit of their time, as the greater poets

did of theirs--not Emerson and Whitman over again, but a wide

departure from their types.

Speaking of Whitman, may we not affirm that it is his tremendous and

impassioned philosophy suffusing his work, as the blood suffuses the

body, that keeps "Leaves of Grass" forever fresh? We do not go to

Whitman for pretty flowers of poesy, although they are there, but we

go to him for his attitude toward life and the universe, we go to

stimulate and fortify our souls--in short, for his cosmic philosophy

incarnated in a man.

What largeness of thought Tennyson brings to all his themes! There is

plenty of iron in his blood, though it be the blood of generations of

culture, and of an overripe civilization. We cannot say as much of

Swinburne's poetry or prose. I do not think either will live. Bigness

of words, and fluency, and copiousness of verse cannot make up for the

want of a sane and rational philosophy. Arnold's poems always have

real and tangible subject matter. His "Dover Beach" is a great stroke

of poetic genius. Let me return to Poe: what largeness of thought did

he bring to his subjects? Emerson spoke of him as "the jingle man,"

and Poe, in turn, spoke of Emerson with undisguised contempt. Poe's

picture indicates a neurotic person. There is power in his eyes, but

the shape of his head is abnormal, and a profound melancholy seems to

rest on his very soul. What a conjurer he was with words and meters

and measures! No substance at all in his "Raven," only shadows--a

wonderful dance of shadows, all tricks of a verbal wizard. "The

Bells," a really powerful poem, is his masterpiece, unique in English

literature; but it has no intellectual content. Its appeal is to the

eye and ear alone. It has a verbal splendor and a mastery over measure

and rhythm far beyond anything in Shelley, or in any other poet of his

time. It is art glorified; it is full of poetic energy. No wonder

foreign critics see in Poe something far beyond that found in any

other American, or in any British poet!

Poe set to work to write "The Raven" as deliberately as a mechanic

goes to work to make a machine, or an architect to build a house. It

was all a matter of calculation with him. He did not believe in long

poems, hence decided at the outset that his poem should not be more

than one hundred lines in length. Then he asked himself, what is the

legitimate end and aim of a poem? and answered emphatically, Beauty.

The next point to settle was, what impression must be made to produce

that effect? He decided that "melancholy is the most legitimate of all

poetic tones." Why joy or gladness, like that of the birds, is not

equally legitimate, he does not explain. Then, to give artistic

piquancy to the whole, he decided that there must be "some pivot upon

which the whole structure might turn." He found that "no one had been

so universally employed as the refrain." The burden of the poem should

be given by the refrain, and it should be a monotone, and should have

brevity. Then his task was to select a single word that would be in

keeping with the melancholy at which he was aiming, and this he found

in the word _nevermore_. He next invented a pretext for the frequent

but varying use of _nevermore_. This word could not be spoken in the

right tone by a human being; it must come from an unreasoning

creature, hence the introduction of the raven, an ill-omened bird, in

harmony with the main tone of the poem. He then considered what was

the most melancholy subject of mankind, and found it was death, and

that that melancholy theme was most poetical when allied to beauty.

Hence the death of a beautiful woman was unquestionably the most

poetic topic in the world. It was equally beyond doubt that the lips

best suited for such topic were those of a bereaved lover. Thus he

worked himself up, or rather back, to the climax of the poem, for he

wrote the last stanza, in which the climax occurs, first. His own

analysis of the poem is like a chemist's analysis of some new compound

he has produced; it is full of technical terms and subtle

distinctions. Probably no other famous poem was turned out in just

that studied and deliberate architectural way--no pretense of

inspiration, or of "eyes in fine frenzy rolling": just skilled

craftsmanship--only this and nothing more.

Arnold's dictum that poetry is a criticism of life is, in a large and

flexible sense, true. The poet does not criticize life as the

conscious critic does, but as we unconsciously do in our most exalted

moments. Arnold, I believe, did not appreciate Whitman, but one

function of the poet upon which Whitman lays emphasis, is criticism of

his country and times.

"What is this you bring, my America?

Is it uniform with my country?

Is it not something that has been better done or told before?

Have you not imported this or the spirit of it in some ship?

Is it not a mere tale? a rhyme? a pettiness?--is the good old cause

in it?

Has it not dangled long at the heels of the poets, politicians,

literates of enemies, lands?

Does it not assume that what is notoriously gone is still here?

Does it answer universal needs? will it improve manners?

Can your performance face the open fields and the seaside?

Will it absorb into me as I absorb food, air, to appear again in my

strength, gait, face?

Have real employments contributed to it?

Original makers, not mere amanuenses?"

Speaking of criticism, it occurs to me how important it is that a

poet, or any other writer, should be a critic of himself. Wordsworth,

who was a really great poet, was great only at rare intervals. His

habitual mood was dull and prosy. His sin was that he kept on writing

during those moods, grinding out sonnets by the hundred--one hundred

and thirty-two ecclesiastical sonnets, and over half as many on

liberty, all very dull and wooden. His mill kept on grinding whether

it had any grist of the gods to grind or not. He told Emerson he was

never in haste to publish, but he seems to have been in haste to

write, and wrote on all occasions, producing much dull and trivial

work. We speak of a man's work as being heavy. Let us apply the test

literally to Wordsworth and weigh his verse. The complete edition of

his poems, edited by Henry Reed and published in Philadelphia in 1851,

weighs fifty-five ounces; the selection which Matthew Arnold made from

his complete works, and which is supposed to contain all that is worth

preserving, weighs ten ounces. The difference represents the dead

wood. That Wordsworth was a poor judge of his own work is seen in the

remark he made to Emerson that he did not regard his "Tintern Abbey"

as highly as some of the sonnets and parts of "The Excursion." I

believe the Abbey poem is the one by which he will longest be

remembered. "The Excursion" is a long, dull sermon. Its didacticism

lies so heavily upon it that it has nearly crushed its poetry--like a

stone on a flower.

All poetry is true, but all truth is not poetry. When Burns treats a

natural-history theme, as in his verses on the mouse and the daisy,

and even on the louse, how much more there is in them than mere

natural history! With what a broad and tender philosophy he clothes

them! how he identifies himself with the mouse and regards himself as

its fellow mortal! So have Emerson's "Titmouse" and "Humble-Bee" a

better excuse for being than their natural history. So have McCarthy's

"For a Bunny" and "The Snake," and "To a Worm."

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