CHAPTER XIV.

THE USE OF MODELS IN WRITING FICTION.

We have seen how a real incident is worked over into the fundamental

idea for a composition. The same principle ought to hold in the use

of real persons in making the characters in, a novel, or any story

where character-drawing is an important item. In a novel especially,

the characters must be drawn with the greatest care. They must be made

genuine personages. Yet the ill-taste of “putting your friends into a

story” is only less pronounced than the bad art or drawing characters

purely out of the imagination. There is no art in the slavish copying

of persons in real life. Yet it is practically impossible to create

genuine characters in the mind without reference to real life. The

simple solution would seem to be to follow the method of the painter

who uses models, though in so doing he does not make portraits. There

was a time in drawing when the school of “out-of-the-headers” prevailed,

but their work was often grotesque, imperfect, and sometimes utterly

futile in expressing even the idea the artist had in mind. The opposite

extreme in graphic art is photography. The rational use of models is the

happy mean between the two. But the good artist always draws with his eye

on the object, and the good writer should write with his eye on a definite

conception or some real thing or person, from which he varies consciously

and for artistic purpose.

The ordinary observer sees first the peculiarities of a thing. If he

is looking at an old gentleman he sees a fly sitting upon the bald spot

on his head, a wart on his nose, his collar pulled up behind. But the

trained and artistic observer sees the peculiarly perfect outline of the

old man's features and form, and in the tottering, gait bent shoulders,

and soiled senility a straight, handsome youth, fastidious in his dress

and perfect in his form. Such the old man was once, and all the elements

of his broken youth are clearly visible under the hapless veneer of

time for the one who has an eye to see. This is but one illustration

of many that might be offered. A poor shop girl may have the bearing of

a princess. Among New York illustrators the typical model for a society

girl is a young woman of the most ordinary birth and breeding, misfortunes

which are clearly visible in her personal appearance. But she has the

bearing, the air of the social queen, and to the artist she is that alone.

He does not see the veneer of circumstances, though the real society girl

would see nothing else in her humble artistic rival.

In drawing characters the writer has a much larger range of models from

which to choose, in one sense. His models are the people he knows by

personal association day by day during various periods of his life,

from childhood up. Each person he has known has left an impression on

his mind, and that impression is the thing he considers. The art of

painting requires the actual presence in physical person of the model,

a limitation the writer fortunately does not have. At the same time,

the artist of the brush can seek new models and bring them into his

studio without taking too much time or greatly inconveniencing himself.

The writer can get new models only by changing his whole mode of life.

Travel is an excellent thing, yet practically it proves inadequate.

The fleeting impressions do not remain, and only what remains steadily

and permanently in the mind can be used as a model by the novelist.

But during a lifetime one accumulates a large number of models simply

by habitually observing everything that comes in one's way. When the

writer takes up {the} pen to produce a story, he searches through his

mental collection for a suitable model. Sometimes it is necessary

to use several models in drawing the same character, one for this

characteristic, and another for that. But in writing the novelist

should have his eye on his model just as steadily and persistently as

the painter, for so alone can he catch the spirit and inner truth of

nature; and art. If it is anything, is the interpretation of nature.

The ideal character must be made the interpretation of the real

one, not a photographic copy, not idealization or glorification or

caricature, unless the idealization or glorification or caricature

has a definite value in the interpretation.

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