II.iii.85 (430,1)

_Bas._ The king, my brother, shall have note of this.

_Lav._ Ay, for these slips have made him noted long]

He had yet been married but one night.

II.iii.104 (431,2) Should straight fall mad, or else die suddenly] This

is said in fabulous physiology, of those that hear the groan of the

mandrake torn up.

II.iii.126 (432,3) And with that painted hope she braves your

mightiness] [W: cope] _Painted hope_ is only _specious_ hope, or ground

of confidence more plausible than solid.

II.iii.227 (435,4) A precious ring, that lightens all the hole] There is

supposed to be a gem called a carbuncle, which emits not reflected but

native light. Mr. Boyle believes the reality of its existence.

II.iv.13 (438,5) If I do dream, 'would all my wealth would wake me'] If

this be a dream, I would give all my possessions to be delivered from it

by waking.

III.i.91 (443,8) It was my deer] The play upon _deer_ and _dear_ has

been used by Waller, who calls a lady's girdle, _The pale that held my

lovely_ deer.

III.i.216 (447,1) And do not break into these deep extremes] [We should

read, instead of this nonsense,

--woe-_extremes_.

i.e. extremes caused by excessive sorrow. But Mr. Theobald, on his own

authority, alters it to _deep_, without notice given. WARB.] It is

_deep_ in the old quarto of 1611, (rev. 1778, VIII, 510, 8)

III.ii (450,2) _An apartment in Titus's house_] This scene, which does

not contribute any thing to the action, yet seems to have the same

author with the rest, is omitted in the quarto of 1611, but found in the

folio of 1623.

III.ii.45 (452,3) by still practice] By _constant_ or _continual_

practice.

IV.i.129 (458,6) Revenge the heavens] It should be,

_Revenge_, ye _Heavens_!--

_Ye_ was by the transcriber taken for _y'e_, the.

IV.ii.85 (461,7) I'll broach the tadpole] A _broach_ is a _spit_. I'll

_spit_ the tadpole.

IV.ii.99 (462,8) Coal-black is better than another hue,/ In that it

seems to bear another hue] We may better read, _In that it_ scorns _to

bear another hue_.

IV.iii.88 (466,1) Yet wrung with wrongs] To _wring_ a horse is to press

or strain his back.

IV.iv.90 (472,4) With words more sweet, and yet more dangerous,/ Than

baits to fish, or honey-stalks to sheep] _Honey-stalks_ are

clover-flowers, which contain a sweet juice. It is common for cattle to

over-charge themselves with clover, and die.

V.i.102 (476,7) As true a dog, as ever fought at head] An allusion to

bull-dogs, whose generosity and courage are always shown by meeting the

bull in front, and seizing his nose.

V.ii.189 (484,1) And of the paste a coffin will I rear] A _coffin_ is

the term of art for the cavity of a raised pye.

V.iii.19 (486,2) break the parley] That is, _begin_ the parley. We yet

say, he _breaks_ his mind.

(492) General Observation. All the editors and critics agree with Mr.

Theobald in supposing this play spurious. I see no reason for differing

from them; for the colour of the stile is wholly different from that of

the other plays, and there is an attempt at regular versification, and

artificial closes, not always inelegant, yet seldom pleasing. The

barbarity of the spectacles, and the general massacre, which are here

exhibited, can scarcely be conceived tolerable to any audience; yet we

are told by Jonson, that they were not only borne, but praised. That

Shakespeare wrote any part, though Theobald declares it _incontestible_,

I see no reason for believing.

The testimony produced at the beginning of this play, by which it is

ascribed to Shakespeare, is by no means equal to the argument against

its authenticity, arising from the total difference of conduct,

language, and sentiments, by which it stands apart from all the rest.

Meeres had probably no other evidence than that of a title-page, which,

though in our time it be sufficient, was then of no great authority; for

all the plays which were rejected by the first collectors of

Shakespeare's works, and admitted in later editions, and again rejected

by the critical editors, had Shakespeare's name on the title, as we must

suppose, by the fraudulence of the printers, who, while there were yet

no gazettes, nor advertisements, nor any means of circulating literary

intelligence, could usurp at pleasure any celebrated name. Nor had

Shakespeare any interest in detecting the imposture, as none of his fame

or profit was produced by the press.

The chronology of this play does not prove it not to be Shakespeare's.

If it had been written twenty-five years, in 1614, it might have been

written when Shakespeare was twenty-five years old. When he left

Warwickshire I know not, but at the age of twenty-five it was rather too

late to fly for deer-stealing.

Ravenscroft, who in the reign of Charles II, revised this play, and

restored it to the stage, tells us, in his preface, from a theatrical

tradition, I suppose, which in his time might be of sufficient

authority, that this play was touched in different parts by Shakespeare,

but written by some other poet. I do not find Shakespeare's touches very

discernible, (see 1765, VI, 364) (rev. 1778, VIII, 559)

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