CHAPTER VI

CRITICISM

Few of us pass a day without answering such questions as, "What do you

think of the Hudson car?" or, "How did Kreisler's playing strike you?"

or, "What is your opinion of the work of Thackeray or Alice Brown or

Booth Tarkington?" or, "Do you like the X disc harrow?" When we are

among intimate friends we give our opinions, based on our personal

reaction to the subject of inquiry or on our impartial estimate of it

as an automobile, a musical performance, a collection of books, or an

agricultural machine. Many of us give a large space in our conversation

to such estimates on all conceivable subjects. And, for purposes of

insignificant conversation, there is no reason why we should not.

Accused of making "Criticism" in the formal sense, however, many of us

should recoil with terrified denial. But that is exactly what we are

doing, whether we praise or blame, accept or reject, so long as we base

our opinion on sincere personal or sound principles, we criticize. _For

criticism is the attempt to estimate the worth of something--object

or idea--either abstractly on a basis of principles and relations, or

personally on the basis of our reactions to the subject of criticism._

That is, we may, for example, criticize the roads of New York State on

the basis of what a road is for and how well these roads serve their

purpose, or we may take as basis the inspiration, the keen ecstasy that

we feel as we skim over the smooth boulevard. So long as our notions of

good roads are sound, so long as we react sensibly, with balance, to the

smooth rounding way, we make good criticism, we judge the worth of the

subject of criticism and find it either good or bad.

It is to be noted that this criticism is something more than mere

comment, than mere off-hand remarks. The old saying is, "Anybody

can say _something_ about _anything_!" An off-hand utterance _may_

tell the truth; we cannot be sure that it will. Only when we have a

well-considered basis of either principle or personal feeling can we be

at all certain of our opinions.

Now the range in which our opinions, our criticisms, may be expressed,

is as wide as human thought and accomplishment. We sometimes think of

criticism as being confined to literature and art, and speak of literary

criticism, musical criticism, dramatic criticism, and art criticism, as

if these were all. The term criticism has actually been so restricted

in common practice that unless otherwise noted it is taken for granted

as applying to these subjects. But criticism is much more comprehensive

than such restriction indicates: any object or subject is capable

of criticism. Just as we might arrive at the conclusion that Booth

Tarkington's stories about Penrod are either good or bad, so we might

say that a make of piano, a type of bridle, a new kind of fertilizer, a

method of bookkeeping, a recipe for angel cake is good or is sufficient

or is valueless. We might have--in fact we do have--Engineering

Criticism, Carpenter Criticism, Needlework Criticism, Poultry Criticism,

and as many kinds as there are classes of subjects. In this treatment

we shall use the term in this broad sense and include all subjects in

our scope. Of course we are to remember that the criticism becomes of

more value as the subject of criticism is of more moment: criticism of

the drama is nobler, perhaps, than criticism of egg beaters and picture

hooks. We must also remember that the less high orders of criticism are

neither useless nor undesirable but often most helpful.

Requirements demanded of the Critic

Since, then, the brand of the critic is on us all, since we practice the

habit, consciously or not, most of the time, and since the range is

so wide, no reason exists why we should be terrified at the thought of

writing criticism, of making formal estimate. Certain requirements are

demanded, to be sure; not every one can dive into the sea of criticism

without making an awkward splash and receiving a reddening smart. But

these requirements are in no way beyond the possibility of acquiring by

any one who will set himself to the task.

_a._ _Ability to analyze_

In the first place, a critic must have the power to analyze. We have

seen that analysis consists in breaking a subject into its components,

in discovering of what it is made. This is the first great necessity

in criticizing. You wish, for example, to make a criticism of a new

rifle for your friends. It is not enough that you should with gusto

enunciate, "It's just great!" "Oh, it's fine, fine and dandy!" "Golly

but it's a good one!" Your friends are likely to ask "Why?" or to say,

"The gentleman doth protest too much!" If, on the other hand, you remark

that the rifle is admirable because of its sights, its general accuracy,

its cartridge chamber, its comparative freedom from recoil, then you

will be giving your friends definite and useful criticism, for you will

have analyzed the virtue of the object into its components. Now this

necessity for analysis exists in criticism of literature and art just

as in criticism of rifles. Before you can properly estimate the value

of a novel or a play you must divide the impression it makes into the

various heads, such as emotional power, convincingness in the message

of the book or play, truth to life, and whatever heading you may think

necessary. Until you do this your impressions, your judgments will of

necessity be vague and dim in their outlines, and though they may seem

to be comprehensive, will be found actually to be insufficient to give

your reader or listener a firm notion of the subject--he will have no

nucleus of thought round which his total estimate will center. As soon,

however, as you analyze, and make definite, so soon he will receive

real enlightenment. In the following account of the work of James

Russell Lowell at the Court of Saint James we find at once this careful

breaking of the subject into parts which can be treated definitely. Had

the writer merely uttered general impressions of the diplomacy of our

ambassador we who read should have been comparatively unhelped.

To those who hold the semi-barbarous notion that one of the duties of

a foreign minister is to convey a defiant attitude toward the people

to whom he is accredited--that he should stick to his post, to use the

popular phrase, "with his back up," and keep the world that he lives in

constantly in mind that his countrymen are rough, untamable, and above

all things quarrelsome, Mr. Lowell has not seemed a success. But to them

we must observe, that they know so little of the subject of diplomacy

that their opinion is of no sort of consequence. The aim of diplomacy

is not to provoke war, but to keep the peace; it is not to beget

irritation, or to keep it alive, but to produce and maintain a pacific

temper; not to make disputes hard, but easy, to settle; not to magnify

differences of interest or feeling, but to make them seem small; not to

win by threats, but by persuasion; not to promote mutual ignorance, but

mutual comprehension--to be, in short, the representative of a Christian

nation, and not of a savage tribe.

No foreign minister, it is safe to say, has ever done these things so

successfully in the same space of time as Mr. Lowell. If it be a service

to the United States to inspire Englishmen with respect such as they

have never felt before for American wit and eloquence and knowledge, and

thus for American civilization itself, nobody has rendered this service

so effectually as he has done. They are familiar almost _ad nauseam_

with the material growth of the United States, with the immense strides

which the country has made and is making in the production of things to

eat, drink, and wear. What they know least of, and had had most doubts

about, is American progress in acquiring those gifts and graces which

are commonly supposed to be the inheritance of countries that have

left the ruder beginnings of national life far behind, and have had

centuries of leisure for art, literature, and science. Well, Mr. Lowell

has disabused them. As far as blood and training go, there is no more

genuine American than he. He went to England as pure a product of the

American soil as ever landed there, and yet he at once showed English

scholars that in the field of English letters they had nothing to teach

him. In that higher political philosophy which all Englishmen are now

questioning so anxiously, he has spoken not only as a master, but

almost as an oracle. In the lighter but still more difficult arts, too,

which make social gatherings delightful and exciting to intellectual

men, in the talk which stimulates strong brains and loosens eloquent

tongues, he has really reduced the best-trained and most loquacious

London diners-out to abashed silence. In fact, he has, in captivating

English society,--harder, perhaps, to cultivate, considering the vast

variety of culture it contains, than any other society in the world,--in

making every Englishman who met him wish that he were an Englishman too,

performed a feat such as no diplomatist, we believe, ever performed

before.[67]

[67] Gustav Pollak: _Fifty Years of American Idealism_. Houghton

Mifflin Company. By courtesy of _The Nation_.

_b._ _Knowledge of the General Field_

Besides the ability to analyze the critic must have some knowledge

of the general field in which the subject lies. For a man who has

never thought about musical form to attempt criticism of a sonata is

foolish--he can at best merely comment. It is this fact that vitiates

much of the cracker-barrel criticism of the country store--subjects are

estimated about which the critic is largely ignorant. When an uneducated

person makes shrewd comment, as he often does, on a play, he will

usually be found to have criticized a character such as he has known or

the outcome of a situation the like of which he is familiar with rather

than the play as a whole. Now perfect criticism would demand perfect

knowledge, but since that is impossible, a good working knowledge will

suffice, the wider the better. Knowledge of the general principles of

piano playing will enable a critic to estimate, in the large, the work

of a performer; he cannot criticize minutely until he has added more

detailed knowledge to his mental equipment.

_c._ _Common Sense_

However much knowledge and ability to analyze a critic may have, he is a

will-o'-the-wisp unless he have common sense and balance. Since a critic

is in many ways a guide, he must guard as sacred his ability to see the

straight road and to refuse the appeal of by-paths, however attractive.

As critic, you must not be overawed by a name, be it of artist or

manufacturer, nor allow much crying of wares in the street to swerve you

from your fixed determination to judge and estimate only on the worth of

the subject _as you find it_. This is far from meaning that the critic

should give no weight to the opinions of others; you should always do

that; but, having examined the subject, and knowing your opinions, you

should then speak the truth as you see it. Your one final desire should

be to go to the heart of the matter accurately, and then to state this

clearly. And just as you do not blindly accept a great name, so do not

be wheedled by gloss and appearance, but keep a steady aim for the truth.

_d._ _Open-mindedness_

Finally, this balance, this passion for the truth, will lead the critic

to strive always for open-mindedness. "I would rather be a man of

disinterested taste and liberal feeling," wrote Hazlitt, "to see and

acknowledge truth and beauty wherever I found it, than a man of greater

and more original genius, to hate, envy, and deny all excellence but my

own...." And he was right when he said it: the willingness to accept a

new idea or object if it is worthy, whether it go against the critic's

personal desires or not, is one of the great qualities that he will find

indispensable. "I never heard of such a thing!" is not a sufficient

remark to condemn the thing. In fact, almost a sufficient answer to such

an exclamation would be, "Well, what of it?" or, "'T is time you did."

Methods of Criticism

Armed with open-mindedness, then, with balance and common sense, with

knowledge of the field, and with ability to analyze, you are ready to

begin. What method shall you pursue? Though no absolutely sharp line

can be drawn between kinds of criticism, we may treat of three that are

fairly distinct: the historical method, the method by standards, and

the appreciative. In most criticism we are likely to find more than one

method employed, often all three. You need not confine yourself to one

any more than a carpenter need refuse to use any but one tool, but for

purposes of comprehension and presentation we shall keep the three here

fairly distinct. We shall examine the three now, briefly, in the order

named.

_a._ _The Historical Method_

Suppose that you are asked to criticize one of Cooper's novels, say

_The Last of the Mohicans_. You find in it red men idealized out of the

actual, red men such as presumably never existed. You may, then, in

disgust throw the book down and damn it with the remark, "The man does

not tell the truth!" But you will not thereby have disposed of Cooper.

Much better it would be to ask, How came this man to write thus? When

did he write? For whom? How did men at that time regard the Indian? In

answering these questions you will relate Cooper's novel to the time in

which it was written, you will see that before that time the Indian was

regarded with unmixed fear, as too often since with contempt, and that

at only that time could he have been idealized as Cooper treats him. You

would relate the novel to the whole movement of Sentimentalism, which

thought that it believed the savage more noble than civilized man, and

you would then, and only then, get a proper perspective. Your original

judgment, that Cooper's Indians are not accurate portraits of their

kind, would not be modified; for the whole work, however, you would have

a new attitude.

In the same way, asked for an opinion of the old-style bicycle with

enormous front wheel and tiny trailer, you would not summarily reply, "I

prefer a chainless model of my own day," but would discover the place

that the old style occupied in the total development of the bicycle,

would look at it as related to the preceding absence of any bicycle,

and would see that, though it may to-day be useless, in its time it was

remarkable. Likewise you will discover that the old three-legged milking

stool has been in immemorial use in rude byres and stables, since three

points--the ends of the legs--always make a firm plane, which four

points do not necessarily do. And one hundred years hence, when a critic

comes to judge the nature faking of the early twentieth century, he will

relate this sentimental movement to the times in which it appeared, and,

though he may well finally be disgusted, he will understand what the

thing was and meant, how it came about, what causes produced it.

Illustration of the value of this method is found in the following

historical account of the American business man. To a European this man

sometimes is inexplicable--until he reads some illuminating setting

forth of the facts as here.

As long as the economic opportunities of American life

consisted chiefly in the appropriation and improvement of

uncultivated land, the average energetic man had no difficulty

in obtaining his fair share of the increasing American economic

product; but the time came when such opportunities, although still

important, were dwarfed by other opportunities, incident to the

development of a more mature economic system. These opportunities

which were, of course, connected with the manufacturing,

industrial, and technical development of the country, demanded

under American conditions a very special type of man--the man

who would bring to his task not merely energy, but unscrupulous

devotion, originality, daring, and in the course of time a large

fund of instructive experience. The early American industrial

conditions differed from those of Europe in that they were fluid,

and as a result of this instability, extremely precarious. Rapid

changes in markets, business methods, and industrial machinery

made it difficult to build up a safe business. A manufacturer or

a merchant could not secure his business salvation, as in Europe,

merely by the adoption of sound conservative methods. The American

business man had greater opportunities and a freer hand than his

European prototype; but he was too beset by more severe, more

unscrupulous, and more dangerous competition. The industrious and

thrifty farmer could be fairly sure of a modest competence, due

partly to his own efforts, and partly to the increased value of his

land in a more populous community; but the business man had no such

security. In his case it was war to the knife. He was presented

with choice between aggressive daring business operations, and

financial insignificance or ruin.

No doubt this situation was due as much to the temper of the

American business man as to his economic environment. The business

man in seeking to realize his ambitions and purposes was checked

neither by government control nor social custom. He had nothing

to do and nothing to consider except his own business advancement

and success. He was eager, strenuous, and impatient. He liked the

excitement and risk of large operations. The capital at his command

was generally too small for the safe and conservative operation of

his business; and he was consequently obliged to be adventurous,

or else to be left behind in the race. He might well be earning

enormous profits one year and be skirting bankruptcy the next.

Under such a stress conservatism and caution were suicidal. It

was the instinct of self-preservation, as well as the spirit of

business adventure, which kept him constantly seeking for larger

markets, improved methods, or for some peculiar means of getting

ahead of his competitors. He had no fortress behind which he could

hide and enjoy his conquests. Surrounded as he was by aggressive

enemies and undefended frontiers, his best means of security lay

in a policy of constant innovation and expansion. Moreover, even

after he had obtained the bulwark of sufficient capital and more

settled industrial surroundings, he was under no temptation to quit

and enjoy the spoils of his conquests. The social, intellectual,

or even the more vulgar pleasures, afforded by leisure and wealth,

could bring him no thrill which was anything like as intense as

that derived from the exercise of his business ability and power.

He could not conquer except by virtue of a strong, tenacious,

adventurous, and unscrupulous will; and after he had conquered,

this will had him in complete possession. He had nothing to do but

to play the game to the end--even though his additional profits

were of no living use to him.[68]

[68] Herbert Croly: _The Promise of American Life_. By courtesy of the

publishers, The Macmillan Company, New York City.

In criticizing literature and art this method is often difficult, for we

must take into account race, geography, and other conditions. We must

see that only in New England, of all the sections of the United States,

could Hawthorne have written, that Tolstoi could not have written in

Illinois as he did in Russia, that Norse Sagas could not have appeared

among tropical peoples, that among the French alone, perhaps, could

Racine have come to literary power as he did. And in examining the work

of two writers who treat the same subject in general, as Miss Jewett

and Mrs. Freeman treat New England life, we shall find the influence

of ancestry and environment and training largely determining, on the

one hand the quaint fine sunshine, on the other hand the stern hard

Puritanism. We shall also have to learn what incidents in an author's

life have helped to determine his point of view, how early poverty, or

sorrow, or a great experience of protracted agony or joy have made him

sympathetic, or how aristocratic breeding and the early introduction

into exclusive circles have made him naturally unresponsive to some of

the squalor, the sadness of lowly life. We shall perceive that the early

removal of Scott to the country began his intense love for Scottish

scenery and history, that the bitter laughter of Byron's mother turned

part of the poet's nature to gall. In other words, when we are dealing

with the exquisitely fine products of impassioned thought we have a

difficult task because so many influences mold these thoughts, so many

lines of procedure are determined by conditions outside the particular

author or artist, all of which must be considered if we wish our work

to be really of value. The following illustration shows in brief space

the attempt to link a movement in literature to the times in which it

appeared, to show that it is naturally a product of the general feeling

of the times.

Yet, after all, it is not the theories and formulæ of its

followers that differentiate the "new poetry"; the insistence upon

certain externalities, the abandonment of familiar traditions,

even the new spirit of the language employed, none of these are

more than symptoms of the deep inner mood which lies at the roots

of the whole tendency. This tendency is in line with the basic

trend of our times, and represents the attempt in verse, as in many

other branches of expression, to cast off a certain passionate

illusionment and approach the universe as it actually is--the

universe of science, perhaps, rather than that of the thrilled

human heart. This is the kernel of the entire new movement, as has

already been clearly pointed out by several writers on the subject.

Everywhere in the new verse we are conscious of a certain

objective quality, not the objective quality of _The Divine Comedy_

or _Faust_, which is achieved by the symbolic representation in

external forms of inner spiritual verities, but an often stark

objectivity accomplished by the elimination of the feeling human

medium, the often complete absence of any personal reaction. We

are shown countless objects and movements, and these objects and

movements are glimpsed panoramically from the point of view of

outline, color, and interrelation, as through the senses merely;

the transfiguring lens of the soul is seldom interposed or felt

to be present. To the "new poet" the city street presents itself

in terms of a series of sense-impressions vividly realized, a

succession of apparently aimless and kaleidoscopic pageantries

stripped of their human significance and symbolic import. They have

ceased to be signs of a less outward reality, they have become

that reality itself--reality apprehended from a singly sensuous

standpoint untainted by any of the human emotions of triumph

or sorrow, pity or adoration. Love is thus frequently bared of

its glamour and death of its peculiar majesty, which may now be

regarded as deceitful and fatuous projections of the credulous

soul, and not to be tolerated by the sophisticated mood of the

new and scientific poet, for it is exactly with these beautiful

"sentimentalities" that the analytic mind of science is not

concerned.[69]

[69] From _Scribner's Magazine_, September, 1917. By courtesy of the

publishers, Charles Scribner's Sons, New York City. Copyright,

1917.

This method seeks, then, to place a work, whether of art or science or

industry, in its place in the whole course of development of such ideas.

It examines causes such as commercial demands, general prosperity, war,

and only after this examination gives the work its estimate of value.

Now this method may seem uninteresting, dry, dull. Not always does it

escape this blame. For it is inevitably impersonal, it looks at the

thing perhaps coldly--at least without passion. But in so doing, and in

considering the precedents and surroundings of the object of criticism,

it largely escapes the superficiality of personal whim, and it avoids

silly reaction to unaccustomed things. Much of our empty criticism of

customs in dress and manners of architecture such as that of Southern

California, of other religions such as those of the Chinese and the

Hindoos, would be either done away or somewhat modified if we used this

method. One reason, perhaps, why the Goths destroyed the beautiful

art works of Rome was the fact that they had not the critical spirit,

did not relate these works to their development and race. Of course

there were other reasons. By linking the object of criticism to the

race as a whole, by seeing how and why it became created, the critic

is largely broadened and the reader is kept from superficiality.

Moreover, when this method is not too abstractly pursued, it gives to

things, after all, a human meaning, for it links them to humanity. That

it may be misleading in literature and art is obvious, for a creation

may be accounted for in an attractive way as the result of certain

forces that had their beginnings in sense and wisdom, and so be made

to seem admirable, whereas it really has little worth on a basis of

lasting usefulness and significance. But, properly and thoroughly used,

this method, even though it gives us an account of a work rather than

finally settling its value, scatters away the vague mists of superficial

generalization and drives deeply into causes and results.

_b._ _The Method by Standards_

As the historical method is generally impersonal, objective, so is the

method of criticizing by standards. In using this method we try to

determine whether the object of criticism fulfills the demands of its

type, whether its quality is high or low. For example, we thus judge

a tennis court as to its firm footing, its softness, its retention of

court lines, its position as regards the sun. In all these qualities

an ideal tennis court would be satisfactory; the question is, is this

one. So a headache powder should relieve pain without injuring with evil

drugs; if this one does, we shall not condemn it. If the rocks in a

landscape painting look like those which the heroic tenor in grand opera

hurls aside as so much "puffed wheat," we must condemn the artist, for

rocks should look solid. An evangelist should have certain qualities

of piety and reverence, and should accomplish certain lasting results;

we shall judge Billy Sunday, for example, according to whether he does

or does not fulfill these demands. Likewise a lyric poem should have

certain qualities of freshness, grace, passion, by which we rate any

given lyric.

In fact, we ask, in any given case, does this work do what such a

thing is supposed to do, does it have the qualities that such a thing

is supposed to have? And on our answer will depend our judgment. This

is the kind of criticism that business men use constantly; they rate

a cash system or a form of order blank or an arrangement of counters

in a store on the basis of the presence or absence of the qualities

that distinguish an ideal system, blank, arrangement. In the following

example we have a combination of the historical and the standards

methods, finally accounting for and judging the value of the common

kinds of cargo steamers.

A trip round any busy seaport will show the reader, if he has

not noticed it already, that there are many different types of the

ordinary cargo steamer. The feature which displays the difference

most noticeably is the arrangement of the structures on the deck,

and it may be reasonably asked why there are these varieties, and

how it is that a common type has not come to be agreed upon.

The answer to that question is that the differences are not

merely arbitrary, but are due to a variety of influences, and it

will be interesting to look briefly at these, as the reader will

then be able, the next time he sees a cargo steamer, to understand

something of the ideas underlying its design.

The early steamers had "flush" decks, which means that the

deck ran from end to end without any structures of considerable

size upon it; a light bridge was provided, supported upon slender

uprights, for "lookouts" purposes, and that was all. On the face of

it this seems a very simple and admirable arrangement. It had many

disadvantages, however, as we shall see.

In the first place, it permitted a wave to come on board at

the bow and sweep right along the deck, often doing great damage.

This was mitigated somewhat by building the ships with "shear,"

that is, with a slope upwards fore and aft, so as to make the ends

taller than the middle. That, however, was not sufficient, so ships

were built with an upper deck, so that the bow should be high

enough to cut through the waves instead of allowing the water to

come on board. Owing, however, to the method by which the tonnage

of a ship is reckoned, as will be explained later, that had the

effect of adding largely to the tonnage _on which dues have to be

paid_ without materially increasing the carrying capacity of the

ship.

The difficulty was therefore got over in this way. The bow

was raised and covered in, forming what is known as a "top-gallant

forecastle," which not only had the effect of keeping the water

off the deck, but provided better accommodation for the crew as

well. That did not provide, however, against a wave overtaking the

ship from the rear and coming on board just where the steering

wheel was, so a hood or covering over the wheel became usual,

called the "poop." Nor did either of these sufficiently protect

that very important point, the engine-room. For it needs but a

moment's thought to see that there must be openings in the deck

over the engines and boilers, and if a volume of water should

get down these, it might extinguish the fires and leave the

ship helpless, absolutely at the mercy of the waves. The light

navigating bridge was therefore developed into a substantial

structure the whole width of the ship, surrounding and protecting

the engine-and-boiler-room openings, and incidentally providing

accommodation for the officers.

Ships of this type answered very well indeed, for if a wave

of exceptional size should manage to get over the forecastle, the

water fell into the "well" or space between the forecastle and

bridge-house, and then simply ran overboard, so that the after part

of the ship was kept dry.

Then troubles arose with the loading. The engines, of course,

need to be in the center, for they represent considerable weight,

which, if not balanced, will cause one end of the ship to float

too high in the water. Thus the hold of the ship is divided by the

engine-room into two approximately equal parts, but out of the

after-hold must be taken the space occupied by the tunnel through

which the propeller shaft runs, from the engine to the screw. Thus

the capacity of the after-hold becomes less than the forward one,

and if both are filled with a homogeneous cargo such as grain (and,

as we shall see presently, such a cargo must always entirely fill

the hold), the forward part of the ship would float high in the

water. The trouble could not be rectified by placing the engines

further forward, for then the ship would not float properly when

light.

Shipowners overcame this trouble, however, by raising the

whole of the "quarter-deck"--the part of the deck, that is, which

lies behind the after end of the "bridge-house"--and by that means

they made the after-hold deeper than the other. Thus the commonest

type of all, the "raised quarter-deck, well-decker," came into

existence, a type of which many examples are to be seen on the

sea.[70]

[70] Thomas W. Corbin: _Engineering of To-day_. By courtesy of the

publishers, Seeley, Service & Co., London.

In the following paragraphs Professor Thomas R. Lounsbury of Yale

University criticizes the use of final e in English words. You will note

that he uses a combination of the historical method and the method by

standards.

There seems to be something peculiarly attractive to our

race in the letter _e_. Especially is this so when it serves no

useful purpose. Adding it at random to syllables, and especially to

final syllables, is supposed to give a peculiar old-time flavor to

the spelling. For this belief there is, to some extent, historic

justification. The letter still remains appended to scores of

words in which it has lost the pronunciation once belonging to

it. Again, it has been added to scores of others apparently to

amplify their proportions. We have in our speech a large number

of monosyllables. As a sort of consolation to their shrunken

condition an _e_ has been appended to them, apparently to make

them present a more portly appearance. The fancy we all have for

this vowel not only recalls the wit but suggests the wisdom of

Charles Lamb's exquisite pun upon Pope's line that our race is

largely made up of "the mob of gentlemen who write with ease." The

belief, in truth, seems to prevail that the final _e_ is somehow

indicative of aristocracy. In proper names, particularly, it is

felt to impart a certain distinction to the appellation, lifting it

far above the grade of low associations. It has the crowning merit

of uselessness; and in the eyes of many uselessness seems to be

regarded as the distinguishing mark of any noble class, either of

things or persons. Still, I have so much respect for the rights of

property that it seems to me every man ought to have the privilege

of spelling and pronouncing his own name in any way he pleases.

The prevalence of this letter at the end of words was largely

due to the fact that the vowels, _a_, _o_, and _u_ of the original

endings were all weakened to it in the break-up of the language

which followed the Norman conquest. Hence, it became the common

ending of the noun. The further disappearance of the consonant

_n_ from the original termination of the infinitive extended this

usage to the verb. The Anglo-Saxon _tellan_ and _helpan_, for

instance, after being weakened to _tellen_ and _helpen_, became

_telle_ and _helpe_. Words not of native origin fell under the

influence of this general tendency and adopted an _e_ to which they

were in no wise entitled. Even Anglo-Saxon nouns which ended in a

consonant--such, for instance, as _hors_ and _mús_ and _stán_--are

now represented by _horse_ and _mouse_ and _stone_. The truth is,

that when the memory of the earlier form of the word had passed

away an _e_ was liable to be appended, on any pretext, to the end

of it. The feeling still continues to affect us all. Our eyes have

become so accustomed to seeing a final e which no one thinks of

pronouncing, that the word is felt by some to have a certain sort

of incompleteness if it be not found there. In no other way can

I account for Lord Macaulay's spelling the comparatively modern

verb _edit_ as _edite_. This seems to be a distinction peculiar to

himself.

* * * * *

In the chaos which came over the spelling in consequence of

the uncertainty attached to the sound of the vowels, the final _e_

was seized upon as a sort of help to indicate the pronunciation.

Its office in this respect was announced as early as the end of

the sixteenth century; at least, then it was announced that an

unsounded _e_ at the end of a word indicated that the preceding

vowel was long. This, it need hardly be said, is a crude and

unscientific method of denoting pronunciation. It is a process

purely empirical. It is far removed from the ideal that no letter

should exist in a word which is not sounded. Yet, to some extent,

this artificial makeshift has been, and still is, a working

principle. Were it carried out consistently it might be regarded

as, on the whole, serving a useful purpose. But here, as well as

elsewhere, the trail of the orthographic serpent is discoverable.

Here as elsewhere it renders impossible the full enjoyment of

even this slight section of an orthographic paradise. Here, as

elsewhere, manifests itself the besetting sin of our spelling,

that there is no consistency in the application of any principle.

Some of our most common verbs violate the rule (if rule it can

be called), such as _have_, _give_, _love_, _are_, _done_. In

these the preceding vowel is not long but short. There are further

large classes of words ending in _ile_, _ine_, _ite_, _ive_,

where this final _e_ would serve to mislead the inquirer as to

the pronunciation had he no other source of information than the

spelling.

Still, in the case of some of these words, the operation of

this principle has had, and is doubtless continuing to have, a

certain influence. Take, for instance, the word _hostile_. In the

early nineteenth century, if we can trust the most authoritative

dictionaries, the word was regularly pronounced in England as if

spelled hós-t[)i]l. So it is to-day in America. But the influence

of the final _e_ has tended to prolong, in the former country, the

sound of the preceding _i_. Consequently, a usual, and probably the

usual, pronunciation there is hos-t[=i]le. We can see a similar

tendency manifested in the case of several other adjectives. A

disposition to give many of them the long diphthongal sound of the

_i_ is frequently displayed in the pronunciation of such words as

_agile_, _docile_, _ductile_, _futile_, _infantile_. Save in the

case of the last one of this list, the dictionaries once gave the

_ile_ nothing but the sound of _il_; now they usually authorize

both ways.

Were the principle here indicated fully carried out,

pronunciations now condemned as vulgarisms would displace those

now considered correct. In accordance with it, for instance,

_engine_, as it is spelled, should strictly have the _i_ long.

One of the devices employed by Dickens in _Martin Chuzzlewit_ to

ridicule what he pretended was the American speech was to have

the characters pronounce _genuine_ as _gen-u-[=i]ne_, prejudice

as _prej-u-d[=i]ce_, _active_ and _native_ as _ac-t[=y]ve_ and

_na-t[=i]ve_. Doubtless he heard such pronunciations from some

men. Yet, in these instances, the speaker was carried along by the

same tendency which in cultivated English has succeeded in turning

the pronunciation _hos-t[)i]l_ into _hos-t[=i]le_. Were there

any binding force in the application of the rule which imparts

to the termination _e_ the power of lengthening the preceding

vowel, no one would have any business to give to it in the final

syllable of the words just specified any other sound than that of

"long i." The pronunciations ridiculed by Dickens would be the

only pronunciations allowable. Accordingly, the way to make the

rule universally effective is to drop this final _e_ when it does

not produce such an effect. If _genuine_ is to be pronounced

_gen-u-[)i]n_, so it ought to be spelled.[71]

[71] Thomas R. Lounsbury: _English Spelling and Spelling Reform_. By

courtesy of the publishers, Harper & Brothers, New York City.

Copyright.

Now it is evident that unless the critic's standards are fair and

sensible, unless they are known to be sound and essential, his criticism

is likely to be valueless. If my ideas of the qualities of ideal tennis

courts are erratic or queer, my judgment of the individual court will

be untrustworthy. Your first duty as critic, then, is to look at your

standards. In judging such things as ice cream freezers, motorcycles,

filing systems, fertilizers, rapid-firing guns, and other useful

devices, you will find no great difficulty in choosing your standards.

When you come to literature and the arts, however, you find a difficult

task. For who shall say exactly what a lyric poem shall do? Or who

shall bound the field of landscape painting? No sooner does Reynolds

begin painting, after he has formulated the laws of his art and stated

them with decision, than he violates them all. No sooner did musicians

settle just what a sonata must be than a greater musician appeared who

transcended the narrower form. Moreover, in the field of literature

and the arts we often find great difficulty in surmounting the cast of

our individual minds; we like certain types and are unconsciously led

to condemn all others. The great critic rises superior to his peculiar

likes and prejudices, but most of us are hindered by them. One great

benefit to be derived from writing this particular kind of criticism

is in gaining humility--humility at the greatness of some of the works

of the past, before which, when we really look at them, we are moved

to stand uncovered, and humility at the lack of real analysis that we

have made before we attempt the criticism, and finally humility at the

tremendous effort we must make to write criticism at all worthy of the

subjects. But the difficulty of writing such criticism well should make

you exert yourself to the utmost to acquire skill before you attempt

this form.

This method, like the historical, makes against superficiality, for

it necessitates real knowledge of the class to which the object of

criticism belongs, the purposes of the class, its bearings, and then

a sure survey of the individual itself. And in forcing the critic to

examine his standards to determine their fairness and soundness it makes

against hasty judgment. Properly used, this method should result in

something like finality of judgment.

_c._ _The Appreciative Method_

There come occasions when you are not primarily interested in the

historical significance of the subject of criticism, and when you are

indifferent to objective standards, when, in fact, you are almost wholly

interested in the _individual_ before you, in what it is or in the

effect it has on you. You rather _feel_ toward it than care to make a

cold analysis of it; you are moved by it, are conscious of a personal

reaction to it. In such cases you will make use of what is called

appreciative criticism. This method consists in interpreting, often for

one who does not know the work, the value of the work, the good things

in it, either as they appear to one who studies or as they affect the

critic. After reading a new book, for example, or attending a concert,

or driving a wonderfully smooth running automobile, or watching the team

work in a football game, you are primarily interested in the phenomena

shown as they are in their picturesque individuality or in your own

emotional reaction to them. In the following example George Gissing

makes an appreciative criticism of English cooking, not by coldly

tracing the historical influences that have made this cooking what it

is, nor by subjecting it to certain fixed standards to which admirable

cooking should attain, but rather by telling us what English cooking is

and by giving us the flavor of his own emotional delight in it.

As so often when my praise has gone forth for things English,

I find myself tormented by an after-thought--the reflection that I

have praised a time gone by. Now, in this matter of English meat.

A newspaper tells me that English beef is non-existent; that the

best meat bearing that name has merely been fed up in England for a

short time before killing. Well, well; we can only be thankful that

the quality is still so good. Real English mutton still exists, I

suppose. It would surprise me if any other country could produce

the shoulder I had yesterday.

Who knows? Perhaps even our own cookery has seen its best

days. It is a lamentable fact that the multitude of English people

nowadays never taste roasted meat; what they call by that name

is baked in the oven--a totally different thing, though it may,

I admit, be inferior only to the right roast. Oh, the sirloin of

old times, the sirloin which I can remember, thirty or forty years

ago! That was English, and no mistake, and all the history of

civilization could show nothing on the tables of mankind to equal

it. To clap that joint into a steamy oven would have been a crime

unpardonable by gods and men. Have I not with my own eyes seen it

turning, turning on the spit? The scent it diffused was in itself a

cure for dyspepsia.

It is a very long time since I tasted a slice of boiled beef;

I have a suspicion that the thing is becoming rare. In a household

such as mine, the "round" is impracticable; of necessity it must

be large, altogether too large for our requirements. But what

exquisite memories does my mind preserve! The very coloring of a

round, how rich it is, yet how delicate, and how subtly varied! The

odor is totally different from that of roast beef, and yet it is

beef incontestable. Hot, of course, with carrots, it is a dish for

a king; but cold it is nobler. Oh, the thin broad slice, with just

its fringe of consistent fat!

We are sparing of condiments, but such as we use are the best

that man has invented. And we know _how_ to use them. I have heard

an impatient innovator scoff at the English law on the subject of

mustard, and demand why, in the nature of things, mustard should

not be eaten with mutton. The answer is very simple; this law has

been made by the English palate--which is impeccable. I maintain

it is impeccable. Your educated Englishman is an infallible

guide to all that relates to the table. "The man of superior

intellect," said Tennyson--justifying his love of boiled beef and

new potatoes--"knows what is good to eat"; and I would extend it to

all civilized natives of our country. We are content with nothing

but the finest savours, the truest combinations; our wealth, and

happy natural circumstances, have allowed us an education of the

palate of which our natural aptitude was worthy. Think, by the bye,

of those new potatoes, just mentioned. Our cook, when dressing

them, puts into the saucepan a sprig of mint. This is genius. No

otherwise could the flavour of the vegetable be so perfectly, yet

so delicately, emphasized. The mint is there, and we know it; yet

our palate knows only the young potato.[72]

[72] Gissing: _The Private Papers of Henry Ryecroft_, "Winter." By

permission of the publishers, E. P. Dutton & Co., New York.

Appreciative criticism may on the one hand approach criticism by

standards, since, for example, to praise a pianist for melting his

tones one into another implies that such melting is a standard. It may,

again, consist largely in telling what the thing _is_, as to say that

the Progressive Party was one that looked forward rather than backward,

planned reforms for the people, insisted on clean politics, etc. It

may, in the third place, consist in giving a transcript of the writer's

feelings as he is in the presence of the subject of criticism, as one

might picture the reaction of inspiration to a view from a mountain

peak, or express his elation in listening to a famous singer, or show

his wild enthusiasm as he watches his team slowly fight its way over

the goal line. In all three of these cases the criticism answers the

question, "What does this work seem to be, what do I find in it, and

wherein do I think it is good?" That is appreciative criticism.

Now since you can adequately estimate in this way only when you are

aware of the qualities of the subject, the first requirement for success

in this kind of criticism is keen and intelligent sympathy with the

work, an open-minded, sensible hospitality to ideas and things. If I am

quite unmoved by music, I cannot make reliable appreciative criticism of

it. If I have no reaction to the beauty of a big pumping station, when

asked for criticism of it, I shall perforce be silent. If my mind is

closed to new ideas, I can never "appreciate" a new theory in science,

in sociology, in art or in religion.

In the next place, I must refrain from morbid personal effusion. Certain

of our sentimental magazines have published, at odd times, extremely

personal rhapsodies about symphonies and poems. The listener has been

"wafted away," has heard the birdies sing, the brooks come purling over

their stones, has seen the moon come swimming through the clouds--but

the reader of such criticism need not be too harshly censured if he

mildly wonders whether the critic ought not to consult a physician.

Sometimes this fault occurs through the endeavor to make the criticism

attractive, one of the strong demands of the appreciative kind. Since

the personal note exists throughout, and since you wish to make your

reader attracted to the object that you criticize, your writing should

be as pleasing as is legitimately possible. Allow yourself full rein to

express the beauties of your subject with all the large personal warmth

of which you are capable, with as neatly turned expression as you can

make, always remembering to keep your balance, to avoid morbidness in

any form.

It is in this way that you will give to your criticism one of its

most valued qualities, appealing humanness. Less final, perhaps, in

some ways, than the historical method or the method by standards, the

appreciative is likely to be of more immediate value in re-creating the

work for your reader, in giving him a real interpretation of it. And

this method, like the other two, fights against superficiality. Such a

silly saying--silly in criticism--as "I like it but I don't know why"

can have no place here. One may well remember the answer attributed to

the artist Whistler, when the gushing woman remarked, "I don't know

anything about art but I know what I like!" "So, Madam, does a cow!" If

you guard against the morbid or sentimental effusive style, and really

tell, honestly and attractively, what you find good in the subject, your

criticism is likely to be of value. Note that in the selection which

follows, though the author feels strongly toward his subject, he does

not fall, at any time, into gushing remarks that make a reader feel

sheepish, but rather keeps a really wholesome tone throughout.

To-day I have read _The Tempest_. It is perhaps the play that

I love best, and, because I seem to myself to know it so well, I

commonly pass it over in opening the book. Yet, as always in regard

to Shakespeare, having read it once more, I find that my knowledge

was less complete than I supposed. So it would be, live as long as

one might; so it would ever be, whilst one had the strength to turn

the pages and a mind left to read them.

I like to believe that this was the poet's last work, that he

wrote it in his home in Stratford, walking day by day in the fields

which had taught his boyhood to love rural England. It is ripe

fruit of the supreme imagination, perfect craft of the master hand.

For a man whose life business it has been to study the English

tongue, what joy can there be to equal that of marking the happy

ease wherewith Shakespeare surpasses, in mere command of words,

every achievement of these even, who, apart from him, are great?

I could fancy that, in _The Tempest_, he wrought with a peculiar

consciousness of this power, smiling as the word of inimitable

felicity, the phrase of incomparable cadence, was whispered to him

by the Ariel that was his genius. He seems to sport with language,

to amuse himself with new discovery of its resources. From king to

beggar, men of every rank and of every order of mind have spoken

with his lips; he has uttered the lore of fairyland; now it pleases

him to create a being neither man nor fairy, a something between

brute and human nature, and to endow its purposes with words. Those

words, how they smack of the warm and spawning earth, of the life

of creatures that cannot rise above the soil! We do not think of it

enough; we stint our wonder because we fall short in appreciation.

A miracle is worked before us, and we scarce give heed; it has

become familiar to our minds as any other of nature's marvels,

which we rarely pause to reflect upon.

_The Tempest_ contains the noblest meditative passage in all

the plays; that which embodies Shakespeare's final view of life,

and is the inevitable quotation of all who would sum the teachings

of philosophy. It contains his most exquisite lyrics, his tenderest

love passages, and one glimpse of fairyland which--I cannot but

think--outshines the utmost beauty of _A Midsummer Night's Dream_;

Prospero's farewell to the "elves of hills, brooks, standing lakes

and groves." Again a miracle; these are things which cannot be

staled by repetition. Come to them often as you will, they are

ever fresh as though new minted from the brain of the poet. Being

perfect, they can never droop under that satiety which arises from

the perception of fault; their virtue can never be so entirely

savoured as to leave no pungency of gusto for the next approach.

Among the many reasons which make me glad to have been born in

England, one of the first is that I read Shakespeare in my mother

tongue. If I try to imagine myself as one who cannot know him face

to face, who hears him only speaking from afar, and that in accents

which only through the laboring intelligence can touch the living

soul, there comes upon me a sense of chill discouragement, of

dreary deprivation. I am wont to think that I can read Homer, and,

assuredly, if any man enjoys him, it is I; but can I for a moment

dream that Homer yields me all his music, that his word is to me as

to him who walked by the Hellenic shore when Hellas lived? I know

that there reaches me across the vast of time no more than a faint

and broken echo; I know that it would be fainter still, but for its

blending with those memories of youth which are as a glimmer of the

world's primeval glory. Let every land have joy of its poet; for

the poet is the land itself, all its greatness and its sweetness,

all that incommunicable heritage for which men live and die. As

I close the book, love and reverence possess me. Whether does my

full heart turn to the great Enchanter, or to the Island upon

which he has laid his spell? I know not. I cannot think of them

apart. In the love and reverence awakened by this voice of voices,

Shakespeare and England are but one.[73]

[73] George Gissing: _The Private Papers of Henry Ryecroft_, "Summer."

By permission of the publishers, E. P. Dutton & Co., New York.

Practical Helps

We have said that criticism of literature and art seems to be more

difficult than criticism of machines and buildings and commercial

systems. It is. Literature and art, as being the expression of the high

thought of the human heart about the world, man, and his relations to

the world, demand in a critic who attempts to estimate them at least

some underlying philosophy of life, at least some insight into the

affairs of the human soul. And such philosophy, such insight, does not

come without being eagerly sought or without much thinking. I can soon

tell whether a force pump is efficient; I may for some time pause before

I estimate a picture or a lyric poem. For the field of the pump is small

and definite, its relations are simple, whereas the lyric is intimately

bound up with the whole of life.

But we need not, therefore, despair of writing criticism of literature

and art. The more sensible thing is to simplify our task. This we can

do, in large measure, by asking the famous three questions of Coleridge:

First, What did the author intend to do? second, How did he accomplish

his purpose, well or ill? third, Was the purpose worth striving for?

These three questions, sensibly considered and properly answered, will

make a by no means paltry criticism.

Still the problem remains, how shall I write this criticism, whatever

method I may be pursuing. Certain points of advice may be of use.

In the first place, be sure of your attitude, that it is fair and

sincere, that it is honest and as unprejudiced as possible. Then do

not browbeat your reader into accepting this attitude. Allow him the

right to make final decision, and, moreover, credit him with the right

to some brains--he will be thus much happier. In the second place, be

sure that you know what you are talking about, that you are sure of the

_facts_, whether you treat literature or machinery or government or

rotation of crops. Without proper facts you can never reach a sound

conclusion. And "keep your eye on the object." In no kind of writing

is there a greater tendency to fritter off into related subjects which

are still not exactly the one in hand. Be sure that you write about the

subject, then, and not about some other. In the next place, since many

remarks apply equally well to a host of subjects, as, for instance,

that it is "efficient" or "inspiring," aim first of all, before you

write a word, to find the one characteristic that your subject possesses

that distinguishes it from others. Ask yourself wherein it is itself,

wherein it differs from other like things, what it is without which

this particular subject would not be itself. And having determined

this point, be sure to make your reader see it. Whatever else you do,

prize that characteristic as the jewel of your criticism's soul, and

so sharply define, limit, characterize that your reader's impression

will be not the slightest blurred. A student whose theme in criticism

received from the instructor the verdict that it was not distinguishing,

that it might apply as well to another poet, replied that the theme had

originally been written about another, and in the press of circumstance

had been copied with only a change in the title. The point is that the

criticism had not been a good estimate of the original subject. It was

worthless in both cases, because it was not distinguishing.

Finally, when you come to the expression, be sure that what you say

means something, and that you know what it means. Ask yourself, "What

does this mean that I have written?" and, if you have to admit that you

do not know, in all conscience suppress it. Avoid the stock phrases that

are colorless. You can fling "interesting" at almost any book, or its

opposite, "stupid," just as you can apply "true to life," "good style,"

"suggestive," "gripping," "vital," "red-blooded," "imaginative," and

hosts of other words and phrases equally well to scores of subjects.

The reviewer through whose mind a constant stream of subjects passes,

is forced to fall into this cant unless he be a genius, but you have no

business to do so. The trouble here, again, is in not knowing exactly

what you wish to say and are saying, lack of thorough knowledge of your

subject, for you do not know it until you have reached its heart. The

result of half-knowledge is always flabbiness and ineffectiveness. Be

careful, moreover, in making the structure of your total criticism,

especially in criticism by standards, that you do not make the form of

your work seem mechanical and wooden. Do not, for example, except in

a report, give a dry list of the qualities which the subject should

possess, and then one by one apply them to see if it will pass muster.

Such writing may be true, but it is awkward. The form of critical

writing should be as neat as that of any other kind of writing.

And in all your attitude and expression try to treat the subject as far

as possible in its relation to humanity, to keep it from being a mere

abstraction, to make it seem of real significance to the lives of men,

if possible to the life of your reader.

The value of writing criticism should by this time be apparent. It

forces our minds out of the fogginess of vague thinking, it makes us

see things sharply, it guides us away from the taint of superficiality,

it makes a solid base for our opinions. Through criticism we discover

why we are interested, and then naturally we desire more interest, and

by feeding grow to a larger appreciation and conception of the realm in

which our minds are at work. We thus do away with the mere chance whim

of like and dislike, and understand why we like what we do. In other

words, criticism increases our intelligent reaction to life.

EXERCISES

I. Mr. Lowell's Work in England (page 193).

1. By what standards is the work of Lowell as United States

Minister to England criticized?

2. Do these standards exhaust the qualifications of an admirable

minister?

3. If not, what other standards would you suggest?

4. What is the _controlling purpose_ of the criticism?

5. In view of this _controlling purpose_, are the standards

which the criticism includes sufficient?

6. Write a similar criticism on any of the following subjects:

The presidency of Theodore Roosevelt.

The presidency of Woodrow Wilson.

The work of Mr. Goethals on the Panama Canal.

The career of Mr. Bryce as British Ambassador to the United

States.

The career of James J. Hill, or of Cecil Rhodes, as

Empire-builders.

7. Write a historical criticism of Lowell's career in England,

_accounting for_ the attitude he assumed as determined by the

understanding of America which the English nation of the time

had, and by Lowell's character.

II. The American Business Man (page 197).

1. Criticize any of the following by accounting for their rise

and their characteristics:

The athletic coach in American colleges.

The present-day university president.

The "information" man at the railway station.

The county adviser in agriculture.

The reference librarian.

The floorwalker in department stores.

2. Write an appreciative criticism of the American Business Man

as he might seem to an Englishman on his first trip to

America; as he might seem to Plato; to Napoleon; to the poet

Shelley; to Shakespeare; to a Turkish rug merchant.

III. The "New Poetry" (page 200).

1. Is this criticism fair and unbiased?

2. What attitude does the author try to create in the reader?

How would the choice of material have differed had the author

desired an opposite effect?

3. Criticize, by relating to the times in which the subject

appeared, the following: Cubist Art, Sentimentalism, The

Renaissance of Wonder, The Dime Novel, The Wild-West Moving

Picture Film.

IV. Cargo Steamers (page 203).

1. Criticize, by the method used in this example: Gang Plows,

Electric Street Cars, Football Fields, Art Galleries (their

architecture), Adding Machines, Systems of Bookkeeping.

V. The English Language (page 205).

1. Criticize, by the method of standards, the following:

American Costumes as Candidates for Universal Use, The Metric

System, The American Monetary System, The Gary Schools, The

Civic Center Idea.

VI. English Cooking (page 210).

1. If Gissing had been criticizing English cooking from the

point of view of a dietitian, what standards would he have

chosen?

2. Criticize modern American cooking by showing its rise and the

influences that have controlled it.

3. Write an appreciative criticism of any of the following

subjects: Thanksgiving Dinner in the Country, A "Wienie

Roast," The First Good Meal after an Illness, The Old

Swimmin' Hole, The Fudge that Went Wrong, American Hat

Trimming, The Florist's Shop, Grandmother's Garden, The Old

Orchard.

VII. The Tempest (page 213).

1. Does Gissing here allow his natural bias as an Englishman to

sway him too much? Do you know as much about _The Tempest_,

from this criticism, as you would like to?

2. Criticize, _as an American_, with yet due restraint:

Lincoln's Addresses, Mr. Wilson's Leadership in Idealism,

Walt Whitman's "Captain, My Captain," MacDowell's "Indian

Suite" or "Sea Pieces" or "Woodland Sketches," St. Gaudens'

"Lincoln," O. Henry's Stories of New York, John Burroughs'

Nature Essays, Patrick Henry's Speeches, Mrs. Wharton's Short

Stories.

VIII. Make a list of trite or often used expressions that you find in

criticisms in the weekly "literary" page of an American

newspaper. Try to substitute diction that is more truly alive.

IX. When next you hear a symphony, listen so that you can write an

Appreciative Criticism. Then look up the history of symphonic

music and the life of the composer, and write a Historical

Criticism. Do this with any piano composition which you admire.

X. Rock Drills.

Tappet valve drills were the earliest design made for

regular work, and are now the only type really suitable

for work with steam, as the condensation of the steam

interferes with other valve actions. They have also special

advantages for certain work which have prevented them from

becoming obsolete. The valve motion is positive and not

affected by moisture in compressed air. The machine will keep

on boring a hole that may offer great frictional resistance

where some other drills would stick.

Disadvantages. These drills cannot deliver a perfectly

"free" or "dead" blow. In other words, there is always

some exhaust air from the front of the piston, caught

between it and the cylinder by the reversal of the valve just

before the forward stroke is finished. In some ground this

is by no means a defect, for where the ground is dead or

sticky this cushion helps to "pick the drill up" for a rapid

and sure return stroke, preventing its sticking and insuring

a maximum number of blows per minute. The length of stroke

must be kept long enough for the movement of the piston to

knock over the valve. The valve on the Rio Tinto machine is a

piston, or spool valve; on other machines the valve is of the

plain D-slide valve type. The Rand "giant" drill has a device

to reduce the total air pressure on the back of the valve.

This of course makes the valve take up its own wear and form

its own bearing surface, thus reducing leakage. The seats

generally require periodical cleaning and are raised to give

material to allow "scraping up."

Where the lubrication is deficient, as it generally is,

the coefficient of friction may reach 25 per cent, especially

in the presence of grit. Taking a valve area of 6 sq. in.

exposed to 80-lb. pressure, it might require a force of

120 lbs. to move the valve. This means that the blow struck

by the piston is retarded to a corresponding degree, and in

some cases the valve tends to wear its seat into an irregular

surface. Some writers have contended that the turning movement

of the piston is also hindered; but as the blow of the tappet

occurs at the beginning and end of the stroke, while the

turning movement is a positive and continuous one along all

the length of the back stroke, this effect is not noticeable.

As the tappet is struck 400 to 600 times per minute, the wear

and stress is great. Specially hardened surfaces on pistons

and tappets are needed as well as large wearing surfaces, or

renewable bushings, for the tappet to rock on. When wear takes

place the throw of the valve is reduced; cushioning becomes

greater and the stroke is shortened. The resistance and

pressure of the tappet tends to throw increased and unequal

wear on the opposite side of the cylinder.[74]

[74] Eustace M. Weston: _Rock Drills_. By courtesy of the publishers,

McGraw-Hill Publishing Company.

1. If you were writing an appreciative criticism of the working

of a rock drill, how would you change the style of writing?

2. Write a criticism by standards of the Water-Tube Boiler, of

the Diesel Engine, of Oil as Fuel for Ships, of one

particular make of Corn Planter or Wheel Hoe, or Piano, or

Motorcycle, or Machine Gun, or Mining Explosive, or of one

method of Advertising, or of the German Army, or of the

Dreadnaught as a Fighting Machine.

XI. Jingo Morality.

Captain Mahan's chosen example is the British occupation

of Egypt. To discuss the morality of this, he says, is

"as little to the point as the morality of an earthquake."

It was for the benefit of the world at large and of the

people of Egypt--no matter what the latter might think

about it, or how they would have voted about it--and that

is enough. Tacitly, he makes the same doctrine apply to the

great expansion of the foreign power of the United States,

which he foresees and for which he wants a navy "developed

in proportion to the reasonable possibilities of the future

political." What these possibilities are he nowhere says,

and he gives the reader no chance of judging whether they

are reasonable or not. But he speaks again and again of the

development of the nation and of national sentiment as a

"natural force," moving on to its desired end, unconscious

and unmoral. What he says of British domination over Egypt,

Captain Mahan would evidently and logically be ready to say of

American domination of any inferior power--that it has no more

to do with morality than an earthquake.

Of course, this really means the glorification of brute

force. The earthquake view of international relations

does away at once with all questions of law and justice and

humanity, and puts everything frankly on the basis of armor

and guns. Finerty could ask no more. No one could accuse

Captain Mahan of intending this, yet he must "follow the

argument." He speaks approvingly of international interference

with Turkey on account of the Armenian atrocities. But has not

the Sultan a complete defense, according to Captain Mahan's

doctrine? Is he not an earthquake, too? Are not the Turks

going blindly ahead, in Armenia, as a "natural force," and is

anybody likely to be foolish enough to discuss the morality of

a law of nature? Of course, the powers tell the Sultan that he

is no earthquake at all, or, if he is, that they will bring

to bear upon him a bigger one which will shake him into the

Bosphorus. But if there is no question of morality involved,

the argument and the action are simply so much brute force;

and that, we say, is what Captain Mahan's doctrine logically

comes to.

Another inadvertent revelation of the real implications

of his views is given where he is dwelling on the fact

that "the United States will never seek war except for

the defense of her rights, her obligations, or her necessary

interests." There is a fine ambiguity about the final phrase,

but let that pass. No one can suspect that Captain Mahan means

to do anything in public or private relations that he does

not consider absolutely just. But note the way the necessity

of arguing for a big navy clouds his mind when he writes of

some supposed international difficulty: "But the moral force

of our contention might conceivably be weakened, in the view

of an opponent, by attendant circumstances, _in which case our

physical power to support it should be open to no doubt_."

That is to say, we must always have morality and sweet

reasonableness on our side, must have all our quarrels just,

must have all the precedents and international law in our

favor, but must be prepared to lick the other fellow anyhow,

if he is so thick-headed and obstinate as to insist that

morals and justice are on _his_ side.

This earthquake and physical-power doctrine is a most

dangerous one for any time or people, but is peculiarly

dangerous in this country at this time. The politicians

and the mob will be only too thankful to be furnished a

high-sounding theory as a justification for their ignorant

and brutal proposals for foreign conquest and aggression.

They will not be slow, either, in extending and improving the

theory. They will take a less roundabout course than Captain

Mahan does to the final argument of physical power. If it

comes to that in the end, what is the use of bothering about

all these preliminaries of right and law? They will be willing

to call themselves an earthquake or a cyclone, if only their

devastating propensities can be freely gratified without any

question of morals coming in. With so many signs of relaxed

moral fiber about us, in public and in private life, it is no

time to preach the gospel of force, even when the preacher is

so attractive a man and writer as Captain Mahan.[75]

[75] Gustav Pollak: _Fifty Years of American Idealism_. Houghton

Mifflin Company. By courtesy of _The Nation_.

1. In the light of this criticism, write an estimate, on the

standard of high moral international relations, of Mr.

Wilson's policy toward Mexico.

2. Write a criticism by standards of the remark of Mr. Lloyd

George and Mr. George Creel that they are thankful that

England, that America, were _not_ prepared for war in 1914.

3. Write an appreciative criticism of Captain Mahan's doctrine

from the point of view of a man who thumps his chest and

cries "America über Alles!" Compare the sanity of your

criticism with that of the article above.

4. Would the criticism of Captain Mahan's doctrine be sounder

if he had been a German?

5. Criticize the statement that what young people need is

industrial education, something to teach them how to earn a

living. Then criticize the other statement that the necessary

thing is to make young people into fine personalities, into

true gentlemen and gentlewomen.

XII. Vegetarianism.

There is to me an odd pathos in the literature of

vegetarianism. I remember the day when I read these

periodicals and pamphlets with all the zest of hunger and

poverty, vigorously seeking to persuade myself that flesh was

an altogether superfluous, and even repulsive, food. If ever

such things fall under my eyes nowadays, I am touched with a

half humorous compassion for the people whose necessity, not

their will, consents to this chemical view of diet. There

comes before me the vision of certain vegetarian restaurants,

where, at a minimum outlay, I have often enough made believe

to satisfy my craving stomach; where I have swallowed "savory

cutlet," "vegetable steak," and I know not what windy

insufficiencies tricked up under specious names. One place

do I recall where you had a complete dinner for sixpence--I

dare not try to remember the items. But well indeed do I see

the faces of the guests--poor clerks and shopboys, bloodless

girls and women of many sorts--all endeavoring to find a

relish in lentil soup and haricot something-or-other. It was a

grotesquely heart-breaking sight.

I hate with a bitter hatred the names of lentils and

haricots--those pretentious cheats of the appetite, those

tabulated humbugs, those certificated aridities calling

themselves human food! An ounce of either, we are told, is

equivalent to--how many pounds? of the best rump-steak. There

are not many ounces of common sense in the brain of him who

proves it, or of him who believes it. In some countries,

this stuff is eaten by choice; in England only dire need can

compel to its consumption. Lentils and haricots are not merely

insipid; frequent use of them causes something like nausea.

Preach and tabulate as you will, the English palate--which is

the supreme judge--rejects this farinaceous makeshift. Even

as it rejects vegetables without the natural concomitant of

meat; as it rejects oatmeal-porridge and griddle-cakes for a

midday meal; as it rejects lemonade and ginger-ale offered as

substitutes for honest beer.

What is the intellectual and moral state of that man who

really believes that chemical analysis can be an equivalent

for natural gusto?--I will get more nourishment out of an

inch of right Cambridge sausage; aye, out of a couple

of ounces of honest tripe; than can be yielded me by half a

hundredweight of the best lentils ever grown.[76]

[76] George Gissing: _The Private Papers of Henry Ryecroft_, "Winter."

By permission of the publishers, E. P. Dutton & Co., New York

City.

1. Write a criticism by standards of this appreciative

criticism. Is Gissing fair or sensible in his attitude?

2. Write an appreciative criticism of Feminism, Temperance,

Socialism, Open-Air Sleeping, The Bahai Movement in America,

Community Singing, The Moving Picture as Substitute for the

Novel, Drinks that Do Away with Coffee, Systems for Growing

Strong without Effort.

3. How far ought a writer to allow purely _personal_ reaction to

determine his judgment in criticism?

XIII. Emerson's Literary Quality.

Emerson's quality has changed a good deal in his later

writings. His corn is no longer in the milk; it has grown

hard, and we that read have grown hard too. He has now ceased

to be an expansive, revolutionary force, but he has not

ceased to be a writer of extraordinary gripe and unexpected

resources of statement. His startling piece of advice, "Hitch

your wagon to a star," is typical of the man, as combining

the most unlike and widely separate qualities. Because not

less marked than his idealism and mysticism is his shrewd

common sense, his practical bent, his definiteness,--in

fact, the sharp New England mould in which he is cast. He

is the master Yankee, the centennial flower of that thrifty

and peculiar stock. More especially in his later writings

and speakings do we see the native New England traits,--the

alertness, eagerness, inquisitiveness, thrift, dryness,

archness, caution, the nervous energy as distinguished from

the old English unction and vascular force. How he husbands

himself,--what prudence, what economy, always spending up,

as he says, and not down! How alert, how attentive; what an

inquisitor; always ready with some test question, with some

fact or idea to match or verify, ever on the lookout for some

choice bit of adventure or information, or some anecdote that

has pith and point! No tyro basks and takes his ease in his

presence, but is instantly put on trial and must answer or be

disgraced. He strikes at an idea like a falcon at a bird. His

great fear seems to be lest there be some fact or point worth

knowing that will escape him. He is a close-browed miser of

the scholar's gains. He turns all values into intellectual

coin. Every book or person or experience is an investment that

will or will not warrant a good return in ideas. He goes to

the Radical Club, or to the literary gathering, and listens

with the closest attention to every word that is said, in hope

that something will be said, some word dropped, that has the

ring of the true metal. Apparently he does not permit himself

a moment's indifference or inattention. His own pride is

always to have the ready change, to speak the exact and proper

word, to give to every occasion the dignity of wise speech.

You are bartered with for your best. There is no profit in

life but in the interchange of ideas, and the chief success is

to have a head well filled with them. Hard cash at that; no

paper promises satisfy him; he loves the clink and glint of

the real coin.

His earlier writings were more flowing and suggestive, and had

reference to larger problems; but now everything has got

weighed and stamped and converted into the medium of wise and

scholarly conversation. It is of great value; these later

essays are so many bags of genuine coin, which it has taken

a lifetime to hoard; not all gold, but all good, and the fruit

of wise industry and economy.[77]

[77] John Burroughs: _Birds and Poets_. Houghton Mifflin Company,

Boston, publishers.

1. Would you describe this as appreciative criticism or

criticism by standards? If it is appreciative, has it any of

the value that we commonly attribute to criticism by

standards? Why? If it is criticism by standards, does it

approach the appreciative? Why?

2. Criticize, in the method that Mr. Burroughs uses, the

literary quality and message of Carlyle, Walt Whitman,

William James, John Dewey, Macaulay, Hawthorne, Arnold

Bennett, and others.

3. Criticize, in the same manner, Beethoven's Fifth Symphony,

the Cathedral of Rheims, the Parthenon, the Capitol at

Washington, Michigan Boulevard in Chicago, the Skyline of

Lower New York, the Sweep of the Mississippi River, the

Quality of Niagara Falls, the Quality of Harold Bell Wright's

Works. Of course any other individual can be substituted for

any of these.

XIV. Military Drill.

A lettered German, speaking to me once of his year of military

service, told me that, had it lasted but a month or two

longer, he must have sought release in suicide. I know very

well that my own courage would not have borne me to the

end of the twelvemonth; humiliation, resentment, loathing,

would have goaded me to madness. At school we used to be

"drilled" in the playground once a week; I have but to think

of it, even after forty years, and there comes back upon me

that tremor of passionate misery which, at the time, often

made me ill. The senseless routine of mechanical exercise was

in itself all but unendurable to me; I hated the standing in

line, the thrusting out of arms and legs at a signal, the

thud of feet stamping in constrained unison. The loss of

individuality seems to me sheer disgrace. And when, as often

happened, the drill-sergeant rebuked me for some inefficiency

as I stood in line, when he addressed me as "Number Seven!"

I burned with shame and rage. I was no longer a human being;

I had become part of a machine, and my name was "Number

Seven." It used to astonish me when I had a neighbor who

went through the drill with amusement, with zealous energy.

I would gaze at the boy, and ask myself how it was possible

that he and I should feel so differently. To be sure, nearly

all my schoolfellows either enjoyed the thing, or at all

events went through it with indifference; they made friends

with the sergeant, and some were proud of walking with him

"out of bounds." Left, right! Left, right! For my own part, I

think I have never hated man as I hated that broad-shouldered,

hard-visaged, brassy-voiced fellow. Every word he spoke to me

I felt as an insult. Seeing him in the distance, I have turned

and fled, to escape the necessity of saluting, and, still

more, a quiver of the nerves which affected me so painfully.

If ever a man did me harm, it was he; harm physical and

moral. In all seriousness I believe that some of the nervous

instability from which I have suffered from boyhood is

traceable to those accursed hours of drill, and I am very sure

that I can date from the same wretched moments a fierceness

of personal pride which has been one of my most troublesome

characteristics. The disposition, of course, was there; it

should have been modified, not exacerbated.[78]

[78] George Gissing: _The Private Papers of Henry Ryecroft_, "Spring."

By permission of the publishers, E. P. Dutton & Co., New York

City.

1. Draw up a list of the headings that might appear in a

criticism of military drill by standards, in a criticism by

the historical method, and in a less purely personal

appreciative criticism than the example here. Which of the

criticisms, as judged from these headings, would be of most

value to a reader of intelligence?

2. In a subject like this is so strong a personal reaction

justified? Is it possibly of real value? Does the criticism

prove anything about military drill?

3. Write an appreciative criticism of a thoroughly personal

nature of any of the following: Carpentry, Rug-beating,

Chapel-attendance, Memorizing Poetry, Repairing Automobiles

in the Mud, Fishing in the Rain, Cleaning House, Getting up

Early, Being Polite to People Whom You Dislike, Being Made to

Do One's Duty, College Politics.

XV. National Sentiment.

National sentiment is a fact and should be taken account of

by institutions. When it is ignored, it is intensified and

becomes a source of strife. It can be rendered harmless only

by being given free play so long as it is not predatory. But

it is not, in itself, a good or admirable feeling. There is

nothing rational and nothing desirable in a limitation of

sympathy which confines it to a fragment of the human race.

Diversities of manners and customs and traditions are on the

whole a good thing, since they enable different nations to

produce different types of excellence. But in national feeling

there is always latent or explicit an element of hostility

to foreigners. National feeling, as we know it, could not

exist in a nation which was wholly free of external pressure

of a hostile kind.

And group feeling produces a limited and often harmful

kind of morality. Men come to identify the good with

what serves the interest of their own group, and the bad

with what works against those interests, even if it should

happen to be in the interest of mankind as a whole. This group

morality is very much in evidence during war, and is taken

for granted in men's ordinary thought. Although almost all

Englishmen consider the defeat of Germany desirable for the

good of the world, yet most of them honor a German fighting

for his country, because it has not occurred to them that his

action ought to be guided by a morality higher than that of

the group. A man does right, as a rule, to have his thoughts

more occupied with the interests of his own nation than with

those of others, because his actions are more likely to

affect his own nation. But in time of war, and in all matters

which are of equal concern to other nations and to his own, a

man ought to take account of the universal welfare, and not

allow his survey to be limited by the interest, or supposed

interest, of his own group or nation.[79]

[79] Bertrand Russell: _National Independence and Internationalism_.

By courtesy of The Atlantic Monthly Company.

1. Write a criticism of any of the following, judging by the

results produced: School Spirit, Capitalism, Living in a

Small Town, National Costume, Giving up One's Patriotism,

Family Loyalty, Race Loyalty, Class Distinction, Restriction

of Reading to the authors of One Nation.

2. Would Mr. Russell's criticism be of more value if it showed

more emotion, if it were less detached? Can a writer

profitably criticize such a reality as _national sentiment_

without introducing emotion?

XVI. A constitutional statesman is in general a man of common

opinions and uncommon abilities. The reason is obvious. When

we speak of a free government, we mean a government in which

the sovereign power is divided, in which a single decision is

not absolute, where argument has an office. The essence of the

_gouvernement des avocats_, as the Emperor Nicholas called

it, is, that you must persuade so many persons. The appeal

is not to the solitary decision of a single statesman,--not

to Richelieu or Nesselrode alone in his closet,--but to the

jangled mass of men, with a thousand pursuits, a thousand

interests, a thousand various habits. Public opinion, as it is

said, rules; and public opinion is the opinion of the average

man. Fox used to say of Burke, "Burke is a wise man, but he

is wise too soon." The average man will not bear this: he is

a cool, common person, with a considerate air, with figures

in his mind, with his own business to attend to, with a set

of ordinary opinions arising from and suited to ordinary

life. He can't bear novelty or originalities; he says, "Sir,

I never heard of such a thing _before_ in my life," and he

thinks this a _reductio ad absurdum_. You may see his taste

by the reading of which he approves. Is there a more splendid

monument of talent and industry than the _Times_? No wonder

that the average man--that any one--believes in it. As Carlyle

observes: "Let the highest intellect, able to write epics,

try to write such a leader for the morning newspapers: it

cannot do it; the highest intellect will fail." But did you

ever see anything there that you had never seen before? Out

of the million articles that every one has read, can any one

person trace a single marked idea to a single article? Where

are the deep theories and the wise axioms and the everlasting

sentiments which the writers of the most influential

publication in the world have been the first to communicate to

an ignorant species? Such writers are far too shrewd. The two

million or whatever number of copies it may be they publish,

are not purchased because the buyers wish to know the truth.

The purchaser desires an article which he can appreciate at

sight; which he can lay down and say, "An excellent article,

very excellent--exactly my own sentiments." Original theories

give trouble; besides, a grave man on the Coal Exchange

does not desire to be an apostle of novelties among the

contemporaneous dealers in fuel,--he wants to be provided with

remarks he can make on the topics of the day which will not

be known _not_ to be his, that are not too profound, which

he can fancy the paper only reminded him of. And just in the

same way, precisely as the most popular political paper is

not that which is abstractly the best or most instructive,

but that which most exactly takes up the minds of men where

it finds them, catches the fleeting sentiment of society,

puts it in such a form as society can fancy would convince

another society which did not believe; so the most influential

of constitutional statesmen is the one who most felicitously

expresses the creed of the moment, who administers it, who

embodies it in laws and institutions, who gives it the highest

life it is capable of, who induces the average man to think,

"I could not have done it any better if I had had time myself."

It might be said that this is only one of the results of that

tyranny of commonplace which seems to accompany civilization.

You may talk of the tyranny of Nero and Tiberius; but the

real tyranny is the tyranny of your next-door neighbor. What

law is so cruel as the law of doing what he does? What yoke

is so galling as the necessity of being like him? What

espionage of despotism comes to your door so effectually

as the eye of the man who lives at your door? Public opinion

is a permeating influence, and it exacts obedience to itself;

it requires us to think other men's thoughts, to speak

other men's words, to follow other men's habits. Of course,

if we do not, no formal ban issues; no corporeal pain, no

coarse penalty of a barbarous society is inflicted on the

offender: but we are called "eccentric"; there is a gentle

murmur of "most unfortunate ideas," "singular young man,"

"well-intentioned, I dare say; but unsafe, sir, quite unsafe."

The prudent of course conform: The place of nearly everybody

depends on the opinion of every one else. There is nothing

like Swift's precept to attain the repute of a sensible

man, "Be of the opinion of the person with whom at the time

you are conversing." This world is given to those whom this

world can trust. Our very conversation is infected: where

are now the bold humor, the explicit statement, the grasping

dogmatism of former days? they have departed, and you read in

the orthodox works dreary regrets that the art of conversation

has passed away. It would be as reasonable to expect the art

of walking to pass away: people talk well enough when they

know to whom they are speaking; we might even say that the

art of conversation was improved by an application to new

circumstances. "Secrete your intellect, use common words, say

what you are expected to say," and you shall be at peace; the

secret of prosperity in common life is to be commonplace on

principle.

Whatever truth there may be in these splenetic observations

might be expected to show itself more particularly in the

world of politics: people dread to be thought unsafe in

proportion as they get their living by being thought to be

safe. "Literary men," it has been said, "are outcasts"; and

they are eminent in a certain way notwithstanding. "They can

say strong things of their age; for no one expects they will

go out and act on them." They are a kind of ticket-of-leave

lunatics, from whom no harm is for the moment expected; who

seem quiet, but on whose vagaries a practical public must

have its eye. For statesmen it is different: they must be

thought men of judgment. The most morbidly agricultural

counties were aggrieved when Mr. Disraeli was made Chancellor

of the Exchequer: they could not believe he was a man of

solidity, and they could not comprehend taxes by the author

of "Coningsby" or sums by an adherent of the Caucasus. "There

is," said Sir Walter Scott, "a certain hypocrisy of action,

which, however it is despised by persons intrinsically

excellent, will nevertheless be cultivated by those who desire

the good repute of men." Politicians, as has been said, live

in the repute of the commonalty. They may appeal to posterity;

but of what use is posterity? Years before that tribunal

comes into life, your life will be extinct; it is like a moth

going into chancery. Those who desire a public career must

look to the views of the living public; an immediate exterior

influence is essential to the exertion of their faculties.

The confidence of others is your _fulcrum_: you cannot--many

people wish you could--go into Parliament to represent

yourself; you must conform to the opinions of the electors,

and they, depend on it, will not be original. In a word, as

has been most wisely observed, "under free institutions it

is necessary occasionally to defer to the opinions of other

people; and as other people are obviously in the wrong, this

is a great hindrance to the improvement of our political

system and the progress of our species."[80]

[80] Walter Bagehot: "The Character of Sir Robert Peel," _Works_, vol.

III. Travelers Insurance Company, Hartford, Conn.

1. Apply Bagehot's criticism of the effects of a democratic

average to the fate of Socrates, Jesus, Columbus, Galileo,

Roger Williams, Benjamin Franklin, Abraham Lincoln. Do your

results justify Bagehot's statements?

2. If Bagehot's theory is true, how do you account for any

advance in a democracy, for woman suffrage, for example,

or the election of senators by popular vote, or the

inaugurating of an income tax?

3. Apply his remarks about literary men to the career of Thomas

Carlyle, Heine, Galsworthy, and others who have criticized

their times.

4. Does the Christian religion tend to make a man act on his own

original ideas?

XVII. Do you believe the following statement by a well-known musical

critic? If the statement is true, how far is it possible to

extend it, to how many forms of art or business?

While the lover of music may often be in doubt as to the

merit of a composition, he need never be so in regard to

that of a performance. Here we stand on safe and sure ground,

for the qualities that make excellence in performance are all

well known, and it is necessary only that the ear shall be

able to detect them. There may, of course, be some difference

of opinion about the reading of a sonata or the interpretation

of a symphony; but even these differences should be rare.

Differences of judgment about the technical qualities of a

musical performance should never exist. Whether a person

plays the piano or sings well or ill is not a question of

opinion, but of fact. The critic who is acquainted with the

technics of the art can pronounce judgment upon a performance

with absolute certainty, and there is no reason in the world

why every lover of music should not do the same thing. There

should not be any room for such talk as this: "I think Mrs.

Blank sang very well, didn't you?" "Well, I didn't like it

much."

And there should be no room for the indiscriminate applause

of bad performances which so often grieve the hearts of

judicious listeners. Bad orchestral playing, bad piano

playing, bad singing are applauded every day in the course of

the musical season by people who think they have a right to

an opinion. I repeat that it is not a matter of opinion but a

matter of fact; and a person might just as well express the

belief that a short fat man was finely proportioned as to say

that an ill-balanced orchestra was a good one, and he might

as well say that in his opinion a fire-engine whistle was

music as to say that a throaty voice-production was good

singing.[81]

[81] W. H. Henderson: _What is Good Music_? By courtesy of the

publishers, Charles Scribner's Sons, New York City. Copyright,

1898.

Expository Writing · 第 7 / 10 章