V.ii.4 (247,2)

it is great

To do that thing, that ends all other deeds;

Which shackles accidents, and bolts up change;

Which sleeps, and never palates more the dung,

The beggar's nurse, and Caesar's]

[Warburton added a whole line and emended "dung" to "dugg"] I cannot

perceive the loss of a line, or the need of an emendation. The

commentator seems to have entangled his own ideas; his supposition that

_suicide_ is called _the beggar's nurse and Caesar's_, and his

concession that the position is _intelligible_, show, I think, a mind

not intent upon the business before it. The difficulty of the passage,

if any difficulty there be, arises only from this, that the act of

suicide, and the state which is the effect of suicide are confounded.

Voluntary death, says she, is an act _which bolts up change_; it

produces a state,

_Which sleeps, and never palates more the dung,

The beggar's nurse, and Caesar's_.

Which has no longer need of the gross and terrene sustenance, in the use

of which Caesar and the beggar are on a level.

The speech is abrupt, but perturbation in such a state is surely

natural.

V.ii.29 (249,4) I am his fortune's vassal, and I send him/The greatness

he has got] I allow him to be my conqueror; I own his superiority with

complete submission.

V.ii.34 (249,5) You see how easily she may be surpriz'd] This line in

the first edition is given not to Charuian, but to Proculeius; and to

him it certainly belongs, though perhaps misplaced. I would put it at

the end of his foregoing speech,

_Where he for grace is kneel'd to._

[Aside to Gallus.] _You see, how easily she may be surpriz'd._

Then while Cleopatra makes a formal answer, Gallus, upon the hint given,

seizes her, and Proculeius, interrupting the civility of his answer,

_--your plight is pity'd

Of him that caus'd it._

Cries out,

_Guard her till, Caesar come._

V.ii.40 (250,6) who are in this/Reliev'd, but not betray'd] [W:

Bereav'd, but] I do not think the emendation necessary, since the sense

is not made better by it, and the abruptness in Cleopatra's answer is

more forcible in the old reading.

V.ii.42 (250,7) rids our dogs of languish] For _languish_, I think we

may read, _anguish_.

V.ii.48 (251,8) Worth many babes and beggars] Why, death, wilt thou not

rather seize a queen, than employ thy force upon _babes_ and _beggars_.

(see 1765, VII, 238, 9)

V.ii.50 (251,9) If idle talk will once be necessary] [This nonsense

should be reformed thus,

_If idle_ TIME _whill once be necessary._

i.e. if _repose_ be necessary to cherish life, I will not sleep.

WARBURTON.] I do not see that the nonsense is made sense by the change.

Sir T. Hanmer reads,

_If idle talk will once be_ accessary;

Neither is this better. I know not what to offer better than an easy

explanation. That is, _I will not eat_, and _if it will be necessary now

for once_ to waste a moment in _idle talk_ of my purpose, _I will not

sleep neither_. In common conversation we often use _will be_, with as

little relation to futurity. As, Now I am going, it _will be_ fit for me

to dine first.

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