The question of what is thoroughness in school study of literature

is of much importance, and it is of no less difficulty. Certainly

it is not merely the mastery of technical obscurities of language,

the solving of philological puzzles, or the careful examination of

historical facts. Thoroughness in these things, as has already been

said, may be exactness in learning about literature, but not in the

study of literature itself. Consideration of the average acquirements

of pupils in secondary schools makes it fairly evident, it seems to

me, that the study of technique in any of its phases cannot in these

classes be carried very far without the danger of its degenerating into

the most lifeless formalism; and perhaps in nothing else is the tact

and judgment of the teacher so well shown as in the decision how far it

is wise to carry study along particular lines. I have never encountered

a class even in my college work which I could have set to the subjects

recommended in a book for teachers of literature which advises drilling

the students of the high school on the relations in the plays of

Shakespeare "of metre to character," whatever that may mean. Neither

should I set them to distinguish, as is advised by another text-book,

between "the kinds of imagination employed: (_a_) Modifying; (_b_)

Reconstructive; (_c_) Poetical: creative, imperative, or associative."

I could not, indeed, do much with such subjects, from the simple fact

that I do not myself know what such questions mean, and still less

could I answer them. Each instructor, however, must decide for himself,

and with every class decide anew. No fixed standard can be established,

but each case must be settled on its own merits.

FOOTNOTES:

[110:1] The vocabulary, of course, being known before the text is

attempted.

[114:1] See page 221.

X

EXAMINATIONAL

Examinations are at present held to be an essential part of the

machinery of education, and whether we do or do not believe this to

be true, we are as teachers forced to accept them. Especially is it

incumbent on teachers in the secondary schools to pay much attention to

accustoming pupils to these ordeals and to preparing them to go through

them unscathed. Many instructors, as has been said already, become so

completely the slaves to this process that they confine their efforts

to it entirely, and few are able to prevent its taking undue importance

in their work and in the minds of their pupils.

The general principle should be kept in mind that no examination is of

real value for itself in the training of youth, and that to study for

it directly and explicitly is fatal to all the higher uses of the study

of literature or of anything else. Tests of proficiency and advancement

are necessary, but they should be regarded as tests, and no pains

should be spared to impress upon every student the fact that beyond

this office of measuring attainment they are of no value whatever.

Examinations exist, however, and nothing which can be done directly is

likely to remove from the minds of sub-freshmen the notion that they

study literature largely if not solely for the sake of being able to

struggle successfully with the difficulties of entrance papers. The

only means of combating this idea is the indirect method of making

the study interesting in and for itself; of nourishing a love for

great writings and fostering appreciation of masterpieces. It may be

added, moreover, that this is also the surest way of securing ease and

proficiency on just those lines in which it is the ambition of pedantic

teachers to have their pupils excel. Classes are more effectively

trained for college tests by teaching them to think, to examine for

themselves, to have real responsiveness and feeling for literature,

than they can possibly be by any drill along formal lines. Here as

pretty generally in life the indirect is the surest.

More is done in the way of preparation for any rational examination,

I believe, by training youth to recognize good literature and to

realize what makes it good, than by any amount of deliberate drill of

especially prescribed works or laborious following out of the lines

indicated by old examination-papers. Much of this is effected by what

has been spoken of as inspirational teaching, the simple training

of children to have real enjoyment of the best. In the lower grades

of school this is all that can be profitably attempted. Before the

student leaves the secondary school, however, he should be able for

himself to make in a general way an application of the principles which

underlie literary distinctions. He should be able broadly to recognize

the qualities which belong to the best work. He should be able from

personal experience to appreciate the force of the remarks of De

Quincey:

What is it that we mean by literature? Popularly, and amongst

the thoughtless, it is held to include everything that is

printed in a book. Little logic is required to disturb this

definition. The most thoughtless person is easily made aware

that in the idea of literature one essential element is some

relation to a general and common interest of man, so that what

applies only to a local or professional or merely personal

interest, even though presenting itself in the shape of a book,

will not belong to literature. . . . Men have so little

reflected on the higher functions of literature as to

find it a paradox if one should describe it as a mean or

subordinate purpose of books to give information. But this is

a paradox only in the sense which makes it honorable to be

paradoxical. . . . What do you learn from "Paradise Lost"?

Nothing at all. What do you learn from a cookery-book?

Something new, something you did not know before, in

every paragraph. But would you therefore put the wretched

cookery-book on a higher level of estimation than the divine

poem? What you owe to Milton is not any knowledge, of which a

million separate items are still but a million of advancing

steps on the same earthly level; what you owe is power, that

is, exercise and expansion to your own latent capacity of

sympathy with the infinite, where each pulse and each separate

influx is a step upward, a step ascending as upon a Jacob's

ladder from earth to mysterious altitudes above the earth.

All the steps of knowledge, from first to last, carry you

further on the same plane, but could never raise you one foot

above your ancient level of earth; whereas the very first step

in power is a flight, is an ascending movement into another

element where earth is forgotten.—"The Poetry of Pope."

If a boy or girl has any vital and personal perception of the truth

which is here so eloquently set forth, this perception affords a

certain criterion by which to judge whatever work comes to hand. It

will also give both the inclination and the power to judge rightly, so

that anything which an examination-paper may legitimately ask is in so

far within the scope of ordinary thought.

I have ventured, in another chapter, to give some idea of the way

in which I think such a work as "Macbeth" might be treated in

the secondary school. I wish to emphasize the fact that it is an

illustration and not a model. It is the way in which I should do it;

but the teaching of literature, I repeat, is naught if it is not marked

by the personality of the teacher. Of the results to be aimed at one

need not be in doubt; concerning the methods there are and there should

be as many opinions as there are sound and individual instructors. This

illustration I have included because it may serve as a sort of diagram

to make plain things which can only clumsily be presented otherwise,

and because I hope that it may be suggestive even to teachers who

differ widely from this exact method.

What is aimed at in this manner of treating the play is primarily

the enjoyment of the pupil, secondarily the broadening of his

mind, and thirdly the training of his powers for the examinations

inevitably lying in wait for him. It may seem contradictory that I

put pleasure first and yet would begin with straightforward drill on

the vocabulary. Such training, however, is preparatory to the taking

up of literature, I believe it necessary to the best results, and

I have already said that to my mind no need exists for making this

dull. Even if it be looked upon as simple drudgery, however, I should

not shirk it. Children should be taught that they are to meet hard

work pluckily. They cannot evade the multiplication-table without

subsequent inconvenience, and the sooner they realize that this is true

in principle all through life, the better for them. Their enjoyment,

moreover, will be tenfold greater if they earn it by sturdy work.

It would be well, I believe, if all teachers in the secondary

schools who are in the habit of concerning themselves largely with

examinations and of allowing the minds of those under them to become

fixed on these could realize that readers of blue-books are sure to

be favorably impressed by two things: by the expression of thoughts

obviously individual, and by the evidence of clear thinking. If these

two qualities characterize an examination-book, the chances of its

passing muster are so large that exact formal knowledge counts for

little in comparison. All teachers who are intelligently in earnest

try to put as little stress on examinations as is possible under

existing conditions, but not all keep clearly in mind the fact that

the best remedy for possible harm is the cultivation of the student's

individuality.

The question of written work in preparation for entrance tests is

a difficult one, and it is one which has been largely answered by

the papers set by the colleges. It is natural that teachers who are

entirely aware that their own reputations will largely depend upon the

success of the candidates they send up should endeavor to train their

classes in the especial line of writing which seems best to suit the

ideas of examiners. The principle of selection is not, it seems to me,

a sound one, but it is inevitable. The one thing which may be done is

to make the topics selected as human and as personal as possible: to

insist that the boy or girl who is writing of Lady Macbeth or Hamlet

shall make the strongest effort possible to realize the character as

a real being; shall as far as possible take the attitude of writing

concerning some actual person about whom are known the facts set down

in the play. This is less difficult than it sounds, and while it is

never entirely possible for a child to realize Lady Macbeth as if she

were a neighbor, most children can go much farther in this direction

than is generally appreciated.

Themes retelling the plot of novel or play are seldom satisfactory.

Satisfactorily to summarize the story of a work of any length requires

more literary grasp than can possibly be expected in a secondary

school. It is far better to set the wits of children to work to fill up

gaps of time in the stories as they are originally written; to imagine

what Macbeth and his wife had said to each other before he goes to the

chamber of Duncan in the second act, for instance, or the talk between

Silas Marner and Eppie after the visit in which Godfrey Cass disclosed

himself as the girl's father. These are not easy subjects, and it is

not to be expected that the grade of work produced will be high, but it

is at least likely to be original and genuine.

Description is a snare into which it is easy for teacher or pupil

to fall. It generally means the more or less conscious imitation of

passages from the reading, or a sort of crazy-quilt of scraps in which

sentences of the author are clumsily pieced together. In the highest

grades good work may sometimes be obtained by asking pupils to describe

the setting of a scene in a play, but this is far too difficult for

most classes.

Examination of character, of situations, or of motives affords the best

opportunity for written work in connection with literary study. To make

literary study subordinate to the practice of composition is manifestly

wrong, yet in many schools this is done in practice even if it is not

justified in theory. Children should be taught to write by other means

than by themes in connection with the masterpieces of literature. The

old cry against using "Paradise Lost," and the soliloquies of Hamlet

as exercises in parsing might well be repeated with added emphasis of

the modern fashion of making Shakespeare and Milton mere adjuncts to a

course in composition. The written work is, of course, to be corrected

where it is faulty, but its chief purpose should never be anything

outside of the better understanding and appreciation of the authors

read.

In a brief, sensible pamphlet on "Methods of Teaching of Novels" May

Estelle Cook remarks:

There is another point which I should like to make for the

study of character, though with some hesitation, since there

is room for great difference of opinion about it. It is this:

that the study of character leads directly to the exercise of

the moral instinct. Whether we like it or not, it is true that

the school-boy—even the boy, and much more the girl—will

raise the question, "Is it right?" and "Is it wrong?" and

that we must either answer or ignore these questions. My own

feeling about it is that this irrepressible moral instinct

was included by Providence partly for the purpose of making a

special diversion in favor of the English teacher. . . . A boy

will read scenes in "Macbeth" through a dozen times for the

sake of deciding whether Macbeth or Lady Macbeth was chiefly

responsible for the murder of Duncan, when he will read them

only once for the story; and this extra zeal is not so much

because he wants to satisfy a craving for facts, as because he

enjoys fixing praise or blame. . . . My experience with the Sir

Roger de Coverley papers has been that the class failed to get

any imaginative grasp of them until I frankly appealed to the

moral instinct by asking, "What did Addison mean to teach in

this paper?" "Did the Eighteenth Century need that lesson?" and

"Do we still need it?" By that process the class have finally

reached a grasp of Sir Roger which has given them fortitude to

write a theme on "Sir Roger at an Afternoon Tea."

My own definition of imagination is evidently not that of the writer,

and I am not able to agree that this appeal to the moral instinct

develops anything other than an intellectual understanding; but that

point is unimportant here. The thing which is to be noted is that

on the moral side children may be able to think intelligently and

individually in regard to the characters and the situations of the

plays and the novels read. The teacher, in choosing such subjects for

written work, must, of course, be careful to avoid topics which have

already been considered in the book itself. In a novel by George Eliot,

for instance, all possible moral issues are likely to be so discussed

and rediscussed by the novelist as to leave little room for the

thought of the reader to exercise itself independently; but in all the

plays of Shakespeare, and in the fiction of most of the masters, the

opportunities are ample.

The supreme test of any subject which is to be given to students in

their written work is whether it is one upon which it is reasonable

to suppose they can and will have thought which is individual and

therefore original. If it were necessary to make nice distinctions

between that which is and that which is not legitimately part of the

study of literature as an art, one must go much further than this. The

writing of themes, however, is part of the examinational side of the

work; the main thing is to be sure that it is not dwelt upon more

than is necessary, and that it is within the range of the personal

experience of the student. If teachers feel compelled to set their

classes to write formal and lifeless themes on pedantic topics such

as too often appear in examination-papers, they will do well to keep

in mind that this is not the study of literature, but a stultifying

process which lessens the power of appreciation and replaces

intelligent comprehension by mechanical imitation.

* * * * *

In connection with the subject of this chapter I may mention a

device which may not be without practical value in secondary-school

examinations. It affords a means of discovering how well the student

is succeeding in grasping general principles and in making actual

application of them; while at the same time it should impress upon him

the fact that he is not studying merely a series of required readings,

but the nature and qualities of literature.

On an examination-paper in second-year English at the Institute of

Technology was put this test:

It is assumed that the student has never read the following

extract. State what seem its excellent points (_a_) of

workmanship; (_b_) of thought; (_c_) of imagination.

To this was added a brief extract from some standard author.

The opening statement was made in order that the class should

understand the selection to be not from any required reading, but from

some work presumably entirely unfamiliar. The points of excellence only

were asked for in order to fix attention on merits; and indirectly

to strengthen, so far as might be, the perception of the importance

of looking in literature for merits rather than for defects. It is

undoubtedly proper that scholars should be able to perceive defects,

but this power is best trained by educating them to be sensitive and

responsive to excellencies.[131:1]

The necessities of time made it impossible to put upon the papers of

which I am speaking extracts of much length, and the class were told

that not much was expected in comment upon the thought expressed.

The purpose of the question, that of seeing how intelligently they

were able to apply such principles as they had learned, was also

frankly put. They were warned against generalities and statements

unsupported. Then they were left to their own devices. The results

were all suggestive, and of course were of widely varying degrees of

merit. A few samples may be given, chosen, I confess, from those more

interesting. On one paper were the opening lines of the second book of

"Paradise Lost."

High on a throne of royal state, which far

Outshone the wealth of Ormus and of Ind,

Or where the gorgeous east with richest hand

Showers on her kings barbaric pearl and gold,

Satan exalted sat.

Among the comments were these:

Of the workmanship of this selection we may say that it is

good. The selection of words is especially forcible. "Gorgeous

east" and "richest hand" are extremely so. But what I consider

a fine use of a word is the word "barbaric." Here we can see

the early inhabitants of the uncivilized rich countries of the

east; the inhabitants ignorant of the value of their wealth,

throwing it around as we would the pebbles on a beach. The

thought and the imagination are good. We can see before us the

vividly portrayed picture. There sits Satan high above his

surrounding in such rich and dazzling magnificence that it

outshines even the richest kings of the richest part of the

world.

* * * * *

The best point of the workmanship consists in placing the

description first and not completing the thought until the last

line; thus keeping the reader in suspense, and causing careful

attention to be put on all the sentence. The words "high,"

"throne," "royal," and "exalted" combine to bring out the

thought of Satan's majesty. The thought of unbounded wealth is

brought out by the use of the word "showers" in the third line.

The author is able to give us a much more vivid idea of the

magnificence of the throne by letting us construct the throne

to suit ourselves than by giving a detailed description and

leaving nothing to the imagination. Even the materials are only

suggested, the whole idea being one of unbounded wealth and

splendor.

* * * * *

The choice of words is one of the best points in the

workmanship of the quotation. The arrangement also adds

emphasis. All the descriptions of the throne are so vivid that

the mind is deeply impressed by the splendor and richness of

the throne. The "gorgeous east" is very expressive of wealth

and beauty. With this arrangement of words the piece becomes

very striking and the choice of the strongest words is shown

too in touch with the whole sentence. Whereas on the other hand

if any other arrangement had been used much of the force of

these words would have been lost. The thought of the extract

is to describe the great wealth and beauty with which Satan is

surrounded. The writer must have a very vivid imagination to

describe such a scene of wealth and beauty. The first word,

"High," appeals directly to the imagination and immediately

gives the impression of power.

These answers were written by boys who had not been called upon to do

anything of the sort before, and while their inadequacy is evident

enough, they are genuine, and are sound as far as they go. Of course,

after such a test, the first business of the teacher is to go over the

selection and to show how he would himself have answered the question.

The class is then ready to appreciate qualities which might be recited

to them in vain before they have set their minds to the problem. In

the examples I have given no one has touched, for instance, upon the

suggestiveness of the words "Ormus" and "Ind," but very little is

needed to make them see this after they have had the passage in an

examination-paper.

A couple of examples dealing with the first two stanzas of Byron's

"Destruction of Sennacherib" may be given by way of showing how a

different selection was treated.

The first thing I noticed in reading the extract was the

perfect rhythm. You cannot read the extract without wanting

to say it aloud. Then the choice of words struck me: "The

_sheen_ of their spears;" "when summer is _green_." It is hard

for me to distinguish workmanship, thought, and imagination.

I cannot tell whether the words and metaphors used in the

extract were the result of deliberate choice and of long

thought; but I strongly suspect that he saw the whole thing in

his imagination, and the words just came to him. It is hard

to understand how anything that reads so smoothly could have

been written with labor. The strongest point of the extract

seems to be its richness in illustration: "The Assyrian came

down like the wolf on the fold." No long, detailed description

could explain better the wildness of such an attack, the sudden

swoop of some half-barbaric horde, striking suddenly, and then

disappearing into the night. "The sheen of the spears was like

stars on the sea." The flash from a spear would be just such a

gleam as the reflected star from the crest of a wave, visible

for a moment and then gone.

* * * * *

Some of its excellent points of workmanship are melody and

selection of words. The melody is excellent. It has a soothing

effect when read aloud, and there is not a place where

one would hesitate in regard to the accenting of words. I

believe the melody is so good that a person only knowing the

pronunciation of the first line could almost read the rest

of it correctly because the sound of each line is so closely

connected with that of all other lines. The selection of words

is very good. There is not a place where a substitution could

be made which would improve the meaning, sense, or melody. The

extract shows great thought. In the last paragraph especially

where the Assyrians are compared to the leaves of summer and

in autumn. No better thought could bring out more clearly how

badly the host was defeated. In the first paragraph it also

compares the Assyrians to a wolf coming down upon a fold.

This again gives a definite idea, and seems to point out how

confident they were of victory. The imagination is very vivid.

You can almost think you were on the field and that all the

events were taking place before you.

I have copied these partly to emphasize the point that it is idle to

expect too much, and partly to illustrate the form in which genuine

perception is likely to work out upon a school examination-paper. These

have not been chosen as the best papers written, but each is good

because each shows sincere opinion.

This sort of question is of course in the line of what is constantly

done in class, but it is after all a different thing when it is made

to emphasize the idea that an examination is a test of the power to

appreciate literature instead of an exercise of memory.

FOOTNOTES:

[131:1] See page 205.

XI

THE STUDY OF PROSE

Method in teaching is properly the adaptation of the personality of

a given teacher to the personality of a given class. It cannot be

defined by hard and fast rules, and the only value in presenting such

illustrations as the following is that they may afford hints which

teachers will be able with advantage to develop in terms of their own

individuality. The way that is wise in one is never to be set down as

the way best for another; and here as elsewhere I offer not a model

but simply an illustration. If it suggest, it has fulfilled a better

purpose than if it were taken blindly as a rigid guide.

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