A NOTE ON ZOLA'S METHOD

The art of Zola is based on certain theories, on a view of humanity

which he has adopted as his formula. As a deduction from his formula,

he takes many things in human nature for granted, he is content to

observe at second-hand; and it is only when he comes to the filling-up

of his outlines, the _mise-en-scène,_ that his observation becomes

personal, minute, and persistent. He has thus succeeded in being at

once unreal where reality is most essential, and tediously real where a

point-by-point reality is sometimes unimportant. The contradiction is

an ingenious one, which it may be interesting to examine in a little

detail, and from several points of view.

And, first of all, take L'_Assommoir,_ no doubt the most characteristic

of Zola's novels, and probably the best; and, leaving out for the

present the broader question of his general conception of humanity,

let us look at Zola's manner of dealing with his material, noting by

the way certain differences between his manner and that of Goncourt,

of Flaubert, with both of whom he has so often been compared, and

with whom he wishes to challenge comparison. Contrast _L'Assommoir_

with _Germinie Lacerteux,_ which, it must be remembered, was written

thirteen years earlier. Goncourt, as he incessantly reminds us, was

the first novelist in France to deliberately study the life of the

people, after precise documents; and _Germinie Lacerteux_ has this

distinction, among others, that it was a new thing. And it is done

with admirable skill; I as a piece of writing, as a work of art, it is

far superior to Zola. But, certainly, Zola's work has a mass and bulk,

a _fougue,_ a _portée,_ which Goncourt's lacks; and it has a savour

of plebeian flesh which all the delicate art of Goncourt could not

evoke. Zola sickens you with it; but there it is. As in all his books,

but more than in most, there is something greasy, a smear of eating

and drinking; the pages, to use his own phrase, _grasses des lichades

du lundi._ In _Germinie Lacerteux_ you never forget that Goncourt

is an aristocrat; in _L'Assommoir_ you never forget that Zola is a

bourgeois. Whatever Goncourt touches becomes, by the mere magic of his

touch, charming, a picture; Zola is totally destitute of charm. But

how, in _L'Assommoir,_ he drives home to you the horrid realities of

these narrow, uncomfortable lives! Zola has made up his mind that he

will say everything, without omitting a single item, whatever he has

to say; thus, in _L'Assommoir,_ there is a great feast which lasts for

fifty pages, beginning with the picking of the goose, the day before,

and going on to the picking of the goose's bones, by a stray marauding

cat, the night after. And, in a sense, he does say everything; and

there, certainly, is his novelty, his invention. He observes with

immense persistence, but his observation, after all, is only that of

the man in the street; it is simply carried into detail, deliberately.

And, while Goncourt wanders away sometimes into arabesques, indulges in

flourishes, so finely artistic is his sense of words and of the things

they represent, so perfectly can he match a sensation or an impression

by its figure in speech, Zola, on the contrary, never finds just the

right word, and it is his persistent fumbling for it which produces

these miles of description; four pages describing how two people went

upstairs, from the ground floor to the sixth story, and then two pages

afterwards to describe how they came downstairs again. Sometimes, by

his prodigious diligence and minuteness, he succeeds in giving you the

impression; often, indeed; but at the cost of what _ennui_ to writer

and reader alike! And so much of it all is purely unnecessary, has

no interest in itself and no connection with the story: the precise

details of Lorilleux's chain-making, bristling with technical terms:

it was _la colonne_ that he made, and only that particular kind of

chain; Goujet's forge, and the machinery in the shed next door; and

just how you cut out zinc with a large pair of scissors. When Goncourt

gives you a long description of anything, even if you do not feel

that it helps on the story very much, it is such a beautiful thing in

itself, his mere way of writing it is so enchanting, that you find

yourself wishing it longer, at its longest. But with Zola, there is no

literary interest in the--writing, apart from its clear and coherent

expression of a given thing; and these interminable descriptions have

no extraneous, or, if you will, implicit interest, to save them from

the charge of irrelevancy; they sink by their own weight. Just as

Zola's vision is the vision of the average man, so his vocabulary,

with all its technicology, remains mediocre, incapable of expressing

subtleties, incapable of a really artistic effect. To find out in a

slang dictionary that a filthy idea can be expressed by an ingeniously

filthy phrase in _argot,_ and to use that phrase, is not a great feat,

or, on purely artistic grounds, altogether desirable. To go to a

chainmaker and learn the trade name of the various kinds of chain which

he manufactures, and of the instruments with which he manufactures

them, is not an elaborate process, or one which can be said to pay you

for the little trouble which it no doubt takes. And it is not well to

be too cerïain after all that Zola is always perfectly accurate in his

use of all this manifold knowledge. The slang, for example; he went to

books for it, in books he found it, and no one will ever find some of

it but in books. However, my main contention is that Zola's general

use of words is, to be quite frank, somewhat ineffectual. He tries

to do what Flaubert did, without Flaubert's tools, and without the

craftsman's hand at the back of the tools. His fingers are too thick;

they leave a blurred line. If you want merely weight, a certain kind of

force, you get it; but no more.

Where a large part of Zola's merit lies, in his persistent attention

to detail, one finds also one of his chief defects. He cannot leave

well alone; he cannot omit; he will not take the most obvious fact

for granted. _Il marcha le premier, elle le suivit,_ well, of course,

she followed him, if he walked first: why mention the fact? That

beginning of a sentence is absolutely typical; it is impossible for

him to refer, for the twentieth time, to some unimportant character,

without giving name and profession, not one or the other, but both,

invariably both. He tells us particularly that a room is composed of

four walls, that a table stands on its four legs. And he does not

appear to see the difference between doing that and doing as Flaubert

does, namely, selecting precisely the detail out of all others which

renders or consorts with the scene in hand, and giving that detail

with an ingenious exactness. Here, for instance, in _Madame Bovary,_

is a characteristic detail in the manner of Flaubert: _Huit jours

après, comme elle étendait du linge dans sa cour, elle fut prise d'un

crachement de sang, et le lendemain, tandis que Charles avait le dos

tourné pour fermer le rideau de la fenêtre, elle dit: "Ah! mon Dieu!"

poussa un soupir et s'évanouit. Elle était morte._ Now that detail,

brought in without the slightest emphasis, of the husband turning his

back at the very instant that his wife dies, is a detail of immense

psychological value; it indicates to us, at the very opening of the

book, just the character of the man about whom we are to read so much.

Zola would have taken at least two pages to say that, and, after all,

he would not have said it. He would have told you the position of the

chest of drawers in the room, what wood the chest of drawers was made

of, and if it had a little varnish knocked off at the corner of the

lower cornice, just where it would naturally be in the way of people's

feet as they entered the door. He would have told you how Charles leant

against the other corner of the chest of drawers, and that the edge of

the upper cornice left a slight dent in his black frock-coat, which

remained visible half an hour afterwards. But that one little detail,

which Flaubert selects from among a thousand, that, no, he would never

have given us that!

And the language in which all this is written, apart from the

consideration of language as a medium, is really not literature at

all, in any strict sense. I am not, for the moment, complaining of

the colloquialism and the slang. Zola has told us that he has, in

_L'Assommoir,_ used the language of the people in order to render the

people with a closer truth. Whether he has done that or not is not

the question. The question is, that he does not give one the sense of

reading good literature, whether he speaks in Delvau's _langue verte,_

or according to the Academy's latest edition of classical French. His

sentences have no rhythm; they give no pleasure to the ear; they carry

no sensation to the eye. You hear a sentence of Flaubert, and you see a

sentence of Goncourt, like living things, with forms and voices. But a

page of Zola lies dull and silent before you; it draws you by no charm,

it has no meaning until you have read the page that goes before and the

page that comes after. It is like cabinet-makers' work, solid, well

fitted together, and essentially made to be used.

Yes, there is no doubt that Zola writes very badly, worse than any

other French writer of eminence. It is true that Balzac, certainly one

of the greatest, does, in a sense, write badly; but his way of writing

badly is very different from Zola's, and leaves you with the sense of

quite a different result. Balzac is too impatient with words; he cannot

stay to get them all into proper order, to pick and choose among them.

Night, the coffee, the wet towel, and the end of six hours' labour

are often too much for him; and his manner of writing his novels on

the proof-sheets, altering and expanding as fresh ideas came to him

on each re-reading, was not a way of doing things which can possibly

result in perfect writing. But Balzac sins from excess, from a feverish

haste, the very extravagance of power; and, at all events, he "sins

strongly." Zola sins meanly, he is penuriously careful, he does the

best he possibly can; and he is not aware that his best does not answer

all requirements. So long as writing is clear and not ungrammatical, it

seems to him sufficient. He has not realised that without charm there

can be no fine literature, as there can be no perfect flower without

fragrance.

And it is here that I would complain, not as a matter of morals,

but as a matter of art, of Zola's obsession by what is grossly,

uninterestingly filthy. There is a certain simile in _L'Assommoir,_

used in the most innocent connection, in connection with a bonnet,

which seems to me the most abjectly dirty phrase which I have ever

read. It is one thing to use dirty words to describe dirty things:

that may be necessary, and thus unexceptionable. It is another thing

again, and this, too, may well be defended on artistic grounds, to be

ingeniously and wittily indecent. But I do not think a real man of

letters could possibly have used such an expression as the one I am

alluding to or could so meanly succumb to certain kinds of prurience

which we find in Zola's work. Such a scene as the one in which Gervaise

comes home with Lantier, and finds per husband lying drunk asleep in

his own vomit, might certainly be explained and even excused, though

few more disagreeable things were ever written, on the ground of the

psychological importance which it undoubtedly has, and the overwhelming

way in which it drives home the point which it is the writer's business

to make. But the worrying way in which _le derrière_ and _le ventre_

are constantly kept in view, without the slightest necessity, is quite

another thing. I should not like to say how often the phrase "sa nudité

de jolie fille" occurs in Zola. Zola's nudities always remind me of

those which you can see in the _Foire au pain d'épice_ at Vincennes, by

paying a penny and looking through a peep-hole. In the laundry scenes,

for instance in _L'Assommoir,_ he is always reminding you that the

laundresses have turned up their sleeves, or undone a button or two of

their bodices. His eyes seem eternally fixed on the inch or two of bare

flesh that can be seen; and he nudges your elbow at every moment, to

make sure that you are looking too. Nothing may be more charming than a

frankly sensuous description of things which appeal to the senses; but

can one imagine anything less charming, less like art, than this prying

eye glued to the peep-hole in the Gingerbread Fair?

Yet, whatever view may be taken of Zola's work in literature, there is

no doubt that the life of Zola is a model lesson, and might profitably

be told in one of Dr. Smiles's edifying biographies. It may even be

brought as a reproach against the writer of these novels, in which

there are so many offences against the respectable virtues, that he

is too good a bourgeois, too much the incarnation of the respectable

virtues, to be a man of genius. If the finest art comes of the

intensest living, then Zola has never had even a chance of doing the

greatest kind of work. It is his merit and his misfortune to have lived

entirely in and for his books, with a heroic devotion to his ideal of

literary duty which would merit every praise if we had to consider

simply the moral side of the question. So many pages of copy a day, so

many hours of study given to mysticism, or Les Halles; Zola has always

had his day's work marked out before him, and he has never swerved

from it. A recent life of--Zola tells us something about his way of

getting up a subject. "Immense preparation had been necessary for the

_Faute de l'Abbé Mouret._ Mountains of note-books were heaped up on

his table, and for months Zola was plunged in the study of religious

works. All the mystical part of the book, and notably the passages

having reference to the cultus of Mary, was taken from the works of

the Spanish Jesuits. The _Imitation of Jesus Christ_ was largely

drawn upon, many passages being copied almost word for word into

the novel--much as in _Clarissa Harlowe,_ that other great realist,

Richardson, copied whole passages from the Psalms. The description

of life in a grand seminary was given him by a priest who had been

dismissed from ecclesiastical service. The little church of Sainte

Marie des Batignolles was regularly visited."

How commendable all that is, but, surely, how futile! Can one conceive

of a more hopeless, a more ridiculous task, than that of setting to

work on a novel of ecclesiastical life as if one were cramming for

an examination in religious knowledge? Zola apparently imagines that

he can master mysticism in a fortnight, as he masters the police

regulations of Les Halles. It must be admitted that he does wonders

with his second-hand information, alike in regard to mysticism and Les

Halles. But he succeeds only to a certain point, and that point lies

on the nearer side of what is really meant by success. Is not Zola

himself, at his moments, aware of this? A letter written in 1881, and

printed in Mr. Sherard's life of Zola, from which I have just quoted,

seems to me very significant.

"I continue to work in a good state of mental equilibrium. My novel

_(Pot-Bouille)_ is certainly only a task requiring precision and

clearness. No _bravoura,_ not the least lyrical treat. It does not

give me any warm satisfaction, but it amuses me like a piece of

mechanism with a thousand wheels, of which it is my duty to regulate

the movements with the most minute care. I ask myself the question: Is

it good policy, when one feels that one has passion in one, to check

it, or even to bridle it? If one of my books is destined to become

immortal, it will, I am sure, be the most passionate one."

_Est-elle en marbre ou non, la Vénus de Milo?_ said the Parnassians,

priding themselves on their muse with her _peplum bien sculpté._ Zola

will describe to you the exact shape and the exact smell of the rags

of his naturalistic muse; but has she, under the tatters, really a

human heart? In the whole of Zola's works, amid all his exact and

impressive descriptions of misery, all his endless annals of the poor,

I know only one episode which brings tears to the eyes, the episode

of the child-martyr Lalie in L'_Assommoir._ "A piece of mechanism

with a thousand wheels," that is indeed the image of this immense and

wonderful study of human life, evolved out of the brain of a solitary

student who knows life only by the report of his documents, his

friends, and, above all, his formula.

Zola has denned art, very aptly, as nature seen through a temperament.

The art of Zola is nature seen through a formula. This professed

realist is a man of theories who studies life with a conviction that

he will find there such and such things which he has read about in

scientific books. He observes, indeed, with astonishing minuteness, but

he observes in support of preconceived ideas. And so powerful is his

imagination that he has created a whole world which has no existence

anywhere but in his own brain, and he has placed there imaginary

beings, so much more logical than life, in the midst of surroundings

which are themselves so real as to lend almost a semblance of reality

to the embodied formulas who inhabit them.

It is the boast of Zola that he has taken up art at the point where

Flaubert left it, and that he has developed that art in its logical

sequence. But the art of Flaubert, itself a development from Balzac,

had carried realism, if not in _Madame Bovary,_ at all events in

_L'Education Sentimentale,_ as far as realism can well go without

ceasing to be art. In the grey and somewhat sordid history of Frédéric

Moreau there is not à touch of romanticism, not so much as a concession

to style, a momentary escape of the imprisoned lyrical tendency.

Everything is observed, everything is taken straight from life: realism

sincere, direct, implacable, reigns from end to end of the book. But

with what consummate art all this mass of observation is disintegrated,

arranged, composed! with what infinite delicacy it is manipulated in

the service of an unerring sense of construction! And Flaubert has no

theory, has no prejudices, has only a certain impatience with human

imbecility. Zola, too, gathers his documents, heaps up his mass of

observation, and then, in this unhappy "development" of the principles

of art which produced _L'Education Sentimentale,_ flings everything

pell-mell into one overflowing _pot-au-feu._ The probabilities of

nature and the delicacies of art are alike drowned beneath a flood of

turbid observation, and in the end one does not even feel convinced

that Zola really knows his subject. I remember once hearing M.

Huysmans, with his look and tone of subtle, ironical malice, describe

how Zola, when he was writing _La Terre,_ took a drive into the country

in a victoria, to see the peasants. The English papers once reported

an interview in which the author of _Nana,_ indiscreetly questioned

as to the amount of personal observation he had put into the book,

replied that he had lunched with an actress of the Variétés. The reply

was generally taken for a joke, but the lunch was a reality, and it

was assuredly a rare experience in the life of solitary diligence to

which we owe so many impersonal studies in life. Nor did Zola, as he

sat silent by the side of Mlle. X., seem to be making much use of

the opportunity. The language of the miners in _Germinal,_ how much

of local colour is there in that? The interminable additions and

divisions, the extracts from a financial gazette, in _L'Argent,_ how

much of the real temper and idiosyncrasy of the financier do they

give us? In his description of places, in his _mise-en-scène,_ Zola

puts down what he sees with his own eyes, and, though it is often

done at utterly disproportionate length, it is at all events done

with exactitude. But in the far more important observation of men and

women, he is content with second-hand knowledge, the knowledge of a man

who sees the world through a formula. Zola sees in humanity _la bête

humaine._ He sees the beast in all its transformations, but he sees

only the beast. He has never looked at life impartially, he has never

seen it as it is. His realism is a distorted idealism, and the man who

considers himself the first to paint humanity as it really is will be

remembered in the future as the most idealistic writer of his time.

1893.

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