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VOCAL EXPRESSION
A Class-Book of Voice Training and Interpretation
by
KATHERINE JEWELL EVERTS
Author of "The Speaking Voice"
Harper & Brothers New York and London
MCMXI
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BOOKS BY
KATHERINE JEWEL EVERTS
VOCAL EXPRESSION net $1.00
THE SPEAKING VOICE. Post 8vo net 1.00
HARPER & BROTHERS, NEW YORK
COPYRIGHT, 1911, BY HARPER & BROTHERS
PRINTED IN THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA
PUBLISHED NOVEMBER, 1911
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PLAN OF THE BOOK
TO THE PUPIL
INTRODUCTION
PART I
STUDIES IN VOCAL INTERPRETATION
PRELIMINARY STUDY:--To Establish a Conscious
Purpose.
DISCUSSION:--The Relation of the Speaker to His
Audience.
MATERIAL:--Direct Appeal in Prose and Verse, with
Suggestive Analysis.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION.
FIRST STUDY:--To Establish Vitality in Thinking.
DISCUSSION:--Action of the Mind in Reading Aloud.
MATERIAL:--The Essay and Didactic Poetry, with
Suggestive Analysis.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION.
SECOND STUDY:--To Establish Intelligence in Feeling.
DISCUSSION:--Emotional Response and Abandon.
MATERIAL:--Lyric Poetry, with Suggestive Analysis.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION.
THIRD STUDY:--To Develop the Whimsical Sense.
DISCUSSION:--Humor and Fancy.
MATERIAL:--Fairy Story, Fable, and Nonsense
Rhyme, with Suggestive Analysis.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION.
FOURTH STUDY:--To Develop Imaginative Vigor.
DISCUSSION:--The Picture, the Atmosphere, the
Action.
MATERIAL:--Short Story and Epic Poetry, with
Suggestive Analysis.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION.
FIFTH STUDY:--To Develop Dramatic Instinct.
DISCUSSION:--Impersonation and Characterization.
MATERIAL:--Monologue and Play, with Suggestive
Analysis.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION.
PART II
STUDIES IN VOCAL EXPRESSION
INTRODUCTORY DISCUSSION:--The Vocal Vocabulary.
STUDY IN PAUSE AND CHANGE OF PITCH.
STUDY IN INFLECTION.
STUDY IN TONE COLOR.
PART III
STUDIES IN VOCAL TECHNIQUE
INTRODUCTORY DISCUSSION:--Tuning the Instrument.
HOW TO SUPPORT THE TONE.
Directions and Exercises.
HOW TO FREE THE TONE.
Directions and Exercises.
HOW TO RE-ENFORCE THE TONE.
Directions and Exercises.
TO THE PUPIL
Let me trace the evolution which has led to the plan of this text-book.
A class in elocution of which you are a member is given a paragraph from
_Modern Eloquence_, a bit from an oration or address of Beecher or
Phillips or Beveridge, to study. The passage appeals to you. You are
roused by it to an eager, new appreciation of courage, conservatism or
of the character of some national hero. You "look" your interest. You
are asked to go to the platform. You are glad. You want to repeat the
inspired word of the prophet. You begin confidently to voice the words
of the great orator--the words which you had lifted alive from the
page--but in your voice they sound now formal, cold, lifeless. You
hesitate, your emotion is killed, your thought inhibited, your eagerness
gone, your impulse dead--but you have made a discovery. You have become
conscious of a great need, and your teacher, if she be wise, has
discovered the nature of that need. You consult together and find three
things have failed you, and, through you, the orator you wished to
interpret. These things are your mind, your vocabulary, and your voice.
You find that your need is threefold--it is the need to feel
intelligently and to think vitally _on your feet_; the need to acquire a
vocal vocabulary; the need to train your instruments of
expression--voice and body.
To help you and your teacher to meet this threefold need is the wish of
this book; and the book's plan is the result of the author's experience
with her own pupils in watching the evolution of their skill in vocal
expression, the development, along natural lines, of their ability to
speak effectively.
VOCAL EXPRESSION
INTRODUCTION
The strongest impulse of the human heart is for self-expression. The
simplest form of expression is speech. Speech is the instinctive use of
a natural instrument, the voice. The failure to deal justly with this
simple and natural means of expression is one of the serious failures of
our educational system. Whether the student is to wait on another's
table or be host at his own; whether he is to sell "goods" from one side
of a counter or buy them from the other; whether he is to enter one of
the three great professions of law, medicine, or theology; "go on the
stage" or platform; become Minister to France or President of the United
States, it remains precisely true that to speak effectively will be
essential to his success, and should be as essential to his own
happiness as it will be to that of all involved in his pursuit of
success.
Yet, if we give heed at all to the question of voice and speech, it is
our last, not our first, consideration. We still look upon the mind as a
storehouse instead of a clearing-house. We continue to concern ourselves
with its ability to take in, not its capacity to give out. Voice and
speech are still left to shift for themselves during the period of
school life when they should be guarded and guided as a most essential
equipment for life after school days are over. To convert the resultant
hard, high-pitched, nasal tone which betrays the American voice into the
adequate agent of a temperament which distinguishes the American
personality, and to help English speech in this country to become an
efficient medium of lucid intercourse, such is the object of this book.
In an address upon the "Question of Our Speech" delivered before a
graduating class at Bryn Mawr, several years ago, Mr. Henry James said:
"No civilized body of men and women has ever left so vital an interest
to run wild, to shift, as we say, all for itself, to stumble and
flounder, through mere adventure and accident, in the common dust of
life, to pick up a living, in fine, by the wayside and the ditch.
"The French, the Germans, the Italians, the English, perhaps, in
particular, and many other people, Occidental and Oriental, I surmise,
not excluding the Turks and the Chinese, have for the symbol of
education, of civility, a tone-standard; we alone flourish in
undisturbed and in something like sublime unconsciousness of any such
possibility."
So searching an arraignment by so eminent a scholar before an audience
of so high a degree of intelligence and culture seems to have been
necessary to command an adequate appreciation of the condition of "Our
Speech" and to incite an adequate effort toward reform. Since the
arraignment was made and afterward published, classes have been
organized, books written, and lectures delivered in increasing
abundance, forming a veritable speech crusade--and the books and the
classes and the lectures have availed much, but the real and only
"reliable remedy" lies with the teacher in the public and private
schools and colleges of the United States. And it is to the teacher of
English and Elocution that this _Class Book on Vocal Expression_ is
offered.
_Learning to Talk_ might have been a truer, as it had been a simpler,
title, yet the more comprehensive phrase has justifiable significance,
and we have chosen it in the same spirit which discards for the
text-book in Rhetoric or English Composition the inviting title
_Learning to Write_.
There is a close analogy between the evolution of vocal and the
evolution of verbal expression. The method of instruction in the study
of the less heeded subject of the "Spoken Word" throws an interesting
light on the teaching of the more regarded question of the "Written
Word." An experience as teacher of expression and English in a normal
school in Minnesota has influenced the author of these pages to so large
an extent in the formulation of her own method of study, and so in the
plan of this volume, that it seems advisable to record it. To the work
of reading or expression to which she was originally called two classes
in composition were added. The former teacher of composition had
bequeathed to the work as a text-book a rhetoric which consisted of
involved theory plus one hundred and twenty-five separate and distinct
rules for the use of words, and the teacher of expression found, to her
amazed dismay, that the students had been required to learn these rules,
not only "by heart," but by number, referring to them as rule six or
thirty-six or one hundred and twenty-five, according to the demanded
application.
A week, possibly a fortnight, passed in silent struggle, then the
distracted teacher of expression went to the president of the school
with these questions: "Of what avail are one hundred and twenty-five
rules for the use of words when these children have less than that
number of words to use, and no desire to acquire more? Could you make
teachers of these normal students by giving a hundred and more laws for
the governing of pupils and the imparting of the material of knowledge,
if you furnished neither pupils nor material upon which to test the
laws?" "Certainly not!" was the restful reply of one of the wisest of
the educators I have known. "May I lay aside the text-book and read with
these students in English for a little?" "You may teach them to write
English in any way you can!"
The next day the class in composition was discovered eagerly reading
Tennyson's _Holy Grail_, stopping to note this felicitous phrase, that
happy choice of words, the pertinent personnel of a sentence or
paragraph. The first examination of the term consisted in a series of
single questions, written on separate slips of paper and laid face down
on the teacher's desk. Each student took one of these slips which read,
"Tell in your own words the story of _The Coming of Arthur_, the _Holy
Grail_, _Lancelot and Elaine_ or _Guinevere_," as the chance of the
chooser might allot a given idyl. The experiment was a success. The
president was satisfied with the papers in English composition. Each
student had had "something to say" and had said it. Each student had
words at his command little dreamed of in his vocabulary before the
meeting with the Knights of the Round Table.
The first step toward a mastery of Verbal Expression had been
successfully taken! The consciousness of need--the need of a
vocabulary--had been awakened. The desire to supply that need--to
acquire a vocabulary--had been aroused. A way to acquire a vocabulary
had been made manifest. Out of such consciousness alone is born the
willingness to work upon which progress in the mastery of any art
depends. To the teacher of expression it seemed no more advisable now
than it had seemed before, to ask the students to learn either "by
heart" or by number the one hundred and twenty-five rules of technique.
But the great laws governing the use of a vocabulary she now found her
students eager to study, to understand, and to apply. She found her
class willing to enter upon the drudgery which a mastery of technique in
any art demands.
So in the teaching of Vocal Expression, he who _begins_ with rules for
the use of this change of pitch or that inflection, this pause or that
color of tone, before he has aroused in the pupil the desire to express
a vivid thought, and so made him conscious of the need to command subtle
changes of pitch, swift contrasts in tone and turns of inflection, will
find himself responsible for mechanical results sadly divorced from true
and natural speech. But let the teacher of expression begin, not with
rules of technique, but with the material for inspiration and
interpretation; let him rouse in the pupil the impulse to express and
then furnish the material and means for study which shall enrich the
vocabulary of expression and he will find the instruments of the
art--voice and speech--growing into the free and efficient agents of
personality they are intended by nature to be.
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In March, 1906, the editor of _Harper's Bazar_ began a crusade in the
interest of the American voice and speech. Through the issues of more
than a year the magazine published arraignment, admonition, and advice
on this subject. It was the privilege of the author of this volume to
contribute the last four articles in that series. In response to a
definite demand from the readers of the Bazar these articles were later
embodied in a little book called _The Speaking Voice_. In a preface to
this book the author confesses her "deliberate effort to simplify and
condense the principles fundamental to all recognized systems of vocal
instruction," making them available for those too occupied to enter upon
the more exhaustive study set forth in more elaborate treatises. The
book was not intended for hours of class-room work in schools or
colleges, but for the spare moments of a business or social life, and
its reception in that world was gratifying. But, to the author's
delight, the interest aroused created a demand in the schools and
colleges for a real text-book, a book which could be put into the hands
of students in the departments of English and expression in public and
private institutions and colleges, and especially in normal schools. It
is in response to that appeal that this class-book in _Vocal
Expression_ is issued; and it is to the teachers whose impelling
interest and enthusiasm in the subject justify the publication of this
volume that the author desires first to express her grateful
appreciation.
To Miss Frances Nash, of the Lincoln High School in Cleveland, for her
invaluable advice in determining the exact nature of the need which the
book must meet, and for her assistance in choosing the material for
interpretation, my gratitude and appreciation are especially due.
To others whose influence through books or personal instruction has made
this task possible, acknowledgment made in _The Speaking Voice_ is
reiterated.
PART I
STUDIES IN VOCAL INTERPRETATION
PRELIMINARY STUDY
TO ESTABLISH A CONSCIOUS PURPOSE
"The orator must have something in his very soul he feels to be
worth saying. He must have in his nature that kindly sympathy that
connects him with his fellow-men and which so makes him a part of
the audience that his smile is their smile, his tear is their tear,
the throb of his heart the throb of the hearts of the whole
assembly."--HENRY WARD BEECHER.
We have said that whatever part in the world's life we choose or are
chosen to take, it remains precisely true that to speak effectively is
essential to fulfilling, in the highest sense, that function. Whether
the occupation upon which we enter be distinguished by the title of
cash-girl or counsellor at law; dish-washer or debutante; stable-boy or
statesman; artist in the least or the highest of art's capacities,
crises will arise in that calling which demand a command of effective
speech. The situation may call for a slow, quietly searching
interrogation or a swift, ringing command. The need may be for a use of
that expressive vocal form which requires, to be efficient, the rugged
or the gracious elements of your vocabulary; the vital or the velvet
tone; the straight inflection or the circumflex; the salient or the
slight change of pitch; the long or the short pause. Whatever form the
demand takes, the need remains for command of the efficient elements of
tone and speech if we are to become masters of the situation and to
attain success in our calling. How to acquire this mastery is our
problem. How to take the first step toward acquiring that command is the
subject of this first study.
Is there a student reader of these pages who has not already faced a
situation requiring for its mastery such command? Listen to Mr. James
again:
"All life, therefore, comes back to the question of our speech, the
medium through which we communicate with each other; for all life comes
back to the question of our relations with each other. These relations
are possible, are registered, are verily constituted by our speech, and
are successful in proportion as our speech is worthy of its human and
social function; is developed, delicate, flexible, rich--an adequate
accomplished fact. The more we live by it, the more it promotes and
enhances life. Its quality, its authenticity, its security, are hence
supremely important for the general multifold opportunity, for the
dignity and integrity, of our existence."
Is there one among you whose relations with others would not have been
rendered simpler, truer, clearer at some critical moment had your
"speech been more worthy of its great human and social function?" Then,
do you hesitate to enter upon a study which shall make for clarified
relations and a new "dignity and integrity of existence?" Anticipating
your reply, I invite you to take a first step in Vocal Expression. How
shall we approach the subject? How did you begin to master any one of
the activities in which you are more or less proficient? How did you
learn to swim, or skate, or play the violin? Not by standing on the
shore and gazing at the water or ice! Not by looking at violins in shop
windows! No! You began by leaping into the water, putting on your skates
and going out on the ice; taking the violin into your hands and drawing
the bow across the strings. But you say: "We have taken the step which
corresponds to these in speech! We can talk!" Exactly! But what command
of the art of skating or swimming or playing the violin would the artist
in any of these activities have achieved had he been content to stop
with the act of jumping into the water, going out on the ice, or drawing
the bow across the violin? The question's answer calls up an
illuminating analogy. Are not most of us in regard to our mastery of
speech in the condition of the skater, the swimmer, the fiddler in the
first stage of those expressive acts? Are we not floundering in the
water, fallen on the ice, or alienating the ears of our friends? "We are
so! We confess it!"--every time we speak.
And so to-day we shall offer no argument against entering upon an
_introductory_ study--we shall take our first step in the Art of Vocal
Expression. But we shall take it in a new spirit--the spirit of an
artist bent upon the mastery of his art. If we flounder or fall, we
shall not be more content in our ignominy than is the choking swimmer or
the prostrate skater. If we produce painful instead of pleasing sounds
with our instrument, we shall not persist in a merciless process of tone
production; but we shall proceed to study diligently the laws governing
the control of the instrument until we have mastered its technique and
made it an agent of harmonious intercourse. We shall take the first
steps with a conscious purpose, the purpose to make our speech worthy of
its great social and human function.
Then in this spirit I invite you "to plunge." I furnish as the material
for your experiment these sentences:
DISCUSSION OF DIRECT APPEAL
Do you ask me, then, what is this Puritan principle?
The Puritan principle in its essence is simply individual
freedom!--CURTIS.
Mind your own business with your absolute will and soul, but see
that it is a good business first.--RUSKIN.
Back to the bridge and show your teeth again,
Back to the bridge and show to God your eyes!--MACKAYE.
What news, and quickly!--MACKAYE.
Do not pray for tasks equal to your powers. Pray for powers equal
to your tasks.--PHILLIPS BROOKS.
Hence! home, you idle creatures, get you home. Is this a
holiday?--SHAKESPEARE.
And so, gentlemen, at this hour we are not Republicans, we are not
Democrats, we are Americans!--CURTIS.
I shall not discuss the interpretation of these sentences with you. I
shall not interpret them for you. Such discussion and interpretation is
your part in this study. But you are not to discuss them with a pencil
on paper; you are to interpret them with your voice to another mind.
Let us stop here and consider together for a few moments this act which
we call Vocal Interpretation (which might be more simply designated as
Reading Aloud), and with which these first studies are concerned. What
does it mean to vocally interpret a piece of literature--a poem, a play,
a bit of prose; a paragraph, a sentence, or even a single word? It means
that you, the interpreter, must transfer the thought contained in that
word, phrase, sentence, or paragraph from the printed page to the mind
of an auditor. It means that you must take the thought out of the safety
vault and put it into circulation. That is your problem, and it presents
three factors. You cannot slight any one of these factors and expect to
successfully solve your problem. These factors are: your author's
thought, your own voice, and your auditor's mind.
We shall concern ourselves in this first study with the last of these
three factors--the mind of the auditor, or, to put it more definitely,
your attitude toward the mind of your auditor. We shall make this our
first concern, not because it is more essential to successful delivery
than the other two elements of the problem, but because failure at this
point is a fundamental failure. Such failure involves the whole
structure in ruin.
Let me make this point explicit. Failure of the speaker to direct the
thought toward a receiving mind--the mind of an auditor--results in
blurred thought, robs the voice of all aim, and reduces the
interpretation to a meaningless recital of words. Consider the first
factor in the problem of interpretation--the thought of the author. Take
these first two sentences:
Do you ask me, then, what is this Puritan principle?
The Puritan principle in its essence is simply individual freedom!
A wholly satisfying interpretation of these lines involves a knowledge
of the speech from which they are taken, and a knowledge of the
circumstances under which it was delivered. Complete possession of the
thought, which alone insures perfect expression, requires a grasp of
the situation out of which it was born and an appreciation of the mind
which conceived it. But with no context and no knowledge of these
conditions, and so only an approximate appreciation of the thought in
all its fulness, the interpreter, under the stimulus of an intent to
convince another of the truth contained in the detached sentence, may
deliver the lines convincingly! And to carry conviction is the first and
fundamental requisite of all good delivery.
So it is with the second factor in your problem. Your voice may fail at
a dozen different points, but _directed_ thought can employ so skilfully
even an inefficient instrument that the resultant expression, while
never satisfying, may still carry conviction.
But let the one who speaks these lines feel no responsibility toward
another, let him fail to direct the idea toward another mind, and the
most complete possession of the author's thought, plus the most perfect
control of the voice, will fail to make the interpretation convincing.
You must establish a relation with your auditor! You must have an aim.
You must "have something to say," but you must also have some one "to
say it at." You cannot hope to become an expert marksman by "shooting
into the air."
Then once more I bid you approach the subject of Vocal Interpretation in
a new spirit. Let your study of the thought in these sentences hold in
its initial impulse this idea: "I have something I _must tell you_!" Try
prefacing your interpretation with some such phrase as this: "Listen to
me!" or, "I want to tell you something."
I would suggest as a preliminary exercise that you should try "shooting
at a mark" these single words: "No!" "Yes!" "Come!" "Go!" "Aim!" "Fire!"
"Help!" "What ho!"
Listen to me!
"You will find the gayest castles in the air far better for comfort
and for use than the dungeons that are daily dug and caverned out
by grumbling, discontented people."--EMERSON.
Let me tell you something!
"Might is right, say many, and so it is. Might is the right to bear
the burdens of the weak, to cheer the faint, to uplift the fallen,
to pour from one's own full store to the need of the
famishing."--NAPIER.
It is the angel-aim and standard in an act that consecrates it. He
who aims for perfection in a trifle is trying to do that trifle
holily. The trier wears the halo, and, therefore, the halo grows as
quickly round the brows of peasant as of king.--GANNETT.
Think twice before you speak, my son; and it will do no harm if you
keep on thinking while you speak.--ANONYMOUS.
Sweet friends
Man's love ascends,
To finer and diviner ends
Than man's mere thought e'er comprehends.
--LANIER.
SUGGESTIVE ANALYSIS
HAMLET'S SPEECH TO THE PLAYERS
_Hamlet:_ Speak the speech, I pray you, as I pronounced it to you,
trippingly on the tongue: but if you mouth it, as many of your
players do, I had as lief the town-crier spoke my lines. Nor do not
saw the air too much with your hand, thus; but use all gently: for
in the very torrent, tempest, and, as I may say, whirlwind of your
passion, you must acquire and beget a temperance that may give it
smoothness....
Be not too tame, neither, but let your own discretion be your
tutor: suit the action to the word, the word to the action; with
this special observance, that you o'erstep not the modesty of
nature, for anything so overdone is from the purpose of playing,
whose end, both at the first and now, was and is, to hold, as
'twere, the mirror up to nature; to show virtue her own feature,
scorn her own image, and the very age and body of the time his form
and pressure.
--SHAKESPEARE.
Let us consider together the problem of vocally interpreting this speech
of Hamlet's, keeping the mind of the auditor constantly before us, the
special factor in our problem which is the concern of this study. What
is the first point to be determined? The situation, is it not? Remember,
in our previous discussion I have made it clear that it is not essential
_to our present purpose_ that we should know, in determining our
situation, the exact conditions under which this speech was delivered.
Neither is it essential _to our present purpose_ that we should make an
exhaustive study of the play of "Hamlet" or of the character of the
Prince of Denmark. Lest you mistake me I must reiterate the fact that
an interpretation of these lines, looked upon as Hamlet's speech, would
require just such exhaustive study of context and character--study which
would lead to that complete possession which alone insures perfect
expression; but it is legitimate at this point in our study of vocal
expression to use this text quite apart from its context as a perfect
example of direct appeal. It is legitimate to _imagine_ a situation of
our own in which this thought could be pertinently expressed. We must
then first determine what you, the speaker, are to represent, and the
nature of the audience you are to address. One word in the text more
than any other, perhaps, determines these points--the word "players."
With this word as a key to a probable situation, let us imagine that
you, the one who must "speak this speech," are a stage-director of your
own play, and that we, the class to whom you must speak, are a company
of players (actors, as we now call them) which is about to present your
play. The fact that this is exactly the situation in Shakespeare's play
from which this speech is taken is interesting, but does not affect our
attitude toward the text. But that we should assume the state of mind
which animated the author of the _Mouse-trap, is_ vital to our problem.
Hamlet was intent upon getting an effect incalculably potent from the
delivery of the "speech" he "had pronounced." You must imagine that you
have written not merely a play, but a play which you intend shall have a
powerful influence upon the lives of the people who are to hear it. Once
more, then, let us determine the exact situation. You, the author of a
moving play--you, its stage-director--have called us, your actors,
together for rehearsal. You know just how you wish the lines of your
play delivered. It is absolutely vital to the success of your venture
that we, the actors, should grasp your ideal of delivery and act upon
it. You must convince us that this is the only way in which you will
permit the text to be handled. You are the orator as Mr. Beecher has
drawn him for us. You will realize, in thinking your way through this
appeal, that, while the stage-director is addressing the whole company
of players, he has singled out from the others one who is to deliver a
particular speech from his play. It is well to follow this idea of the
situation. Include us all, then, as a class in your chosen cast, but
single out one of us, and speak directly at the mind of that one. Look
him straight in the eye. Direct your thought in the main to his mind,
even while your thought reaches out and draws us all into the circle of
its enthusiasm. Now, with this attitude and intent toward an audience,
try to vocally interpret, to _think aloud_ this thought. What is the
trouble? "Speak the speech" you say, "is a difficult combination of
words to utter"? "'Trippingly' trips up your tongue"? "You don't
understand the reference to a 'town-crier'"?
Ah, what discoveries we are making!
"You feel that you should be able to illustrate your own ideal of
delivery by delivering these directions after the very manner you ask
your players to observe"? That might legitimately be expected of you, I
think. "But this you cannot do!" What a shocking confession! Yes, but
how good to have this new knowledge of your own ability, or, in this
case, disability. How appalling to find that you cannot easily utter the
simple combination of words, "Speak the speech, I pray you," without
stumbling; that any word, a plain, simple English word, trips your
tongue. How appalling, but how encouraging it is! For the discovery of
this fact, the consciousness of these limitations, "constitutes half the
battle" before us. It is a battle. But you shall be equipped to meet it.
Turn to the chapters on "Freeing the Tone." Find the exercises for
training the tongue. Faithful practice of these exercises (even
_without_ direction, but, if you are a member of the class in expression
for which this book was made, _under_ direction) will very shortly
conquer the unruly tongue for use in uttering any difficult combination
of words. And your teacher will patiently "pick you up" (_in this first
study_) every time you trip over a word or phrase, and she will
patiently refer you to the corner of history which will explain any
unfamiliar portions of your text if _you_ will persistently try to do
_your_ part at this point. That part is, to think the thought before you
directly at another's mind. That is all we ask at this point. Make this
direct appeal for simplicity in delivery straight to the mind of him
whom you have chosen to receive, and act upon it. Talk to me if I am
your chosen player! Convince me! Make me realize what you expect of me!
Make me want to meet your expectation! Make me afraid to fail you!
With these suggestions and this direct appeal to you, I leave you with
your teacher and with the following material chosen for your preliminary
study in _Vocal Interpretation_.
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION
There was once a noble ship full of eager passengers, straining at
full speed from England to America. Two-thirds of a prosperous
voyage thus far were over, and in our mess we were beginning to
talk of home.
Suddenly a dense fog came, shrouding the horizon, but, as this was
a common occurrence in the latitude we were sailing, it was hardly
mentioned in our talk. A happier company never sailed upon an
autumn sea. When a quick cry from the lookout, a rush of officers
and men, and we were grinding on a ledge of rocks off Cape Race. I
heard the cry, "Every one on deck!" and knew what that meant--the
masts were in danger of falling. A hundred pallid faces were
huddled together near the stern of the ship where we were told to
go and wait.
Suddenly we heard a voice up in the fog in the direction of the
wheel-house ringing like a clarion above the roar of the waves. As
the orders came distinctly and deliberately through the captain's
trumpet to "Shift the cargo," to "Back her," to "Keep her steady,"
we felt, somehow, that the commander up there in the thick mist
knew what he was about.
When, after weary days of anxious suspense, the vessel leaking
badly, we arrived safely in Halifax, old Mr. Cunard, agent of the
line, on hearing from the mail officer that the steamer had struck
on the rocks and been saved by the captain's presence of mind and
courage, replied, simply: "Just what I might have expected. Captain
Harrison is always master of the situation."
No man ever became master of the situation by accident or
indolence. "He happened to succeed" is a foolish, unmeaning phrase.
No man happens to succeed. "What do you mix your paints with?"
asked a visitor of Opie, the painter. "With brains, sir," was the
artist's reply. * * *
There are men who fail of mastery in the world from too low an
estimate of human nature. "Despise nothing, my son," was the
advice a mother gave to her boy when he went forth into the untried
world to seek his fortune, and that boy grew up into Sir Walter
Scott. * * *
In case of great emergency it took a certain general in our
army several days to get his personal baggage ready. Sheridan
rode into Winchester without even a change of stockings in his
saddle-bags. * * *
All great leaders have been inspired with a great belief. In nine
cases out of ten, failure is borne of unbelief.--_Masters of the
Situation_, JAMES T. FIELDS.
Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more;
Or close the wall up with our English dead!
In peace, there's nothing so becomes a man
As modest stillness and humility;
But when the blast of war blows in our ears,
Then imitate the action of the tiger:
Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood,
Disguise fair nature with hard-favoured rage: * * *
Hold hard the breath, and bend up every spirit
To his full height! On, on, you noblest English,
Whose blood is fet from fathers of war-proof!
Fathers that, like so many Alexanders,
Have in these parts from morn till even fought,
And sheathed their swords for lack of argument. * * *
I see you stand like greyhounds in the slips,
Straining upon the start. The game's afoot:
Follow your spirit; and, upon this charge
Cry--God for Harry! England! and St. George!--_Henry V._, SHAKESPEARE
Fourscore and seven years ago our fathers brought forth, on this
continent, a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the
proposition that all men are created equal. Now we are engaged in a
great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so
conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great
battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that
field, as a final resting-place for those who here gave their lives
that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper
that we should do this.
But, in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate--we cannot
consecrate--we cannot hallow--this ground. The brave men, living
and dead, who struggled here have consecrated it, far above our
power to add or detract. The world will little note nor long
remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did
here. It is for us, the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the
unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly
advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great
task remaining before us--that from these honored dead we take
increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full
measure of devotion--that we here highly resolve that these dead
shall not have died in vain--that this nation, under God, shall
have a new birth of freedom--and that government of the people, by
the people, for the people, shall not perish from the
earth.--_Address at Gettysburg_, ABRAHAM LINCOLN.
From an address delivered in the Auditorium, at Chicago, on the
afternoon of February 22, 1902, on the occasion of the celebration of
Washington's Birthday.
The meaning of Washington in American history is discipline. The
message of Washington's life to the American people is discipline.
The need of American character is discipline.
Washington did not give patriotism to the American colonies. The
people had that as abundantly as he. He did not give them courage.
That quality was and is in the American blood. He did not even give
them resource. There were intellects more productive than his. But
Washington gave balance and direction to elemental forces. He was
the genius of order. He was poise personified. He was the spirit of
discipline. He was the first Great Conservative. It was this
quality in him that made all other elements of the Revolution
effective. It was this that organized our nebulous independence
into a nation of liberty. The parts of a machine are useless until
assembled and fitted each to its appropriate place. Washington was
the master mechanic of our nation; so it is that we are a people.
But we are not yet a perfect people. We are still in the making. It
is a glorious circumstance. Youth is the noblest of God's gifts.
The youth of a nation is like the youth of a man. The American
people are young? Yes! Vital? Yes! Powerful? Yes! Disciplined? Not
entirely. Moderate? Not yet, but growing in that grace. And
therefore on this, his day, I bear you the message of
Washington--he, whose sanity, orderliness, and calm have reached
through the century, steadying us, overcoming in us the untamed
passions of riotous youth.--_Conservatism; the Spirit of National
Self-Restraint_, ALBERT BEVERIDGE.
We have noted in our introduction the close analogy which exists between
the evolution of vocal expression and the evolution of verbal
expression. Let us not fail to follow this analogy through the various
studies which make up this one study of interpretation. We have begun
our work in vocal expression with the subject of direct appeal. What
corresponds to this step in the evolution of verbal expression?
Mr. J. H. Gardiner, in his illuminating text for the student of English
composition, called _The Forms of Prose Literature_,[1] discusses these
forms first under the two great heads of the "Literature of Thought" and
the "Literature of Feeling," and then under the four sub-titles which
all instruction in rhetoric recognizes as the accepted divisions of
literature: Exposition, Argument, Description, and Narrative. We do not
find the _exact_ parallel for our study in direct appeal under these
subheads. Do we? No. In order "to take the plunge" in the study of
English composition which shall correspond to our preliminary effort in
interpretation, we must set aside for the moment the question of
_exposition_, to be entered upon as a "first study" in verbal expression
corresponding to the question of _vitality in thinking_, which is our
first study in vocal expression, and look for a parallel "preliminary
study" in composition.
[1] _The Forms of Prose Literature_, courtesy of Messrs. Charles
Scribner's Sons.
In his comparative study of exposition and argumentation Mr. Gardiner
says: "An exceedingly good explanation may leave its reader quite
unmoved: a good argument never does. Even if it does not convert him, it
should at least make him uncomfortable. Now, when we say that argument
must move its reader, we begin to pass from the realm of pure thought,
in which exposition takes rise, to that of feeling, for feeling is a
necessary preliminary to action. How large a part feelings play in
argument you can see if you have ever heard the speech of a demagogue to
an excited crowd. It is simply a crass appeal to their lower passions,
aided by all the devices of oratory, often, perhaps, also by a moving
presence. A better example is Henry Ward Beecher's Liverpool speech, in
which he won a hearing from a hostile mob by an appeal to their sense of
fair play. Such cases show how far argument may get from the simple
appeal to the understanding, how little it may be confined to the
element of thought. The prime quality, therefore, of argument is
_persuasiveness_."
Not argument, then, but the element in argument, called persuasion,
furnishes the study in composition which corresponds to direct appeal in
interpretation. And just as truly as your intent to convince another
mind of the truth of your author's thought will often take care of all
other elements in the problem of its vocal expression and result in
_convincing interpretation_, so the intent to persuade another mind of
the truth of your own thought will often take care of all other elements
in the problem of verbal expression and result in _moving composition_.
Following Mr. Gardiner a little further in his discussion of persuasion,
we find our study in interpretation in direct accord with his advice in
the study of composition, for he says: "This element of persuasion
belongs to that aspect of literature which has to do with the feelings;
and, as depending on the personal equation of the writer, it is much
less easy than the intellectual element to catch and generalize from,
and almost impossible to teach. All that I can do is to examine it in
good examples, and then make very tentatively a few suggestions based on
these examples. For it cannot too often be written down in such a
treatise as this that the teacher of writing can no more make a great
writer than the teacher of painting can turn out a new Rembrandt or a
Millet; in either case the most that the teacher can do is to furnish
honest and illuminating criticism, and to save his pupil unnecessary and
tedious steps by showing him the methods and devices which have been
worked out by the masters of the craft."
In treating the question of pure style, as another division of the power
of persuasion, Mr. Gardiner says: "It is almost impossible to give
practical help toward acquiring this gift of an expressive style; the
ear for the rhythm and assonance of style is like an ear for music,
though more common, perhaps. It is good practice to read aloud the
writing of men who are famous for the quality, and, when you read to
yourself, always to have in mind the sound of what you read. The more
you can give yourself of this exercise, the more when you write,
yourself, will you hear the way your own style sounds."
With our idea for a combined study of the two great forms of expression
reinforced by such authority, let us, in taking our next step in this
preliminary study in vocal expression, make it also a preliminary study
in verbal expression by using as our next selection for interpretation,
not a fragment of an address or a part of an oration, but a complete
example of persuasive discourse. Such an example we find in this sermon
of Mr. Gannett's "Blessed be Drudgery." And, as we try our growing
powers of lucid interpretation upon this subject-matter, let us stop to
note its verbal construction and its obedience to the laws of persuasive
discourse. The interpretation must be made in the class-room, because
interpretation needs an immediate audience; the analysis of the literary
form may be made in your study: the two processes should be carried on
as far as possible together.
BLESSED BE DRUDGERY[2]
[2] This sermon is published with the kind permission of the author and
the publisher.
I
Of every two men probably one man thinks he is a drudge, and every
second woman is _sure_ she is. Either we are not doing the thing we
would like to do in life; or, in what we do and like, we find so
much to dislike that the rut tires even when the road runs on the
whole, a pleasant way. I am going to speak of the _Culture that
comes through this very drudgery_.
"Culture through my drudgery!" some one is now thinking: "This
treadmill that has worn me out, this grind I hate, this plod that,
as long ago as I remember it, seemed tiresome--to this have I owed
'culture'? Keeping house or keeping accounts, tending babies,
teaching primary school, weighing sugar and salt at a counter,
those blue overalls in the machine shop--have these anything to do
with 'culture'? Culture takes leisure, elegance, wide margins of
time, a pocket-book; drudgery means limitations, coarseness,
crowded hours, chronic worry, old clothes, black hands, headaches.
Culture implies college: life allows a daily paper, a monthly
magazine, the circulating library, and two gift-books at Christmas.
Our real and our ideal are not twins--never were! I want the
books,--but the clothes-basket wants me. The two children are
good,--and so would be two hours a day without the children. I
crave an outdoor life,--and walk down-town of mornings to perch on
a high stool till supper-time. I love Nature,--and figures are my
fate. My taste is books,--and I farm it. My taste is art,--and I
correct exercises. My taste is science,--and I measure tape. I am
young and like stir,--the business jogs on like a stage-coach. Or I
am _not_ young, I am getting gray over my ears, and like to sit down
and be still,--but the drive of the business keeps both tired arms
stretched out full length. I hate this overbidding and this
underselling, this spry, unceasing competition, and would
willingly give up a quarter of my profits to have two hours of my
daylight to myself,--at least I would if, working just as I do, I
did not barely get the children bread and clothes. I did not choose
my calling, but was dropped into it--by my innocent conceit, or by
duty to the family, or by a parent's foolish pride, or by our hasty
marriage; or a mere accident wedged me into it. Would I could have
my life over again! Then, whatever I _should_ be, at least I would
_not_ be what I am to-day!"
Have I spoken truly for any one here? I know I have. Goes not the
grumble thus within the silent breast of many a person, whose pluck
never lets it escape to words like these, save now and then on a
tired evening to husband or to wife?
There is often truth and justice in the grumble. Truth and justice
both. Still, when the question rises through the grumble, Can it be
that drudgery, not to be escaped, gives "culture"? the true answer
is--Yes, and culture of the prime elements of life; of the very
fundamentals of all fine manhood and fine womanhood.
Our _prime_ elements are due to our drudgery--I mean that
literally; the _fundamentals_ that underlie all fineness and
without which no other culture worth the winning is even possible.
These, for instance--and what names are more familiar? Power of
attention; power of industry; promptitude in beginning work; method
and accuracy and despatch in doing work; perseverance; courage
before difficulties; cheer under straining burdens; self-control
and self-denial and temperance. These are the prime qualities;
these the fundamentals. We have heard these names before! When we
were small mother had a way of harping on them, and father joined
in emphatically, and the minister used to refer to them in church.
And this was what our first employer meant--only his way of putting
the matter was, "Look sharp, my boy!"--"Be on time, John!"--"Stick
to it!" Yes, that is just what they all meant: these _are_ the very
qualities which the mothers tried to tuck into us when they tucked
us into bed, the very qualities which the ministers pack into their
platitudes, and which the nations pack into their proverbs. And
that goes to _show_ that they are the fundamentals. Reading,
writing, and arithmetic are very handy, but these fundamentals of a
man are handier to have; worth more; worth more than Latin and
Greek and French and German and music and art-history and painting
and wax flowers and travels in Europe added together. These last
are the decorations of a man or woman: even reading and writing are
but conveniences: those other things are the _indispensables_. They
make one's sit-fast strength and one's active momentum, whatsoever
and wheresoever the lot in life be--be it wealth or poverty, city
or country, library or workshop. Those qualities make the solid
substance of one's self.
And the question I would ask of myself and you is, How do we get
them? How do they become ours? High-school and college can give
much, but these are never on their programmes. All the book
processes that we go to the schools for, and commonly call "our
education," give no more than _opportunity_ to win these
indispensables of education. How, then, do we get them? We get them
somewhat as the fields and valleys get their grace. Whence is it
that the lines of river and meadow and hill and lake and shore
conspire to-day to make the landscape beautiful? Only by long
chiselings and steady pressures. Only by ages of glacier crush and
grind, by scour of floods, by centuries of storm and sun. These
rounded the hills, and scooped the valley-curves, and mellowed the
soil for meadow-grace. There was little grace in the operation, had
we been there to watch. It was "drudgery" all over the land. Mother
Nature was down on her knees doing her early scrubbing work! That
was yesterday: to-day, result of scrubbing-work, we have the
laughing landscape.
Now what is true of the earth is true of each man and woman on the
earth. Father and mother and the ancestors before them have done
much to bequeath those elemental qualities to us; but that which
scrubs them into us, the clinch which makes them actually ours, and
keeps them ours, and adds to them as the years go by--that depends
on our own plod, our plod in the rut, our drill of habit; in one
word, depends upon our "drudgery." It is because we have to go,
and _go_, morning after morning, through rain, through shine,
through toothache, headache, heartache, to the appointed spot, and
do the appointed work; because, and only because, we have to stick
to that work through the eight or ten hours, long after rest would
be so sweet; because the school-boy's lesson must be learned at
nine o'clock and learned without a slip; because the accounts on
the ledger must square to a cent; because the goods must tally
exactly with the invoice; because good temper must be kept with
children, customers, neighbors, not seven, but seventy times seven
times; because the besetting sin must be watched to-day, to-morrow,
and the next day; in short, without much matter _what_ our work be,
whether this or that, it is because, and only because, of the rut,
plod, grind, humdrum _in_ the work, that we at last get those
self-foundations laid of which I spoke,--attention, promptness,
accuracy, firmness, patience, self-denial, and the rest. When I
think over that list and seriously ask myself three questions, I
have to answer each with _No_:--Are there any qualities in the list
which I can afford to spare, to go without, as mere show-qualities?
Not one. Can I get these self-foundations laid, save by the weight,
year in, year out, of the steady pressures? No, there is no other
way. Is there a single one in the list which I cannot get in some
degree by undergoing the steady drills and pressures? No, not one.
Then beyond all books, beyond all class-work at the school, beyond
all special opportunities of what I call my "education," it is
this drill and pressure of my daily task that is my great
school-master. _My daily task_, whatever it be--_that is what
mainly educates me_. All other culture is mere luxury compared with
what that gives. That gives the indispensables. Yet fool that I am,
this pressure of my daily task is the very thing that I so growl at
as my "drudgery"!
We can add right here this fact, and practically it is a very
important fact to girls and boys as ambitious as they ought to
be,---the higher our ideals, the _more_ we need those foundation
habits strong. The street-cleaner can better afford to drink and
laze than he who would make good shoes; and to make good shoes
takes less force of character and brain than to make cures in the
sick-room, or laws in the legislature, or children in the nursery.
The man who makes the head of a pin or the split of a pen all day
long, and the man who must put fresh thought into his work at every
stroke,--which of the two more needs the self-control, the method,
the accuracy, the power of attention and concentration? Do you sigh
for books and leisure and wealth? It takes more "concentration" to
use books--head tools--well than to use hand tools. It takes more
"self-control" to use leisure well than workdays. Compare the
Sundays and Mondays of your city; which day, all things considered,
stands for the city's higher life,--the day on which so many men
are lolling, or the day on which all toil? It takes more knowledge,
more integrity, more justice, to handle riches well than to bear
the healthy pinch of the just-enough.
Do you think that the great and famous escape drudgery? The native
power and temperament, the outfit and capital at birth, counts for
much, but it convicts us common minds of huge mistake to hear the
uniform testimony of the more successful geniuses about their
genius. "Genius is patience," said who? Sir Isaac Newton. "The
Prime Minister's secret is patience," said who? Mr. Pitt, the great
Prime Minister of England. Who, think you, wrote, "My imagination
would never have served me as it has, but for the habit of
commonplace, humble, patient, daily, toiling, drudging attention"?
It was Charles Dickens. Who said "The secret of a Wall Street
million is common honesty"? Vanderbilt; and he added as the recipe
for a million (I know somebody would like to learn it), "Never use
what is not your own, never buy what you cannot pay for, never sell
what you haven't got." How simple great men's rules are! How easy
it is to be a great man! Order, diligence, patience, honesty,--just
what you and I must use in order to put our dollar in the
savings-bank, to do our school-boy sum, to keep the farm thrifty,
and the house clean, and the babies neat. Order, diligence,
patience, honesty! There is wide difference between men, but truly
it lies less in some special gift or opportunity granted to one and
withheld from another, than in the differing degree in which these
common elements of human power are owned and used. Not how much
talent have I, but how much will to use the talent that I have, is
the main question. Not how much do I know, but how much do I do
with what I know? To do their great work the great ones need more
of the very same habits which the little ones need to do their
smaller work. Goethe, Spencer, Agassiz, Jesus, share, not
achievements, but conditions of achievement, with you and me. And
those conditions for them, as for us, are largely the plod, the
drill, the long disciplines of toil. If we ask such men their
secret, they will uniformly tell us so.
Since we lay the firm substrata of ourselves in this way, then, and
only in this way; and since the higher we aim, the more, and not
the less, we need these firm substrata,--since this is so, I think
we ought to make up our minds and our mouths to sing a hallelujah
unto Drudgery: _Blessed be Drudgery_,--the one thing that we cannot
spare!
II
But there is something else to be said. Among the people who are
drudges there are some who have given up their dreams of what, when
younger, they used to talk or think about as their "ideals"; and
have grown at last, if not content, resigned to do the actual work
before them. Yes, here it is,--before us, and behind us, and on all
sides of us; we cannot change it; we have accepted it. Still, we
have not given up one dream,--the dream of _success_ in this work
to which we are _so_ clamped. If we cannot win the well-beloved
one, then success with the ill-beloved,--this at least is left to
hope for. Success may make _it_ well-beloved, too,--who knows?
Well, the secret of this success still lies in the same old word,
"drudgery." For drudgery is the doing of one thing, one thing, one
thing, long after it ceases to be amusing; and it is this "one
thing I do" that gathers me together from my chaos, that
concentrates me from possibilities to powers, and turns powers into
achievements. "One thing I do," said Paul, and, apart from what his
one thing was, in that phrase he gave the watchword of salvation.
That whole long string of habits--attention, method, patience,
self-control, and the others--can be rolled up and balled, as it
were, in the word "concentration." We will halt a moment at the
word:
"I give you the end of a golden string:
Only wind it into a ball,--
It will lead you in at Heaven's gate,
Built in Jerusalem's wall."
Men may be divided into two classes,--those who have a "one thing,"
and those who have no "one thing," to do; those with aim, and those
without aim, in their lives: and practically it turns out that
almost all of the success, and, therefore, the greater part of the
happiness, go to the first class. The aim in life is what the
backbone is in the body: without it we are invertebrate, belong to
some lower order of being not yet man. No wonder that the great
question, therefore, with a young man is, What am I to be? and that
the future looks rather gloomy until the life-path opens. The lot
of many a girl, especially of many a girl with a rich father, is a
tragedy of aimlessness. Social standards, and her lack of true
ideals and of real education, have condemned her to be frittered:
from twelve years old she is a cripple to be pitied, and by thirty
she comes to know it. With the brothers the blame is more their
own. The boys we used to play our school games with have found
their places; they are winning homes and influence and money, their
natures are growing strong and shapely, and their days are filling
with the happy sense of accomplishment,--while _we_ do not yet know
what we are. We have no meaning on the earth. Lose us, and the
earth has lost nothing; no niche is empty, no force has ceased to
play, for we have got no aim, and therefore we are still--nobody.
_Get your meaning_ first of all! Ask the question until it is
answered past question, What am I? What do I stand for? What name
do I bear in the register of forces? In our national cemeteries
there are rows on rows of unknown bodies of our soldiers,--men who
did a work and put a meaning to their lives; for the mother and the
townsmen say, "He died in the war." But the men and women whose
lives are aimless reverse their fates. Our _bodies_ are known, and
answer in this world to such or such a name,--but as to our inner
_selves_, with real and awful meaning our walking bodies might be
labeled, "An unknown man sleeps here!"
Now, since it is concentration that prevents this tragedy of
failure, and since this concentration always involves drudgery,
long, hard, abundant, we have to own again, I think, that that is
even more than what I called it first,--our chief school-master;
besides that, drudgery is the gray Angel of Success. The main
secret of any success we may hope to rejoice in is in that angel's
keeping. Look at the leaders in the profession, the "solid" men in
business, the master-workmen who begin as poor boys and end by
building a town in which to house their factory hands; they are
drudges of the single aim. The man of science, and to-day more than
ever, if he would add to the world's knowledge, or even get a
reputation, must be, in some one branch at least, a plodding
specialist. The great inventors, Palissy at his pots, Goodyear at
his rubber, Elias Howe at his sewing-machine, tell the
secret,--"One thing I do." The reformer's secret is the same. A
one-eyed, grim-jawed folk the reformers are apt to be: one-eyed,
grim-jawed, seeing but the one thing, never letting go, they have
to be, to start a torpid nation. All these men as doers of the
single thing drudge their way to their success. Even so must we,
would we win ours. The foot-loose man is _not_ the enviable man. A
wise man will be his own necessity and bind himself to a task, if
by early wealth or foolish parents or other lowering circumstances
he has lost the help of an outward necessity.
Again, then, I say, Let us sing a hallelujah and make a fresh
beatitude: _Blessed be Drudgery!_ It is the one thing we cannot
spare.
III
This is a hard gospel, is it not? But now there is a pleasanter
word to briefly say. To lay the firm foundations in ourselves, or
even to win success in life, we _must_ be drudges. But we _can_ be
_artists_, also, in our daily task. And at that word things
brighten.
"Artists," I say,--not artisans. "The difference?" This: the artist
is he who strives to perfect his work,--the artisan strives to get
through it. The artist would fain finish, too; but with him it is
to "finish the work God has given me to do!" It is not how great a
thing we do, but how well we do the thing we have to, that puts us
in the noble brotherhood of artists. My Real is not my Ideal,--is
that my complaint? One thing, at least, is in my power: if I cannot
realize my Ideal, I can at least _idealize my Real_. How? By trying
to be perfect in it. If I am but a rain-drop in a shower, I will
be, at least, a perfect drop; if but a leaf in a whole June, I will
be, at least, a perfect leaf. This poor "one thing I do,"--instead
of repining at its lowness or its hardness, I will make it glorious
by my supreme loyalty to its demand.
An artist himself shall speak. It was Michael Angelo who said:
"Nothing makes the soul so pure, so religious, as the endeavor to
create something perfect; for God is perfection, and whoever
strives for it strives for something that is godlike. True painting
is only an image of God's perfection,--a shadow of the pencil with
which he paints, a melody, a striving after harmony." The great
masters in music, the great masters in all that we call artistry,
would echo Michael Angelo in this; he speaks the artist essence
out. But what holds good upon their grand scale and with those
whose names are known, holds equally good of all pursuits and all
lives. That true painting is an image of God's perfection must be
true, if he says so; but no more true of painting than of
shoemaking, of Michael Angelo than of John Pounds, the cobbler. I
asked a cobbler once how long it took to become a good shoemaker;
he answered, promptly, "Six years,--and then you must travel!" That
cobbler had the artist soul. I told a friend the story, and he
asked his cobbler the same question: How long does it take to
become a good shoemaker? "All your life, sir." That was still
better,--a Michael Angelo of shoes! Mr. Maydole, the hammer-maker,
of central New York, was an artist: "Yes," said he to Mr. Parton,
"I have made hammers here for twenty-eight years." "Well, then, you
ought to be able to make a pretty good hammer by this time." "No,
sir," was the answer, "I _never_ made a pretty good hammer. I make
the best hammer made in the United States." Daniel Morell, once
president of the Cambria Railworks in Pittsburgh, which employed
seven thousand men, was an artist, and trained artists. "What is
the secret of such a development of business as this?" asked the
visitor. "We have no secret," was the answer; "we always try to
beat our last batch of rails. That's all the secret we have, and we
don't care who knows it." The Paris bookbinder was an artist, who,
when the rare volume of Corneille, discovered in a book-stall, was
brought to him, and he was asked how long it would take him to bind
it, answered, "Oh, sir, you must give me a year, at least; _this_
needs all my care." Our Ben Franklin showed the artist when he
began his own epitaph, "Benjamin Franklin, printer." And Professor
Agassiz, when he told the interviewer that he had "no time to make
money"; and when he began his will, "I, Louis Agassiz, teacher."
In one of Murillo's pictures in the Louvre he shows us the interior
of a convent kitchen; but doing the work there are, not mortals in
old dresses, but beautiful white-winged angels. One serenely puts
the kettle on the fire to boil, and one is lifting up a pail of
water with heavenly grace, and one is at the kitchen dresser
reaching up for plates; and I believe there is a little cherub
running about and getting in the way, trying to help. What the old
monkish legend that it represented is, I hardly know. But, as the
painter puts it to you on his canvas, all are so busy, and working
with such a will, and so refining the work as they do it, that
somehow you forget that pans are pans and pots pots, and only think
of the angels, and how very natural and beautiful kitchen-work
is,--just what the angels would do, of course.
It is the angel-aim and standard in an act that consecrates it. He
who aims for perfectness in a trifle is trying to do that trifle
holily. The _trier_ wears the halo, and therefore, the halo grows
as quickly round the brows of peasant as of king. This aspiration
to do perfectly,--is it not religion practicalized? If we use the
name of God, is this not God's presence becoming actor in us? No
need, then, of being "great" to share that aspiration and that
presence. The smallest roadside pool has its water from heaven, and
its gleam from the sun, and can hold the stars in its bosom, as
well as the great ocean. Even so the humblest man or woman can live
splendidly! That is the royal truth that we need to believe,--you
and I who have no "mission," and no great sphere to move in. The
universe is not quite complete without _my_ work well done. Have
you ever read George Eliot's poem called "Stradivarius"?
Stradivarius was the famous old violin-maker, whose violins, nearly
two centuries old, are almost worth their weight in gold to-day.
Says Stradivarius in the poem:
"If my hand slacked,
I should rob God,--since He is the fullest good,--
Leaving a blank instead of violins.
_He_ could not make Antonio Stradivari's violins
Without Antonio."
That is just as true of us as of our greatest brothers. What, stand
with slackened hands and fallen heart before the littleness of your
service! Too little, is it, to be perfect in it? Would you, then,
if you were Master, risk a greater treasure in the hands of such a
man? Oh, there is no man, no woman, so small that they cannot make
their life great by high endeavor; no sick crippled child on its
bed that cannot fill a niche of service _that_ way in the world.
This is the beginning of all gospels,--that the kingdom of heaven
is at hand just where _we_ are. It is just as near us as our work is,
for the gate of heaven for each soul lies in the endeavor to do
that work perfectly.
But to bend this talk back to the word with which we started: will
this striving for perfection in the little thing give "culture"?
Have you ever watched such striving in operation? Have you never
met humble men and women who read little, who knew little, yet who
had a certain fascination as of fineness lurking about them? Know
them, and you are likely to find them persons who have put so much
thought and honesty and conscientious trying into their common
work--it may be sweeping rooms, or planing boards, or painting
walls--have put their ideals so long, so constantly, so lovingly
into that common work of theirs, that finally these qualities have
come to permeate not their work only, but so much of their being
that they are fine-fibred within, even if on the outside the rough
bark clings. Without being schooled, they are apt to instinctively
detect a sham,--one test of culture. Without haunting the
drawing-rooms, they are likely to have manners of quaint grace and
graciousness,--another test of culture. Without the
singing-lessons, their tones are apt to be gentle,--another test of
culture. Without knowing anything about Art, so called, they know
and love the best in _one_ thing,--are artists in their own little
specialty of work. They make good company, these men and
women,--why? Because, not having been able to realize their Ideal,
they have idealized their Real, and thus in the depths of their
nature have won true "culture."
You know all beatitudes are based on something hard to do or to be.
"Blessed are the meek": is it easy to be meek? "Blessed are the
pure in heart": is that so very easy? "Blessed are they who mourn."
"Blessed are they who hunger and thirst--who _starve_--after
righteousness." So this new beatitude by its hardness only falls
into line with all the rest. A third time and heartily I say
it,--"Blessed be Drudgery!" For thrice it blesses us: it gives us
the fundamental qualities of manhood and womanhood; it gives us
success in the thing we have to do; and it makes us, if we choose,
artists,--artists within, whatever our outward work may be.
_Blessed be Drudgery_,--the secret of all culture!
And now, as a final step in this preliminary study, a step which shall
again give practice in both forms of expression, you are to choose from
your vital interests one concerning which you hold intense convictions.
First you are to set forth these convictions in the strongest piece of
persuasive prose you can command: this is work for your study. Second,
you are to summon all your vocal resources, and, with the one idea of
persuading us of the truth of your convictions, make to us for them a
direct appeal: this work is for the class-room. So shall we have
combined the preliminary study in vocal expression of _direct appeal_
with the preliminary study in verbal expression of _persuasion_.
FIRST STUDY
TO ESTABLISH VITALITY IN THINKING
Among the axioms of our subject-matter already formulated stands this
one: reading aloud is thinking aloud. If reading aloud is thinking aloud
the quality of the reading will depend, of course, upon the quality of
the thinking. But while clear thinking does not assure lucid reading
(since there are other elements in the problem), the converse is true,
that good reading implies clear thinking. For it is impossible to read
convincingly unless one is thinking vitally, which brings us to the
object of this study: _To Establish Vitality in Thinking._
Do you know what it means to think vitally in reading? It means a
concentration of your mind upon the thought before you until you,
yourself, seem to be thinking that thought for the first time,--until
you seem to be bringing forth a thought of your own conception instead
of rethinking the conception of another's mind. Is this a familiar
experience? It must become one if you are to become a true interpreter.
For the true interpreter is first of all the keen thinker.
We do not say of the great actor, after a performance of Hamlet, "He
played Hamlet wonderfully!" We say, rather, "He was Hamlet." The great
actor creates the part he plays each time he plays it. He creates the
part by living the part. Even in the same way the great interpreter
creates the thought he voices through a concentration of mind which
appropriates the thought and makes it his own to voice.
We have said that the greatest need of the human heart is for
self-expression. To satisfy the heart that act of expression must be a
creative act. True interpretation is creative expression. The
fundamental step toward creative expression is complete possession of
the thought to be expressed. Complete possession depends upon your power
to concentrate your mind upon a thought until it is your own. The first
step in interpretation is to establish vitality in thinking.
The new arithmetic trains the mind to see the relation behind the
mathematical statement of the relation. The child who "says his tables"
to-day is not repeating by rote words and figures, he is realizing vital
relations, he is developing a sense of proportion, he is learning to
think vitally. The old method in arithmetic left the statement "two
times one is two" a cold mathematical fact; the new method makes it a
key to living relations. One in the "tables" of the child in mathematics
to-day stands for a definite object, and the statement "two times one is
two" is an interesting and significant fact. The statement through
imaginative thinking, which is vital thinking, may be invested with
personal significance and become a personally interesting fact. Try it!
Say your "tables of one" up to ten times one is ten, _thinking vitally_,
which means getting behind the statement of the relation to the relation
itself, behind the sign to the thing signified. Let your "one" stand
each time for something you desire--as a small boy might desire pieces
of candy, or a miser "pieces of eight"; now think vitally in this way
and say, "Ten times one is ten!" What has happened to the mathematical
fact? It has become a living expression!
This might be called _interpreting_ our mathematics. Why not? That is
the surest way to master them! It is the surest way to mastery of any
subject, of any art, of Life itself. It is the only real way. But we
have leaped from the part to the whole, from the study of a detail to an
application of the law governing the whole subject. Back we must go to
our special point. If we can turn the statement of a cold mathematical
fact into the expression of a living vital relation by thinking vitally,
so investing the fact with personal significance and making it our own,
what can we not do with the more easily appropriated thought which poets
and philosophers and play-writers have given us, and with which rests
our especial concern as interpreters? Let us see what we can do! But
first there is one other point to be considered in this question of
_vital thinking_. We have spoken of one aspect of the process of the
mind in thinking,--the _concentration_ upon an idea until it is one's
own. But there is the passing of the mind from idea to idea to be noted.
This phase the psychologists name "transition." This alternate
concentration and transition constitutes the "pulsing of the mind" in
reading, which Doctor Curry discusses so vitally in his _Lessons in
Vocal Expression_. Now transition is an inevitable result of
concentration and follows it as naturally as expiration follows
inspiration. This being true, we need only note, in our study of the
process of the mind in reading aloud, the question of transition,
letting it follow naturally the fundamental act of concentration which
is our chief concern. If the intense concentration is accomplished the
clean transition will follow. In choosing material which shall require
for adequate interpretation this intense concentration of the mind, we
find our source, of course, to be the literature of thought rather than
the literature of feeling. The literary form which seems to furnish the
best examples for our purpose at this point is the essay where the
appeal is, primarily, at least, an intellectual appeal. For my own
suggestive analysis and for our preliminary study in vital thinking I
have chosen paragraphs from Emerson's essays because Emerson's almost
every paragraph is an essay in miniature. The story is told of the
gentle seer that once in the midst of a lecture he dropped all the pages
of his manuscript over the front of the pulpit. The incident disturbed
his auditors greatly until they saw Mr. Emerson gather up the leaves and
without any effort at rearrangement in the old order begin to read as
though nothing had happened. Every sentence was almost equally pertinent
to the main theme, and suffered not from a new juxtaposition. So in
printing extracts from this source we feel no sense of incompleteness.
SUGGESTIVE ANALYSIS
Let us read this passage from Emerson's _Experience_:
To finish the moment, to find the journey's end in every step of
the road, to live the greatest number of good hours, is wisdom. It
is not the part of men, but of fanatics--or of mathematicians, if
you will--to say that, the shortness of life considered, it is not
worth caring whether for so short a duration we were sprawling in
want or sitting high. Since our office is with moments, let us
husband them. Five minutes of to-day are worth as much to me as
five minutes in the next millennium. Let us be poised, and wise,
and our own, to-day. I settle myself ever the firmer in the creed
that we should not postpone and refer and wish, but do broad
justice where we are, by whomsoever we deal with, accepting our
actual companions and circumstances, however humble or odious, as
the mystic officials to whom the universe has delegated its whole
pleasure for us.
If you do not think your way through this paragraph clearly, concisely,
logically, intensely, when you read it aloud your voice will betray you.
In what way? Your tone will lack resonance, your speech will lack
precision, your pitch will be monotonous, your touch will be uncertain,
your inflections will be indefinite. Your reading will be unconvincing,
because it will fail in lucidity and variety. In approaching this
passage let us study first the question of proper emphasis. What is
emphasis? The dictionaries tell us that, in delivery, it is a special
stress of the voice on a given word. But we must use it in a broader
sense than this. To emphasize a word is not merely to put a special
stress of the voice upon that word. Such an attack might only make the
word conspicuous and so defeat the aim of true emphasis. True emphasis
is the art of voicing the words in a phrase so that they shall assume a
right relation to one another and, so related, best suggest the thought
of which they are the symbols. I do not emphasize one word in a phrase
and not the others. I simply vary my stress upon each word, in order to
gain the proper perspective for the whole sentence. Just so, in a
picture, I make one object stand out, and others fall into the
background, by drawing or painting them in proper relation to one
another. I may use any or all of the "elements of vocal expression" to
give that proper relation of values to the words in a single phrase. I
may pause, change my pitch, vary my inflection, and alter my
tone-color, in order to give a single word its full value. Let us try
experiments in emphasis with some isolated sentences before analyzing
the longer passage. Here is one of Robert Louis Stevenson's beautifully
wrought periods:
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere."
Let us vary, vocally, the relative values of the words in this sentence,
and study the effect upon the character of the thought. Let us look upon
the statement as a theme for discussion. With a pause before the second
word, "man," a lift of the voice on that word, a whimsical turn of the
tone, and a significant inflection, we may convert an innocent statement
of fact into an incendiary question for debate on the comparative sanity
of the sexes. A plea for endless faith and charity becomes a back-handed
criticism of women. Now let us read the sentence, giving it its true
meaning. "Every man has a sane spot somewhere." Let your voice make of
the statement a plea, by dwelling a bit on the first word and again on
the last word. Hyphenate the first two words (they really stand for one
idea). Compound also the words "sane" and "spot." Lift them as a single
word above the rest of the sentence. Now put "somewhere" a little higher
still above the level of the rest of the sentence. So, only, have we the
true import of this group of words:
some
where.
sane-spot
Every-
man has a
Analyze the rest of these sentences from Stevenson in the same way, and
experiment with them vocally.
That is never a bad wind that blows where we want to go.
For truth that is suppressed by friends is the readiest weapon of
the enemy.
Some strand of our own misdoing is involved in every quarrel.
Drama is the poetry of conduct, romance the poetry of circumstance.
You cannot run away from a weakness; you must sometime fight it out
or perish; and if that be so, why not now, and where you stand?
An aim in life is the only fortune worth the finding; and it is not
to be found in foreign lands, but in the heart itself.
The world was not made for us; it was made for ten hundred millions
of me, all different from each other and from us; there's no royal
road, we just have to sclamber and tumble.
Now, once more, and this time with detailed analysis, let us study
the passage from _Experience_. Let us first consider for a moment
some of the words which make this passage powerful: _finish_,
_journey's-end_, _good hours_, _wisdom_, _fanatics_, _mathematicians_,
_sprawling-in-want_, _sitting-high_, _firmer_, _poised_, _postpone_,
_justice_, _humble_, _odious_, _mystic_, _pleasure_. When spoken with a
keen sense of its inherent meaning, with full appreciation of its form,
and with delight in molding it, how efficient each one of these words
becomes! When shall we, as a people, learn reverence for the words which
make up our language--reverence that shall make us ashamed to mangle
words, offering as our excuse that we are "Westerners" or "Southerners"
or from New York or New England or Indiana. The clear-cut thought calls
for the clean-cut speech. Let us say these words over and over until
they assume full value. And now we pass from words to groups of words.
The mind and the tone must move progressively through the first three
phrases which make up this first sentence: "To finish the moment, to
find the journey's end in every step of the road, to live the greatest
number of good hours, is wisdom." The phrases must be held together by
an almost imperceptible suspension and upward reach of the voice at the
end of each group of words, and yet each phrase must be allowed to be
momentarily complete. Read the sentence, making each phrase a
conclusion, and then again letting each phrase look forward to the next.
Each phrase is really a substantive, looking forward to its predicate
through a second substantive which is a little more vital than the
first, and again through a third substantive which is a little more
vital than either of the other two. Bring this out in reading the
sentence. The next sentence depends for its significance upon your
contrasting inflections of the three words "men," "fanatics," and
"mathematicians"; and again upon your sympathetic inflection of
"sprawling-in-want" and "sitting-high." "It is not the part of men, but
of fanatics--or of mathematicians, if you will--to say that, the
shortness of life considered, it is not worth caring whether for so
short a duration we were sprawling in want or sitting high." In your
utterance of these words can you make "men" MEN, and "fanatics"
_fanatics_, and consign "mathematicians" to the cold corner of human
affairs designed for them? Can you so inflect "sprawling in want" and
"sitting high" as to suggest a swamp and a mountain-top, or a frog and
an angel? Let your voice leap from the swamp to the mountain-top. Let it
climb. Now comes the swift, concise, admonitory sentence: "Since our
office is with moments, let us husband them." Pause before you speak the
word "husband," and _husband_ it. "Five minutes of to-day are worth as
much to me as five minutes in the next millennium." Make "five minutes
of to-day" one word, and accent the last syllable, thus:
five-minutes-of-_to-day_. Let the tone retard and take its time on the
last seven words. Now poise your tone for the next sentence. "Let us be
poised, and wise, and our own, to-day." The paragraph closes with a more
complex statement of the theme. Let your voice search out the meaning.
Let it settle down into the conclusion, and utter it convincingly. Give
a definite touch to the words which I shall put in italics. "I settle
myself ever _firmer_ in the _creed_ that we should not _postpone_ and
_refer_ and _wish_, but do _broad-justice_ where we _are_, by
_whomsoever_ we deal with, accepting our _actual_ companions and
circumstances, however _humble_ or _odious_, as the _mystic officials_
to whom the _universe_ has dedicated its _whole pleasure_ for _us_."
Analyze vocally the following paragraph:
There is a time in every man's education when he arrives at the
conviction that envy is ignorance; that imitation is suicide; that
he must take himself for better for worse as his portion; that
though the wide universe is full of good, no kernel of nourishing
corn can come to him but through his toil bestowed on that plot of
ground which is given to him to till. The power which resides in
him is new in nature, and none but he knows what that is which he
can do, nor does he know until he has tried.... What I must do is
all that concerns me, not what the people think. This rule, equally
arduous in actual and in intellectual life, may serve for the whole
distinction between greatness and meanness. It is the harder
because you will always find those who think they know what is your
duty better than you know it. It is easy in the world to live after
the world's opinion; it is easy in solitude to live after our own;
but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with
perfect sweetness the independence of solitude.--_Self-Reliance._
SELECTIONS FOR INTERPRETATION
By choosing as further material for vocal interpretation selections
which shall also be good examples for examination as to their literary
construction, we shall serve the double purpose of adapting our studies
in vocal interpretation to the uses of English composition.
The following selections are to be: first, read aloud (in class);
second, examined as to their literary construction (in class); third,
analyzed and reported upon as specimens of exposition and argumentation
(in the study).
Exposition is an explanation, a setting forth, or an expounding. It
is an attempt to render something plain, an effort to convey to the
reader a train of thought which represents the conclusions of the
writer upon a subject. The writer, it is at once evident, must be
acquainted with the subject with which he deals. He is presuming to
teach, and must be in a position which justifies him in so doing.
He is prepared to write an exposition only when he is able, in
regard to the topic in hand, to take frankly and unreservedly the
attitude of a teacher.
A teacher must have many good gifts and graces; and whoever else
may fail to be well acquainted with a given lesson, he must have
mastered it thoroughly. To teach he must first know. Whoever has
taught understands how completely different is the attitude of the
teacher from that of the pupil. While the pupil is hardly expected
to be able to do more than reasonably well to understand the
subject in hand, the teacher must be able to explain, to justify,
to make clear relations, and to impart the whole matter. The pupil
is excused with a sort of hearsay knowledge, but the teacher must
have a vital experience of what he teaches. Especially must he be
able to comprehend and to represent a subject as a whole. He is
responsible for the student's being able in turn to co-ordinate
facts and theories so as to produce unity; and it is therefore
essential that he himself have power to hold and to make clear a
continuous train of thought.
The teacher, moreover, must have over his mind discipline so firm
that he is not dependent upon moods. He must cover the wide
difference between the train of thought which springs spontaneously
in the mind and that which is laboriously worked out as a logical
sequence of ideas relating to a subject forced upon the attention.
The pupil may, to a certain extent, indulge the vagaries of his
inclination, but the teacher must respond to the need of the
moment. He must have trained his mind to give an intelligent
judgment upon any matter presented to it. He is not equipped for
instructing--nor is any individual ready for life--until he can
command the resources of his inner self to the utmost. The trained
person is one who can take a subject which may not at the outset
especially appeal to him, which is full of complications, which is
not in itself, perhaps, attractive, and can insist with himself
that his mind shall master it thoroughly. He is able so to expend
his whole mental strength, if need be, upon any necessary topic
that the subject shall be examined, acquired, assimilated, and then
shall be so organized, so illumined, and so presented that others
shall be instructed. The mind of the teacher, in a word, is so
disciplined that it will work when it is ordered.
The ideal state of mind for him who wishes to communicate knowledge
is that of being absolute master of all its resources. Many who
possess no inconsiderable powers of thought are practically unable
to command the best powers of their intelligence. They depend upon
the whim of the moment, upon some outward pressure or inward
impulse, to arouse their intellect. They fail to reflect that while
any ordinary intellect naturally forms some opinion upon any
subject which interests it, only the trained mind is able to judge
clearly and lucidly of an indifferent or uninteresting matter. In
this mastery of thought lies the difference between the sterile and
the productive mind. Only one brain in a thousand has not the
disposition to shirk work if it is allowed, and every student has
moments when his intelligence seems almost to act like a spoiled
child that hates to get up when called on a cold morning. To
establish the power of the will over the intellect is the object of
education, and the ability to exercise this power is what is meant
by the proper use of the word "cultivation."
The mental process of the cultivated thinker when considering any
subject is likely to be: first, to become sure of his terms; then,
clearly to set before his mind the facts and conditions; and,
lastly, to make the possible and resulting deductions and
conclusions. This gives a hint, and indeed practically affords a
rule for the writer of exposition.
An exposition, broadly speaking, may be said to consist of three
steps which nearly correspond to the three steps of mental
activity just set down: the Definition, the Statement, and the
Inference.
Definition is making clear to self or to the reader what is under
discussion.
Statement is the setting forth of whatever is to be said of the
facts, conditions, relations, and so on, which it is the object of
the exposition to make clear.
Inference is the conclusion or conclusions drawn.
These three parts will seldom be found as formal divisions in any
ordinary exposition, but in some sort they are always present; and
the writer must at least have them clear in his mind if he hopes to
render his work well ordered, comprehensive, and symmetrical.
Together they are woven as the strands which give a firmness of
texture to the whole.
To illustrate the bearing of this analysis on the composition of an
exposition, we may imagine that a student has been required to
write a theme on "The Influence of College Life." He has first to
concern himself with definition. He must decide what he means by
college life as a molding influence; whether its intellectual, its
social, its moral aspects, or all these. He must consider, too,
whether he is to deal with the effect upon specific characters or
upon types; whether upon boys during the time they are in college
or as a training for after life; whether at a special institution
or as the result of any college. If he limits himself to one phase
of influence, he must in the same way decide fully in what sense
he intends to treat that phase. If he is to consider the social
effect of college life, for instance, he has to define for himself
the sense in which he will use the word "social." Is it to mean
simply formal society, adaptation to the more conventional and
exclusive forms of human intercourse, or to imply all that renders
a man more self-poised, more flexible, and more adaptable in any
relations with his fellows? If, on the other hand, it is the
intellectual influence of college life which is to be studied, the
first step is to decide what is to be considered for this purpose
the range of the term "intellectual"; whether it is to be taken to
mean the mere acquirement of information; whether it has relation
to acquirement or to modification of mental conditions; whether it
means change in the mind in the way of development or of
modification; whether it shall be applied to an alteration in the
student's attitude toward knowledge or toward life in general. All
this is in the line of definition, and it is naturally connected
with the statement of whatever facts bear upon the topic under
discussion.
Statement has largely to do with fact. Theory belongs rather to
whatever inference is part of an exposition. In the statement will
come the observations of the writer; whatever he knows of general
conditions at college, or such individual examples as bear upon the
question in hand. From these he will inevitably draw some
conclusions, and the value of the exposition will depend upon the
reasonableness and convincingness of these inferences, as these
will, in turn, depend upon the clearness of the writer's original
knowledge in regard to his intentions and the logic of his
statements.
Composition, it should be remembered, is the art of communicating
to others what is in the mind of the writer. To write without
having the subject abundantly in mind is to invite the reader to a
Barmecide feast of empty dishes. The necessity of insisting upon
such particulars as those just given of the process of making an
exposition arises from the stubborn idea of the untrained student
that writing is something done with paper and ink. It is, on the
contrary, something which is done with brains; it is less putting
things on paper than it is thinking things out in the mind.
Before leaving the illustration of a theme on the influence of
college life we may glance a moment more at the difficulty, even
with so simple a subject, of attaining perfect clarity of thinking.
One of the first things which must be determined is the essential
difference of life in a college from ordinary existence. If the
subject be given out to a class of students half the themes handed
in will begin with a remark upon the great change which comes to a
boy who finds himself for the first time freed from the restraints
of home. The moment this idea is presented to the mind it is to be
looked at, not as something with which to fill so much paper, but
as a stepping-stone toward ideas beyond. It is necessary, for
instance, to determine the distinctions between freedom at college
and freedom elsewhere; to decide wherein lie the differences in
the conditions which surround a boy in a university and one who
escapes from the restrictions of home by going away to live in a
city or in a country village, on shipboard or in the army. To be of
value, every thought in an exposition must have been tested by a
comparison with allied ideas as wide and as exhaustive as the
thinker is equal to making.
To learn to think is, after all, the prime essential in
exposition-writing, and the beginning of thought is the realization
of what is already known. The student who patiently examines his
views on the subject of which he is to write, who determines to
discover exactly how much he knows and what is the relative
importance of each of his opinions, is likely soon to come to find
that he is considering the theme chosen not only deeply, but with
tangible results. The value of any exposition, to sum the matter up
in a word, rests primarily and chiefly on the thoroughness of the
thought which produces it.--ARLO BATES.[3]
[3] This selection from Prof. Arlo Bates's _Talks on Writing
English_ is printed by permission of the author and his publishers,
Houghton Mifflin Company.
The _Idylls of the King_ has been called a quasi-epic. Departing
from the conventional epic form by its lack of a closely continuous
narrative, it has yet that lofty manner and underlying unity of
design which leads us to class it with the epics, at least, in the
essentials. It consists of a series of chivalric legends, taken
chiefly from the _Morte d'Arthur_ of Sir Thomas Malory, grouped so
as to exhibit the establishment, the greatness, and the downfall of
an ideal kingdom of righteousness among men. "The Coming of
Arthur," the ideal ruler, shows us the setting up of this kingdom.
Before this was disorder, great tracts of wilderness,
Wherein the beast was ever more and more,
But man was less and less.
Arthur slays the beast and fells the forest, and the old order
changes to give place to new. Then the song of Arthur's knights
rises, a majestic chorus of triumph:
Clang battle-axe and clash brand. Let the king reign.
In "Gareth and Lynette" the newly established kingdom is seen doing
its work among men. Arthur, enthroned in his great hall, dispenses
impartial justice. The knights
Ride abroad redressing human wrongs.
The allegory shows us, in Gareth's contests with the knights "that
have no law nor King," the contest of the soul with the temptations
that at different periods of life successively attack it:
The war of Time against the soul of man.
Then follow the "Idylls," which trace the entrance and growth of an
element of sin and discord, which, spreading, pulls down into ruin
that "fellowship of noble knights," "which are an image of the
mighty world." The purity of the ideal kingdom is fouled, almost at
its source, by the guilty love of Lancelot and the Queen. Among
some the contagion spreads; while others, in an extremity of
protest, start in quest of the Holy Grail, leaving the duty at hand
for mystical visions. Man cannot bring down heaven to earth; he
cannot sanctify the mass of men by his own rapturous anticipations;
he cannot safely neglect the preliminary stages of progress
appointed for the race; he "may not wander from the allotted field
before his work be done."
So by impurity and by impatience the rift in the kingdom widens,
and in "The Last Tournament," in the stillness before the impending
doom, we hear the shrill voice of Dagonet railing at the King, who
thinks himself as God, that he can make
Honey from hornet-combs
And men from beasts.
In "Guinevere," unequaled elsewhere in the "Idylls" in pure poetry,
the blow falls; at length, in the concluding poem, Arthur passes to
the isle of Avilion, and once more
The old order changeth, yielding place to new.
Tennyson himself tells us that in this, his longest poem, he has
meant to shadow "sense at war with soul," the struggle in the
individual and in the race, between that body which links us with
the brute and the soul which makes us part of a spiritual order.
But the mastery of the higher over the lower is only obtained
through many seeming failures. Wounded and defeated, the King
exclaims:
For I, being simple, thought to work His will,
And have but stricken with the sword in vain;
And all whereon I lean'd, in wife and friend,
Is traitor to my peace, and all my realm
_Reels back into the beast_, and is no more.
But he also half perceives the truth which it is the poet's purpose
to suggest to us. It is short-sighted to expect the immediate
sanctification of the race; if we are disheartened, striving to
"work His will," it is because "we see not the close." It is
impossible that Arthur's work should end in failure--departing, he
declares, "I pass, but shall not die," and when his grievous wound
is healed, he will return. The _Idylls of the King_ is thus the
epic of evolution in application to the progress of human society.
In it the teachings of "In Memoriam" assume a narrative form.
Move upward, working out the beast,
may be taken as a brief statement of its theme: and we read in it
the belief in the tendency upward and an assurance of ultimate
triumph:
Oh, yet we trust that somehow good
Will be the final goal of ill,
To pangs of nature, sins of will,
Defects of doubt, and taints of blood;
That nothing walks with aimless feet,
That not one life shall be destroyed,
Or cast as rubbish to the void
When God hath made the pile complete.
--PANCOAST.[4]
[4] Reprinted by permission from Pancoast's _Introduction to English
Literature_. Copyright, 1907, by Henry Holt and Company.
As an interlude study which shall look back to the step we have just
taken, and forward to the one we are about to take, let us test our
growth in _vitality in thinking_ and our need of _intelligence in
feeling_, by voicing the following selections from didactic poetry. This
form affords the best exercise in both activities because it makes a
double appeal, and so a double demand upon the interpreter--an appeal
through form to emotion, through aim to intelligence, and through
message and atmosphere to both. I have chosen examples of this form in
which the beauty and fascination of meter, rhythm, and rhyme, and the
didactic nature of the thought do not seem to overbalance each other. If
either should predominate you must, by your interpretation, strike the
balance. In reading Robert Browning's _Rabbi Ben Ezra_ (from which I
shall quote but a few verses) you must carry to your auditor the full
import of the philosophy, but in doing so you must not lose the beauty
of the verse in which the poet has set it.
RABBI BEN EZRA
Grow old along with me!
The best is yet to be,
The last of life, for which the first was made:
Our times are in His hand
Who saith, "A whole I planned,
Youth shows but half; trust God: see all, nor be afraid!"
Not that, amassing flowers,
Youth sighed, "Which rose make ours,
Which lily leave and then as best recall?"
Not that, admiring stars,
It yearned, "Nor Jove, nor Mars;
Mine be some figured flame which blends, transcends them all!"
Not for such hopes and fears
Annulling youth's brief years,
Do I remonstrate: folly wide the mark!
Rather I prize the doubt
Low kinds exist without,
Finished and finite clods, untroubled by a spark.
* * * * *
Then, welcome each rebuff
That turns earth's smoothness rough,
Each sting that bids nor sit nor stand but go!
Be our joys three-parts pain!
Strive and hold cheap the strain,
Learn, nor account the pang; dare, never grudge the throe!
For thence--a paradox
Which comforts while it mocks--
Shall life succeed in that it seems to fail:
What I aspired to be,
And was not, comforts me:
A brute I might have been, but would not sink i' the scale.
* * * * *
Now, who shall arbitrate?
Ten men love what I hate,
Shun what I follow, slight what I receive;
Ten, who in ears and eyes
Match me: we all surmise,
They, this thing, and I, that: whom shall my soul believe?
Not on the vulgar mass
Called "work," must sentence pass,
Things done, that took the eye and had the price;
O'er which, from level stand,
The low world laid its hand,
Found straightway to its mind, could value in a trice:
But all, the world's coarse thumb
And finger failed to plumb,
So passed in making up the main account:
All instincts immature,
All purposes unsure,
That weighed not as his work, yet swelled the man's amount:
Thoughts hardly to be packed
Into a narrow act,
Fancies that broke through language and escaped;
All I could never be,
All, men ignored in me,
This, I was worth to God, whose wheel the pitcher shaped.
* * * * *
--BROWNING.
FORBEARANCE
Hast thou named all the birds without a gun?
Loved the wood-rose, and left it on its stalk?
At rich men's tables eaten bread and pulse?
Unarmed, faced danger with a heart of trust?
And loved so well a high behavior,
In man or maid, that thou from speech refrained,
Nobility more nobly to repay?
O, be my friend, and teach me to be thine!
EACH AND ALL
Little thinks, in the field, yon red-cloaked clown
Of thee from the hill-top looking down;
The heifer that lows in the upland farm,
Far-heard, lows not thine ear to charm;
The sexton, tolling his bell at noon,
Deems not that great Napoleon
Stops his horse and lists with delight,
Whilst his files sweep round yon Alpine height;
Nor knowest thou what argument
Thy life to thy neighbor's creed has lent.
All are needed by each one;
Nothing is fair or good alone.
I thought the sparrow's note from heaven,
Singing at dawn on the alder bough;
I brought him home, in his nest, at even;
He sings the song, but it cheers not now,
For I did not bring home the river and sky;--
He sang to my ear,--they sang to my eye.
The delicate shells lay on the shore;
The bubbles of the latest wave
Fresh pearls to their enamel gave,
And the bellowing of the savage sea
Greeted their safe escape to me.
I wiped away the weeds and foam,
I fetched my sea-born treasures home;
But the poor, unsightly, noisome things
Had left their beauty on the shore
With the sun and the sand and the wild uproar.
The lover watched his graceful maid,
As 'mid the virgin train she strayed,
Nor knew her beauty's best attire
Was woven still by the snow-white choir.
At last she came to his hermitage,
Like the bird from the woodlands to the cage;--
The gay enchantment was undone,
A gentle wife, but fairy none.
Then I said, "I covet truth;
Beauty is unripe childhood's cheat;
I leave it behind with the games of youth":--
As I spoke, beneath my feet
The ground-pine curled its pretty wreath,
Running over the club-moss burrs;
I inhaled the violet's breath;
Around me stood the oaks and firs;
Pine-cones and acorns lay on the ground;
Over me soared the eternal sky,
Full of light and of deity;
Again I saw, again I heard,
The rolling river, the morning bird;--
Beauty through my senses stole;
I yielded myself to the perfect whole.
--EMERSON.
As a final step in this study which has for its aim an increase in your
power to _think vitally_ you are to choose from the "great heap of your
knowledge" a subject about which you have sufficient understanding and
enthusiasm to justify your discussion of it, and with this as a topic
you are "to unmuzzle your wisdom" in the form of _exposition_ or
_argumentation_.
SECOND STUDY
TO ESTABLISH INTELLIGENCE IN FEELING
Art is in bondage in this country: its internal polity to the
temperamental ideal; its external polity to the commercial ideal.
Business and social life are in the same bondage. In music, in drama, in
letters, in society, and in trade we permit personality to exploit
itself for commercial purposes. The result is either chaotic or
calculated expression on every side. When temperament seeks restraint in
technique, and policy, whether business or social, seeks freedom in
service, then shall we have that balanced expression in art, in society,
and in trade which should proceed from the American personality and
distinguish American life.
It may seem a far cry from a comment upon American life to the subject
of this second study--_intelligence in feeling_. Carry the idea of
balanced expression from the introduction to the body of this exposition
and the transition is not difficult to make.
"Wonderful technique, but no heart in her singing!" "Tremendous
temperament, but no technique!" "She moves me profoundly, but oh, what a
method!" "Her instrument is flawless, but she leaves me absolutely
unmoved." Have you ever heard such comment, or made such comment, or
been the subject of like comment? Diagnosis of the case, whether it be
yours or another's, should be the same--lack of poise in expression,
producing the undesirable effect upon the auditor of no emotion at all,
or of unintelligent emotion. To determine just what we mean by
intelligent emotion is our first problem for this study.
An experience I had in visiting a class in interpretation in a
well-known school of oratory some years ago will illustrate the point.
The selection for interpretation was the prelude to the first part of
_The Vision of Sir Launfal_.
"And what is so rare as a day in June?
Then, if ever, come perfect days;
Then Heaven tries earth if it be in tune,
And over it softly her warm ear lays; ..."
The work was well under way when I entered the class-room. My entrance
did not disturb the expression on the face of the student who was "up
before" the class. A Malvolio smile was never more deliciously
indelible. I thought at first my request to see some work in
interpretation had been mistaken and I had been ushered into a class in
facial gymnastics. Then I concluded that Mr. Lowell's poem was being
employed as text for an exercise in smiling. Finally the awful truth
came upon me that this teacher of interpretation was seriously
attempting to secure from her pupils an expression which should suggest
the spirit of the June day by asking them to assume the outward sign of
joy known as smiling. The result was a ghastly series of facial
contortions, which left at least one auditor's day as bleak as the
bleakest December. No intelligent feeling can be induced in interpreter
or auditor by assuming the outward sign of an inward emotion. Some of
you are recalling Mr. James's _talk to students_, on the reflex theory
of emotion, and are being confused at this point. Let us stop and
straighten out the confusion. Mr. James says:
"Action seems to follow feeling, but really action and feeling go
together; and by regulating the action, which is under the more direct
control of the will, we can indirectly regulate the feeling, which is
not.
"Thus the sovereign voluntary path to cheerfulness, if our spontaneous
cheerfulness be lost, is to sit up cheerfully, to look round cheerfully,
and to act and speak as if cheerfulness were already there. If such
conduct does not make you soon feel cheerful, nothing else on that
occasion can. So to feel brave, act as if we _were_ brave, use all our
will to that end, and a courage-fit will very likely replace the fit of
fear."
The application of this principle to the reading of these lines would
seem to justify the method the teacher was pursuing. A smile is
acceptedly the indication of happy emotion, the outward symbol of inward
rejoicing or joy. The June day is full of joyful emotion,--the joy of
awakening life. Applying Mr. James's theory, a legitimate way to induce
the inward emotion would seem to be to assume the outward sign. But wait
a moment. Let us look to our premises. Mr. Lanier, who sings of Nature
with joyful understanding, cries in _Sunrise_:
"Tell me, sweet burly-bark'd, man-bodied Tree
That mine arms in the dark are embracing, dost know
From what fount are these tears at thy feet which flow?
They rise not from reason, but deeper inconsequent deeps.
Reason's not one that weeps.
What logic of greeting lies
Betwixt dear over-beautiful trees and the rain of the eyes?"
Here is a great master of verbal expression whose inward joy finds its
outward symbol not in a smile but in a tear. So you and I may respond to
Mr. Lowell's "high tide of the year" with smiles or with tears, with
bowed head and closed eyes, or with eyes wide and head raised to meet
the returning flood of life.
The effect upon me of the beauty of this day as Mr. Lowell has painted
it, my personal emotional response is interesting psychology, but is not
my concern as an interpreter. My own emotion and its personal response
belong to my preparatory interpretative efforts in the study; but when
the interpretation is ready for the audience-room, the emotion must be
assimilated into the interpretative act and appear only as part of the
illumination of the bit of life I am presenting.
The object of all great art, whether creative or interpretative, is not
to exploit the personality of the artist, but to disclose at some point
the personality of the very God himself, which is life. The revelation
not of personal emotion but of universal life is the legitimate aim of
all artistic effort.
Emotional response will accompany every vital mental conception.
Abandonment to that response is a legitimate and necessary part of full
comprehension. But such abandonment, as I have said, belongs to our
preparation for expression. Such abandonment must not be taken out of
the study on to the stage. No temperamental expression along any line is
fit for the public until it is controlled by technique, the technique
which has been worked out by the masters of every art, not excluding the
art of living.
It is not the effect of June upon you I want from your interpretation,
it is the spirit of June itself. You must let me have my own emotion.
Your emotional response was the result of your mental concept; mine, to
be intelligent, must find the same impulse. If you impose your own
emotion upon me mine will be merely an unintelligent reflection of
yours. Taking as our ideal of the interpreter, the absolutely pure
medium, bars out every manifestation which calls attention to the
interpreter, and so interferes with the direct message.