II.iii.61 (448,7)

--strange screams of death;

And prophesying, with accents terrible

Of dire combustions, and confus'd events,

New hatch'd to the woeful time: The obscure bird

Clamour'd the live-long night: some say the earth

Was feverous, and did shake]

Those lines I think should be rather regulated thus:

--_prophecying with accents terrible,

Of dire combustions and cosfus'd events.

New-hatch'd to th' woful time, the obscure bird

Clamour'd the live-long night. Some say the earth

Was fev'rous and did shake._

A _prophecy_ of an _event new hatch'd_, seems to be a _prophecy_ of an

_event past_. And _a prophecy new hatch'd_ is a wry expression. The term

_new hatch'd_ is properly applicable to a _bird_, and that birds of ill

omen should be _new-hatch'd to the woful time_, that is, should appear

in uncommon numbers, is very consistent with the rest of the prodigies

here mentioned, and with the universal disorder into which nature is

described as thrown, by the perpetration of this horrid murder. (see

1765, VI, 413, 7)

II.iii.117 (452,3) Here, lay Duncan,/His silver skin lac'd with his

golden blood] Mr. Pope has endeavoured to improve one of these lines by

substituting _goary blood_ for _golden blood_; but it may easily be

admitted that he who could on such an occasion talk of _lacing the

silyer skin_, would _lace it_ with _golden blood_. No amendment can be

made to this line, of which every word is equally faulty, but by a

general blot.

It is not improbable, that Shakespeare put these forced and unnatural

metaphors into the mouth of Macbeth as a mark of artifice and

dissimulation, to shew the difference between the studied language of

hypocrisy, and the natural outcries of sudden passion. This whole speech

so considered, is a remarkable instance of judgment, as it consists

entirely of antithesis and metaphor.

II.iii.122 (432,5) Unmannerly breech'd with gore] An _unmannerly

dagger_, and a _dagger breech'd_, or as in some editions _breech'd

with_, gore, are expressions not easily to be understood. There are

undoubtedly two faults in this passage, which I have endeavored to take

away by reading,

--_daggers_

Unmanly drench'd _with gore_:--

_I saw_ drench'd _with the King's blood the fatal daggers, not only

instruments of murder but evidence of cowardice_.

Each of these words might easily be confounded with that which I have

substituted for it, by a hand not exact, a casual blot, or a negligent

inspection, [W: Unmanly reech'd] Dr. Warburton has, perhaps, rightly put

_reach'd_ for _breech'd_.

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