CHAPTER VI.

The first important poem to which Keats sets his hand after finishing

"Endymion" was "Isabella, or The Pot of Basil." This was completed by

April 27, 1818, the same month in which "Endymion" was published.

Hamilton Reynolds had suggested the project of producing a volume of

tales in verse, founded upon stories in Boccaccio's "Decameron"; some of

the tales would have been executed by Reynolds himself, who did in fact

produce on this plan the two poems named collectively "The Garden of

Florence." As it turned out, however, Keats's tale appeared in a volume

of his own, 1820, and Reynolds's two came out independently in the

succeeding year.

"The Eve of St. Agnes" was written in the winter beginning the year

1819. Then came "Hyperion," of which two versions remain, both

fragmentary. The first version (begun perhaps as early as October or

September 1818), the only one which Keats himself published, is in all

respects by far the better. He was much under the spell of Milton while

he wrote it; and finally he gave it up in September 1819, declaring that

"there were too many Miltonic inversions in it." He went so far as to

say in a letter written in the same month that "the 'Paradise Lost,'

though so fine in itself, is a corruption of our language--a northern

dialect accommodating itself to Greek and Latin inversions and

intonations." "Hyperion" was included in Keats's third volume at the

request of the publishers, contrary to the author's own preference. One

may readily infer that it was to "Hyperion" that he referred when, in

the preface to "Endymion," he spoke of returning to Grecian mythology

for another subject: the full length of the poem was to have been ten

books.

"Lamia" was the last poem of considerable length which Keats brought to

completion and published. It seems to have been begun towards the summer

of 1819, and was written with great care, after a heedful study of

Dryden's methods of composition. On September 18, 1819, Keats wrote: "I

am certain there is that sort of fire in it which must take hold of

people in some way, give them either pleasant or unpleasant sensations."

The subject was taken from Burton's "Anatomy of Melancholy," in which

there is a reference to the "Life of Apollonius" by Philostratus as the

original source of the legend.

The volume--entitled "Lamia, Isabella, The Eve of St. Agnes, and other

Poems"--came out towards the beginning of July 1820, when the malady of

Keats had reached an advanced and alarming stage. At the beginning of

September Keats wrote to Brown--"The sale of my book is very slow,

though it has been very highly rated." I am not aware that there is any

other record to show how far the publication may ultimately have

approached towards becoming a commercial success; nor indeed would it be

altogether easy to define the date at which Keats became a recognized

and uncontested poet of high rank, and his works a solid property. His

early death, at the beginning of 1821, must have formed a

turning-point--not to speak of the favourable notice of "Endymion," and

subordinately of the "Lamia" volume, which appeared in _The Edinburgh

Review_, Jeffrey being the critic, in August 1820. Perhaps Jeffrey's

praise may have facilitated an arrangement which Keats made in September

1820--the sale of the copyright of "Endymion" to Messrs. Taylor and

Hessey for L100; no second edition of the poem appeared, however, while

he was alive. I should presume that, within five or six years after

Keats's decease, ridicule and rancour were already much in the minority;

and that, by some such date as 1835 to 1840, they had finally "hidden

their diminished heads," living only, with too persistent a life, in the

retributive memory of men.

Some of the shorter poems in the "Lamia" volume must receive brief

mention here. The "Ode to Psyche" was written in February 1819, and was

termed by Keats the first poem with which he had taken pains--"I have

for the most part dashed off my lines in a hurry." "To Autumn," the "Ode

on Melancholy," and the "Ode on a Grecian Urn," succeeded. The "Ode to a

Nightingale" was composed at Hampstead in the spring of 1819 _after

breakfast_, forming two or three hours' work: thus we see that the

nocturnal imagery of the ode was a general or a particular reminiscence,

not actual to the very moment of composition. This poem and the "Ode on

a Grecian Urn" were recited by Keats to Haydon in a chaunting tone in

Kilburn meadows, and were published in the serial entitled "Annals of

the Fine Arts." The urn thus immortalized may probably be one preserved

in the garden of Holland House.

With the "Lamia" volume we have come to the close of what Keats

published during his lifetime. Something remains to be said of other

writings of his--almost all of them earlier in date than the publication

of that volume--which remained imprinted or uncollected at the time of

his death.

In February 1818 Keats, Leigh Hunt, and Shelley, undertook to write a

sonnet each upon the river Nile. In order of merit, the three sonnets

are the reverse of what one might have been willing to forecast. I at

least am clearly of opinion that Hunt's sonnet is the best (though with

a weak ending), Keats's the second, and Shelley's a decidedly bad third.

The leading thought in each sonnet is characteristic of its author.

Keats adheres to the simple natural facts of the case, while Hunt and

Shelley turn the Nile into a moral or intellectual symbol. Keats says

essentially that to associate the Nile with ideas of antique desolation

is but a delusion of ignorance, for this river is really rich and fresh

like others. Hunt makes the Egyptian stream an emblem of history tending

towards the progress of the individual and the race; while Shelley reads

into the Nile a lesson of the good and the evil inhering in knowledge.

"The Eve of St. Mark"--a fragment which very few of Keats's completed

poems can rival in point of artist-like feeling and writing--belongs to

the years 1818-9. I find nothing in print to account for his leaving it

unfinished.

In May 1819 Keats had an idea of inventing a new structure of

sonnet-rhyme; and he sent to his brother and sister-in-law a sonnet

composed accordingly, beginning--

"If by dull rhymes our English must be chained."

He wrote: "I have been endeavouring to discover a better sonnet-stanza

than we have. The legitimate does not suit the language well, from the

pouncing rhymes. The other appears too elegiac, and the couplet at the

end of it has seldom a pleasing effect. I do not pretend to have

succeeded." Keats's experiment reads agreeably. It comprises five rhymes

altogether; the first rhyme being repeated thrice at arbitrary

intervals; and the last rhyme twice in lines twelve and fourteen.

The tragedy of "Otho the Great" was written by Keats (as already

referred to) in July and August 1819, in co-operation with Armitage

Brown. The diction of the play is, it would appear, Keats's entirely;

whereas the invention and development of plot in the first four acts is

wholly due to Brown. The two friends sat together; Brown described each

successive scene, and Keats turned it into verse, without troubling his

head as to the subject-matter for the scene next ensuing. When it came

to the fifth act, however, Keats inquired what would be the conclusion

of the play; and, not being satisfied with Brown's project which he

deemed too humorous and too melodramatic, he both invented and wrote a

fifth act for himself. He felt sure that "Otho the Great" was "a

tolerable tragedy," and set his heart upon getting it acted--Kean was

well inclined to take the principal character, Prince Ludolph; and it

became his greatest ambition to write fine plays. "Otho" was in fact

accepted for Drury Lane Theatre, on the offer of Brown, who left Keats's

authorship in the background; but, as both the writers were impatient of

delay, Brown, in February 1820, took away the MS., and Covent Garden

Theatre was thought of instead--without any practical result. As soon as

"Otho" was finished, Brown suggested King Stephen as the subject of

another drama; and Keats, without any further collaboration from his

friend, composed the few scenes of it which remain. "One of my

ambitions" (writes Keats to Bailey in August 1819), "is to make as great

a revolution in modern dramatic writing as Kean has done in acting."

The ballad "La Belle Dame sans Merci," than which Keats did nothing more

thrilling or more perfect, may perhaps have been written in the earlier

half of 1819; it was published in 1820, in Hunt's _Indicator_ for May

10th, under the signature "Caviare"; the same signature which was

adopted for the sonnet, "A dream, after reading Dante's episode of Paolo

and Francesca." Keats may probably have meant to imply, in some

bitterness of spirit, that his poems were "caviare to the general." The

title of this ballad was suggested to Keats by seeing it at the head of

a translation from Alain Chartier in a copy of Chaucer. As to the

"Dream" sonnet he wrote in April 1819:--

"The 5th canto of Dante pleases me more, and more; it is that one

in which he meets with Paulo and Francesca. I had passed many

days in rather a low state of mind, and in the midst of them I

dreamt of being in that region of Hell. The dream was one of the

most delightful enjoyments I ever had in my life. I floated about

the wheeling atmosphere, as it is described, with a beautiful

figure, to whose lips mine were joined, it seemed for an age; and

in the midst of all this cold and darkness I was warm.

Ever-flowery tree-tops sprang up, and we rested on them,

sometimes with the lightness of a cloud, till the wind blew us

away again. I tried a sonnet on it; there are fourteen lines in

it, but nothing of what I felt. Oh that I could dream it every

night!"

The last long work which Keats undertook, and he wrote it with extreme

facility, was "The Cap and Bells; or The Jealousies, a Fairy Tale," in

the Spenserian stanza. What remains is probably far less than Keats

intended the tale to amount to, but it is enough to enable us to

pronounce upon its merits. The poem was begun soon after Keats's first

attack of blood-spitting in February 1820. It seems singular that under

such depressing conditions he should have written in so frivolous and

jaunty a spirit, and provoking that his last long work (the last, that

is, if we except the recast of "Hyperion") should be about the most

valueless which he produced, at any date after commencing upon

"Endymion." This poem has been said to be written in the spirit of

Ariosto; a statement which, in justice to the brilliant Italian, cannot

be admitted. It may well be, however, as Lord Houghton suggests, that

the general notion was suggested by Brown, who had translated the first

five cantos (not indeed of Ariosto, but) of the "Orlando Innamorato" of

Bojardo. "The Cap and Bells" appears to be destitute of distinct plan,

though some sort of satirical allusion to the marital and extra-marital

exploits of George IV. is traceable in it; meagre and purposeless in

invention; a poor farrago of pumped-up and straggling jocosity. Perhaps

a hearty laugh has never been got out of it; although there are points

here and there at which a faint snigger may be permissible, and the

concluding portion improves somewhat. Keats seems to have intended to

publish it under a pseudonym, Lucy Vaughan Lloyd; and Hunt gave, in _The

Indicator_ of August 23, 1820, some taste of its quality, possibly

meaning to print more of it anon.

The last verses which Keats ever wrote formed the sonnet here ensuing.

He composed this late in September 1820, after landing on the

Dorsetshire coast, probably near Lulworth, and returning to the ship

which bore him to his doom in Italy; and he wrote it down on a blank

page in Shakespeare's Poems, facing "A Lover's Complaint."

"Bright star, would I were steadfast as thou art;

Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night,

And watching with eternal lids apart,

Like Nature's patient sleepless eremite,

The moving waters at their priestlike task

Of pure ablution round earth's human shores,

Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask

Of snow upon the mountains and the moors:--

No, yet still steadfast, still unchangeable,

Pillowed upon my fair love's ripening breast,

To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,

Awake for ever in a sweet unrest;

Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,

And so live ever--or else swoon to death."

Of poetic projects which remained unfulfilled when Keats died we

hear--leaving out of count the works which he had begun and left

uncompleted--of only one. During his voyage to Naples he often spoke of

wishing to write the story of Sabrina, as indicated in Milton's "Comus,"

connecting it with some points in English history and character.

In prose--apart from his letters, which are noticeably various in mood,

matter, and manner, and contain many admirable things--Keats wrote

extremely little. In a weekly paper with which Reynolds was connected,

_The Champion_, December 1817, he published two articles on "Kean as a

Shakespearean Actor:" they are not remarkable. With the above-named

articles are now associated some "Notes on Shakespeare," not written

with a view to publication; these appear to me somewhat strained and

bloated. There are also some "Notes on Milton's 'Paradise Lost.'" On

September 22, 1819, Keats addressed to Mr. Dilke a letter, which however

does not appear to have been actually sent off. As it shows a definite

intention of writing in prose for regular publication and for an income,

a few sentences are worth quoting.

"It concerns a resolution I have taken to endeavour to acquire

something by temporary writing in periodical works. You must

agree with me how unwise it is to keep feeding upon hopes which,

depending so much on the state of temper and imagination, appear

gloomy or bright, near or afar off, just as it happens.... You

may say I want tact; that is easily acquired.... I should, a year

or two ago, have spoken my mind on every subject with the utmost

simplicity. I hope I have learned a little better, and am

confident I shall be able to cheat as well as any literary Jew of

the market, and shine up an article on anything without much

knowledge of the subject--aye, like an orange. I would willingly

have recourse to other means. I cannot; I am fit for nothing but

literature.... Notwithstanding my 'aristocratic' temper, I cannot

help being very much pleased with the present public proceedings.

I hope sincerely I shall be able to put a mite of help to the

liberal side of the question before I die."

On the following day Keats wrote to Brown on the same subject--

"I will write on the liberal side of the question for whoever

will pay me. I have not known yet what it is to be diligent. I

purpose living in town in a cheap lodging, and endeavouring, for

a beginning, to get the theatricals of some paper.... I shall

apply to Hazlitt, who knows the market as well as any one, for

something to bring me in a few pounds as soon as possible. I

shall not suffer my pride to hinder me. The whisper may go

round--I shall not hear it. If I can get an article in _The

Edinburgh_, I will. One must not be delicate."

In pursuance of this plan, Keats did, for a few days in October, take a

lodging in Westminster. He then reverted to Hampstead, and finally the

scheme came to nothing, principally perhaps because his fatal illness

began, and everything had to be given up which was not directly

controlled by considerations of health.

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