IV.iii.383 (372,4) 'Twixt natural, son and sire!']

[Greek: dia touton ouk adelphoi

dia touton ou toxaeas. ANAC.]

IV.iii.398 (373,6) More things like men?] This line, in the old edition,

is given to Aremantus, but it apparently belongs to Timon. Hanmer has

transposed the foregoing dialogue according to his own mind, not

unskilfully, but with unwarrantable licence.

IV.iii.419 (373,7) you want much of meat] [T: of meet] Such is Mr.

Theobald's emendation, in which he is followed by Dr. Warburton. Sir T.

Hanmer reads,

--_you want much of_ men.

They have been all busy without necessity. Observe the series of the

conversation. The thieves tell him, that they are _men that much do

want_. Here is an ambiguity between _much want_ and _want_ of _much_.

Timon takes it on the wrong side, and tells them that their _greatest

want is_, that, like other men, _they want much of meat_; then telling

them where meat may be had, he asks, _Want? why want?_ (see 1765, VI,

254, 5)

IV.iii.420 (374,8) the earth hath roots;/Within this mile break forth an

hundred springs]

_Vile plus, et duris haerentia mora rubetis

Pugnantis stomachi composuere famen:

Flumine vicino stultus sitit._

I do not suppose these to be imitations, but only to be similar thoughts

on similar occasions.

IV.iii.442 (375,2) The sea's a thief, whose liquid surge resolves/The

moon into salt tears] [W: The mounds] I am not willing to receive

_mounds_, which would not be understood but by him that suggested it.

The _moon_ is supposed to be humid, and perhaps a source of humidity,

but cannot be _resolved_ by the _surges_ of the sea. Yet I think _moon_

is the true reading. Here is a circulation of thievary described: The

sun, moon, and sea all rob, and are robbed.

IV.iii.456 (376,3) 'Tis in the malice of mankind, that he thus advises

us; not to have us thrive in our mystery] [Hanmer: his malice to]

Hanmer's emendation, though not necessary, is very probable, and very

unjustly charged with nonsense [by Warburton]. The reason of his advice,

says the thief, is _malice to mankind_, not any kindness to us, or

desire _to have us thrive in our mystery_.

IV.iii.468 (378,5) What an alteration of honour has/Desperate want

made!] [W: of humour] The original copy has,

_What an alteration of honour has desperate want made!_

The present reading is certainly better, but it has no authority. To

change _honour_ to _humour_ is not necessary. _An alteration of honour_,

is an _alteration_ of an _honourable state_ to a state of disgrace.

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