ANSWERS

=Bill Adams=: Never tried the first.

=Samuel Hopkins Adams=: The third. Because I am prone to find myself

hampered by self-consciousness in the first person, though not

invariably.

=Paul L. Anderson=: The third; you can swing a wider loop. It is

admitted, though, that the first person gives a more intense effect, and

I sometimes use it.

=William Ashley Anderson=: It is immaterial, and depends upon the nature

of a story. But I think a story is most naturally told in the first

person. This also insures the action being continuous. It also adds an

illusion of authenticity.

=H. C. Bailey=: In the third person. The first person, apart from

technical difficulties, seems to me to encourage diffuse writing on the

insignificant.

=Edwin Balmer=: I occasionally write in the first person. It is a more

limited way of writing than in the third person because, among other

reasons, continued use of the first person in many stories of different

character certainly breaks down the sense of illusion.

I think a man should never write in the first person as a woman and vice

versa.

=Ralph Henry Barbour=: I prefer writing in the first person. Nearly

every writer does, and will say so if he's truthful. I write in the

third person because editors believe, correctly or incorrectly, that

readers prefer it. I prefer the first person because it is easier.

=Frederick Orin Bartlett=: I prefer the first person because it offers a

more direct way of telling a story. The public, I think, prefers the

third person because this form permits a wider range of sympathies.

=Nalbro Bartley=: I prefer the third person for writing because it is

more impersonal and one can get into the swing of the story in a more

intense way.

=Konrad Bercovici=: No particular preference.

=Ferdinand Berthoud=: Third--for many reasons. One is that I know

editors and the public prefer stories in the third person, and another

is that it is easier and more convincing. A third reason is that I've

never tried the first person.

=H. H. Birney, Jr.=: Depends entirely on the particular story. First

person is ordinarily easier, but your hero can be made much more heroic

if some one else is talking about him.

=Farnham Bishop=: In the third. When I try telling a story in the first

person it makes me too self-conscious and gums up the action.

=Algernon Blackwood=: Third person. The use of the first person tends to

remind a writer of himself, whereas fiction should mean an escape from

one's tiresome self--a projection into others.

=Max Bonter=: I seem to have no preference in this regard.

=Katharine Holland Brown=: The first person. Easier. Besides, I like to

be in it myself.

=F. R. Buckley=: Used to prefer first person. Now equally at home in

both. Natural instinct when telling a pleasant lie is to have yourself

in it. Later--third person gives you greater scope. The "I" doesn't have

to be carried from place to place to report things.

=Prosper Buranelli=: I would rather be hanged than write in the first

person. A fellow who can't thrust himself forward without the use of "I"

doesn't know even how to brag.

=Thompson Burtis=: I have no choice. Humorous stuff I like to write

first person, because of the latitude in language. Ordinary stuff, on

second thought, I believe I would rather write third person, the reason

being that I can then draw the character that "I" would represent more

fully. Another great plot advantage is that by not tying one's self down

to a first-person story he can present the mental reactions and

innermost thoughts of both hero and villain. This adds a great deal to

the opportunities of a story. The first person story is limited to the

scenes and thoughts of "I" alone.

=George M. A. Cain=: I think I rather enjoy first-person writing best.

But that is a matter I regard as entirely to be determined by the nature

of the story. The first person carries a degree of conviction not so

easily obtained in the third person. I really think it has no effect in

the matter of the reader's ability to put himself in the hero's place.

He reads it as "I." That is just as near him as "he." Obviously the

first person can not be used (1) where the suspense concerns the life of

the hero, who could not have died and told the tale; (2) where the

mental processes of more than one character must be brought in, since

the personal introduction of the writer himself precludes knowledge of

the thoughts of others; (3) where the hero's acts are such that to tell

them would be boastful.

My own rule as to persons is this: Where the character fitted to my

general aim in the story is essentially too weak to hold the sympathy of

the reader, I use the first person, even at the cost of straining to

show others' mental processes by actions. I can not escape the

conviction that there is a man-to-man-ness about the first person which

commands sympathy. I should give up trying to write a story with a hero

guilty of any real weakness, if I found it could not be done in the

first person.

For a story in which a striking character is introduced as hero, I

particularly like the use of the first person for a secondary character

in the position of a witness. It affords easier conviction of truth as

in its use for the hero. It provides instant opportunity to present the

hero in attractive light. I should use this method to the limits of its

possibilities but for the fact that it is the one which makes it most

difficult for the reader to put himself in the hero's place. That fact

relegates its use with me to stories of characters so strongly marked as

to require the reader's friendship for, rather than his

self-identification with, the hero.

Which indicates the place I give the third person by elimination. It

becomes, after all, the one of principal use interfering with no manner

of suspense, allowing for presentation of the reasoning of any or all

characters of the story, commanding sufficient sympathy for any

character from dead neutral up, if at all properly handled.

=Robert V. Carr=: According to mood.

=George L. Catton=: Immaterial. All depends on the requirements of the

particular story. In the first person there is less explanatory matter

needed; that's the only difference.

=Robert W. Chambers=: It makes no difference.

=Roy P. Churchill=: I would rather be an observer than an actor, if I am

to tell the story.

=Carl Clausen=: Third. First limits my view-point.

=Courtney Ryley Cooper=: It depends entirely on the story. I use the

third person mostly, but there are times in stories of great sympathy

when it is impossible to use anything but the first. Third person

preferred, however.

=Arthur Crabb=: It depends on the theme to be developed; generally I

should say in the third person. By that I mean that the author does not

appear at all. A writer can do a whole lot more if he keeps himself out

of it and then if he restricts himself to what he could see and know

himself.

=Mary Stewart Cutting=: I prefer writing in the third person, though in

two or three of my favorite stories I have written in the first person.

Usually the third person gives you more scope.

=Elmer Davis=: Depends on the story. Obviously in an "I" story there are

things you can't tell the reader without introducing the old expedient

of the messenger or something like it. But it has its merits if the plot

permits.

=William Harper Dean=: I seldom write a finished story in the first

person. But (and here's something) did you ever write a story in the

first person and then go through it and change it to the third person

and inspect the result? I can write a much better story in the first

person--a more spontaneous one than in the third. For in the first

person I say what I would say under certain circumstances in the plot,

feel what I would feel--whereas writing "He thought--," makes me stop

and think--now what _would_ he think? And right there you are in danger

of inventing instead of interpreting as you should be doing.

=Harris Dickson=: I began writing in the first person. Don't know why I

have abandoned it. I do believe, however, a tale in the first person,

well told, takes a stronger hold on the imagination. Perhaps because,

like every child who asks "Daddy, is it true?" we seem to get an

atmosphere of verity from the fellow who says, "This happened to me."

For the same reason the teller of anecdotes prefers to lay them on

himself, or his friend.

=Captain Dingle=: First person, though it seems unpopular, so I don't

indulge often. This way I fall into my characters' boots easier.

=Louis Dodge=: I like to write in the third person chiefly for

convenience. The first person must go in at a door; the third may go in

at a keyhole or through a wall.

=Phyllis Duganne=: I much prefer writing in the third person. The first

person seems to have so many limitations; if the first person is your

hero or heroine, there are so many things he can not tell about himself

that have to be told in other ways. I don't like to read stories in the

first person, as a rule; I don't find them so convincing. This "I"

person is always getting in the way of the story. First-person stories

are easier to write; I mean that they flow more easily, though I think

they are harder to make convincing. I think people usually resent this

"I" who thinks he knows so much, and talks at such great length. It

makes a story out of it--an unreal thing--while a story in the third

person has no one, ever present, to remind you that it's only a tale and

may not be true anyway.

=J. Allan Dunn=: I enjoy writing in the first person but do not believe

it attracts the majority. It smacks of conceit, for one thing, but if

one writes of a character in which one can project one's own thoughts,

character, successes, failures, hopes and despair, the intimacy is a

stimulus. It has limitations because the hero, if he sees everything,

condenses the narrative. And he is only a translator for the other

characters. So I prefer the third for sheer craftsmanship. To write a

first person narrative through the eyes of a third person, who may be a

minor character but a shrewd observer, is one of my preferences.

=Walter A. Dyer=: It all depends. I usually write in the third person,

because in that form a character can be handled more freely, but I have

written stories in a frame of mind that demanded only the first-person

treatment.

=Walter Prichard Eaton=: It is easier to write in the first, because the

process of thinking "I" identifies you with the character. Also, it is

more dangerous, because the same process identifies the character with

you. (This is really quite wise and intelligent.)

=E. O. Foster=: I prefer writing in the third person so as to have as

little of my own personality enter into the story as is possible.

=Arthur O. Friel=: No preference. Depends on the story. Some are told

more naturally in first person; others in third.

=J. P. Giesy=: The first, I think, since in it I may, as it were,

vicariously live the part exactly as the actor lives his part for the

time being and consequently enter very nearly into the thing. However, I

very frequently choose the third because of the very nature of the

subject in hand.

=George Gilbert=: Some stories can only be told in the first; some only

in the third person. The story itself decides the person, not the

author. If the story is one that can only be told best by one person's

having knowledge of all the incidents, the first person becomes

permissible, not mandatory. If the story is such that no one person

could have had knowledge of all the details without recourse to the

receipt of letters, telephone calls, confidences given in such a way as

to interrupt the thread of the tale, the story calls for other treatment

than first-person telling. The limitation on the first-person story,

when the narrator is the hero, is this: It is plain that the narrator

lived to tell the story, so no matter what peril he gets into during the

tale, the reader must know he survived, unless it is a tale of a

manuscript found buried or in family archives, etc. The

first-person-narrator story is most effective when the narrator is not

the hero, yet some fine tales have been written that violate this rule

of mine. In any event, the author must look into his story at the

beginning and decide this point. Another author might have an entirely

different idea on it, and succeed at a given tale where I would fail

using my rule.

=Kenneth Gilbert=: While writing in the first person is the easiest way

to tell a story, I prefer the third for the freedom of description it

permits. Many stories, however, would fall flat if not written in the

first person.

=Holworthy Hall=: Third person. Generally more convincing and less

conceited.

=Richard Matthews Hallet=: I have written both ways. The first person

makes an easier narrative, but makes it harder to develop a plot. And I

find, curiously, by asking the question a great many times and from

being criticized myself, that there is among a great body of readers an

odd aversion to a story in the first person. I've never heard even the

semblance of a reason for it, but no matter, it exists and will

certainly work against the popularity of a story in the first person.

There is also a considerable group of persons who profess unwillingness

to read a story with the faintest touch of dialect in it; in spite of

this dialect stories thrive. So do some stories written in the first

person.

=William H. Hamby=: Really prefer writing in the first person, but

rarely do.

=A. Judson Hanna=: This is a matter governed by circumstances. By far

the majority of my published stories have been written in the first

person. As a rule, I prefer to write them so because it allows so much

freedom of expression and creates an informality between writer and

reader that appeals to the reader. It is the personal touch.

=Joseph Mills Hanson=: I prefer to write in the first person because it

gives me a sense of more intimate grasp of the motions of the characters

and a more vivid realization of the situations. Nevertheless, I have

written more often in the third person; perhaps because the former

seems, also, egotistic.

=E. E. Harriman=: In the third person, because writing in the first

gives a feeling of indecent exposure of the intimate corners in my soul.

=Nevil G. Henshaw=: In short stories I've no particular preference,

although I think it a trifle easier to use the first person. In long

work I find the first person much the harder, as then a vast number of

facts and ideas must be presented from the single point of view. I also

find the transition more difficult.

=Joseph Hergesheimer=: Third, for obvious reasons.

=Robert Hichens=: I prefer writing in the third person. I like to tell a

story, not to tell about myself. As a rule, I dislike a novel written in

the first person and I very much dislike a story told in the form of

letters. I scarcely know why.

=R. de S. Horn=: I generally prefer writing in the third person. In this

case I can go anywhere, describe anything. I am omnipotent; I can see

through walls, read minds, experience emotions unlimited. In the first

person I am narrowly proscribed. I can only represent my own emotions

and what I can know through the medium of my five senses. The only

advantage of the first person is that stories thus told have an air of

veracity, of plausibility, that is particularly desirable at times.

Furthermore, they can the more strongly enlist the reader's emotions and

sympathies.

=Clyde B. Hough=: I prefer to write in the third person. It gives me

more scope.

=Emerson Hough=: I don't know--as it chances.

=A. S. M. Hutchinson=: In the third. I feel my own individuality would

get in the way if I wrote in the first.

=Inez Haynes Irwin=: I think writing in the first person is infinitely

easier than writing in the third because inevitably one _dramatizes_

more when writing in the third person and _describes_ more when writing

in the first person. Dramatizing is more difficult than describing.

Perhaps that is why I prefer the third person--the other seems too easy.

Yet there's an ease about first-person writing, an informality.... It

goes swiftly, breezily, directly.

=Will Irwin=: When I began, I liked best to write in the first person.

Now I prefer the third. Why, I can not say exactly. Probably because

your interests increase with years, and when writing in the first person

you have limited yourself to the interests, experiences and observations

of but one character.

=Frederick J. Jackson=: Third person. Simpler, usually more effective,

is easier for me. Have written only two stories in first person.

=Mary Johnston=: Depends on what you're doing.

=John Joseph=: I very much prefer writing in the third person, but when

it comes to an old-time western story--well, I have lived these things

and the detached third person doesn't seem to belong, nor conventional

English. I have heard these people talk every day for too many years,

have heard too many camp-fire tales, I suppose, and the more a writer

polishes his story the less real it seems.

=Lloyd Kohler=: The third person. I don't like that eternal "I." Still,

I have read many authors who could handle that very same "I"

convincingly. More power to them!

=Harold Lamb=: The first person is a little more fun. Because it gives a

freer hand in description and more play to emotion.

=Sinclair Lewis=: Third, less (obviously) egotistical.

=Hapsburg Liebe=: I prefer writing in the third person because in the

first I can't keep the perpendicular pronoun sufficiently down.

=E. P. Lyle, Jr.=: In the first person. Comes easier, less formal, your

reader not a reader but seemingly a friend on the other side of the

hearth. I'd recommend it to a beginner. Also tell him to forget he is

writing literature, and to keep in attitude of writing a letter.

=Rose Macaulay=: Third. Because I dislike reading stories told in the

first.

=Crittenden Marriott=: Third. In the first the quotation marks are such

a bother.

=Homer I. McEldowney=: The third person. It is easier, for me, and, I

think, more effective.

=Ray McGillivray=: Fifty-fifty with me. First person is easier. The

third person style has been responsible for most of the best literature

ever written. Not all, but most.

=Helen Topping Miller=: I have never written anything in the first

person--it intrudes the personal idea and hampers my view-point. I

prefer to see my characters impersonally.

=Thomas Samson Miller=: The first person always seemed to me the more

plausible, for in the third person the author often relates actions and

happenings that occurred thousands of miles apart at the same time. I

can never forget that _some one is telling me the story_ and that some

one couldn't be--say in the heroine's bedroom, if he is a man author.

=Anne Shannon Monroe=: It is easier to write in the first person--more

easily made real; but I prefer the third. The third is less personal,

more the spectator's account of the whole. Writing in the first, there

are many things you can't tell, because you, as one of the characters,

can't know it all; as a spectator--a sort of on-looking creator--you can

know it all.

=L. M. Montgomery=: Personally I prefer writing in the first person,

because it then seems easier to _live_ my story as I write it. Since

editors seem to have a prejudice against this, I often write a story in

the first person and then rewrite it, shifting it to the third. As a

reader, I enjoy a story written in the first person far more than any

other kind. It gives me more of a sense of reality--of actually knowing

the people in it. The author does not seem to _come between_ me and the

characters as much as in the third-person stories. Wilkie Collins's

_Woman in White_ is a fine example of the use of the first person. It

could not have been half so effective had he told it in the third. And

_Jane Eyre_ simply couldn't have been written in any but the first.

=Frederick Moore=: I like to write in the third person, because then I'm

a god--all seeing, all knowing, all controlling--so far as the

characters are concerned.

=Talbot Mundy=: On the whole, I think, the third person. It is easier to

keep things concrete, and to keep off the paper the mental actions and

reactions of Number One.

=Kathleen Norris=: A story in the first person is limited because the

teller of it is presumably the hero, and consequently he has to _imply_

his own merit, beauty or intelligence. More than that, he must be

present at every scene related and the plot must move in spite of him,

as it were. This sort of story was enormously popular in Dickens' day,

but it does not fit the new American type of novel.

=Anne O'Hagan=: I don't know. It's easier in the first person, but I

don't think the results are apt to be so clear cut.

=Grant Overton=: I have, as it happens, never written anything except

certain passages in the first person. I think I have no preference. It

is all a matter of technical advantage in presentation.

=Hugh Pendexter=: I have no preference and use both first and third

person as the story demands. I have started more than one story in the

first person and found it impossible; perhaps because of plot demands. A

story that walked lamely in the third person behaved well when told in

the first. If I desire to show a young man, neither Whig nor Tory, but

leaning toward the latter and his gradual turning to the former, the

first person affords for me the only vehicle. If plot is accentuated,

the third person becomes the vehicle.

=Clay Perry=: I prefer writing in the third person rather than in the

first because, personally, I have always been more or less

self-conscious and I have the same feeling in writing. Just to use the

word "I" as now is hard work for me.

=Michael J. Phillips=: I despise first-person writing. I quarrel with

the prig who is telling the story. He is either too wise or too

ignorant. He either knows too much or doesn't know enough. If he is an

actor in the story who really is deserving of a lot of credit and

admiration, I can neither give him credit nor admire him. If he values

himself as truly as a swashing, swaggering fellow who would be likable

if some one else wrote of him, he becomes a hopeless braggart. And if he

is modest, he does not glow sufficiently bright and I think: "Well, how

did this fathead ever stumble into this delightfully distinguished,

daring, lawbreaking group of real folks?"

=E. S. Pladwell=: Third person. The "I" becomes monotonous in print.

Nobody can avoid it when the first person is used.

=Lucia Mead Priest=: I do not prefer the first person, in fact I do not

approve of it, save for a certain type of writing. But when I write in

the third I find myself growing stiff and formal. I am less direct,

inclining to consciousness and pomposity. I don't know why.

=Eugene Manlove Rhodes=: Either, according to circumstances.

=Frank C. Robertson=: Depends on the nature of the story. As a rule I

think the third person gives the writer more latitude for the

development of character and material.

=Ruth Sawyer=: The third person. Unless the story needs the direct

confession of an autobiographical treatment, I think the intrusion of

the first person as eye-witness or teller of the tale makes for

complexity rather than simplicity. Personally it has the same effect on

me that my neighbor makes when she says, "My sister's husband told me

that his friend, etc."

=Chester L. Saxby=: I like writing in the first person for the pleasure

of dwelling intimately with the hopes and fears of the character. I like

writing in the third person for that strong, austere

impersonalness--like a laboratory investigation. All in the mood, I

presume. We're not always the same. It explains the rejection of much

good stuff by editorial offices. I think, on the whole, I prefer the

first-person story. It's the story of me then; I'm putting forth effort

as the story proceeds; I feel the reality more. But it's a difficult

metier.

=Barry Scobee=: I prefer writing in the first- or third-person according

to the story. No other reason.

=R. T. M. Scott=: I prefer the third person because editors prefer the

third person and I have grown accustomed to the way of least resistance

so far as editors are concerned. Besides, that "I" is hard to use

genuinely in reference to all kinds of characters.

=Robert Simpson=: I prefer writing in the third person because it is,

constructionally speaking, the simplest.

=Arthur D. Howden Smith=: First is easier. It's more convincing.

=Theodore Seixas Solomons=: I prefer, for celebrity (it's _easier_ and

quicker) and humanness, writing in the first person. Its handicaps are,

of course, that the omniscience of the third person is wanting and it is

impossible to describe the characters and action in terms of the

author's best philosophy when the character telling the story is almost

always unable to achieve such philosophy. I therefore use the first

person only when the action is such as not to require the peculiar

advantages of third-person narration. But I much prefer the first

person, because of its naturalness and humanness, when the nature of the

story permits its use.

=Raymond S. Spears=: Some of my best work is under assumed name in first

person--an adventure of the imagination.

=Norman Springer=: I like the first person best. I seem to be able to

get under the skins of the characters better.

=Julian Street=: The third person is less easy but is generally the

method of the best writers. The first person is (with some exceptions)

the refuge of the tyro. As a writer learns his job, he is likely to

write more and more in the third person--especially if he is a person of

taste.

=T. S. Stribling=: I have no preference as to the person. I find the

first person good for rapidity of relation and the elision of endless

detail; the third person is best for expansiveness.

=Booth Tarkington=: Of course writing in the first person is infinitely

easier. (That's one reason it should rarely be done.) The reason that

writing in the first person is easier is this: The writing is supposed

to be done by a fictitious person; the author, therefore, does not feel

so responsible, _himself_, for the "quality of his prose."

=W. C. Tuttle=: A great majority of my stories have been written in the

first person. In fact, I began writing that way because I could tell a

story better than I could write one, and because, in the first person,

there are fewer threads to carry. Characterizations are easier to depict

in the third person, I believe, except in a humorous story, when I would

rather describe a character in the first person.

=Lucille Van Slyke=: Third person. Because it seems to me that not one

person in a thousand can successfully keep up the illusion of being

another person very long. First person writing is a sort of lie as soon

as it leaves personal experience behind, and most of us do not have a

great many thrilling experiences personally. (I happen to adore writing

in second person and do a great deal of that for sheer amusement. I

wouldn't be so silly as to submit it to any editor, for I am aware of

the well-known aversion to it--but, admitting that it presupposes a

highly imaginative reader, think what fun it is for both writer and

reader. I have been awfully interested in Louise Dutton's stories about

an adolescent girl in which she uses second person a great deal but

lapses to third--or indirect discourse--so often that she much breaks

her continuity which makes me feel as though I were jumping in and out

of a Punch and Judy box--I love the minutes I'm being Judy but get

rather mixed when I am trying to be Punch!)

=Atreus von Schrader=: I prefer writing in the third person, because I

believe the use of the first person distracts, nearly always, from the

illusion of reality. Nine times out of ten the first person is used

because it is easier, and for no other reason.

=T. Von Ziekursch=: Have no choice.

=Henry Kitchell Webster=: I seldom write in the first person, but there

is a certain kind of story where the mechanical advantages it offers are

great enough to more than compensate for its limitations.

=G. A. Wells=: I prefer writing in the first person, though seldom do so

because I am not enough the craftsman to subdue my egotism. I like first

person better because I get closer to the story. It is the personal

equation. When one writes first person he goes on the stage and acts; no

matter how large or small his part, he is in the show. In the third

person he sits with the audience and merely records what happens. His

readers have the same advantages he has and he can't show a superior

air. I often write a story in the first person, and when finished strike

out the big "I's" and substitute the name of the principal character.

That way I get direct contact with the story.

=William Wells=: Third. Too darned bashful; seems like bragging.

=Ben Ames Williams=: I prefer writing in the manner best calculated to

produce the effect I desire. This is a technical question, to be

answered differently in different cases.

=Honore Willsie=: I prefer third-person writing, for, while it is more

difficult than first-person writing, it is less apt to have an

egotistical effect on the reader.

=H. C. Witwer=: I prefer writing in the third person, but have written

two hundred fifty short stories in the first, because my readers seem to

prefer that. I find writing in the first person much easier than any

other.

=William Almon Wolff=: The third. There is, for me, a certain

artificiality about first person writing; a certain seizing upon illicit

aids. It's great fun to write in the first person, and, sometimes, of

course, it's the right thing to do. But not often, I think. You dig

deeper when you're interpreting life through your description of people

seen objectively.

=Edgar Young=: Writing in the first person used to come natural to me,

due to the fact that for years as a traveler I told many tales in this

fashion to amuse friends and was an adept at it. At present I prefer

third person work.

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