CHAPTER IX.—SLANDER’S SHAFT.

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CIRCULATING-LIBRARY CRITICS.

It appears to be a mania with some people to criticise everything which

comes in their way, no matter whether it be the last new bonnet of Mrs

Smith, the pug dog possessed by Mr Jones, or the last new novel by

Mr Brown; and as a true specimen of the ready-made critic, we might

cite those interesting individuals who, having more time upon their

hands than they can comfortably get rid of, endeavour to dispose of

some of the surplus stock by subscribing to a circulating library, and

diligently ‘cutting-up’ and otherwise abusing every author they read.

Novels, of course, are the principal dish of these readers; and it must

candidly be admitted that some of the notes pencilled in the margins

are not altogether uncalled for; though some of them are decidedly

personal, not to say unpleasant; while others, on the contrary, only

raise a smile, and if particularly ridiculous, are underlined by some

sarcastic reader, in order to call more attention to the blunder, which

has probably been committed by some indolent and not very well-informed

critic.

But taken as a whole, this criticism, although in some cases severe,

is but the echo of public opinion, and as such, is entitled to

consideration, no matter how humble the source may appear from which

it springs; and we know of nothing more enjoyable than a well-read

book, which has been some ten or twelve months in circulation. And

such a book would without doubt prove of great service to its author,

could he by any means get hold of a copy; for he would then have the

opportunity of judging for himself how his work was appreciated by the

public; and although some of the remarks would doubtless cause him

annoyance, he should remember that they are the candid opinion of the

readers through whose hands the work has passed. And if he has good

sense and a desire to please the public, he would avail himself of

those critical remarks which seemed to be just, and alter the text in

any future editions. It is an author’s place to write his work to the

best of his ability, and that of his readers to criticise it after it

has appeared in print. Whether the book be good or bad, the author may

be sure that he will have a faithful and industrious army of critics in

the shape of subscribers to circulating libraries, who will diligently

search out all its little defects, and display them in the margin for

the edification of the next reader, who in turn will try his best to

discover something which the other has passed over, and triumphantly

display it in a similar manner. Although ‘the stone that is rolling’

is said to gather no moss, it is a far different thing with a novel;

for the faster it passes from hand to hand, the more and more abundant

becomes its crop; and at a seaside watering-place, the writer has seen

blank sheets of letter-paper inserted between some of the leaves,

because the margins were already too crowded, to admit of some reader

adding his mite to the evidence there accumulated!

This is why we suppose it might be advantageous to an author to get

hold of a copy of his work which has been through a like ordeal; and

let him remember at the same time that his book has probably travelled

through the hands of some people who are intimately acquainted with

certain subjects upon which it treats, and whose opinion is not to be

lightly passed over. As some of the novelists of the present day seem

to think the law a machine which they can work upon as they choose,

without the slightest regard to facts, it might be recommended to

them either to study the subject seriously, or submit any notes which

may appear upon this subject in the margins of their works, to an

experienced lawyer; and in nine cases out of ten, the author will find

that the readers’ notes are correct. This may be taken as a proof that

people, although they may pass rough criticism upon the characters,

situation, and general plot of a novel, are not so eager to criticise

points which touch upon the law, physic, &c., unless they thoroughly

understand the subject. As an instance of this, we have heard of a

doctor who would never read a new novel by a certain author, because

in a former work this gentleman had murdered a man in a manner which

my friend described as being ‘utterly ridiculous;’ for the poison

administered, and of which the character in the novel died, would not

in reality ‘have killed a cat.’

These remarks may serve to show that the public, although they may

accept a taking title, a pretty cover, and a pound or so of toned

paper, as a novel, will also exercise their right of picking its

contents to pieces as soon as possible. To show with what diligence

some of them do so, we quote the following: ‘The red rose actually

_died_ the captain’s cheeks.’ The word in italics is underlined in the

book, and altered in the margin to _dyed_. This, of course, is merely

a printer’s error; but it serves to show how the circulating-library

critic delights in ‘cutting-up’ the work of other people’s brains,

and exposing to the best advantage any little defect he may discover.

Then, again, in the same work, in describing the scene of a shipwreck,

the author makes use of the following words: ‘Quantities of chips, and

pieces of wood, and bits of _iron, were floating about_.’ The words in

italics are underlined in pencil by some incredulous reader, who could

not quite appreciate the joke, and took this method of calling the next

reader’s attention to it. The words might have been a mere slip of the

pen; but, as they stand underlined in the book, it is impossible to

overlook them now.

A little farther on in the same work, an unmarried gentleman is

supposed to have made his will, bequeathing all his property to

friends settled in the colonies; and his relatives at his decease are

disputing the same, when this paragraph occurs, and is supposed to be

uttered by a _lawyer_: ‘But had he lived to marry Lady A——, he would

surely have cancelled this will!’ Probably had the gentleman lived, he

would have done so; but our pencil-critic shows that such an act would

have been altogether unnecessary, by writing against the paragraph:

‘The act of marrying would have rendered it null.’ This is strictly

and legally correct; and as the words are supposed to be spoken by a

lawyer, it shows that the opinion of these gentlemen is not always to

be implicitly relied upon, especially when they air them in a novel.

To turn now to the criticising of situations, we find our amateur

critic is quite as hard upon them as he is upon the characters, and

will not allow a novelist to make use of situations which it is

scarcely probable would happen in real life. A noble lord is forced

through some miraculous circumstances which would rival the adventures

narrated in the _Arabian Nights_, to associate with poachers, who are

well known to the police; and after some time has elapsed, he at length

regains the property, which has wrongfully been kept from him by his

uncle; and to celebrate this happy event, he gives what is styled in

the novel a ‘levée,’ and invites thereto the whole country-side,

_including the poachers_, and also the police of the town. Our critic

could not quite appreciate the novelty of this situation, and therefore

pencils in the margin: ‘Is it likely the poachers would have ventured

there?’ After studying the facts of the case, and reducing the subject

to practical life, which is evidently the meaning of our critic,

and also bearing in mind that the police and poachers were in the

same room, and that several of the latter were ‘wanted’ for various

offences, we may take that bit of criticism as sound.

If our voluntary critics will read novels, they must expect novel

things; but as far as our observation goes, this is the very thing

they criticise most. They will not allow a young and delicate lady to

elope with a handsome Captain on a stormy night with nothing to protect

her from the weather but a flimsy ball-dress, under any consideration

whatever; but feelingly suggest in the margin that the gentleman should

either offer her his ulster or procure an umbrella; a piece of advice

for which I am sure the young lady’s parents would devoutly thank them,

if they only had the pleasure of their acquaintance.

We might easily add to these examples; but the above is sufficient to

show that the novelist who sits down to write a work of fiction merely

for the sake of airing an opinion, or to please a certain person,

neither caring in what language he expresses himself nor how absurd the

book may be, may be sure of a warm reception when his work falls into

the hands of the circulating-library critics.

BY MEAD AND STREAM.

CHAPTER IX.—SLANDER’S SHAFT.

They were still at breakfast when the postman arrived, and Madge was

surprised to find amongst the letters two from the Manor. Both were

addressed in Miss Hadleigh’s large angular writing: one was for her

uncle, the other for herself.

As Madge had long conducted her uncle’s correspondence, she attended

to his letters first; but remembering that still unexplained quarrel,

misunderstanding, or whatever it was, between him and Mr Hadleigh, she

discreetly kept the letter from Ringsford back till she had disposed

of the others. These were all on business, and of a most satisfactory

nature: good prices for grain, good prices for sheep and cattle, and

reports of a deficient harvest in America, whilst that of Willowmere

was excellent. Uncle Dick was in capital humour, and disposed to be on

good terms with everybody. It is wonderful how prosperous all the world

looks when our own affairs are thriving; and how merciful we can be in

our judgment as to the cause of our neighbour’s failure.

Then Madge—sly Madge—opened the Ringsford letter, and read a formal

invitation to dinner at the Manor a fortnight hence, on the eve of Mr

Philip Hadleigh’s departure.

‘You will go, of course, uncle?’ said Madge, looking up with a coaxing

smile.—‘And you will break through your rule of not going to parties

for once, aunt? You know we may not see Philip for a long, long time.’

Aunt Hessy smiled, and looked inquiringly at her husband. Dick Crawshay

was not a man to bear malice; but it was evident that he did not relish

this invitation. He was not frowning, but his face was not quite so

cheerful as it had been a moment before.

‘I don’t know,’ he said, rising. ‘I hate these sort of things at

Ringsford. They’ve always a lot of people that don’t know anything’

(about farming and cattle, he meant); ‘and when I’m there, I always

feel as uncomfortable as a bull in a china-shop that didn’t want to

break the crockery. Certain, I have spoken to some young fools that

knew all about betting lists, but not one that knew the points of a

horse—except Wrentham. They only want me there because they want you,

Madge; and if it wasn’t for you, I’d say no straight off.’

‘But you mustn’t do that, uncle; at least wait till we see what is in

my letter.’

‘You can tell me about it when I come in. That new reaping-machine

ain’t doing what I expected of it, and I want to give it a fair trial

under my own eyes.’

With that he went out, preceded by the dogs; for they had made for the

door the moment their master rose to his feet, and as it opened, almost

tumbled over each other in their haste to be first afield.

‘I hope he will go,’ said Madge thoughtfully; adding, after a pause:

‘We must try to persuade him, aunt.’

‘Why are you so anxious about this, child? I never knew you to be very

eager to go to Ringsford yourself.’

‘Because I am about to disappoint Mr Hadleigh in a matter which he

considers of great importance.’

Then she read the strange letter she had received from him, and

Dame Crawshay was surprised almost as much as Madge herself by the

earnestness of the appeal it contained. She was silent for several

minutes, evidently occupied by some serious reflections. At length:

‘Thou knowest how I love the lad; but that does not blind me to his

faults—nay, it need not startle thee to hear me say he has faults: we

all have our share of them. Perhaps it is lucky for thee that what

seems to me Philip’s worst fault is that he has the impulsive way his

father speaks about.’

‘But all his impulses are good-natured ones.’

‘I do not doubt it; but that makes it the more needful he should have

some experience of the world’s ways before tying himself and you down

to a hard-and-fast line. Nothing but experience will ever teach us that

the hard-and-fast line of life is the easiest in the end. There’s a

heap of truth in what Mr Hadleigh says about Philip, though he doesn’t

seem to me to have found the surest way of keeping him right.’

‘What would you advise, then?’ was the eager question.

‘Thou must settle this matter for thyself, Madge; but I will tell thee

that there is one thing Mr Hadleigh is quite wrong about.’

‘What is that?’

‘In saying that Mr Shield would try to keep Philip from _you_.’

The emphasis on the last word and the curious, half-sad, half-pleased

smile which accompanied it, caused Madge to ask wonderingly:

‘Did you know Mr Shield?’

‘Ay, long ago, before he went abroad.’

‘Have you never seen him since?’

‘Once—only once, and that was a sad time, although we were not five

minutes together. He heard only a bit of the truth: he would not stay

to hear it all, and I daresay he has had many a sorry hour for it

since.’

She ceased, and leaning back on her chair, lapsed into a dream of

sorrowful memories. Madge did not like to disturb her, for she was

suddenly amazed by the suspicion that once upon a time Austin Shield

had been Aunt Hessy’s lover.

But the active dame was not given to wool-gathering, and looking up

quickly, she caught the expression of her niece, and guessed its

meaning.

‘Nay, thou art mistaken,’ she said, shaking her head, and that curious

smile again appeared on her face; ‘there has only been one man that

was ever more than another to me, and that’s thy uncle.... But I’ll

tell thee a secret, child; it can do no harm. Hast forgotten what I was

telling thee and Philip in the garden yesterday?’

‘About the two lovers? O no.’

‘Well, the man was Mr Austin Shield, and the girl was thy mother.’

‘My mother!’ was the ejaculation of the astounded Madge.

‘Yes. It was a silly business on her part, poor soul; but she was

cruelly deceived. She had been told lies about him; and there were so

many things which made them look like truth, that she believed them.’

‘What could she have been told that could make her forget him?’

‘She never did forget him—she never could forget him; and she told the

man she married so. What she was told was, that Austin had forgotten

her, and taken somebody else to wife. At the same time no letters came

from him. She waited for months, watching every post; but there was

never a sign from him. She fretted and fretted; and father fretted to

see her getting so bad on account of a man who was not worth thinking

about. He had broken his word, and that was enough to make father turn

his back on him for ever.’

‘But how did my mother come to—to marry so soon?’

‘She was kind of persuaded into it by father, and by her wish to

please him. He was a kind good man; but he was strict in his notions

of things. He considered that it was sinful of her to be thinking of a

man who had done her such wrong. Then Mr Heathcote was a great friend

of father’s—he was a deacon in our chapel—and he asked sister to be his

wife. He was quiet and well-to-do then; and father was on his side,

though he was twenty years older than your mother. Father thought that

his age would make him the better guide for one who was so weak as to

keep on mourning for a base man. He was never done speaking about the

happy home that was offered her, and in every prayer asked the Lord to

turn her heart into the right path. At last she consented: but she

told Mr Heathcote everything; and he said he was content, and that

he would try his best to make her content too, by-and-by. Father was

glad—and that did cheer poor sister a bit, for she was fond of father.

So she married.’

‘And then?’

Only the subdued voice, the wide, startled eyes, indicated the

agitation of the daughter, who was listening to this piteous story of a

mother’s suffering.

‘And then there came a letter from Austin Shield, and he came himself

almost as soon as the letter. He had been “up country,” as he called

it, for more than a year, and he had been lucky beyond all his

expectations. But there were no posts in the wild places he had been

staying at. He had written to warn us not to expect to hear of him

for many months; but the vessel that was carrying that message home

to us—eh, deary, what sorrow it would have saved us—was wrecked in a

fog on some big rock near the Scilly Isles; and although a-many of the

mail-bags were fished up out of the sea, the one with sister’s letter

in it was never found.’

‘What did my poor mother do?’

‘She sat and shivered and moaned; but she could not speak. I saw him

when he came, and told him that he must not see her any more, for she

was married. I wasn’t able to tell him how it happened, for the sight

of his face feared me so. It was like white stone, and his eyes were

black. Before I could get my tongue again, he gave me a look that I can

never forget, and walked away.... I found out where he was, some time

afterwards, and wrote telling him all about it. He answered me, saying:

“Thank you. I understand. God bless you all.” We never had another word

direct from him; but we often heard about him; and some time after your

mother went to rest, we learned that he had really got married; and the

news pleased me vastly, for it helped me to think that maybe he was

comfortable and resigned at last. I hope he is; but he has no family,

and his sending for Philip looks as if he wants somebody to console

him.’

‘But who was it spread the lies about him at the first?’

‘Ah, that we never knew. It was cleverly done; the story was in

everybody’s mouth; but nobody could tell where it had come from.’

The feelings of Madge as she listened to her aunt were of a complicated

nature: there was the painful sympathy evoked by the knowledge that it

was her own mother who had been so wickedly deceived; then it seemed as

if the events related had happened to some one else; and again there

was a mysterious sense of awe as she recognised how closely the past

and the present were linked together. Philip was the near relation of

the man her mother had loved, and was to be parted from her on his

account for an indefinite period.

Who could tell what Fate might lie in this coincidence?

She pitied the lovers; and her indignation rose to passion at thought

of the slanderers who had caused them so much misery. Then came

confused thoughts about her father: he, too, must have loved as well

as Mr Shield; and he had been generous.

Gentle hands were laid upon her bowed head, and looking up, she met the

tender eyes of Aunt Hessy.

‘I have troubled you, child; but I have told you this so that you may

understand why I cannot counsel you to bid Philip stay or go.’

A soft light beamed on Madge’s face; a sweet thought filled her heart.

She would bid Philip go to help and comfort the man her mother had

loved.

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