SPECIAL CRITICISMS.

(_a_) _Foreign_.

As there is reason to believe that opinion at home has been very

considerably affected by foreign criticism of _The Book Annexed_,

it will be well at this point to give some attention to what has

been said in English journals in review of the work thus far

accomplished. The more noteworthy of the foreign criticisms are

those contained in _The Church Quarterly Review_, _The Church

Times_, and _The Guardian_.[40]

The Church Quarterly reviewer opens with an expression of deep

regret at "the failure to take advantage of the opportunity for

reinstating the Athanasian Creed." As already observed, no such

opportunity existed. By formal vote the Joint Committee debarred

itself from any proceeding of this sort, and the Convention, which

sat in judgment on its work, was manifestly of opinion that in so

acting the Committee had rightly interpreted its charter.

The reviewer, who is in full sympathy with the movement for

enrichment as such, goes on to recommend, as a more excellent

way than that followed in _The Book Annexed_, the compilation of

An Appendix to the Book of Common Prayer to contain the much

needed _Additional Services_ for both Sunday and other use in

churches, in mission chapels, and in religious communities, as

well as a full supply of _Occasional Prayers and Thanksgivings_

for objects and purposes, missionary and otherwise, which are as

yet entirely unrepresented in our Offices.

There are obvious reasons why this device should commend itself to

an English Churchman, for it is unlikely that anything better than

this, or, indeed, anything one half so satisfactory, could be

secured by Act of Parliament.

For something very much better than this, however, a self-governed

Church, like our own, has a right to look, and, in all probability,

will continue to look until the thing is found. _An Appendix_ to a

manual of worship, whether the manual be Prayer Book or Hymnal,[41]

is and cannot but be, from the very nature of things, a blemish to

the eye, an embarrassment to the hand, and a vexation to the spirit.

Such _addenda_ carry on their face the suggestion that they are

makeshifts, postscripts, after-thoughts; and in their lack of

dignity, as well as of convenience, pronounce their own condemnation.

Moreover, in our particular case, no "Appendix," "Prymer," or

"Authorized Vade-mecum" could accomplish the ends that are most

of all desired. Fancy putting the _Magnificat_, the _Nunc dimittis_,

the Versicles that follow the Creed, and the "Lighten our darkness"

into an "Appendix." It would be the defeat of our main object.

Then, too, this is to be remembered, that in order to secure a

"fully authorized Appendix," we, in this country, should be obliged

to follow precisely the same legal process we follow in altering

the Prayer Book. If an Occasional Office cannot pass the ordeal of

the criticism of two successive Conventions, it ought not to be set

forth at all; if it can and does stand that test, then it ought to

be inserted in the Prayer Book in the particular place where it most

appropriately belongs and may most readily be found.

Moreover, it should be remembered that one, and by no means the

least efficient, of the causes that brought the Common Prayer into

existence in the sixteenth century was disgust at the multiplication

of service-books. We American Churchmen have two already; let us

beware of adding a third.

The critic of _The Quarterly_ was probably unacquainted with the

fact that in the American Episcopal Church the experimental setting

forth of Offices "for optional and discretional use" is not possible

under the terms of the Constitution. We either must adopt outright

and for permanent use, or else peremptorily reject whatever is urged

upon us in the name of liturgical improvement.

Entering next upon a detailed criticism of the contents of The _Book

Annexed_ the writer proceeds to offer a number of suggestions, some

of them of great value. He pleads earnestly and with real force for

the restoration of the Lord's Prayer to its "place of honor" between

the Creed and the Preces, showing, in a passage of singular beauty,

how the whole daily office "may be said to have grown out of, or

radiated from, or been crystallized round the central _Pater

noster_" even as "from the Words of Institution has grown the

Christian Liturgy."

The critic has only praise for the amendments in the Office

for Thanksgiving Day; approves the selection of Proper Sentences

for the opening of Morning and Evening Prayer; avers, certainly

with truth, that the Office of the Beatitudes might be improved;

welcomes "the very full repertory of special prayers"; thinks

that the _Short Office of Prayer for Sundry Occasions_ "certainly

supplies a want"; rejoices in the recognition of the Feast of the

Transfiguration; and closes what is by far the most considerable,

and, both as respects praise and blame, the most valuable of all

the reviews that have been made of _The Book Annexed_ whether at

home or abroad, with these words:

On the whole, we very heartily congratulate our Transatlantic

brothers on the labors of their Joint Committee. We hope their

recommendations may be adopted, and more in the same direction;

and that the two or three serious blemishes which we have felt

constrained to point out and to lament may be removed from the

book in the form finally adopted.

And further, we very earnestly trust that this work, which has

been very evidently so carefully and conscientiously done, may

speedily, by way of example and precedent, bear fruit in a like

process of enrichment among ourselves.

Commending these last words to the consideration of those who

take alarm at the suggestion of touching the Prayer Book lest

we may hurt the susceptibilities of our "kin beyond sea," and

unduly anticipate that "joint action of both Churches," which,

at least until disestablishment comes, must always remain a sheer

impossibility, we pass to a consideration of the six articles

contributed to the _Church Times_ in July and August last, under

the title, _The Revised American Prayer Book_. Here we come upon

a writer who, if not always edifying, has the undoubted merit of

being never dull. In fact, so deliciously are logical inconsequence

and accidental humor mingled throughout his fifteen columns of

discursive criticism that a suspicion arises as to the writer's

nationality. It is doubtful whether anyone born on the English side

of the Irish Sea could possibly have suggested the establishment

of a Saint's Day in honor of the late respected Warden of Racine

College, or seriously have proposed that Messrs. Oliver Wendell

Holmes, Russell Lowell, Henry James, and W. D. Howells be appointed

a jury of "literary arbitrament" to sit in judgment on the liturgical

language of _The Book Annexed_; and this out of respect to our

proper national pride. Doubtless it would add perceptibly to the

amused sense of the unfitness of things with which these eminent

liberals must have seen themselves thus named, if permission could

be given to the jury, when empanelled, to "co-opt" into its number

Mr. Samuel Clemens and Mr. Dudley Warner.[42]

The general tenor of the writer in _The Church Times_ may fairly

be inferred from the following extract from the first article of

the series:

The judgment that must be pronounced on the work as a whole is

precisely that which has been passed on the Revised New Testament,

that there are doubtless some few changes for the better, so obvious

and so demanded beforehand by all educated opinion that to have

neglected them would at once have stamped the revisers as blockheads

and dunces; but that the set-off in the way of petty and meddlesome

changes for the worse, neglect of really desirable improvements,

bad English, failure in the very matter of pure scholarship just

where it was least to be expected, and general departure from

the terms of the Commission assigned to them (notably by their

introduction of confusion instead of flexibility into the services,

so that the congregation can seldom know what is going to happen)

has so entirely outweighed the merits of the work that it cannot

possibly be adopted by the Church, and must be dismissed as a dismal

fiasco, to be dealt with anew in some more adequate fashion.

This paragraph is not reproduced for the purpose of discrediting

the writer of it as a judge of English prose, for there are various

passages in the course of the six articles that would more readily

lend themselves to such a use. The object in quoting it is simply

to put the reader into possession, in a compact form, of the most

angry, even if not the most formidable, of the various indictments

yet brought against _The Book Annexed_.

Moreover, the last words of the extract supply a good text for

certain didactic remarks that ought to be made, with respect to

what is possible and what is not possible in the line of liturgical

revision in America.

Worthless as the result of the Joint Committee's labors has turned

out to be, their motive, we are assured, was a good one. The

critic's contention is not that the work they undertook is a work

that ought not to be done, but rather that when done it should be

better done. The revision as presented must be "dismissed as a

dismal fiasco," but only dismissed "in order to be dealt with anew

in some more adequate fashion." But on what ground can we rest this

sanguine expectation of better things to come? Whence is to

originate and how is to be appointed the commission of "experts"

which is to give us at last the "Ideal Liturgy"?

Cardinal Newman in one of his lesser controversial tracts remarks:

If the English people lodge power in the many, not in the few, what

wonder that its operation is roundabout, clumsy, slow, intermittent,

and disappointing? You cannot eat your cake and have it; you cannot

be at once a self-governing nation and have a strong government.[43]

Similarly it may be said that, however great the difficulties that

beset liturgical revision by legislative process at the hands of

some five hundred men, nevertheless the fact remains that the body

known in law as The Protestant Episcopal Church in the United States

of America has provided in its Constitution that change in its

formularies shall be so effected and not otherwise. It may turn

out that we must give up in despair the whole movement for a better

adaptation of our manual of worship to the needs of our land and

of our time; it may be found that the obstacles in the way are

absolutely insuperable; but let us dream no dreams of seeing this

thing handed over, "with power," to a "commission of experts," for

that is something which will never come to pass.

Whether "experts" in liturgies are any more likely to furnish us

with good prayers than "experts" in prosody are likely to give us

the best poetry is a tempting question, but one that must be left,

for the present, on one side. Perhaps, if the inquiry were to be

pushed, we might find ourselves shut up to the curious conclusion

that the framers of the very earliest liturgies, the authors of

the old sacramentaries, were either verbally inspired or else were

lacking in the qualifications which alone could fit them to do

worthily the work they worthily did, for clearly "experts" they

were not.

But the question that immediately concerns us is one of simple

fact. Assuming the present laborious effort at betterment to have

been proved a "fiasco," how is the General Convention to set in

motion any more promising enginery of revision? "Summon in," say

our English advisers, "competent scholars, and give them _carte

blanche_ to do what they will." But the Convention, which is by

law the final arbiter, has no power to invite to a share in its

councils men who have no constitutional right to a seat upon its

floor. How thankfully should we welcome as participants in our

debates and as allies in our legislation the eminent liturgical

scholars who give lustre to the clergy list of the Church of

England; but we are as powerless to make them members of the

General Convention as we should be to force them into the House

of Commons. The same holds true at home. If the several dioceses

fail to discover their own "inglorious Miltons," and will not send

them up to General Convention, General Convention may, and doubtless

does, lament the blindness of the constituencies, but it cannot

correct their blunder. The dioceses in which the "experts"

canonically reside had had full warning that important liturgical

interests were to be discussed and acted upon in the General

Convention of 1883; why were the "experts" left at home? And if

they were not returned in 1883, is there sufficient reason to

believe that they will ever be returned in any coming year of

grace? It must be either that the American Church is bereft of

"experts," or else that the constituencies, influenced possibly

by the hard sense of the laity, have learned hopelessly to confound

the "expert" with the doctrinaire.

Of "expert testimony," in the shape of the liturgical material

gathered, mainly by English writers, during the last fifty years,

the Joint Committee had no lack. That this material was carefully

sifted and conscientiously used, _The Book Annexed_ will itself one

day be acknowledged to be the sufficient evidence.

There is still another point that must be taken into account in

this connection, to wit, the attitude which the Episcopate has a

right to take with respect to any proposed work of liturgical

revision. Bishops have probably become inured to the hard measure

habitually dealt out to them in the columns of the _Church Times_,

and are unlikely to allow charges of ignorance and incompetency so

far to disturb their composure as to make them afraid to prosecute

a work which, from time immemorial, has been held to lie peculiarly

within their province. It may be affirmed, with some confidence,

that no revision of the American Offices will ever be ratified, in

the conduct of which the Bishops of the Church have not been allowed

the leadership which belongs to them of right. Then it is for the

General Convention carefully to consider whether any House of

Bishops destined to be convened in our time is likely to have on

its roll the names of any prelates more competent, whether on the

score of learning or of practical experience, to deal with a work

of liturgical revision than were the seven prelates elected by the

free voice of their brethren to represent the Episcopal Order on

the Joint Committee of Twenty-one.

Coming to details the reviewer of the _Church Times_ regrets, first

of all, the failure of the Convention to change the name of the

Church. He goes on to express a disapproval, more or less qualified,

of the discretionary power given to bishops to set forth forms of

prayer for special occasions, and of the continued permission to

use Selections of Psalms instead of the psalms for the day. It is

not quite clear whether he approves the expansion of the Table of

Proper Psalms or not, though he thinks it "abstractedly desirable"

that provision be made in this connection for "Corpus Christi and

All Souls."

He condemns the latitude allowed in the choice of lessons under

the rules of the new lectionary, fearing that a clergyman who

happens to dislike any given chapter because of its contents may

be tempted habitually to suppress it by substituting another, but

in the very next paragraph he gravely questions the expediency of

limiting congregations to such hymns as have been "duly set forth

and allowed by authority." Yet most observers, at least on this

side of the water, are of opinion that liberty of choice within

the limits of the Bible is a far safer freedom, so far as the

breeding of heresy goes, than liberty of choice beyond the limits

of the Hymnal has proved itself to be. The reviewer is pleased with

the addition of the Feast of the Transfiguration to the Calendar,

but "desiderates more," and would gladly welcome the introduction

into the Prayer Book of commemorations of eminent saints, from

Ignatius down,[44] but of this, mention has already been made,

and it is unnecessary to revert to it.

There follows next a protest against the selection of proper

Sentences prefixed to Morning and Evening Prayer.

The revisers seem to have a glimmering of what was the right

thing to do . . . but they should have swept away the undevotional

and unliturgical plan of beginning with certain detached texts,

which has no fitness whatever, and has never even seemed to answer

any useful end.

This is stronger language than most of us are likely to approve. A

Church that directly takes issue with Rome, as ours does, with

respect to the true source of authority in religion has an excellent

reason for letting the voice of Holy Scripture sound the key-note

of her daily worship, whether there be ancient precedent for such

a use or not. At the same time, the reviewer's averment that "the

only proper opening is the Invocation of the Holy Trinity" is

entitled to attention; and it is worth considering whether the

latter portion of the nineteenth verse of the twenty-eighth chapter

of St. Matthew's Gospel might not be advantageously added to the

list of opening Sentences, for optional use.

In speaking of the new alternate to the Declaration of Absolution,

the reviewer suggests most happily that it would be well to revive

the form of mutual confession of priest and people found in the old

service-books.[45] This proposal would probably not be entertained

in connection with the regular Orders for Morning and Evening

Prayer, but room for such a feature might perhaps be found in

some optional office.

After a grudging commendation of the steps taken in _The Book

Annexed_ to restore the Gospel Canticles, the reviewer next puts

in a strong plea for a larger allowance of versicles and responses

after the Creed, contending that this is "just one of the places

where enrichment, much beyond that of replacing the English versicles

and responses now missing, is feasible and easy," to which the

answer is that we, who love these missing versicles, shall think

ourselves fortunate if we succeed in regaining only so much as we

have lost. Even this will be accomplished with difficulty. It is

most interesting, however, to notice that this stout defender of

all that is English acknowledges the coupling together of the

versicle, "Give peace in our time, O Lord," and the response,

"Because there is none other that fighteth for us, but only thou,

O God," to be "a very infelicitous _non-sequitur_." For correcting

this palpable incongruity, the authors of _The Book Annexed_ have

been sharply criticised here at home. What were they that they

should have presumed to disturb ancient Anglican precedent in such

a point? If we could not understand why the God of battles, as

the God of battles, should be implored to "give peace in our time,"

so much the worse for our intelligence. But here comes the most

acrid of all our critics, and shows how the collocation of sentences

in the English Book has, from the beginning, been due to a palpable

blunder in condensing an office of the Sarum Breviary. Of the

American substitute for this "unhappy response" the best he can

say, however, is that it is "well intentioned."

Of the "Office of the Beatitudes" the reviewer declares that it

"needs thorough recasting before it can stand," and in this we

agree with him, as will hereafter appear, though wholly unable

to concur in his sweeping condemnation, in this connection, of

one of the most beautiful of Canon Bright's liturgical compositions,

the Collect beginning, "O God, by whom the meek are guided in

judgment and light riseth up in darkness for the godly." Of this

exquisite piece of idiomatic English, the reviewer allows himself

to speak as being "a very poor composition, defective in rhythm."

The criticism of the eucharistic portions of _The Book Annexed_ is

mainly in the line of complaint that more has not been added in the

way of new collects and proper prefaces, but upon this point it is

unnecessary to dwell, the reasons having been already given why

the Joint Committee and the Convention left the liturgy proper

almost untouched. Neither is there anything that specially calls

for notice or serious reply in what is said about the Occasional

Offices.

The Office for the Burial of Children is acknowledged to be a needed

addition, but as it stands "is pitched in an entirely wrong key. The

cognate offices in the _Rituale Romanun_ and the _Priest's Prayer

Book_ ought to have shown the Committee, were it not for their

peculiar unteachableness, a better way." To one who can read between

the lines, this arraignment of the Americans for their lack of

docility to the teachings of the Priest's Prayer Book is not devoid

of drollery.

It will happily illustrate the peculiar difficulties that beset

liturgical revision to close this resume of the censures of

_The Church Times_ by printing, side by side, the reviewer's

estimate of the changes proposed in the Confirmation Office and

the independent judgment of a learned evangelical divine of our

own Church upon the same point.

The Confirmation Service, as one of the very poorest in the Anglican

rites, stood particularly in need of amendment and enrichment,

especially by the removal of the ambiguous word "confirm" applied

to the acts of the candidates, whereby the erroneous opinion that

they came merely to confirm and ratify their baptismal promises,

and not to be confirmed and strengthened in virtue of something

bestowed upon them, has gained currency.

Thus far the English Ritualist. Here follows the American

Evangelical:

I still hope you will see your way clear to modify the present

draft of the proposed Confirmation Office, as it gives a much

higher Sacramentarian idea of it than the present, a concession

which will greatly please the Sacerdotalists, to which they are

by no means entitled.

The critic of _The Guardian_ is a writer of different make,

and entitled every way to the most respectful attention. His

fault-finding, which is invariably courteous, is mainly confined

to the deficiencies of _The Book Annexed_.

He would have had more done rather than less; but at the same

time clearly points out that under the restrictions which controlled

the Committee more could not fairly have been expected. He regrets

that in restoring the lost portions of _Venite_ and _Benedictus_

the Convention did not make the use of the complete form in every

case obligatory; and of the eight concluding verses of the latter

canticle, which under the rubric of _The Book Annexed_ are only

obligatory during Advent, he says, "Imagine their omission on

Christmas Day!"

To this criticism there are several answers, any one of which may

be held to be sufficient. In the first place, it should be remembered

that into the Committee's plan of enrichment there entered the

element of differentiation. The closing portion of the _Venite_

has a special appropriateness to Lent; the closing portion of the

_Benedictus_ a special appropriateness to Advent. Moreover, if any

congregations desire the whole of these two canticles throughout

the year, there is nothing in the rubrics of _The Book Annexed_ to

forbid such an enjoyment of them. They may be sung in full always;

but only in Lent in the one case, and in Advent in the other, mast

they be so sung. The revision Committee was informed, on what was

considered the highest authority, that in the Church of England

the _Benedictus_, on account of its length, had been very generally

disused. But, however this may be, there can be little doubt that

the effort after restoration would have failed completely in the

late Convention had the use of these two canticles in full been

insisted upon by the promoters of revision.

There is less of verbal criticism in _The Guardian's_ review than

could have been wished, for any suggestions with respect to

inaccuracies of style or rhythmical shortcomings would have

been most welcome from the pen of so competent a censor. Attention

is called to the unmusical flow of language in the alternate

Confession provided for the Evening Office; the figurative features

of the proposed Collect for Maundy-Thursday are characterized as

infelicitous; and the Collect provided for the Feast of the

Transfiguration is declared to be inferior to the corresponding

one in the Sarum Breviary.

Of this sort of criticism, at the hands of men who know their

craft, _The Book Annexed_ cannot have too much. In fact, of such

immeasurable importance is good English in this connection, that

it would be no hardship were every separate clause of whatever

formulary it may be proposed to engraft upon the Prayer Book to

be subjected to the most searching tests.

Let an epoch be agreed upon, if necessary, that shall serve as

the criterion of admissibility for words and phrases. Let it

be decided, for instance, that no word that cannot prove an

Elizabethan parentage, or, if this be too severe a standard,

then no word of post-Caroline origin, shall be admitted within

the sacred precincts. Probably there are words in _The Book

Annexed_ which such a canon would eject; but let us have them

pointed out, and their merits and demerits discussed. Such

criticism would be of infinitely more value to the real interests

of revision than those vague and general charges of "crudeness"

and "want of finish" which it is always so easy to make and

sometimes so difficult to illustrate.

The writer in _The Guardian_ closes an only too brief commentary

upon what the Convention has laid before the Church with the

following words:

Many of the proposals now in question are excellent; but others

will be improved by reconsideration in the light of fuller ritual

study, such as will be seen to produce a more exact and cultured

ritual _aesthesis_, perhaps we may, without offence, add, a more

delicate appreciation of rhythm. What _The Book Annexed_ presents

to us in the way of emendation is, on the whole, good; but, if

subjected to a deliberate recension, it would, we predict, become

still better. If thus improved by the Convention of 1886, it might

be finally adopted by the Convention of 1889.

This conspectus of English critical opinion would be incomplete

were no account to be made of the utterances of the various writers

and speakers who dealt with the general subject of liturgical

revision at the recent Church Congress at Portsmouth.

_The Book Annexed_ could scarcely ask a more complete justification

than is supplied by these testimonies of men who at least may be

supposed to be acquainted with the needs of the Church of England.

The following catena, made up from three of the four Papers[46]

read upon the Prayer Book, gives a fair notion of the general tone

of the discussion. It will be worth anyone's while to collate it

with the thirty Resolutions that make up the "Notification to the

Dioceses."

Can it be seriously doubted that there are requirements of this

age which are not satisfied by the provision for public worship

made in the sixteenth century? Can any really suppose that the

compilers of that brief manual, the Prayer Book, however proud

we may rightly be of their work, were so gifted with inspired

foresight as to save the Church of future ages the responsibilities

of considering and supplying the devotional wants of successive

generations?

Who has not felt the scantiness of holy association in our Sunday

and week-day worship? . . . Much, I know, has been supplied by our

hymnology, which has progressed nobly in proportion as the meagreness

of our liturgical provision has been realized. But beyond hymns we

need actual forms of service, which shall strike the ear and touch

the heart by fresh and vivid adaptations of God's Word to the great

mysteries of the Gospel faith . . . After-services on Sunday evenings

have of late grown common; for them we need also the aid of regular

and elastic forms.

Most deplorably have we felt the need of intercessory services

for Home and Foreign Missions; and, though there are beautiful

metrical litanies which bear directly on these and other objects,

yet these are not sufficient, and of course are limited to times

when a good and strong choir can be secured; . . . and further we

want very simple forms of prayer to accompany addresses given in

homes and mission rooms.[47]

I declare it as my conviction, after many years of (I hope) a not

indolent ministry, and of many opportunities of observation and

experiment, that the Church stands in pressing and immediate

need of a few rearrangements and adaptations of some of her

Offices; also of an enormous number of supplementary Offices or

services--some for frequent use, others for occasional purposes

within the consecrated buildings; and that besides these there is

need of a supply of special Offices for the use of a recognized

lay agency outside of the church edifices.

Why limit our introductory sentences to seven deprecatory texts? . . .

Why can we not introduce the anthem used on Easter-day, instead

of the _Venite_, throughout the Octave; or at least on Easter Monday

and Tuesday? Would not spiritual life be deepened and intensified,

and, best of all, be strengthened, by the use in the same manner of

a suitable anthem instead of the _Venite_ on Advent Sundays, on

Christmas-day, at Epiphany, on Ash-Wednesday, on Good Friday,

during Rogation days, at Ascension-tide, and on harvest festivals

and the special annual Church festival of the year?

I submit that an enrichment of the Book of Common Prayer is also

required. For although, as already suggested, this may be provided

to some extent by a Collect for occasional use before the final

prayer of Morning Prayer or Evensong, the needs of the Church will

not be fully supplied without some complete additional offices.

Certainly an additional service for Sunday afternoon and evening . . .

The times are very solemn, and we must wait no longer . . . We have

talked for nearly twenty-five years--not vainly, I believe--but

let us "go and do" not a little in the next five years . . . Prove

yourself to be of the Church of God by doing all the work of the

Church, and in the proper way. Proclaim before our God by your

actions and your activities, and by providing all that is needed,

not only for Churchmen, but for earnest Christians who are not

Churchmen, and for the poor, weary sinners who are living as if

there were neither Church nor Saviour, such services for the one,

and such means for drawing the others to Christ, that they all may

become one in him. And for all this you must have (as I think):

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