=_Sure_.= Avoid the crude adverbial use. "It _surely_ (not

_sure_) was pleasant." In answer to the question, "Will you

go?" either _sure_ or _surely_ is correct, though _surely_ is

preferred. "[To be] sure." "[You may be] sure." "[I will]

surely [go]."

=_Suspicion_.= A noun. Never to be used as a verb.

=_Take and_.= Often unnecessary, sometimes crude. Redundant: "He

took the ax and sharpened it." Better: "He sharpened the ax."

Crude: "He took and nailed up the box." Better: "He nailed up

the box."

=_Tend_.= In the sense _to look after_, takes a direct object

without an interposed _to_. _Attend_, however, is followed by

_to_. "The milliner's assistant _tends_ (not _tends to_) the

shop." "I shall _attend to your wants in a moment_."

=_That there_.= Do not use for _that_. "I want _that_ (not _that

there_) box of berries."

=_Them_.= Not to be used as an adjective. "_Those_ (not _them_)

boys."

=_There were_ or _There was_.= Avoid the unnecessary use. Crude:

"There were seventeen senators voted for the bill." Better:

"Seventeen senators voted for the bill."

=_These sort_, _These kind_.= Ungrammatical. See 51b.

=_This here_.= Do not use for _this_.

=_Those_.= Do not carelessly omit a relative clause after

_those_. Faulty: "He is one of those talebearers." Better: "He

is a talebearer." [Or] "He is one of those talebearers whom

everybody dislikes."

=_Those kind_, _those sort_.= Ungrammatical. See 51b.

=_Till_.= Do not carelessly misuse for _when_: "I had scarcely

strapped on my skates _when_ (not _till_) Henry fell through an

air hole."

=_Transpire_.= Means _to give forth_ or _to become known_, not

_to occur_. "The secret _transpired_." "The sale of the

property _occurred_ (not _transpired_) last Thursday."

=_Try_.= A verb, not a noun.

=_Unique_.= Means _alone of its kind_, not _odd_ or _unusual_.

=_United States_.= Ordinarily preceded by _the_. "The United

States raised a large army." (Not "United States raised a large

army.")

=_Up_.= Do not needlessly insert after such verbs as _end_,

_rest_, _settle_.

=_Used to could_.= Very crude. Say _used to be able_ or _once

could_.

=_Very_.= Accompanied by _much_ when used with the past

participle. "He was _very much_ (not _very_) pleased with his

reception."

=_Want to_.= Not to be used in the sense of _should_, _had

better_. "You _should_ (not _You want to_) keep in good

physical condition."

=_Way_.= Not to be used for _away_. "Away (not _way_) down the

street."

=_Ways_.= Not to be used for _way_ in referring to distance. "A

little _way_ (not _ways_)."

=_When_.= (a) Not to be used for _that_ in such a sentence as "It

was in the afternoon that the races began." (b) A _when_ clause

is not to be used as a predicate noun. See 6.

=_Where_.= (a) Not to be used for _that_ in such a sentence as "I

see in the paper that our team lost the game." (b) A _where_

clause is not to be used as a predicate noun. See 6.

=_Where at_.= Vulgar. "Where is he? (not _Where is he at_?)"

=_Which_.= Do not use for _who_ or _that_ in referring to

persons. "The friends _who_ (not _which_) had loved him in his

boyhood were still faithful to him."

=_Who_.= Do not use unnecessarily for _which_ or _that_ in

referring to animals. Do not use the possessive form _whose_

for _of which_ unless the sentence is so turned as practically

to require the substitution.

=_Will_.= Do not confuse with _shall_. See 53.

=_Win out_.= Not used in formal writing or speaking.

=_Woods_.= Not ordinarily to be used as singular. "_A wood_ (not

_A woods_)."

=_Would have_.= Do not use for _had_ in if clauses. "If you _had_

(not _would have_) spoken boldly, he would have granted your

request."

=_Would of_.= A vulgarism for _would have_.

=_You was_.= Use _You were_ in both singular and plural.

=_Yourself_.= Intensive or reflexive; do not use when the

personal pronoun would suffice. "_You_ (not _Yourself_) and

your family must come."

Exercise:

1. Be sure the gun works alright. I was already when you came.

2. He talked considerable, but I couldn't scarcely remember

what all he said.

3. I never suspicioned that John could of been guilty of

forging his father's note. It don't seem hardly possible.

4. The island was not inhabited by humans. It was different

than any place I ever remember of. One sailor and myself

climbed a sand hill, but we couldn't see any signs of life

anywheres.

5. Hawkeye walked a ways into a woods. He was a right smart at

ease, for he had Kildeer with him.

=69.= EXERCISE IN DICTION

=A. Wordiness=

Strike out all that is superfluous, and make the following sentences

simple and exact.

1. Some students lack the ability of being able to spell.

2. He seems to enjoy the universal esteem of all men.

3. The mind rebels against the enforced discipline imposed upon

it by others.

4. This is the house that was constructed and erected by a

young fellow who went by the common name of Jack.

5. There are invariably people in the world who always want to

get something for nothing. I saw some today crowding round a

soap man who was giving away free samples gratis.

6. Strawberries which grow in the woods or anywhere like that

have a flavor that is better than that of those which grow in

gardens.

7. The people showed Jackson the greatest honor it is within

their power to bestow by electing him president.

8. It was an old man of about sixty years, and he carried a

cane to support himself with when he took a walk. He pulled out

his watch to see what time it was every few minutes.

9. My favorite magazine is the one called _Popular Mechanics_.

I like it because it appeals to me.

10. There is a bird, and that bird is the cuckoo, that seems to

think it unnecessary to build its own nest, and so it occupies

any nest that it happens to find.

11. It is a good plan to follow if one would like to be able to

develop his memory to make it a rule to learn at least a few

lines of poetry every night before going to bed.

12. In the annals of history there is no historical character

more unselfish than the character of Robert E. Lee.

13. There are quite a few hotels in Estes Park, which is in

Colorado, but the one that is the most picturesque and striking

so that you remember it a long time on account of its unusual

surroundings is Long's Peak Inn.

14. It is often, but not always, a good sign that when one

person is quick to suspect another person of disloyalty or

dishonesty that he himself is disloyal or dishonest.

15. The canine quadruped was under suspicion of having

obliterated by a process of mastication that article of

sustenance which the butcher deposits at our posterior portal.

=B. The Exact Word=

Substitute, for inaccurate words and phrases, expressions which carry an

exact and reasonable meaning.

1. Ostrich eggs made into omelets are a funny experience.

2. A small back porch can be built which will enter directly

into the kitchen.

3. Ruskin uses a great deal of unfamiliar words.

4. Reading will broaden the point of view of a student.

5. To visit the plant in operation is indeed a spectacular

sight.

6. My plants grew and looked nicer than any I ever saw.

7. I place little truth in that article, since it appeared in a

strong partisan paper.

8. The manufacturing of automobiles has gained to quite an

extent.

9. Emerson has some real clever thoughts in his essays.

10. I do not mean to degrade our local street car system, for

indeed, it is good along some lines.

11. I want to attain a greater per cent of efficiency in my

study.

12. Imagination is an important part in the successful writing

of themes.

13. His employer praised him for the preparation he had done.

14. I used water-wings as a sort of a "safety first" until I

learned how to swim.

15. In order to prevent infection from disease, two big things

are necessary.

16. The pastor delivered the announcements and after the

collection had been obtained, he presented the sermon of the

morning.

17. Another factor in my career that winter was that I became a

part of the orchestra.

18. It was a mighty nice party that Mrs. Jones gave and

everybody seemed to have an awfully nice time.

19. The more general word socialism might be divided into three

distinct classes, namely: the political party, the theoretical

socialist, and last what might be called a general tendency.

20. Starting with the pioneer days and up to the present time

every energy was set forth to lay low the forests and to get

homes from the wilderness.

=C. Words Sometimes Confused in Meaning=

Use the word which accurately expresses the thought.

1. The climate of California is very (healthful, healthy).

2. (Leave, let) me have the book.

3. He is afraid that he will (loose, lose) his position.

4. The (principal, principle) speaker of the day was Colonel

Walker.

5. I cannot run (as, like) he can.

6. An hour ago he (laid, lay) down to sleep.

7. I fear we are (liable, likely) to be punished.

8. The scolding did not much (affect, effect) him.

9. The light roller presses down the bricks so that the steam

roller will break (fewer, less) of them.

10. Whittier makes many (allusions, illusions) to the Bible.

11. Bread will (raise, rise) much more quickly in a warm place

than in a place where there is a draft.

12. It hardly seems (credible, creditable) that a small child

could walk ten miles.

13. I can't write a letter on this (stationary, stationery).

14. He (sets, sits) at the head of the table.

15. He spoke to the stranger (respectfully, respectively).

16. Did the president (affect, effect) a settlement of the

strike?

17. I cannot (accept, except) help from anyone.

18. Are the guests (already, all ready) for dinner?

19. Is the train moving or (stationary, stationery)?

20. It is (apt, likely, liable) to be pleasant tomorrow.

=D. Colloquialism, Slang, Faulty Idiom, etc.=

The diction of the following sentences is incorrect or inappropriate for

written discourse. Improve the sentences.

1. I was kind of tired this morning, but now I feel alright.

2. I should of known better.

3. A young lady and myself went walking.

4. He is out of town for a couple days.

5. I feel some better now.

6. He will benefit greatly from the results.

7. The Puritans were a very odd acting people.

8. I like camping because of many reasons.

9. Cook your meal, and after you are finished eating, wash the

dishes.

10. He is a regular genius of a bookkeeper.

11. It is hard to see how humans can live in such tenements.

12. The soldiers destroyed property without the least regard of

who owned it.

13. She was crazy for an invite to the hop.

14. It was up to me to get out before there was something

doing.

15. The Gettysburg Address is very simple of understanding

though very strong of meaning.

16. When we become located in a desirable locality, we intend

to pay off some of our social indebtedness.

17. Have some local glass dealer to mend the broken door, and

send us the bill for the same.

18. The first part of Franklin's _Autobiography_ is different

than the latter part, which he wrote after the Revolutionary

War.

19. In 1771 a fellow by the name of Arkwright established a

mill in which spinning machines were run by water power.

20. Each day has brought closer to home the truth that the

condition of mankind in one part of the world is certain to

effect the equilibrium of mankind in most all other parts of

the world.

SPELLING

No one is able to spell all unusual words on demand. But every one must

spell correctly even unusual words in formal writing. The writer has

time or must take time to consult a dictionary. The best dictionaries

are _Webster's New International Dictionary_, the _Standard Dictionary_

(less conservative than Webster's), the _Century Dictionary and

Cyclopedia_ (Volume 2 of the _Century_ is the best place to look for

proper names), and _Murray's New English Dictionary_ (very thorough,

each word being illustrated with numerous quotations to show historical

development). An abridged edition of one of these (the price is one to

three dollars) should be accessible to each student who cannot buy the

larger volumes. The best are: _Webster's Secondary School Dictionary_,

_Funk and Wagnalls Desk Standard Dictionary_, the _Oxford Concise

Dictionary_, and _Webster's Collegiate Dictionary_.

But the student will be spared constant recourse to the dictionary, and

will save himself much time and many humiliations, if he will employ the

rules and principles which follow.

=Recording Errors=

=70. Keep a list of all the words you misspell, copying them several

times in correct form.= Concentrate your effort upon a few words at a

time--upon those words which you yourself actually misspell. The list

will be shorter than you think. It may comprise not more than twenty or

thirty words. Unless you are extraordinarily deficient, it will

certainly not comprise more than a hundred or a hundred and fifty. Find

where your weakness lies; then master it. You can accomplish the

difficult part of the task in a single afternoon. An occasional review,

and constant care when you write, will make your mastery permanent.

After this, and only after this, begin slowly to learn the spelling of

words which you do not yourself use often, but which are a desirable

equipment for all educated men. See the list under 79. _Concentrate your

efforts upon a few words at a time._ It is better to know a few exactly

than a large number hazily. Form the mental habit of being always right

with a small group of words, and extend this group gradually.

Exercise:

Prepare for your instructor a corrected list of words which you

have misspelled in your papers to the present time.

=Pronouncing Accurately=

=71. Avoid slovenly pronunciation.= Careful articulation makes for

correctness in spelling.

Watch the vowels of unaccented syllables; give them distinct (not

exaggerated) utterance, at least until you are familiar with the

spelling. Examples: _sep=a=rate_, _opp=o=rtunity_, _ever=y=body_,

_soph=o=more_, _d=i=vine_.

Sound accurately all the consonants between syllables, and do not sound

a single consonant twice. Examples: _can=d=idate_, _gover=n=ment_,

_su=r=prise_ (not _supp=r=ise_), _o=m=i=ss=ion_ (compare _o=cc=a=s=ion_),

_de=f=er_ (compare _di=ff=er_).

Sound the _g_ in final _-ing_. Examples: _eating_, _running_.

Pronounce the _-al_ of adverbs derived from adjectives in _-ic_ or

_-al_. Examples: _tragically_, _occasionally_, _generally_,

_ungrammatically_.

Do not transpose letters; place each letter where it belongs. Examples:

_p=er=spiration_ (not _p=re=spiration_), _tra=g=edy_ (not _tra=d=e=g=y_).

Note.--The principle of phonetic spelling as stated above applies to

many words, but by no means to all. The Simplified Spelling Board would

extend this principle by changing the spelling of words to correspond

with their actual sounds. It recommends such forms as _tho_, _thru_,

_enuf_, _quartet_, _catalog_, _program_. If the student employs these

forms, he must use them consistently. Many writers oppose simplified

spelling; many advocate it; many compromise. Others desire to supplant

our present alphabet with one more nearly phonetic, and prefer, until

this fundamental reform takes place, to preserve our present spelling as

it is.

Exercise:

Copy the following words slowly, pronouncing the syllables as

you write: _accidentally_, _accommodate_, _accurately_,

_artistically_, _athletics_ (not _atheletics_), _boundary_,

_candidate_, _cavalry_, _commission_, _curiosity_, _defer_,

_definite_, _description_, _despair_, _different_, _dining

room_, _dinned_, _disappoint_, _divide_, _divine_,

_emphatically_, _eighth_, _everybody_, _February_, _finally_,

_goddess_, _government_, _hundred_, _hurrying_, _instinct_,

_laboratory_, _library_, _lightning_, _might have_ (not _might

of_), _naturally_, _necessary_, _occasionally_, _omission_,

_opinion_, _opportunity_, _optimist_, _partner_, _perform_,

_perhaps_, _perspiration_, _prescription_, _primitive_,

_privilege_, _probably_, _quantity_, _really_, _recognise_,

_recommend_, _reverence_, _separate_, _should have_ (not

_should of_), _sophomore_, _strictly_, _superintendent_,

_surprise_, _temperance_, _tragedy_, _usually_, _whether_.

=Logical Kinship in Words=

=72. Get help in spelling a difficult word by thinking of related words.=

To think of _ridiculous_ will prevent your writing _a_ for the second

_i_ of _ridicule_; to think of _ridicule_ will prevent your writing

_rediculous_. To think of _prepare_ will prevent your writing

_preperation_; to think of _preparation_ will forestall _preparitory_.

To think of _busy_ will save you from the monstrosity _buisness._ To

think of the prefixes _re-_ (meaning _again_) and _dis-_ (meaning

_not_), and the verbs _commend_ and _appoint_, will prevent your writing

_recommend_ or _disappoint_ with a double _c_ or _s_.

Note.--The relationship between words is not always a safe guide to

spelling. Observe _four_, _forty_; _nine_, _ninth_; _maintain_,

_maintenance_; _please_, _pleasant_; _speak_, _speech_; _prevail_,

_prevalent_. Do not confuse the following prefixes, which have no

logical connection:

_ante-_ (before) _anti-_ (against, opposite)

_de-_ (from, about) _dis-_ (apart, away, not)

_per-_ (through, entirely) _pre-_ (before)

Exercise:

1. Write the nouns corresponding to the following verbs:

_prepare_, _allude_, _govern_, _represent_, _degrade_.

2. Write the adjectives corresponding to the following nouns

and the nouns corresponding to the following adjectives:

_desperation_, _academy_, _origin_, _ridiculous_, _miraculous_,

_grammatical_, _arithmetical_, _busy_.

3. Write the adverbs corresponding to the following adjectives:

_real_, _sure_, _actual_, _hurried_, _accidental_,

_incidental_, _grammatical_.

4. Copy the following pairs of related words or related forms

of words: _labor, laboratory_; _debate, debater_; _base,

based_; _deal, dealt_; _chose, chosen_; _mean, meant_.

5. Write each of the following words with a hyphen between the

prefix and the body of the word: _describe_, _description_,

_disappoint_, _disappear_, _disease_, _dissatisfy_, _dissever_,

_permit_, _perspire_, _prescription_, _preconceive_,

_recommend_, _recollect_, _reconsider_, _antedate_,

_antecedent_, _anticlimax_, _antitoxin_.

=Superficial Resemblances between Words=

=73. Guard against misspelling a word because it bears a superficial

resemblance, in sound or appearance, to some other word.= Most of the

words in the following list have no logical connection; the resemblance

is one of form only (_angel_, _angle_). But a few words are included

which are different in spelling in spite of a logical relation

(_breath_, _breathe_).

accept (to receive)

except (to exclude, with exclusion of)

advice (noun)

advise (verb)

affect (to influence in part)

effect (to bring to pass totally)

allusion (a reference)

illusion (a deceiving appearance)

all right

almost

already

altogether

always

alley (a back street)

ally (a confederate)

altar (a structure used in worship)

alter (to make otherwise)

angel (a celestial being)

angle (the meeting place of two lines)

baring (making bare)

barring (obstructing)

bearing (carrying)

born (brought into being)

borne (carried)

breath (noun)

breathe (verb)

capital (a city)

capitol (a building)

canvas (a cloth)

canvass (to solicit)

clothes (garments)

cloths (pieces of cloth)

coarse (not fine)

course (route, method of behavior)

conscious (aware)

conscience (an inner moral sense)

dairy

diary

device (noun)

devise (verb)

desert (a barren country)

dessert (food)

dining room

dinning

disappear

disappoint

disavowal

dissatisfaction

dissimilar

dissipate

dissuade

decent (adjective)

descent (downward slope or motion)

dissent (a disagreement)

dual (adjective)

duel (noun)

formally (in a formal way)

formerly (in time past)

forth

forty

four

fourth

freshman

freshmen (not used as adjective)

gambling (wagering money on games of chance)

gamboling (frisking or leaping with joy)

guard

regard

hear

here

hinder

hindrance

holly (a tree)

holy (hallowed, sacred)

wholly (altogether)

hoping (from _hope_)

hopping

instance (an example)

instants (periods of time)

isle (an island)

aisle (a narrow passage)

its (possessive pronoun)

it's (contraction of _it is_)

Johnson, Samuel

Jonson, Ben

later (comparative of _late_)

latter (the second)

lead (present tense)

led (past tense)

lessen (verb)

lesson (noun)

liable (expresses responsibility or disagreeable probability)

likely (expresses probability)

loose (free, not bound)

lose (to suffer the loss of)

maintain

maintenance

nineteenth

ninetieth

ninety

ninth

past (adjective, adverb, preposition)

passed (verb, past tense)

peace (a state of calm)

piece (a fragment)

perceive

perform

persevere

persuade

purchase

pursue

personal (private, individual)

personnel (the body of persons engaged in some activity)

Philippines

Filipino

plain (clear; adjective)

plain (flat region; noun)

plane (flat; adjective)

plane (geometrical term; noun)

planed (past tense of _plane_)

planned (past tense of _plan_)

pleasant

please

precede

proceed }

succeed } these three are the

exceed } "double _e_ group"

concede

intercede

recede

supersede

pre cé dence (act or right of preceding)

préc e dents (things said or done before, now used as authority

or model)

presence (state of being present)

presents (gifts)

prevail

prevalent

principal (chief, leading, the leading official of a school, a

sum of money)

principle (a general truth)

quiet (still)

quite (completely)

rain

reign (rule of a monarch)

rein (part of a harness)

respectfully ("Yours respectfully")

respectively (in a way proper to each--should never be used

to close a letter)

right

rite (ceremony)

write

shone (past tense of _shine_)

shown (past tense of _show_)

seize

siege

sight (view, spectacle)

site (situation, a plot of ground reserved for some use)

cite (to bring forward as evidence)

speak

speech

Spencer, Herbert (scientist)

Spenser, Edmund (poet)

stationary (not moving)

stationery (writing materials)

statue (a sculptured likeness)

stature (height, figure)

statute (a law)

steal (to take by theft)

steel (a variety of iron)

than

then

their (belonging to them)

there (in that place)

they're (they are)

therefor (to that end, for that thing)

therefore (for that reason)

till

until

to

too

two

track (an imprint, or a road)

tract (an area of land)

tract (a treatise on religion)

village

villain

wandering

wondering

weak (not strong)

week (seven days)

weather

whether

whole (entire)

hole (an opening)

who's (who is)

whose (the possessive of _who_)

your (indicates possession)

you're (contraction of _you are_)

Exercise:

1. Insert _to_, _too_, or _two_: He is ---- tired ---- walk the

----miles ---- the town. Then ----, it is ---- late ---- catch

a car. It is ---- minutes of ----. It is ---- bad.

2. Insert _lose_ or _loose_: You will ---- your money if you

carry it ---- in your pocket. We are ----ing time. The sailor

----ens the rope. Did you ---- your ticket?

3. Insert _speak or speech_: I was ----ing with our congressman

about his recent ----. I ---- from experience.

4. Insert _plan_ or _plane_: The architect's ---- was accepted.

The carpenter's ---- cuts a long shaving. The carpenter does

not ---- the house.

5. Insert _quite_ or _quiet_: The baby is ----ly sleeping. She

is ---- well now, but last night she was ---- sick. Be ----.

Walk ----ly when you go.

=Words in _ei_ or _ie_=

=74. Write _i_ before _e_

When sounded as _ee_

Except after _c_.=

Examples: _believe_, _grief_, _chief_; but _receive_, _deceive_,

_ceiling_.

Exceptions: _Neither financier seized either species of weird leisure._

(Also a few uncommon words, like _seignior_, _inveigle_, _plebeian_.)

Rules based on a key-word, lice, Alice, Celia (_i_ follows _l_ and _e_

follows _c_) apply after two consonants only, and do not help one to

spell a word like _grief_. Rule 74 applies after all consonants.

Note.--The words in which the sound is _ee_ are the words really

difficult to spell. When the sound is any other than _ee_ (especially

when it is _a_), _i_ usually follows _e_.

Examples: _veil_, _weigh_, _freight_, _neighbor_, _height_, _sleight_,

_heir_, _heifer_, _counterfeit_, _foreign_, etc.

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