SCENE 9: _Same as 7. Close up to sofa in room._

Edith making love to Teddy. Teddy very nervous. Edith shows

disgust, registering “You’re a fine kind of a man, that a woman has

to make love to you.” Jackson and mother enter from bedroom; Edith

goes to mother and suggests that they leave, which they do. After

their exit, Jackson kids Teddy on his timidity, advises him to get

drunk.

SUBTITLE NO. 3: “_A little Dutch courage might be good for you._”

_Back to scene._

Teddy goes to sideboard and starts drinking feverishly from the

various bottles thereon, laying a foundation for the future “jag.”

_Timid Teddy_

SUBTITLE NO. 4: _Later--Janice proposes--Teddy disposes._

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