9. _Står där så grå_--the frequent omission of the subject (cf. lines
17, 21, 25, 33), in imitation of an ancient manner, lends quaintness and
an antiquated air to the poem.
67. Rhyming and stressing the pronoun _som_ is a breach of the rules of
good style rare in the polished and precise diction of Rydberg.
75-76. Prose order: _blott bruset av forsens fall höres helt sakta från
fjärran_.
85. _Månen sänker sin tysta ban_--a poetic ellipse; supply _sig på_
after _sänker_.