I read,

--then _lye_ peeping--

The author of the present regulation of the text I do not know, but have

suffered it to stand, though not right. _Hard with falshood_ is, hard by

being often griped with frequent change of hands.

I.vi.122 (185,8) With tomboys, hir'd with that self-exhibition/Which

your own coffers yield!] _Gross strumpets_, hired with the _very

pension_ which you allow your husband.

I.vi.152 (186,9) As in a Romish stew] The stews of Rome are deservedly

censured by the reformed. This is one of many instances in which

Shakespeare has mingled in the manners of distant ages in this play.

II.i.2 (188,1) kiss'd the jack upon an up-cast] He is describing his

fate at bowls. The _jack_ is the small bowl at which the others are

aimed. He who is nearest to it wins. _To kiss the jack_ is a state of

great advantage. (1773)

II.i.15 (189,2) 2 _Lord_. No, my lord; nor crop the ears of them.

[_Aside_.] This, I believe, should stand thus:

1 _Lord_. No, my lord.

2 _Lord_. Nor crop the ears of them, [_Aside_.

II.i.26 (189,3) you crow, cock, with your comb on] The allusion is to a

fool's cap, which hath a _comb_ like a cock's.

II.i.29 (189,4) every companion] The use of _companion_ was the same as

of _fellow_ now. It was a word of contempt.

II.ii.12 (191,1) our Tarquin] The speaker is an Italian.

II.ii.13 (191,2) Did softly press the rushes] It was the custom in the

time of our author to strew chambers with rushes, as we now cover them

with carpets. The practice is mentioned in _Caius de Ephemera

Britannica_.

II.iii.24 (194,2) _His steeds to water at those springs On chalic'd

flowers that lies_]

Hanmer reads,

Each _chalic'd_ flower supplies;

to escape a false concord: but correctness must not be obtained by such

licentious alterations. It may be noted, that the _cup_ of a flower is

called _calix_, whence _chalice_.

II.iii.28 (195,3) _With, every thing that pretty bin_] is very properly

restored by Hanmer, for _pretty is_; but he too grammatically reads,

With _all the things_ that pretty _bin_.

II.iii.102 (197,5) one of your great knowing/Should learn, being taught,

forbearance] i.e. A man _who is taught forbearance should learn it_.

II.iii.111 (198,7) so verbal] Is, so _verbose_, so full of talk.

II.iii.118-129 (199,8) The contract you pretend with that base wretch]

Here Shakespeare has not preserved, with his common nicety, the

uniformity of character. The speech of Cloten is rough and harsh, but

certainly not the talk of one,

Who can't take two from twenty, for his heart,

And leave eighteen.--

His argument is just and well enforced, and its prevalence is allowed

throughout all civil nations: as for rudeness, he seems not to be mach

undermatched.

II.iii.124 (199,9) in self-figur'd knot] [This is nonsense. We should

read,

--SELF-FINGER'D _knot_;

WARBURTON.] But why nonsense? A _self-figured knot_ is a knot formed by

yourself. (see 1765, VII, 301, 8)

II.iv.71 (204,4) And Cydnus swell'd above the banks, or for/The press of

boats, or pride] [This is an agreeable ridicule on poetical

exaggeration, which gives human passions to inanimate things: and

particularly, upon what he himself writes in the foregoing play on this

very subject:

"--And made

The water, which they beat, to follow faster,

As amorous of their strokes."

WARBURTON.] It is easy to sit down and give our author meanings which he

never had. Shakespeare has no great right to censure poetical

exaggeration, of which no poet is more frequently guilty. That he

intended to ridicule his own lines is very uncertain, when there are no

means of knowing which of the two plays was written first. The

commentator has contented himself to suppose, that the foregoing play in

his book was the play of earlier composition. Nor is the reasoning

better than the assertion. If the language of Iachimo be such as shews

him to be mocking the credibility of his hearer, his language is very

improper, when his business was to deceive. But the truth is, that his

language is such as a skilful villain would naturally use, a mixture of

airy triumph and serious deposition. His gaiety shews his seriousness to

be without anxiety, and his seriousness proves his gaiety to be without

art.

II.iv.83 (205,5) never saw I figures/So likely to report themselves] So

near to speech. The Italians call a portrait, when the likeness is

remarkable, a _speaking picture_.

II.iv.84 (205,6) the cutter/Was as another nature, dumb, out-went

her;/Motion and breath left out] [W: done; out-went her.] This

emendation I think needless. The meaning is this, The _sculptor_ was as

_nature_, but as _nature dumb_; he gave every thing that nature gives,

but _breath_ and _motion_. In _breath_ is included _speech_.

II.iv.91 (205,7) _Post._ This is her honour!] [T: What's this t'her

honour?] This emendation has been followed by both the succeeding

editors, but I think it must be rejected. The expression is ironical.

Iachimo relates many particulars, to which Posthumus answers with

impatience, This is her honour! That is, And the attainment of this

knowledge is to pass for the corruption of her honour.

II.iv.95 (206,8) if you can/Be pale] If you can forbear to flush your

cheek with rage.

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