I.ii.12 (288,5)

If our betters play at that game, we must not dare

To imitate them. Faults that are rich, are fair]

[Warburton gave the second line to Apemantus] I cannot see that these

lines are more proper in any other mouth than Timon's, to whose

character of generosity and condescension they are very suitable. To

suppose that by _our betters_ are meant the Gods, is very harsh, because

to imitate the Gods has been hitherto reckoned the highest pitch of

human virtue. The whole is a trite and obvious thought, uttered by Timon

with a kind of affected modesty. If I would make any alteration, it

should be only to reform the numbers thus:

_Our betters play that game; we must not dare

T' imitate then; faults that are rich are fair._

I.ii.34 (289,6) thou art an Athenian,/Therefore welcome: I myself would

have no power] If this be the true reading, the sense is, _all Athenians

are welcome to share my fortune_; I would myself have no _exclusive

right or power in this house_. Perhaps we might read, _I myself would

have no_ poor. I would have every Athenian consider himself as joint

possessor of my fortune.

I.ii.38 (289,7) I scorn thy meat, 'twould choke me, for I should/ Ne'er

flatter thee] [W: 'fore/I should e'er] Of this emendation there is

little need. The meaning is, I could not swallow thy meat, for I could

not pay for it with flattery; and what was given me with an ill will

would stick in my throat.

I.ii.41 (290,8) so many dip their meat/In one man's blood] The allusion

is to a pack of hounds trained to pursuit by being gratified with the

blood of the animal which they kill, and the wonder is that the animal

on which they are feeding _cheers them_ to the chase.

I.ii.52 (290,9) wind-pipe's dangerous notes] The notes of the windpipe

seem to be the only indications which shew where the windpipe is. (see

1765, VI, 184, 4)

I.ii.54 (290,1) My lord, in heart] That is, _my lord's health with

sincerity_. An emendation hat been proposed thus:

_My_ love _in heart_;--

but it is not necessary.

I.ii.89 (292,2) we should think ourselves for ever perfect] That is,

arrived at the perfection of happiness.

I.ii.94 (292,4) did not you chiefly belong to my heart?] I think it

should be inverted thus: _did I not chiefly belong to_ your hearts.

Lacius wishes that Timon would give him and the rest an opportunity _of

expressing some part of their zeals_. Timon answers that, _doubtless the

Gods have provided that I should have help from you; how else are you my

friends_? why are you stiled my friends, if--what? _if I do not love

you_. Such is the present reading; but the consequence is not very

clear; the proper close must be, _if you do not love me_, and to this my

alteration restores it. But, perhaps, the old reading may stand. [The

_Revisal_'s note on this line is quoted.] The meaning is probably this.

Why are you distinguished from thousands by that title of endearment,

was there not a particular connection and intercourse of tenderness

between you and me. (see 1765, VI, 185, 8)

I.ii.97 (293,5) I confirm you] I fix your characters firmly in my own

mind.

I.ii.99 (293,7) O joy, e'en made away, ere it can be born!] For this

Hanmer writes, _O joy, e'en made a joy ere't can be born_; and is

followed by Dr. Warburton. I am always inclinable to think well of that

which is approved by so much learning and sagacity, yet cannot receive

this alteration. Tears being the effect both of joy and grief, supplied

our author with an opportunity of conceit, which he seldom fails to

indulge. Timon, weeping with a kind of tender pleasure, cries out, _O

joy, e'en made away_, destroyed, turned to tears, before _it can be

born_, before it can be fully possessed.

I.ii.110 (293,8) Mine eyes cannot hold water, methinks: to forget their

faults, I drink to you] In the original edition the words stand thus:

_mine eyes cannot hold out water, methinks. To forget their faults, I

drink to you_. Perhaps the true reading is this, _Mine eyes cannot hold

out_; they _water. Methinks, to forget their faults, I will drink to

you_. Or it may be explained without any change. _Mine eyes cannot hold

out water_, that is, cannot keep water from breaking in upon them, (see

1765, VI, 186, 2)

I.ii.113 (294,9) _Apem_. Thou weep'st to make them drink] Hanmer reads,

--_to make then drink_ thee,

and is again followed by Dr. Warburton, I think without sufficient

reason. The covert sense of Apemantus is, _what thou losest, they get_.

I.ii.118 (294,1) like a babe] That is a _weeping babe_.

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