MURDER AND VIOLENCE.

A word should be said as to murder, bloodshed, suicide and other cheap

effects. When you come to think of it, there is an appalling amount of

bloodshed in our literature. I can go to my daughter’s book-shelf and

take down novel after novel, turn the pages swiftly with a glance here

and there, to hit upon the murder which I know instinctively is there

with unerring accuracy. Or I can pass to the book-shelf in which the

boys keep their favorites, and find brute force galore. Men are knocked

down, punched, run through, thrown down stairways, kicked and cuffed.

On every other page there is manifest a mighty recklessness.

Now of that kind of thing I am suspicious. Looking back in my own

life, which has been far from a quiet one, many years of which were

spent in uncivilized places, I find that I have seen but few deeds of

violence, as between man and man. I do not refer to riots, wars and

organized bloodshed. I remember seeing one man killed outright, one

duel with knives, one saloon rumpus and perhaps four men knocked down.

My experience has been exceptional. Talking with friends, I find many

who tell me that apart from school-boy days, they have never as much

as seen a man knocked down or a blow struck. That, I believe, is the

common experience. Many may easily go through life without witnessing

a single act of violence. Certainly, the vast majority of men never

dream of striking another. The world is prosaic. There are more _Doctor

Primroses_ in it than there are _Squire Westerns_. Men are more given

to have a fancy for oratorical tirades and philosophical discussions

like _Mr. Shandy_, than for fighting and battering one another about

like _Everett True_. It would seem that since the advent of the

four-reel thriller in the picture shows, murder in literature has

somewhat gone out of fashion. There has, indeed, been a gradual letting

down in the matter of violence since the days of Shakespeare and his

forerunners. Time was when men and women had to be glutted with horrors

and cruelties. Nothing less than blood or death would satisfy them.

They had to be dazzled with the full brightness of evil lusts. Only

tales in which lewdness, cruelty, love of gold, shamelessness or vice

were portrayed met with favor. No character was unmixed with sensuality

in the days of Massinger and Ford. The fact is that the early writers,

in constructing a man, did not dig down deep into the foundations.

Today it is different. There is a genuine attempt to become acquainted

with man in his fullness. Especially is this seen in the work of the

makers of present-day literature such as Conrad, Grahame, Galsworthy,

Hergesheimer, Lawrence. The days are past when, if it became necessary

to portray a man of courage, there was a digging into the depths of

diabolical and unchained nature. Unrestrained will is no longer the

keynote. The newer and higher idea hinges solely on character. The

Berserker has been retired.

Of course, the main idea intended, was to display evidence of courage.

But, any intelligent man may see, with a moment’s thought, that the

mere fact that a man fights, is no evidence at all of courage. He

may fight because he is a coward, and fight to the death, too. For

instance, suppose a man is challenged to fight a duel. The writer

who has not dug into human nature will see bravery in the fellow who

immediately accepts the challenge. To be sure there is a certain

brute courage in the act of fighting. But of two men thus fighting a

duel, one may be much braver than another. A man of imagination, who

foresees pain and death, is obviously braver than another who has no

imagination at all, just as a boy who fears the dark, but yet bottles

up his fear and goes into the dark, is braver than a boy without that

fear. As is easily seen, the second boy is not brave at all. And in the

case of the supposed duel, a man who fears public opinion very much

indeed, will fight rather than be counted a coward, and therefore is

actually a coward. So, as you see, which is what I wish to point out,

there is no _outward_ mark by which we can affirm that a particular

action is courageous or the reverse. But if you sit down and write a

story in which a character is so well portrayed that the reader will

see quite plainly that a man fighting to the death is doing it because

of his cowardice, you will have made a story that will find a publisher

in no time. Handle the theme well, and I promise you that you shall

have no rejection slip. One of the stories that O’Brien listed as among

the best in 1920 was based on this theme, though it pictured a suicide

who coldly and deliberately swam to his death, not that he feared life,

but because his conscience hurt him, he having once failed to kill a

fellow who was a military brute.

Perhaps you have read Stockton’s “Lady or the Tiger,” a tale in

which the reader is left wondering, is given something to think of.

The effect upon the reader is something like the effect left after

seeing Ibsen’s “Doll’s House.” So it would be in a tale such as above

outlined. The reader would ponder deeply, if indeed he would not be

torn between two emotions. Did the fighter fight because he did not

fear death, or did he fight because he feared public opinion more

than death? At first blush, you may say, “It is obvious that he was a

coward.” But, consider a moment. Is the average man given to subtle

distinctions? For instance, during the war, when some went to jail

for their opinions, were not many torn with conflicting ideas? Were

pacifists brave? Were they cowards? Were they actuated by fear of death

or were they courageous enough to defy public opinion and the charge of

cowardice, to give up their own liberty and happiness for conscience

sake?

Take another theme, or rather angle of the same theme. Suppose a

character similar to the average man: somewhat timid, careful to keep

within the bounds of the law, tied to his business hand and foot,

his expenses keeping neck and neck with his income, anxious to avoid

publicity of an unpleasant nature. Yet he is a thoughtful man and a

law-abiding one, and, therefore, opposed to all forms of mob law.

Moreover, like the most of us, he shrinks from physical pain, and

cannot kill a chicken without a beating of the heart. We will also

suppose that he is violently opposed to war. To him comes one day

another, suspected by a lawless mob doing deeds of violence in the name

of “patriotism.” Call it the Ku Klux Klan, the American Legion, a Law

and Order League or what you will. Although trembling, in an agony of

terror, fearing for his own life, yet the character we have in mind

shelters the fugitive.

Here you have the opposition between physical and moral courage. The

searching mob seeing him pale and fearful would know him for an arrant

coward, and he himself would certainly admit himself to be that. Yet,

knowing his motive, we see that he was essentially brave, since his

fear was subordinated by a conscious effort to the end in view.

I believe enough has been said to show why, if you would write a short

story involving the exemplification of courage, it is not at all

necessary to fall back upon brute force.

It is somewhat in this connection that I would lightly sketch a talk I

had with a young writer who had submitted a story in which he outlined

a “brave” feminine character--a woman who had faced a little mob. I had

held that the mere fact of facing a mob, when a woman did it, was no

great sign of courage. But the conversation had not a single beginning.

We had talked of other things, and he had objected to a scene in the

novel “Dust” in which _Martin_ had seemed to hold a light regard for

woman’s comfort in the chapter in which _Rose_ accused him of caring

more for the welfare of a fine-blooded cow than for his own wife.

_Martin_, you may remember, had held that altogether too much fuss was

made by women, and sometimes men, about child-bearing--that it was a

natural function just as is teeth growing. My young friend held that

the whole scene was derogatory to American ideals of “womanhood.” Then

we looped back to his short story.

It seems to me that there is a great deal of what the English call

“tosh” about “womanhood.” When _Martin_ compared the cow with the

women to the detriment of the latter, as far as fuss in the matter

of young-bearing, he was obviously right. On first reading the

passage there came to my mind Whitman’s poem in which he tells of his

admiration for the cattle in the field because they were so “calm and

self-possessed.” Like _Martin_, and Whitman, I hold that both men and

women have much to learn from animals.

To touch on the other, and co-lateral branch of the subject of our

conversation. I held that the act of the woman who stood in front of

a little mob bent on mischief was an act apparently, but not really,

involving danger. The same act performed by a man most certainly would

be courageous, but not in the case of the woman, because she would bank

upon popular opinion as to the weakness of her sex. The opinion was

her protection. She well knew that the rioters would not club her, a

woman, and it was her “womanhood” that she counted on to preserve her.

Hers then was a spurious bravery. So also is the man-killing woman a

fake heroine. A woman may shoot a man, especially in the case of a

so-called seduction, with the chances all in her favor that she will

never be found guilty of murder. Pose as a heroine as she will, yet she

knows perfectly well that she may rely on the support of a clamorous,

sentimental and often hypocritical section of public opinion.

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