IV.ix.15 (224,5)

Throw my heart

Against the flint and hardness of my fault;

Which, being dried with grief, will break to powder,

And finish all foul thoughts]

The pathetick of Shakespeare too often ends in the ridiculous. It is

painful to find the gloomy dignity of this noble scene destroyed by the

intrusion of a conceit so far-fetched and unaffecting.

IV.xii.13 (226,1) Triple turn'd whore!] She was first for Antony, then

was supposed by him to have _turned_ to Caesar, when he found his

messenger kissing her hand, then she _turned_ again to Antony, and now

has _turned_ to Caesar. Shall I mention what has dropped into my

imagination, that our author might perhaps have written

_triple-tongued_? _Double-tongued_ is a common term of reproach, which

rage might improve to _triple-tongued_. But the present reading may

stand.

IV.xii.21 (227,2) That pannell'd me at heels] All the editions read,

_That_ pannell'd _me at heels_,--

Sir T. Hanmer substituted _spaniel'd_ by an emendation, with which it

was reasonable to expect that even rival commentators would be

satisfied; yet Dr. Warburton proposes _pantler'd_, in a note, of which

he is not injur'd by the suppression; and Mr. Upton having in his first

edition proposed plausibly enough,

_That_ paged _me at heels_,--

in the second edition retracts his alteration, and maintains _pannell'd_

to be the right reading, being a metaphor taken, he says, from a

_pannel_ of wainscot.

IV.xii.25 (227,3) this grave charm] I know not by what authority, nor

for what reason, _this_ grave _charm_, which the first, the only

original copy exhibits, has been through all the modern editors changed

to _this_ gay _charm_. By _this_ grave _charm_, is meant, _this sublime,

this majestic beauty_.

IV.xii.29 (227,4) to the very heart of loss] To the utmost loss

possible.

IV.xii.45 (228,7) Let me lodge, Lichas] Sir T. Hanmer reads thus,

--thy _rage_

Led thee _lodge Lichas_--and--

_Subdue_ thy _worthiest self_.--

This reading, harsh as it is, Dr. Warburton has received, after having

rejected many better. The meaning is, Let me do something in my rage,

becoming the successor of Hercules,

IV.xiv.19 (230,2) Pack'd cards with Caesar, and false play'd my

glory/Unto an enemy's triumph] [Warburton had explained and praised

Shakespeare's "metaphor"] This explanation is very just, the thought did

not deserve so good an annotation.

IV.xiv.39 (231,3) The battery from my heart] I would read,

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