J. M.

_Coincident Criticisms._--I shall be obliged if you will allow me through

your pages to anticipate and rebut two charges of plagiarism. When I wrote

my Note on a passage in _The Winter's Tale_ ("N. & Q.," Vol. vii., p.

378.), I had not seen the _Dublin University Magazine_ for March last,

containing some remarks on the same passage in some respects much

resembling mine. I must also declare that my Note on a passage in _All's

Well that ends Well_ ("N. & Q.," Vol. vii., p. 426.) was posted for you

some time before the appearance of A. E. B.'s Note on the same passage ("N.

& Q.," Vol. vii., p. 403.). The latter coincidence is more remarkable than

the former, as the integrity of the amended text was in both notes

discussed by means of the same parallel passage. _Apropos_ of A. E. B.'s

clever Note, permit me to say, that though at first it appeared to me

conclusive, I now incline to think that Shakspeare intended Helen to

address the _leaden messengers_ by means of a very hyperbolic figure:

"wound the still-piecing air that sings with piercing" is a consistent

whole. If, as A. E. B. rightly says, _to wound the air_ is an

impossibility, it is equally impossible that the air should utter any sound

expressive of sensibility. The fact of course is, that the cannon-balls

_cleave_ the air, and that by so cleaving it a shrill noise is produced.

The cause and effect may, however, be metaphorically described, by

comparing air to Bertram. I believe it is a known fact that every man who

is struck with a cannon-ball cries out instinctively. Shakspeare therefore

might, I think, have very poetically described the action and effect of a

cannon-ball passing through the air by the strong figure of _wounding the

air that sings with the piercing which it is enduring_.

In concluding this Note, I beg to express what is not merely my own, but a

very general feeling of disappointment in respect of MR. COLLIER'S new

edition of Shakspeare. To it, with a new force, may be applied the words of

A. E. B. in "N. & Q.," Vol. vi., p. 296.:

"But the evil of these emendations is not in this instance confined to

the mere suggestion of doubt; the text has absolutely been altered in

all accessible editions, in many cases _silently_, so that the ordinary

reader has no opportunity of judging between _Shakspeare_ and his

improvers."

That MR. COLLIER should be the greatest of such offenders, is no very

cheering sign of the times.

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