The common translation of Winshem renders the lines thus:—

Ventis expositus et pedibus captus

Nullum cohabitatorem

Nec vicinum ullum saltem malum habens, apud quem gemitum mutuum.

Gravemque ac cruentum

Ederet.

The translation of Thomas Johnson differs from this only in the choice

of words:—

Ubi ipse ventis erat expositus, firmum gradum non habens,

Nec quenquam indigenarum,

Nec malum vicinum, apud quem ploraret

Vehementur edacem

Sanguineum morbum, mutuo gemitu.

One might think he had borrowed these words from the translation of

Thomas Naogeorgus, who expresses himself thus (his work is very rare,

and Fabricius himself knew it only through Operin’s Catalogue):—

... ubi expositus fuit

Ventis ipse, gradum firmum haud habens,

Nec quenquam indigenam, nec vel malum

Vicinum, ploraret apud quem

Vehementer edacem atque cruentum

Morbum mutuo.

If these translations are correct, the chorus pronounces the strongest

possible eulogy on human society. The wretch has no human being near

him; he knows of no friendly neighbor; even a bad one would have been

happiness. Thomson, then, might have had this passage in mind when he

puts these words into the mouth of his Melisander, who was likewise

abandoned by ruffians on a desert island:—

Cast on the wildest of the Cyclad isles

Where never human foot had marked the shore,

These ruffians left me; yet believe me, Arcas,

Such is the rooted love we bear mankind,

All ruffians as they were, I never heard

A sound so dismal as their parting oars.

To him, also, the society of ruffians was better than none. A great and

admirable idea! If we could but be sure that Sophocles, too, had meant

to express it! But I must reluctantly confess to finding nothing of the

sort in him, unless, indeed, I were to use, instead of my own eyes,

those of the old scholiast, who thus transposes the words:—Οὐ μόνον ὅπου

καλὸν οὐκ εἶχέ τινα τῶν ἐγχωρίων γείτονα, ἀλλὰ οὐδὲ κακόν, παρ’ οὗ

ἀμοιβαῖον λόγον στενάζων ἀκούσειε. Brumoy, as well as our modern German

translator, has held to this reading, like the translators quoted above.

Brumoy says, “Sans société, même importune;” and the German, “jeder

Gesellschaft, auch der beschwerlichsten, beraubt.” My reasons for

differing from all of these are the following. First, it is evident that

if κακογείτονα was meant to be separated from τιν’ ἐγχώρων and

constitute a distinct clause, the particle οὐδέ would necessarily have

been repeated before it. Since this is not the case, it is equally

evident that κακογείτονα belongs to τίνα, and there should be no comma

after ἐγχώρων. This comma crept in from the translation. Accordingly, I

find that some Greek editions (as that published at Wittenberg of 1585

in 8vo, which was wholly unknown to Fabricius) are without it, but put a

comma only after κακογείτονα, as is proper. Secondly, is that a bad

neighbor from whom we may expect, as the scholiast has it, στόνον

ἀντίτυπον, ἀμοιβαῖον? To mingle his sighs with ours is the office of a

friend, not an enemy. In short, the word κακογείτονα has not been

rightly understood. It has been thought to be derived from the adjective

κακός, when it is really derived from the substantive τὸ κακόν. It has

been translated an evil neighbor, instead of a neighbor in ill. Just as

κακόμαντις means not an evil, in the sense of a false, untrue prophet,

but a prophet of evil, and κακότεχνος means not a bad, unskilful

painter, but a painter of bad things. In this passage the poet means by

a neighbor in ill, one who is overtaken by a similar misfortune with

ourselves, or from friendship shares our sufferings; so that the whole

expression, οὐδ’ ἔχων τιν’ ἐγχώρων κακογείτονα, is to be translated

simply by “neque quenquam indigenarum mali socium habens.” The new

English translator of Sophocles, Thomas Franklin, must have been of my

opinion. Neither does he find an evil neighbor in κακογείτων, but

translates it simply “fellow-mourner.”

Exposed to the inclement skies,

Deserted and forlorn he lies,

No friend nor fellow-mourner there,

To soothe his sorrow and divide his care.

Note 8, p. 34.

Saturnal. lib. v. cap. 2. “Non parva sunt alia quæ Virgilius traxit a

Græcis, dicturumne me putatis quæ vulgo nota sunt? quod Theocritum sibi

fecerit pastoralis operis autorem, ruralis Hesiodum? et quod in ipsis

Georgicis, tempestatis serenitatisque signa de Arati Phænomenis

traxerit? vel quod eversionem Trojæ, cum Sinone suo, et equo ligneo

cæterisque omnibus, quæ librum secundum faciunt, a Pisandro pene ad

verbum transcripserit? qui inter Græcos poetas eminet opere, quod a

nuptiis Jovis et Junonis incipiens universas historias, quæ mediis

omnibus sæculis usque ad ætatem ipsius Pisandri contigerunt, in unam

seriem coactas redegerit, et unum ex diversis hiatibus temporum corpus

effecerit? in quo opere inter historias cæteras interitus quoque Trojæ

in hunc modum relatus est. Quæ fideliter Maro interpretando, fabricatus

est sibi Iliacæ urbis ruinam. Sed et hæc et talia ut pueris decantata

prætereo.”

Not a few other things were brought by Virgil from the Greeks, and

inserted in his poem as original. Do you think I would speak of what is

known to all the world? how he took his pastoral poem from Theocritus,

his rural from Hesiod? and how, in his Georgics, he took from the

Phenomena of Aratus the signs of winter and summer? or that he

translated almost word for word from Pisander the destruction of Troy,

with his Sinon and wooden horse and the rest? For he is famous among

Greek poets for a work in which, beginning his universal history with

the nuptials of Jupiter and Juno, he collected into one series whatever

had happened in all ages, to the time of himself, Pisander. In which

work the destruction of Troy, among other things, is related in the same

way. By faithfully interpreting these things, Maro made his ruin of

Ilium. But these, and others like them, I pass over as familiar to every

schoolboy.

Note 9, p. 35.

I do not forget that a picture mentioned by Eumolpus in Petronius may be

cited in contradiction of this. It represented the destruction of Troy,

and particularly the history of Laocoon exactly as narrated by Virgil.

And since, in the same gallery at Naples were other old pictures by

Zeuxis, Protogenes, and Apelles, it was inferred that this was also an

old Greek picture. But permit me to say that a novelist is no historian.

This gallery and picture, and Eumolpus himself, apparently existed only

in the imagination of Petronius. That the whole was fiction appears from

the evident traces of an almost schoolboyish imitation of Virgil. Thus

Virgil (Æneid lib. ii. 199–224):—

Hic aliud majus miseris multoque tremendum

Objicitur magis, atque improvida pectora turbat.

Laocoon, ductus Neptuno sorte sacerdos,

Solemnis taurum ingentem mactabat ad aras.

Ecce autem gemini a Tenedo tranquilla per alta

(Horresco referens) immensis orbibus angues

Incumbunt pelago, pariterque ad litora tendunt:

Pectora quorum inter fluctus arrecta, jubæque

Sanguineæ exsuperant undas: pars cetera pontum

Pone legit, sinuatque immensa volumine terga.

Fit sonitus, spumante salo: jamque arva tenebant,

Ardentesque oculos suffecti sanguine et igni

Sibila lambebant linguis vibrantibus ora.

Diffugimus visu exsangues. Illi agmine certo

Laocoonta petunt, et primum parva duorum

Corpora natorum serpens amplexus uterque

Implicat, et miseros morsu depascitur artus.

Post ipsum, auxilio subeuntem ac tela ferentem,

Corripiunt, spirisque ligant ingentibus; et jam

Bis medium amplexi, bis collo squamea circum

Terga dati, superant capite et cervicibus altis.

Ille simul manibus tendit divellere nodos,

Perfusus sanie vittas atroque veneno:

Clamores simul horrendos ad sidera tollit.

Quales mugitus, fugit cum saucius aram

Taurus et incertam excussit cervice securim.

And thus Eumolpus, in whose lines, as is usually the case with

improvisators, memory has had as large a share as imagination:—

Ecce alia monstra. Celsa qua Tenedos mare

Dorso repellit, tumida consurgunt freta,

Undaque resultat scissa tranquillo minor.

Qualis silenti nocte remorum sonus

Longe refertur, cum premunt classes mare,

Pulsumque marmor abiete imposita gemit.

Respicimus, angues orbibus geminis ferunt

Ad saxa fluctus: tumida quorum pectora

Rates ut altæ, lateribus spumas agunt:

Dat cauda sonitum; liberæ ponto jubæ

Coruscant luminibus, fulmineum jubar

Incendit æquor, sibilisque undæ tremunt;

Stupuere mentes. Infulis stabant sacri

Phrygioque cultu gemina nati pignora

Laocoonte, quos repente tergoribus ligant

Angues corusci: parvulas illi manus

Ad ora referunt: neuter auxilio sibi

Uterque fratri transtulit pias vices,

Morsque ipsa miseros mutuo perdit metu.

Accumulat ecce liberûm funus parens

Infirmus auxiliator; invadunt virum

Jam morte pasti, membraque ad terram trahunt.

Jacet sacerdos inter aras victima.

The main points are the same in both, and in many places the same words

are used. But those are trifles, and too evident to require mention.

There are other signs of imitation, more subtle, but not less sure. If

the imitator be a man with confidence in his own powers, he seldom

imitates without trying to improve upon the original; and, if he fancy

himself to have succeeded, he is enough of a fox to brush over with his

tail the footprints which might betray his course. But he betrays

himself by this very vanity of wishing to introduce embellishments, and

his desire to appear original. For his embellishments are nothing but

exaggerations and excessive refinements. Virgil says, “Sanguineæ jubæ”;

Petronius, “liberæ jubæ luminibus coruscant”; Virgil, “ardentes oculos

suffecti sanguine et igni”; Petronius, “fulmineum jubar incendit æquor.”

Virgil, “fit sonitus spumante salo”; Petronius, “sibilis undæ tremunt.”

So the imitator goes on exaggerating greatness into monstrosity, wonders

into impossibilities. The boys are secondary in Virgil. He passes them

over with a few insignificant words, indicative simply of their

helplessness and distress. Petronius makes a great point of them,

converting the two children into a couple of heroes.

Neuter auxilio sibi

Uterque fratri transtulit pias vices

Morsque ipsa miseros mutuo perdit metu.

Who expects from human beings, and children especially, such

self-sacrifice? The Greek understood nature better (Quintus Calaber,

lib. xii.), when he made even mothers forget their children at the

appearance of the terrible serpents, so intent was every one on securing

his own safety.

... ἔνθα γυναῖκες

Οἴμωζον, καὶ πού τις ἑῶν ἐπελήσατο τέκνων

Aὐτὴ ἀλευομένη στυγερὸν μόρον....

The usual method of trying to conceal an imitation is to alter the

shading, bringing forward what was in shadow, and obscuring what was in

relief. Virgil lays great stress upon the size of the serpents, because

the probability of the whole subsequent scene depends upon it. The noise

occasioned by their coming is a secondary idea, intended to make more

vivid the impression of their size. Petronius raises this secondary idea

into chief prominence, describing the noise with all possible wealth of

diction, and so far forgetting to describe the size of the monsters that

we are almost left to infer it from the noise they make. He hardly would

have fallen into this error, had he been drawing solely from his

imagination, with no model before him which he wished to imitate without

the appearance of imitation. We can always recognize a poetic picture as

an unsuccessful imitation when we find minor details exaggerated and

important ones neglected, however many incidental beauties the poem may

possess, and however difficult, or even impossible, it may be to

discover the original.

Note 10, p. 36.

Suppl. aux Antiq. Expl. T. i. p. 243. Il y a quelque petite différence

entre ce que dit Virgile, et ce que le marbre représente. Il semble,

selon ce que dit le poëte, que les serpens quittèrent les deux enfans

pour venir entortiller le père, au lieu que dans ce marbre ils lient en

même temps les enfans et leur père.

Note 11, p. 37.

Donatus ad v. 227, lib. ii. Æneid. Mirandum non est, clypeo et simulacri

vestigiis tegi potuisse, quos supra et longos et validos dixit, et

multiplici ambitu circumdedisse Laocoontis corpus ac liberorum, et

fuisse superfluam partem. The “non” in the clause “mirandum non est,”

should, it seems to me, be omitted, unless we suppose the concluding

part of the sentence to be missing. For, since the serpents were of such

extraordinary length, it would certainly be surprising that they could

be concealed beneath the goddess’s shield, unless this also were of

great length, and belonged to a colossal figure. The assurance that this

was actually the case must have been meant to follow, or the “non” has

no meaning.

Note 12, p. 39.

In the handsome edition of Dryden’s Virgil (London, 1697). Yet here the

serpents are wound but once about the body, and hardly at all about the

neck. So indifferent an artist scarcely deserves an excuse, but the only

one that could be made for him would be that prints are merely

illustrations, and by no means to be regarded as independent works of

art.

Note 13, p. 40.

This is the judgment of De Piles in his remarks upon Du Fresnoy:

“Remarquez, s’il vous plaît, que les draperies tendres et légères,

n’étant données qu’au sexe féminin, les anciens sculpteurs ont évité

autant qu’ils out pu, d’habiller les figures d’hommes; parce qu’ils ont

pensé, comme nous l’avons déjà dit qu’en sculpture on ne pouvait imiter

les étoffes, et que les gros plis faisaient un mauvais effet. Il y a

presque autant d’exemples de cette vérité, qu’il y a parmi les antiques,

de figures d’hommes nuds. Je rapporterai seulement celui du Laocoon,

lequel, selon la vraisemblance, devrait être vêtu. En effet, quelle

apparence y a-t-il qu’un fils de roi, qu’un prêtre d’Apollon, se trouvât

tout nud dans la cérémonie actuelle d’un sacrifice? car les serpens

passèrent de l’île de Tenedos au rivage de Troye, et surprirent Laocoon

et ses fils dans le temps même qu’il sacrifiait à Neptune sur le bord de

la mer, comme le marque Virgile dans le second livre de son Enéide.

Cependant les artistes qui sont les auteurs de ce bel ouvrage, ont bien

vu qu’ils ne pouvaient pas leur donner de vêtements convenables à leur

qualité, sans faire comme un amas de pierres, dont la masse

ressemblerait à un rocher, au lieu des trois admirables figures, qui ont

été, et qui sont toujours, l’admiration des siècles. C’est pour cela que

de deux inconveniens, ils out jugé celui des draperies beaucoup plus

fâcheux, que celui d’aller contre la vérité même.”

Note 14, p. 42.

Maffei, Richardson, and, more recently, Herr Von Hagedorn.

(Betrachtungen über die Malerei, p. 37. Richardson, Traité de la

Peinture, vol. iii.) De Fontaines does not merit being reckoned in the

same class with these scholars. In the notes to his translation of

Virgil, he maintains, indeed, that the poet had the group in mind, but

he is so ignorant as to ascribe it to Phidias.

Note 15, p. 44.

I can adduce no better argument in support of my view than this poem of

Sadolet. It is worthy of one of the old poets, and, since it may well

take the place of an engraving, I venture to introduce it here entire.

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