PART II.

AN EXAMINATION OF THE DECLARATION OF INDEPENDENCE.

It is with painful feelings I now call your attention to the famous

document which sets forth the political creed of the United States. More

than once my pen has refused to set about this work, but I now ask: Who

wrote the original Declaration of Independence? I answer boldly, Thomas

Paine. To prove this, my method is the same as with Junius, and the

prejudices of the united world shall not intimidate me.

It is not my purpose to revive the old and long-forgotten controversy

about the authorship of this document. Enough to say, volumes have been

written to prove that it was _not_ Jefferson's. But the method and

object of a negative criticism I scorn. If it can not be shown to be

some other man's, then let the claimant wear his honors; he certainly

did not come by them meanly or dishonorably; they were forced upon him.

My evidence will be such as to exclude the possibility of even literary

theft in Jefferson, and that it is, as a whole, the work of the author

of Common Sense, and can not possibly be the work of any body else. This

is a bold assertion, and a little out of my turn, but my object is to

raise the strongest _doubt_ of the truth of what I assert in the mind of

my reader, so as to enlist his attention, and hold me to the proof.

The method of my argument is as follows:

First, to show wherein this document is exactly like Mr. Paine; and,

Secondly, wherein it is entirely unlike Mr. Jefferson.

The points wherein they would agree are necessarily thrown out, and

count nothing on either side. For example, the principles therein

contained may be common to both, and can have no weight in an argument.

It is said, in defense of this paper being Mr. Jefferson's, that the

"Summary View" of his submitted to, but not passed by the Virginia

Delegate Convention in 1774, contained the "_germs_" of the Declaration.

This I do not admit, but if it did, it would prove nothing, for so did

the writings of John Adams, and Benjamin Franklin, and Samuel Adams, and

especially of James Otis. A thousand men in America had, perhaps,

expressed the cardinal doctrine of equal rights, and that the British

Parliament had usurped them. There is nothing peculiar nor individual in

this; but when we find one man only who makes a specialty of the

_Declaration_, it attracts attention, and must have great weight when

supported by a multitude of other special facts, all pointing in the

same direction. I, therefore, go to show:

First, Common Sense was written by Mr. Paine for the sole purpose of

declaring independence, and, with this document in view. I have

heretofore reviewed Common Sense, beginning on page 156 of this book. If

it were practicable for the reader to read the whole of Common Sense at

this time, it would render my labor much less; but as this may not be

the case, I will now give the whole of the third division of that paper,

being:

"THOUGHTS ON THE PRESENT STATE OF THE AMERICAN AFFAIRS.

"In the following pages I offer nothing more than simple facts,

plain arguments, and common sense; and have no other preliminaries

to settle with the reader, than that he will divest himself of

prejudice and prepossession, and suffer his reason and his

feelings to determine for themselves; that he will put _on_, or

rather that he will not put _off_ the true character of a man, and

generously enlarge his views beyond the present day.

"Volumes have been written on the subject of the struggle between

England and America. Men of all ranks have embarked in the

controversy from different motives, and with various designs; but

all have been ineffectual, and the period of debate is closed.

Arms, as the last resource, must decide the contest; the appeal

was the choice of the king, and the continent hath accepted the

challenge.

"It has been reported of the late Mr. Pelham (who, though an able

minister, was not without his faults), that on his being attacked

in the House of Commons, on the score, that his measures were only

of a temporary kind, replied "_they will last my time_." Should a

thought so fatal and unmanly possess the colonies in the present

contest, the name of ancestors will be remembered by future

generations with detestation.

"The sun never shone on a cause of greater worth. 'Tis not the

affair of a city, a county, a province, or a kingdom, but of a

continent--of at least one-eighth part of the habitable globe.

'Tis not the concern of a day, a year, or an age; posterity are

virtually involved in the contest, and they will be more or less

affected even to the end of time, by the proceedings now. Now is

the seed-time of continental union, faith, and honor. The least

fracture now will be like a name engraved with the point of a pin

on the tender rind of a young oak; the wound will enlarge with the

tree, and posterity read it in full grown characters.

"By referring the matter from argument to arms, a new era for

politics is struck; a new method of thinking hath arisen. All

plans, proposals, etc., prior to the nineteenth of April, _i. e._,

to the commencement of hostilities, are like the almanacs of last

year; which, though proper then, are superseded and useless now.

Whatever was advanced by the advocates on either side of the

question then terminated in one and the same point, viz., a union

with Great Britain. The only difference between the parties was

the method of effecting it; the one proposing force, the other

friendship; but it hath so far happened that the first has failed,

and the second has withdrawn her influence.

"As much hath been said of the advantages of reconciliation,

which, like an agreeable dream, hath passed away and left us as we

were, it is but right that we should examine the contrary side of

the argument, and inquire into some of the many material injuries

which these colonies sustain, and always will sustain, by being

connected with and dependent on Great Britain. To examine that

connection and dependence, on the principles of nature and common

sense, to see what we have to trust to, if separated, and what we

are to expect, if dependent.

"I have heard it asserted by some, that as America has flourished

under her former connection with Great Britain, the same

connection is necessary toward her future happiness, and will

always have the same effect. Nothing can be more fallacious than

this kind of argument. We may as well assert that because a child

has thrived upon milk, that it is never to have meat, or that the

first twenty years of our lives is to become a precedent for the

next twenty. But even this is admitting more than is true, for I

answer roundly, that America would have flourished as much, and

probably much more, had no European power had any thing to do with

her. The articles of commerce by which she has enriched herself,

are the necessaries of life, and will always have a market while

eating is the custom of Europe.

"But she has protected us, say some. That she hath engrossed us is

true, and defended the continent at our expense, as well as her

own, is admitted, and she would have defended Turkey from the same

motives, viz., for the sake of trade and dominion.

"Alas! we have been long led away by ancient prejudices, and made

large sacrifices to superstition. We have boasted the protection

of Great Britain, without considering that her motive was

_interest_, not _attachment_; and that she did not protect us from

_our enemies_ on _our account_, but from _her enemies_ on _her own

account_, from those who had no quarrel with us on any _other

account_, and who will always be our enemies on the _same

account_. Let Britain waive her pretensions to the continent, or

the continent throw off the dependence, and we should be at peace

with France and Spain, were they at war with Britain. The miseries

of Hanover, last war, ought to warn us against connections.

"It hath lately been asserted in Parliament that the colonies have

no relation to each other, but through the parent country, _i.

e._, that Pennsylvania and the Jerseys, and so on for the rest,

are sister colonies by the way of England. This is certainly a

very roundabout way of proving relationship, but it is the nearest

and only true way of proving enemyship, if I may so call it.

France and Spain never were, nor perhaps ever will be, our enemies

as _Americans_, but as our being the _subjects of Great Britain_.

"But Britain is the parent country, say some. Then the more shame

upon her conduct. Even brutes do not devour their young, nor

savages make war upon their families; wherefore, the assertion, if

true, turns to her reproach. But it happens not to be true, or

only partly so; and the phrase _parent_, or _mother country_ hath

been jesuitically adopted by the king and his parasites, with a

low, papistical design of gaining an unfair bias on the credulous

weakness of our minds. Europe, and not England, is the parent

country of America. This new world hath been the asylum for the

persecuted lovers of civil and religious liberty from _every part_

of Europe. Hither have they fled, not from the tender embraces of

the mother, but from the cruelty of the monster; and it is so far

true of England, that the same tyranny which drove the first

emigrants from home pursues their descendants still.

"In this extensive quarter of the globe, we forget the narrow

limits of three hundred and sixty miles--the extent of

England--and carry our friendship on a larger scale. We claim

brotherhood with every European Christian, and triumph in the

generosity of the sentiment.

"It is pleasant to observe by what regular gradations we surmount

local prejudices, as we enlarge our acquaintance with the world. A

man born in any town in England divided into parishes, will

naturally associate most with his fellow-parishioners--because

their interests, in many cases, will be common--and distinguish

him by the name of _neighbor_; if he meet him but a few miles from

home, he drops the narrow idea of a street, and salutes him by the

name of _townsman_; if he travel out of the county, and meets him

in any other, he forgets the minor division of street and town,

and calls him _countryman_--_i. e._, _countyman_; but if, in their

foreign excursions, they should associate in France, or any other

part of _Europe_, their local remembrance would be enlarged into

that of _Englishmen_. And, by a just parity of reasoning, all

Europeans meeting in America, or any other quarter of the globe,

are _countrymen_; for England, Holland, Germany, or Sweden, when

compared with the whole, stand in the same places on the larger

scale which the divisions of street, town, and county do on the

smaller one--distinctions too limited for continental minds. Not

one-third of the inhabitants, even of this province, are of

English descent. Wherefore, I reprobate the phrase of parent, or

mother country, applied to England only, as being false, selfish,

narrow, and ungenerous.

"But, admitting that we were all of English descent, what does it

amount to? Nothing. Britain, being now an open enemy, extinguishes

every other name and title; and to say that reconciliation is our

duty, is truly farcical. The first King of England, of the present

line--William the Conqueror--was a Frenchman, and half the peers

of England are descendants from the same country; wherefore, by

the same method of reasoning, England ought to be governed by

France.

"Much hath been said of the united strength of Britain and the

colonies--that, in conjunction, they might bid defiance to the

world. But this is mere presumption; the fate of war is uncertain,

neither do the expressions mean anything; for this continent would

never suffer itself to be drained of inhabitants to support the

British arms in either Asia, Africa, or Europe.

"Besides, what have we to do with setting the world at defiance?

Our plan is commerce, and that, well attended to, will secure us

the peace and friendship of all Europe, because it is the interest

of all Europe to have America a _free port_. Her trade will always

be a protection, and her barrenness of gold and silver secure her

from invaders.

"I challenge the warmest advocate for reconciliation to show a

single advantage that this continent can reap by being connected

with Great Britain. I repeat the challenge; not a single

advantage is derived. Our corn will fetch its price in any market

in Europe, and our imported goods must be paid for, buy them where

we will.

"But the injuries and disadvantages which we sustain by that

connection are without number; and our duty to mankind at large,

as well as to ourselves, instructs us to renounce the alliance,

because any submission to, or dependence on, Great Britain, tends

directly to involve this continent in European wars and quarrels,

and sets us at variance with nations, who would otherwise seek our

friendship, and against whom we have neither anger nor complaint.

As Europe is our market for trade, we ought to form no partial

connection with any part of it. It is the true interest of America

to steer clear of European contentions, which she never can do;

while, by her dependence on Britain, she is made the make-weight

in the scale of British politics.

"Europe is too thickly planted with kingdoms to be long at peace;

and whenever a war breaks out between England and any foreign

power, the trade of America goes to ruin, _because of her

connection with Britain_. The next war may not turn out like the

last, and, should it not, the advocates for reconciliation now

will be wishing for separation then, because neutrality, in that

case, would be a safer convoy than a man-of-war. Every thing that

is right or natural pleads for separation. The blood of the slain,

the weeping voice of Nature, cries, '_'Tis time to part!_' Even

the distance at which the Almighty hath placed England and

America, is a strong and natural proof that the authority of the

one over the other was never the design of Heaven. The time,

likewise, at which the continent was discovered, adds weight to

the argument, and the manner in which it was peopled increases the

force of it. The reformation was preceded by the discovery of

America, as if the Almighty graciously meant to open a sanctuary

to the persecuted in future years, when home should afford neither

friendship nor safety.

"The authority of Great Britain over this continent is a form of

government which, sooner or later, must have an end; and a serious

mind can draw no true pleasure by looking forward, under the

painful and positive conviction that what he calls 'the present

constitution,' is merely temporary. As parents, we can have no

joy, knowing that _this government_ is not sufficiently lasting to

insure any thing which we may bequeath to posterity; and by a

plain method of argument, as we are running the next generation

into debt, we ought to do the work of it--otherwise we use them

meanly and pitifully. In order to discover the line of our duty

rightly, we should take our children in our hand, and fix our

station a few years further into life. That eminence will present

a prospect, which a few present fears and prejudices conceal from

our sight.

"Though I would carefully avoid giving unnecessary offense, yet I

am inclined to believe that all those who espouse the doctrine of

reconciliation may be included within the following descriptions:

"Interested men, who are not to be trusted; weak men, who _can

not_ see; prejudiced men, who _will not_ see; and a certain set of

moderate men, who think better of the European world than it

deserves; and this last class, by an ill-judged deliberation, will

be the cause of more calamities to this continent than all the

other three.

"It is the good fortune of many to live distant from the scene of

sorrow. The evil is not sufficiently brought to _their_ doors to

make _them_ feel the precariousness with which all American

property is possessed. But let our imaginations transport us a few

moments to Boston; that seat of wretchedness will teach us wisdom,

and instruct us forever to renounce a power in whom we can have no

trust. The inhabitants of that unfortunate city, who, but a few

months ago, were in ease and affluence, have now no other

alternative than to stay and starve, or turn out to

beg--endangered by the fire of their friends if they continue

within the city, and plundered by the soldiery if they leave it.

In their present situation they are prisoners without the hope of

redemption, and in a general attack for their relief, they would

be exposed to the fury of both armies.

"Men of passive tempers look somewhat lightly over the offenses of

Britain, and, still hoping for the best, are apt to call out,

'_Come, come; we shall be friends again for all this_.' But

examine the passions and feelings of mankind, bring the doctrine

of reconciliation to the touchstone of nature, and then tell me

whether you can hereafter love, honor, and faithfully serve the

power that hath carried fire and sword into your land? If you can

not do all these, then you are only deceiving yourselves, and, by

your delay, bringing ruin upon your posterity. Your future

connection with Britain, whom you can neither love nor honor, will

be forced and unnatural, and, being formed only on the plan of

present convenience, will, in a little time, fall into a relapse

more wretched than the first. But if you say you can still pass

the violations over, then I ask, hath your house been burnt? Hath

your property been destroyed before your face? Are your wife and

children destitute of a bed to lie on, or bread to live on? Have

you lost a parent or a child by their hands, and yourself the

ruined and wretched survivor? If you have not, then are you not a

judge of those who have. But if you have, and can still shake

hands with the murderers, then are you unworthy the name of

husband, father, friend, or lover; and, whatever may be your rank

or title in life, you have the heart of a coward and the spirit of

a sycophant.

"This is not inflaming or exaggerating matters, but trying them by

those feelings and affections which nature justifies, and without

which we should be incapable of discharging the social duties of

life or enjoying the felicities of it. I mean not to exhibit

horror for the purpose of provoking revenge, but to awaken us from

fatal and unmanly slumbers, that we may pursue determinately some

fixed object. It is not in the power of Britain or of Europe to

conquer America, if she does not conquer herself by _delay_ and

_timidity_. The present winter is worth an age if rightly

employed; but if lost or neglected, the whole continent will

partake of the misfortune; and there is no punishment which that

man will not deserve, be he who, or what, or where he will, that

may be the means of sacrificing a season so precious and useful.

"It is repugnant to reason and the universal order of things, to

all examples from former ages, to suppose that this continent can

longer remain subject to any external power. The most sanguine in

Britain do not think so. The utmost stretch of human wisdom can

not, at this time, compass a plan short of separation, which can

promise the continent even a year's security. Reconciliation is

_now_ a fallacious dream. Nature hath deserted the connection, and

art can not supply her place. For, as Milton wisely expresses,

'Never can true reconcilement grow where wounds of deadly hate

have pierced so deep.'

"Every quiet method for peace hath been ineffectual. Our prayers

have been rejected with disdain; and only tended to convince us

that nothing flatters vanity or confirms obstinacy in kings more

than repeated petitioning--nothing hath contributed more than this

very measure to make the kings of Europe absolute. Witness Denmark

and Sweden. Wherefore, since nothing but blows will do, for God's

sake let us come to a final separation, and not leave the next

generation to be cutting throats under the violated, unmeaning

names of parent and child.

"To say they will never attempt it again is idle and visionary. We

thought so at the repeal of the stamp act; yet a year or two

undeceived us. As well may we suppose that nations, which have

been once defeated, will never renew the quarrel.

"As to government matters, it is not in the power of Britain to do

this continent justice. The business of it will soon be too

weighty and intricate to be managed with any tolerable degree of

convenience by a power so distant from us and so very ignorant of

us; for if they can not conquer us they can not govern us. To be

always running three or four thousand miles with a tale or a

petition, waiting four or five months for an answer, which, when

obtained, requires five or six more to explain it in, will in a

few years be looked upon as folly and childishness. There was a

time when it was proper, and there is a proper time for it to

cease.

"Small islands, not capable of protecting themselves, are the

proper objects for kingdoms to take under their care; but there is

something absurd in supposing a continent to be perpetually

governed by an island. In no instance hath nature made the

satellite larger than its primary planet; and as England and

America, with respect to each other, reverses the common order of

nature, it is evident that they belong to different systems:

England to Europe--America to itself.

"I am not induced by motives of pride, party, or resentment to

espouse the doctrine of separation and independence. I am clearly,

positively, and conscientiously persuaded that it is the true

interest of this continent to be so; that every thing short of

_that_ is mere patchwork; that it can afford no lasting felicity;

that it is leaving the sword to our children and shrinking back at

a time when, going a little further, would have rendered this

continent the glory of the earth.

"As Britain hath not manifested the least inclination toward a

compromise, we may be assured that no terms can be obtained worthy

the acceptance of the continent, or any ways equal to the expense

of blood and treasure we have been already put to.

{213}"The object contended for ought always to bear some just

proportion to the expense. The removal of North, or the whole

detestable junto, is a matter unworthy the millions we have

expended. A temporary stoppage of trade was an inconvenience which

would have sufficiently balanced the repeal of all the acts

complained of, had such repeals been obtained; but if the whole

continent must take up arms, if every man must be a soldier, it is

scarcely worth our while to fight against a contemptible ministry

only. Dearly, dearly do we pay for the repeal of the acts if that

is all we fight for; for, in a just estimation, it is as great a

folly to pay a Bunker-hill price for law as for land. I have

always considered the independency of this continent as an event

which sooner or later must take place, and, from the late rapid

progress of the continent to maturity, the event can not be far

off. Wherefore, on the breaking out of hostilities, it was not

worth the while to have disputed a matter which time would have

finally redressed, unless we meant to be in earnest; otherwise, it

is like wasting an estate on a suit at law to regulate the

trespasses of a tenant whose lease is just expiring. No man was a

warmer wisher for a reconciliation than myself before the fatal

nineteenth of April, 1775,[A] but the moment the event of that day

was made known, I rejected the hardened, sullen-tempered Pharaoh

of England forever; and disdain the wretch that, with the

pretended title of _father of his people_, can unfeelingly hear of

their slaughter and composedly sleep with their blood upon his

soul.

"But admitting that matters were now made up, what would be the

event? I answer, the ruin of the continent. And that for several

reasons.

"1st. The powers of governing still remaining in the hands of the

king, he will have a negative over the whole legislation of this

continent. And as he hath shown himself such an inveterate enemy

to liberty, and discovered such a thirst for arbitrary power, is

he, or is he not, a proper person to say to these colonies, '_You

shall make no laws but what I please?_' And is there any

inhabitant of America so ignorant as not to know that, according

to what is called the _present constitution_, this continent can

make no laws but what the king gives leave to? and is there any

man so unwise as not to see that (considering what has happened)

he will suffer no law to be made here but such as suits _his_

purpose? We may be as effectually enslaved by the want of laws in

America as by submitting to laws made for us in England. After

matters are made up (as it is called), can there be any doubt but

the whole power of the crown will be exerted to keep this

continent as low and humble as possible? Instead of going forward,

we shall go backward, or be perpetually quarreling or ridiculously

petitioning. We are already greater than the king wishes us to be,

and will he not hereafter endeavor to make us less? To bring the

matter to one point, is the power who is jealous of our prosperity

a proper power to govern us? Whoever says _No_ to this question is

an _independent_, for independency means no more than this,

whether we shall make our own laws, or whether the king, the

greatest enemy which this continent hath or can have, shall tell

us, '_There shall be no laws but such as I like_.'

"But the king, you will say, has a negative in England; the people

there can make no laws without his consent. In point of right and

good order, it is something very ridiculous that a youth of

twenty-one (which hath often happened) shall say to several

millions of people, older and wiser than himself, I forbid this or

that act of yours to be law. But in this place I decline this sort

of reply, though I will never cease to expose the absurdity of it;

and only answer that, England being the king's residence and

America not makes quite another case. The king's negative _here_

is ten times more dangerous and fatal than it can be in England;

for _there_ he will scarcely refuse his consent to a bill for

putting England into as strong a state of defense as possible, and

in America he would never suffer such a bill to be passed.

"America is only a secondary object in the system of British

politics--England consults the good of _this_ country no further

than it answers her _own_ purpose. Wherefore, her own interest

leads her to suppress the growth of _ours_ in every case which

doth not promote her advantage, or in the least interferes with

it. A pretty state we should soon be in under such a secondhand

government, considering what has happened! Men do not change from

enemies to friends by the alteration of a name; and in order to

show that reconciliation _now_ is a dangerous doctrine, I affirm

_that it would be policy in the king at this time to repeal the

acts, for the sake of reinstating himself in the government of the

provinces_; in order _that he may accomplish by craft and

subtlety, in the long run, what he can not do by force in the

short one_. Reconciliation and ruin are nearly related.

"2dly. That as even the best terms which we can expect to obtain

can amount to no more than a temporary expedient, or a kind of

government by guardianship, which can last no longer than till the

colonies come of age, so the general face and state of things, in

the interim, will be unsettled and unpromising. Emigrants of

property will not choose to come to a country whose form of

government hangs but by a thread, and which is every day tottering

on the brink of commotion and disturbance; and numbers of the

present inhabitants would lay hold of the interval to dispose of

their effects and quit the continent.

"But the most powerful of all arguments is, that nothing but

independence, _i. e._, a continental form of government, can keep

the peace of the continent and preserve it inviolate from civil

wars. I dread the event of a reconciliation with Britain now, as

it is more than probable that it will be followed by a revolt

somewhere or other, the consequences of which may be far more

fatal than all the malice of Britain.

"Thousands are already ruined by British barbarity. (Thousands

more will probably suffer the same fate.) Those men have other

feelings than us who have nothing suffered. All they _now_ possess

is liberty; what they before enjoyed is sacrificed to its service,

and, having nothing more to lose, they disdain submission.

Besides, the general temper of the colonies toward a British

government will be like that of a youth who is nearly out of his

time--they will care very little about her. And a government which

can not preserve the peace is no government at all, and in that

case we pay our money for nothing; and pray what is it that

Britain can do, whose power will be wholly on paper, should a

civil tumult break out the very day after reconciliation? I have

heard some men say, many of whom I believe spoke without thinking,

that they dreaded an independence, fearing that it would produce

civil wars. It is but seldom that our first thoughts are truly

correct, and that is the case here; for there is ten times more to

dread from a patched up connection than from independence. I make

the sufferer's case my own, and I protest that, were I driven from

house and home, my property destroyed, and my circumstances

ruined, that as a man sensible of injuries, I could never relish

the doctrine of reconciliation or consider myself bound thereby.

"The colonies have manifested such a spirit of good order and

obedience to continental government, as is sufficient to make

every reasonable person easy and happy on that head. No man can

assign the least pretense for his fears on any other grounds than

such as are truly childish and ridiculous, viz.: that one colony

will be striving for superiority over another.

"Where there are no distinctions there can be no superiority;

perfect equality affords no temptation. The republics of Europe

are all (and we may say always) in peace. Holland and Switzerland

are without wars, foreign or domestic. Monarchical governments, it

is true, are never long at rest; the crown itself is a temptation

to enterprising ruffians at home, and that degree of pride and

insolence, ever attendant on regal authority, swells into a

rupture with foreign powers in instances where a republican

government, by being formed on more natural principles, would

negotiate the mistake.

"If there is any true cause of fear respecting independence, it is

because no plan is yet laid down. Men do not see their way out.

Wherefore, as an opening into that business, I offer the following

hints, at the same time modestly affirming that I have no other

opinion of them myself than that they may be the means of giving

rise to something better. Could the straggling thoughts of

individuals be collected, they would frequently form materials for

wise and able men to improve into useful matter:

"Let the assemblies be annual, with a president only. The

representation more equal. Their business wholly domestic, and

subject to the authority of a continental congress.

"Let each colony be divided into six, eight, or ten convenient

districts, each district to send a proper number of delegates to

congress, so that each colony send at least thirty. The whole

number in congress will be at least three hundred and ninety. Each

congress to sit ----, and to choose a president by the following

method: When the delegates are met, let a colony be taken from the

whole thirteen colonies by lot, after which let the congress

choose (by ballot) a president from out of the delegates of that

province. In the next congress, let a colony be taken by lot from

twelve only, omitting that colony from which the president was

taken in the former congress, and so proceeding on till the whole

thirteen shall have had their proper rotation. And, in order that

nothing may pass into a law but what is satisfactorily just, not

less than three-fifths of the congress to be called a majority.

He that will promote discord, under a government so equally formed

as this, would have joined Lucifer in his revolt.

"But, as there is a peculiar delicacy from whom, or in what

manner, this business must first arise, and as it seems most

agreeable and consistent that it should come from some

intermediate body between the governed and the governors--that is,

between the congress and the people--let a _Continental

Conference_ be held, in the following manner, and for the

following purpose:

"A committee of twenty-six members of congress, viz.: two for each

colony; two members from each house of assembly, or provincial

convention, and five representatives of the people at large, to be

chosen in the capital city or town of each province, for and in

behalf of the whole province, by as many qualified voters as shall

think proper to attend from all parts of the province for that

purpose; or, if more convenient, the representatives may be chosen

in two or three of the most populous parts thereof. In this

conference, thus assembled, will be united the two grand

principles of business--_knowledge_ and _power_. The members of

congress, assemblies, or conventions, by having had experience in

national concerns, will be able and useful counselors, and the

whole, being empowered by the people, will have a truly legal

authority.

"The conferring members being met, let their business be to frame

a _Continental Charter_, or Charter of the United Colonies

(answering to what is called the Magna Charta of England); fixing

the number and manner of choosing members of congress and members

of assembly, with their date of sitting, and drawing the line of

business and jurisdiction between them (always remembering that

our strength is continental, not provincial); securing freedom and

property to all men, and, above all things, the free exercise of

religion, according to the dictates of conscience; with such other

matter as it is necessary for a charter to contain. Immediately

after which, the said conference to dissolve, and the bodies which

shall be chosen conformable to the said charter to be the

legislators and governors of this continent for the time being:

whose peace and happiness may God preserve. Amen.

"Should any body of men be hereafter delegated for this or some

similar purpose, I offer them the following extract from that wise

observer on governments, Dragonetti: 'The science,' says he, 'of

the politician consists in fixing the true point of happiness and

freedom. Those men would deserve the gratitude of ages who should

discover a mode of government that contained the greatest sum of

individual happiness, with the least national expense.'

"But where, say some, is the king of America? I'll tell you,

friend: he reigns above, and doth not make havoc of mankind like

the royal brute of Britain. Yet, that we may not appear to be

defective even in earthly honors, let a day be solemnly set apart

for proclaiming the charter; let it be brought forth placed on the

divine law, the Word of God; let a crown be placed thereon, by

which the world may know that, so far as we approve of monarchy,

that in America _the law is king_. For as in absolute governments

the king is law, so in free countries the law ought to be king;

and there ought to be no other. But, lest any ill use should

afterward arise, let the crown, at the conclusion of the ceremony,

be demolished, and scattered among the people, whose right it is.

"A government of our own is our natural right; and when a man

seriously reflects on the precariousness of human affairs, he will

become convinced that it is infinitely wiser and safer to form a

constitution of our own in a cool, deliberate manner, while we

have it in our power, than to trust such an interesting event to

time and chance. If we omit it now, some Massanello may hereafter

arise, who, laying hold of popular disquietudes, may collect

together the desperate and the discontented, and, by assuming to

themselves the powers of government, finally sweep away the

liberties of the continent like a deluge. Should the government of

America return again into the hands of Britain, the tottering

situation of things will be a temptation for some desperate

adventurer to try his fortune; and, in such a case, what relief

can Britain give? Ere she could hear the news the fatal business

might be done, and ourselves suffering, like the wretched Britons,

under the oppression of the Conqueror. Ye that oppose independence

now, ye know not what ye do: ye are opening a door to eternal

tyranny, by keeping vacant the seat of government. There are

thousands, and tens of thousands, who would think it glorious to

expel from the continent that barbarous and hellish power, which

hath stirred up the Indians and negroes to destroy us. The cruelty

hath a double guilt--it is dealing brutally by us, and

treacherously by them.

"To talk of friendship with those in whom our reason forbids us to

have faith, and our affections, wounded through a thousand pores,

instruct us to detest, is madness and folly. Every day wears out

the little remains of kindred between us and them; and can there

be any reason to hope that, as the relationship expires, the

affection will increase, or that we shall agree better when we

have ten times more and greater concerns to quarrel over than

ever?

"Ye that tell us of harmony and reconciliation, can ye restore to

us the time that is past? Can ye give to prostitution its former

innocence? Neither can ye reconcile Britain and America. The last

cord now is broken; the people of England are presenting addresses

against us. There are injuries which nature can not forgive--she

would cease to be nature if she did. As well can the lover forgive

the ravisher of his mistress, as the continent forgive the murders

of Britain. The Almighty hath implanted in us these

unextinguishable feelings for good and wise purposes. They are the

guardians of his image in our hearts, and distinguish us from the

herd of common animals. The social compact would dissolve, and

justice be extirpated from the earth, or have only a casual

existence, were we callous to the touches of affection. The robber

and the murderer would often escape unpunished, did not the

injuries which our tempers sustain provoke us into justice.

"Oh, ye that love mankind! Ye that dare oppose, not only the

tyranny, but the tyrant, stand forth! Every spot of the old world

is overrun with oppression. Freedom hath been haunted round the

globe. Asia and Africa have long expelled her. Europe regards her

like a stranger, and England hath given her warning to depart. Oh!

receive the fugitive, and prepare in time an asylum for mankind."

ORIGINAL DECLARATION.[B]

I now place before the reader the original draft of the Declaration of

Independence, as it was presented by Jefferson. I have placed in

brackets the matter struck out or amended by Congress.

It will be remembered that Mr. Jefferson was chairman of the committee

to draft the document; Benjamin Franklin, John Adams, Roger Sherman, and

R. R. Livingston, being the other four of the committee; that they

changed but a word or two in it; and that John Adams became its champion

in Congress, and fought manfully for every word of it. Jefferson said

nothing, as he scarcely ever spoke in public:

1. "When in the course of human events it becomes necessary for

one people to dissolve the political bonds which have connected

them with another, and to assume among the powers of the earth the

separate and equal station to which the laws of nature and of

nature's God entitle them, a decent respect for the opinions of

mankind requires that they should declare the causes which impel

them to the separation.

2. "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are

created equal; that they are endowed by their Creator with

[inherent and] inalienable rights; that among these are life,

liberty, and the pursuit of happiness; that to secure these

rights, governments are instituted among men, deriving their just

powers from the consent of the governed; that whenever any form of

government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the right of

the people to alter and abolish it, and to institute new

government, laying its foundations on such principles, and

organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most

likely to effect their safety and happiness. Prudence, indeed,

will dictate that governments long established should not be

changed for light and transient causes; and accordingly all

experience hath shown, that mankind are more disposed to suffer,

while evils are sufferable, than to right themselves by abolishing

the forms to which they are accustomed. But when a long train of

abuses and usurpations, [begun at a distinguished period, and]

pursuing invariably the same object, evinces a design to reduce

them under absolute despotism, it is their right, it is their

duty, to throw off such government, and to provide new guards for

their future security. Such has been the patient sufferings of

these colonies; and such is now the necessity which constrains

them to [expunge] their former systems of government. The history

of the present king of Great Britain, is a history of

[unremitting] injuries and usurpations, [among which appears no

solitary fact to contradict the uniform tenor of the rest, but all

have] in direct object the establishment of an absolute tyranny

over these states. To prove this, let facts be submitted to a

candid world, [for the truth of which we pledge a faith yet

unsullied by falsehood.]

{223}3. "He has refused his assent to laws the most wholesome and

necessary for the public good.

4. "He has forbidden his governors to pass laws of immediate and

pressing importance, unless suspended in their operation till his

assent should be obtained; and when so suspended, he has utterly

neglected to attend to them.

5. "He has refused to pass other laws for the accommodation of

large districts of people, unless those people would relinquish

the right of representation in the legislature, a right

inestimable to them and formidable to tyrants only.

6. "He has called together legislative bodies at places unusual,

uncomfortable, and distant from the depository of their public

records, for the sole purpose of fatiguing them into compliance

with his measures.

7. "He has dissolved representative houses repeatedly [and

continually] for opposing, with manly firmness, his invasions on

the rights of the people.

8. "He has refused, for a long time after such dissolutions, to

cause others to be elected, whereby the legislative powers,

incapable of annihilation, have returned to the people at large

for their exercise, the state remaining, in the meantime, exposed

to dangers of invasions from without and convulsions within.

9. "He has endeavored to prevent the population of these states;

for that purpose obstructing the laws for naturalization of

foreigners, refusing to pass others to encourage their migrations

hither, and raising the conditions of new appropriations of lands.

10. "He has [suffered] the administration of justice [totally to

cease in some of these states], refusing his assent to laws for

establishing judiciary powers.

11. "He has made [our] judges dependent on his will alone for the

tenure of their offices, and the amount and payment of their

salaries.

12. "He has erected a multitude of new offices [by a self-assumed

power], and sent hither swarms of new officers to harass our

people and eat out their substance.

13. "He has kept among us in times of peace standing armies [and

ships of war] without the consent of our legislatures.

14. "He has affected to render the military independent of and

superior to the civil power.

15. "He has combined with others to subject us to a jurisdiction

foreign to our constitutions, and unacknowledged by our laws,

giving his assent to their acts of pretended legislation for

quartering large bodies of armed troops among us; for protecting

by a mock trial from punishment, any murders which they should

commit on the inhabitants of these states; for cutting off our

trade with all ports of the world; for imposing taxes on us

without our consent; for depriving us of the benefits of trial by

jury; for transporting us beyond seas to be tried for pretended

offenses; for abolishing the free system of English laws in a

neighboring province, establishing therein an arbitrary

government, and enlarging its boundaries so as to render it at

once an example and fit instrument for introducing the same

absolute rule in these [states]; for taking away our charters,

abolishing our most valuable laws, and altering, fundamentally,

the forms of our governments; for suspending our own legislatures,

and declaring themselves invested with power to legislate for us

in all cases whatsoever.

16. "He has abdicated government here [withdrawing his governors

and declaring us out of his allegiance and protection].

17. "He has plundered our seas, ravaged our coasts, burnt our

towns, and destroyed the lives of our people.

18. "He is at this time transporting large armies of foreign

mercenaries, to complete the works of death, desolation, and

tyranny already begun, with circumstances of cruelty and perfidy,

unworthy the head of a civilized nation.

19. "He has constrained our fellow-citizens, taken captive on the

high seas, to bear arms against their country, to become the

executioners of their friends and brethren, or to fall themselves

by their hands.

20. "He has endeavored to bring on the inhabitants of the

frontiers the merciless Indian savages, whose known rule of

warfare is an undistinguished destruction of all ages, sexes, and

conditions of [existence].

21. ["He has excited treasonable insurrection of our

fellow-citizens, with the allurements of forfeiture and

confiscation of our property.]

22. ["He has waged cruel war against human nature itself,

violating its most sacred rights of life and liberty in the

persons of a distant people who never offended him, captivating

and carrying them into slavery in another hemisphere, or to incur

miserable death in their transportation thither. This piratical

warfare, the opprobrium of INFIDEL powers, is the warfare of the

CHRISTIAN king of Great Britain. Determined to keep open a market

where MEN should be bought and sold, he has prostituted his

negative for suppressing every legislative attempt to prohibit or

restrain this execrable commerce. And that this assemblage of

horrors might want no fact of distinguished die, he is now

exciting those very people to rise in arms among us, and to

purchase that liberty of which he has deprived them, by murdering

the people on whom he has obtruded them; thus paying off former

crimes committed against the LIBERTIES of one people with crimes

which he urges them to commit against the LIVES of another.]

23. "In every stage of these oppressions we have petitioned for

redress in the most humble terms; our repeated petitions have been

answered only by repeated injuries.

24. "A prince whose character is thus marked by every act which

may define a tyrant, is unfit to be the ruler of a people [who

mean to be free. Future ages will scarcely believe that the

hardiness of one man adventured, within the short compass of

twelve years only, to lay a foundation so broad and so undisguised

for tyranny over a people fostered and fixed in principles of

freedom.]

25. "Nor have we been wanting in attention to our British

brethren. We have warned them from time to time of attempts, by

their legislature, to extend [a] jurisdiction over [these, our

States.] We have reminded them of the circumstances of our

emigration and settlement here, [no one of which would warrant so

strange a pretention. These were effected at the expense of our

own blood and treasure, unassisted by the wealth or strength of

Great Britain; that in constituting, indeed, our several forms of

government, we had adopted one common king, thereby laying a

foundation for perpetual league and amity with them; but that

submission to their Parliament was no part of our constitution,

nor ever in idea, if history may be credited; and] we appealed to

their native justice and magnanimity, [as well as to] the ties of

our common kindred, to disavow these usurpations, which [were

likely] to interrupt our connection and correspondence. They, too,

have been deaf to the voice of justice and consanguinity; [and

when occasions have been given them, by the regular course of

their laws, of removing from their councils the disturbers of our

harmony, they have, by their free election, reestablished them in

power. At this very time, too, they are permitting their chief

magistrate to send over not only soldiers of our common blood, but

Scotch and foreign mercenaries, to invade and destroy us. These

facts have given the last stab to agonizing affection, and manly

spirit bids us renounce forever these unfeeling brethren. We must

endeavor to forget our former love for them,] and hold them as we

hold the rest of mankind--enemies in war, in peace friends. [We

might have been a free and a great people together; but a

communion of grandeur and of freedom, it seems, is below their

dignity. Be it so, since they will have it. The road to happiness

and to glory is open to us, too. We will tread it apart from them,

and] acquiesce in the necessity which denounces our [eternal]

separation.

26. "We, therefore, the representatives of the United States of

America, in general Congress assembled, do, in the name and by the

authority of the good people of these [States, reject and renounce

all allegiance and subjection to the King of Great Britain, and

all others who may hereafter claim by, through, or under them; we

utterly dissolve all political connection which may heretofore

have subsisted between us and the people or Parliament of Great

Britain; and, finally, we do assert and declare these colonies to

be free and independent States;] and that, as free and independent

States, they have full power to levy war, conclude peace, contract

alliances, establish commerce, and to do all other acts and things

which independent States may of right do.

"And for the support of this declaration, we mutually pledge to

each other our lives, our fortunes, and our sacred honor."

FOOTNOTES:

[A] Massacre at Lexington.

[B] See Note A, page 277.

ANALYSIS.

We have to do with the original draft, and to let the reader see the

hand of a master, I will analyze it.

"I love method," said Mr. Paine. The method of the piece stands as

follows, and, for the sake of elucidation, I have numbered the

paragraphs in the original;

I. INTRODUCTION, viz:--Paragraph 1.

II. BILL OF RIGHTS--Paragraph 2.

III. INDICTMENT--under three general charges: _Usurpation_,

_Abdication_, and _War_, as follows:

USURPATION.

Par. 3, 4, 5--Laws usurped, and hereunder:

_a._ Negatived.

_b._ Forbidden and neglected.

_c._ Refused, unless rights are surrendered.

Par. 6, 7, 8, 9--Legislation usurped, and hereunder:

_a._ Legislative bodies meet at the wrong place.

_b._ Legislative bodies dissolved.

_c._ Refused to have them elected.

_d._ Obstructing legislation for naturalization.

Par. 10, 11, 12--Judiciary powers usurped, and hereunder:

_a._ Destroyed by his negative.

_b._ Made the judges dependent on his will,

_c._ And erected new offices by his own will.

Par. 13, 14--Military powers usurped, and hereunder:

_a._ Established without consent of legislatures.

_b._ Made superior to civil power.

Par. 15--Jurisdiction usurped, and hereunder:

_a._ Troops, the quartering of.

_b._ Trial, of a mock nature.

_c._ Trade, the cutting off.

_d._ Taxes, without consent.

_e._ Trial, depriving of.

_f._ Transportation, to be

_g._ Tried, for pretended offenses.

_h._ Laws, abolishing the English.

_i._ Charters, the taking of.

_j._ Laws, abolishing special ones.

_k._ Constitutions, altering form of.

_l._ Legislatures, suspension of.

_m._ Power, to legislate for us in all cases whatsoever.

ABDICATION.

Par. 16--Declaring us out of his allegiance and protection.

WAR.

Par. 17--Warfare begun, and hereunder:

_a._ Seas plundered.

_b._ Coasts ravaged.

_c._ Towns burnt.

_d._ Lives destroyed.

Par. 18--Invasion.

Par. 19--Pressing of seamen.

Par. 20--Indian massacres.

Par. 21--Insurrection.

Par. 22--Waging war against human nature.

IV. PEACEFUL METHOD OF REDRESS, viz: Petitioning--Paragraph 23.

V. NECESSITY OF SEPARATION--declared in Paragraphs 24, 25.

VI. POWERS OF AN INDEPENDENT STATE DECLARED TO THE WORLD--in Paragraph

26.

ARGUMENT.

Let us now examine Articles III, IV, V, and VI. As they form the piece

proper, namely, the indictment and the declaration thereunder, let us

compare them with reference to the following:

In the conclusion of Common Sense Mr. Paine wrote: "Should a manifesto

be published and dispatched to foreign courts setting forth--

I. "The miseries we have endured; [This is Art. III of the

Declaration.]

II. "The peaceful methods which we have ineffectually used for redress;

[This is Art. IV of the Declaration.]

III. "Declaring at the same time that, not being able any longer to live

happily or safely under the cruel disposition of the British court, we

had been driven to the _necessity_ of breaking off all connection with

her; [This is Art. V of the Declaration.]

IV. "At the same time assuring all courts of our peaceful disposition

toward them, and of our desire of entering into _trade_ with them."

[This is Art. VI of the Declaration.]

Here are, _in their order_, the directions for producing the four last

articles of the famous document, and which constitute, as a special

instrument, all there is of it. Did Mr. Jefferson study this production

of Thomas Paine's so closely as to get the _exact order_, without

transposing an article? A cursory reading would not do this, and if he

did not study it for this purpose, then the same peculiar mind belonged

to Jefferson that belonged to Thomas Paine; and in writing the

Declaration a greater special miracle was performed than any recorded of

Jesus of Nazareth.

In the above there is a striking coincidence of documentary facts, in

the same order, and it is safe to say there is not one man in a million

who, in reading Common Sense, would remember this order, unless he read

it with such special purpose. But it is known Jefferson never consulted

a book or paper upon the subject, nor for the purpose of producing it.

Here is what Bancroft says, and I have found him to be a truthful

historian as to current facts touching on the subject:

"From the fullness of his own mind, without consulting one single book,

Jefferson drafted the Declaration; he submitted it separately to

Franklin and John Adams, accepted from each of them one or two verbal

unimportant corrections," etc.--Hist., vol. viii, p. 465.

The above history is doubtless taken from the reply of Mr. Jefferson to

attacks on the originality of the Declaration, which is as follows:

"Pickering's observations and Mr. Adams' in addition, 'that it contained

no new ideas; that it is a common-place compilation; its sentiments

hackneyed in Congress for two years before, and its essence contained in

Otis' pamphlet,' may all be true. Of that I am not to be the judge.

Richard Henry Lee charged it as copied from Locke's Treatise on

Government. Otis' pamphlet I never saw; and whether I had gathered my

ideas from reading, I do not know. I know only that I turned to neither

book nor pamphlet while writing it."--Works, vol. vii, p. 305.

This was written when he was eighty years old.

But it seems that Mr. Jefferson had never read the pamphlet, Common

Sense, as the following gross error in regard to it will show. Speaking

of Mr. Paine, he says: "Indeed, his Common Sense was for awhile believed

to have been written by Dr. Franklin, and published under the borrowed

name of Paine, who had come over with him from England."--Works, vol.

vii., p. 198.

In the above sentence there are two historic errors. First, Common Sense

was not published under the name of Paine; and, second, Mr. Paine did

not come over with Franklin from England. He preceded Franklin six

months.

That Mr. Paine did not attach his name to the pamphlet, Common Sense,

there is abundance of evidence to prove. The author of a pamphlet,

subscribed Rationalis, in answer to Common Sense, says: "I know not the

author, nor am I anxious to learn his name or character, for the book,

and not the writer of it, is to be the subject of my animadversions."

But we have Mr. Paine's own testimony, in the second edition of Common

Sense, direct to the point. In a postscript to the Introduction, he

says: "Who the author of this production is, is wholly unnecessary to

the public, as the object for attention is the doctrine, not the man.

Yet it may not be unnecessary to say that he is unconnected with any

party, and under no sort of influence, public or private, but the

influence of reason and principle."

An examination of all the earliest editions which can be seen in the

Congressional Library at Washington will satisfy any one on this

subject.

If Mr. Jefferson had read Common Sense before the writing of the

Declaration, he would never have erred so in regard to this fact. This

goes to show he had not even read it, much less studied it. How, then,

was the exact order followed, in writing the Declaration, which Mr.

Paine laid down in Common Sense?

My first proposition, then, I have proven, namely: that Thomas Paine

wrote a work for the sole purpose of bringing about a separation and

making a Declaration of Independence. I have proven, also, that he

therein submitted the subject-matter in the _order_ in which it was

afterwards put. This much on the positive side. On the negative side, I

have shown that Mr. Jefferson did none of these things, for it was

produced from "the fullness of his own mind, without consulting one

single book."

But if Mr. Bancroft be a truthful historian, there is already great

doubt thrown on Jefferson's authorship of it, and it would have been

better to have made Jefferson a close student and thorough reader for

this special purpose. This is the view, in fact, taken of the question

of authorship in the New American Cyclopedia (article Thomas Jefferson),

and I will give an extract therefrom, to show how historians differ.

Speaking of the Declaration, the Cyclopedia says: "Two questions have,

however, arisen as to its originality: the first, a general one upon the

substance of the document; the second, in regard to its phraseology in

connection with the alleged Mecklenburg declaration of May, 1775. It is

more than probable that Jefferson made use of some of the ideas

expressed in newspapers at the time, and that his study of the great

English writers upon constitutional freedom was of service to him. But

an impartial criticism will not base upon this fact a charge of want of

originality. It should rather be regarded as the peculiar merit of the

writer that he thus _collected and embodied_ the conclusions upon

government of the leading thinkers of the age in Europe and America,

rejecting what was false, and combining his material into a production

of so much eloquence and dignity."

This does not sound much like Bancroft. The two historians have placed

Mr. Jefferson in a sad dilemma. The one, to make him an original in the

production of the Declaration, says he did not consult one single book,

but produced it from the fullness of his own mind. The other, to defend

him from the charge of want of originality, says he made use of the

newspapers, collected and embodied, etc. But the single fact which I

have brought from the conclusion of Common Sense destroys the first

hypothesis, and the last hypothesis, in being contradictory in itself

destroys itself. How the reader will fathom this labyrinth of

contradictions, and reconcile this conflict of historic opinion, is a

question which does not trouble me, and I pass on to something more

important.

STYLE.

The style of the Declaration of Independence is in every particular the

style of Mr. Paine and Junius; and it is in no particular the style of

Thomas Jefferson. This I now proceed to prove.

That equality in the members of the periods, which gives evenness and

smoothness, and the alliteration which gives harmony in the sound, and

which together render the writings of Mr. Paine so stately and metrical,

are qualities so prominent that no one can mistake the style. And what

renders the argument in this regard so strong, is the entire absence of

these qualities in Mr. Jefferson's writings. In fact, if Mr. Jefferson

drafted the Declaration of Independence, he never before nor since wrote

any thing like it, in the same style, order, or spirit; or produced any

thing which evinced genius, or the hand of a master in literature. What

I have already said on style, in the former part of this work, will

render this readily understood by the reader; but I will now make a few

comparisons, and first with Junius, and then Paine and Jefferson.

Junius wrote two declarations, or rather pieces, after the very same

style and manner, namely, the first and the thirty-fifth Letters. They

can be thrown into the same synoptical form in which I have put the

Declaration. But to show the rythm, and alliteration, and peculiar

style, I give the following:

"When in the course of human events it becomes necessary for one

people to dissolve the political bonds which have connected them

with another, and to assume among the powers of the earth the

separate and equal station to which the laws of nature and of

nature's God entitle them, a decent respect for the opinions of

mankind requires that they should declare the causes which impel

them to the separation."--Declaration.

"When the complaints of a brave and powerful people are observed

to increase in proportion to the wrongs they have suffered; when,

instead of sinking into submission, they are roused to resistance,

the time will soon arrive at which every inferior consideration

must yield to the security of the sovereign and to the general

safety of the state. There is a moment of difficulty and danger at

which flattery and falsehood can no longer deceive, and simplicity

itself can no longer be misled."--Junius.

"When the tumult of war shall cease, and the tempest of present

passions be succeeded by calm reflection; or when those who,

surviving its fury, shall inherit from you a legacy of debts and

misfortunes; when the yearly revenue shall scarcely be able to

discharge the interest of the one, and no possible remedy be left

for the other, ideas far different from the present will arise and

embitter the remembrance of former follies."

The above three extracts are from the Declaration, Junius, and Crisis,

viii. There is in them the same stately measure or _tread_; the same

harmony of sounds; the same gravity of sentiment; the same clearness of

diction; the same boldness of utterance; the same beauty and vivacity;

in short, the same spirit and the same hand.

Now an extract from Jefferson will be in place, and I give it from one

of his most impassioned pieces, the "Summary View." I do this for two

reasons: first, because it is the only piece, up to the writing of the

Declaration, which he ever produced worthy of note; and second, because

it is his best. I give also the best of this piece, the exordium:

{236}"_Resolved_, That it be an instruction to the said deputies,

when assembled in General Congress, with the deputies from the

other states of British America, to propose to the said Congress

that an humble and dutiful address be presented to his Majesty,

begging leave to lay before him, as Chief Magistrate of the

British empire, the united complaints of his Majesty's subjects in

America; complaints which are excited by many unwarrantable

encroachments and usurpations, attempted to be made by the

legislature of one part of the empire upon the rights which God

and the laws have given equally and independently to all. To

represent to his Majesty that these, his states, have often

individually made humble application to his imperial Throne to

obtain through its intervention some redress of their injured

rights, to none of which was ever even an answer condescended.

Humbly to hope that this, their joint address, penned in the

language of truth, and divested of those expressions of servility

which would persuade his Majesty that we are asking favors, and

not rights, shall obtain from his Majesty a respectful acceptance;

and this his Majesty will think we have reason to expect, when he

reflects that he is no more than the chief officer of the people,

appointed by the laws, and circumscribed with definite powers to

assist in working the great machine of government, erected for

their use, and consequently subject to their superintendence, and

in order that these our rights, as well as the invasions of them,

may be laid more fully before his Majesty, to take a view of them

from the origin and first settlement of these countries."

It will be observed in the above extract from Mr. Jefferson, that there

is no proportion between the members of the sentences. We have them of

all lengths, interlarded with phrases, and thrown into a confused mass.

Hence, there is no _harmony_. Mr. Paine's periods are almost faultless

in this regard; the members of the periods follow each other like the

waves of the ocean, which gives _evenness_ of "_tread_" and _majesty_ of

_expression_. While the style of Mr. Jefferson is absolutely devoid of

all _harmony_, for the members of the periods move on like the rumbling

of a government wagon over a rough and stony road.

This peculiarity of style is one of mental constitution. It is an effect

of nature which education can never remedy. No art can reach it, for no

mental training can annul a law of nature. It may be said of the writer

in this regard as of the poet: "He is born, not made." It is herein

nature made these two men entirely unlike. Paine was a poet; Jefferson

was not. The former had the most lively imagination; the latter had none

at all. It is this quality of the mind--_imagination_--which adorns

language with the figure.

In the proper use of the figure Mr. Paine can not be excelled. Mr.

Jefferson makes but infrequent use of figures of speech, and when he

goes out of the ruts of custom, he almost always fails in his efforts.

Two or three examples will suffice. In vol. i, p. 58, he says: "I never

heard either of them speak ten minutes at a time, nor to any but the

main point which was to decide the question. They laid their shoulders

to the great points, knowing that the little ones would follow of

themselves." In this men are arguing the _points_ of a question. But Mr.

Jefferson says they "laid their shoulders" to them, instead of their

tongues. In vol. i, p. 358, he says: "The Emperor, to satisfy this

tinsel passion, _plants_ a dagger in the heart of every Dutchman, which

no time will extract." Perhaps these planted daggers will take root. He

speaks also about "confabs" and "swallowing opinions."

* * * * *

Let us look now, for a moment, at the grand requisites of style,

_Precision_, _Unity_, and _Strength_.

Of the first, I would say, I have never yet seen an ambiguous sentence

in Paine's works. Mr. Jefferson's style is confused, labored, and

prolix. There is no paragraph he ever wrote, especially in the first

half of his life, but will bear me out in the assertion, that he uses a

great many words to express a few ideas. The above quotation I cite on

this point. It could all have been put into one-fourth of the space, and

thus have been rendered clear and distinct. His style, however, grew

better as he grew older. He is diffuse, which at once destroys _Unity_

of expression. He puts subject after subject into one period, often into

one sentence. The consequence is, there is no order in his style, and

his ideas tumble over each other in the greatest confusion; and the

consequence of this is, there is no _Strength_ to his style.

That the reader may see all these faults, I will make a brief analysis

of the Introduction to the "Summary View," quoted above:

FIRST PERIOD.

1. Instruction, to deputies.

2. When assembled in Congress.

3. With other deputies.

4. To propose to Congress.

5. To present an address to his Majesty.

6. Begging leave to lay before him complaints.

7. Complaints excited.

8. By encroachments and usurpations.

9. By the legislature of a part of the empire.

10. On the rights which God and the laws have given

11. Equally to all.

This is the first sentence. In it he has put the Introduction, the Bill

of Rights, the Indictment, a proposition to Congress to go a begging

before his Majesty, and several other particulars. But let us continue

with the next sentence:

SECOND PERIOD.

12. To represent to his Majesty.

13. That his states.

14. Humble application.

15. To Imperial Throne.

16. To get redress of injured rights.

17. No answer.

Here there is no relation between the _beginning_ of the sentence and

the conclusion.

THIRD PERIOD.

18. Humbly to hope.

19. By joint address.

_a._ Penned in truth.

_b._ Divested of terms of servility.

20. Would persuade his Majesty.

21. That we ask no favors.

22. But rights.

23. Shall obtain a respectful acceptance.

24. His Majesty will think.

25. We have reason to expect.

26. When he reflects.

_a._ That he is only the chief officer.

_b._ Appointed by law.

_c._ Circumscribed with powers.

_d._ To assist in working the great machine of government.

_e._ Erected for their use.

_f._ Are therefore subject to their superintendence.

27. And that these our rights.

28. As well as invasions.

29. May be laid before his Majesty.

_a._ To take a view of them.

_b._ From their origin.

_c._ And first settlement of these countries.

It is only necessary to remark on the above, that thirty or forty

subjects can hardly be handled successfully in three periods. How

different is this from the Declaration, or, in fact, from any production

of Mr. Paine's.

In the three great requisites of style, _Precision_, _Unity_, and

_Strength_, where Mr. Paine is so perfect, we see great defects in

Jefferson; and in the fourth, _Harmony_, a complete failure.

If we now take the "Summary View," and submit it to the same critical

analysis as I have the Declaration of Independence, we will find the

same defects in it, as a whole, that we find in the first paragraph,

which I have just analyzed. There is a complete mixture of all subjects.

But this I leave to the reader, should he question the truth of my

assertion.

If we now turn to the synopsis of the Declaration, we will find an

exhibition of the most perfect _order._ The Introduction is short, to

the point, and complete. The Bill of Rights contains the _first

principles_. These apply to mankind universally. It then proceeds as a

specialty. The Indictment is divided into three grand divisions,

Usurpation, Abdication, and War, and the separate counts are stated,

clearly containing but one subject. Nowhere do we find a mixing up of

different subjects. We do not find a count of war under the head of

usurpation, nor one of usurpation under the head of war.

* * * * *

There is also seen the passion for alliteration throughout the whole

instrument, and especially in the following passages: "Fostered and

fixed in principles of freedom." Paragraph 22 is filled with examples.

But in paragraph 15 it seems he uses this power of the mind to aid him

in itemizing counts. He takes t for the letter under which he marshals

this army of charges: "Troops," "trial," "trade," "taxes," "trial,"

[No. 2,] "transportation," "tried." Here are seven words comprising as

many charges following in succession. He follows it with others, but

never uses the t again. This shows a passion for order and alliteration.

I presume there is no other document in the world with these

peculiarities so marked, and I presume there is no writer in the world

who ever exhibited to such a remarkable degree these peculiarities of

style, as did Thomas Paine. [See on this subject Junius Unmasked, p.

107.] Now, these peculiarities are almost entirely wanting in Thomas

Jefferson, and without them it is absolutely impossible for him to be

the author of the Declaration of Independence.

I wish now to call attention to the word "hath." It is found but once in

the Declaration, and is in paragraph 2, in the following connection:

"And accordingly all experience hath shown." It is put in here for the

sake of harmony and force in sound, for if we substitute the word has,

there will be a halting at shown, and a disagreeable hissing sound. At

the time this was written Mr. Paine frequently used the word, and it may

have slipped in unnoticed, on account of sound, or he may have put it in

so that the critic could track him. I have never seen the word in any of

Jefferson's writings.

SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS.

I have heretofore shown that Mr. Paine had the Declaration of

Independence in view in the production of Common Sense, and that he

sketched therein the outlines in the same order in which they afterward

appeared. I have shown its architecture and plan, and also its style,

to be that of Mr. Paine's, and not Mr. Jefferson's. I have shown this

somewhat in detail, but not more than the subject demanded. Herein I

have given the grand outlines and general features, but I shall now

review the whole, to point out its special characteristics, that, in the

multitude of small things all tending one way, it will be made

conclusive to the mind of the reader that it is Mr. Paine's, and not

Jefferson's. In this I shall be compelled, some times, to refer to

propositions already proven in the first part of this work, to shorten

the argument, not wishing to go over the same ground twice. In the

demonstration of a theorem in geometry, what has been proven is made to

aid what shall come after. I shall proceed with the same method, and not

be guilty of taking any thing which Mr. Paine may have written

afterward, to prove something which has gone before. But mental

_characteristics_ may be taken wherever we can find them. I am confined

to Common Sense, and shall use also Junius as aiding, but never to

_entirely_ prove a point. In my references to Common Sense, I shall be

compelled to refer to the page. I use the political works of Mr. Paine

as published by J. P. Mendum, Boston, as they are most generally known

and read in this country. With these explanations, the reader can not go

wrong.

* * * * *

I now take up the original Declaration, beginning with the Introduction;

and, as I have numbered its paragraphs, I shall use the figures to

denote them, proceeding in their numerical order:

Paragraph 1. "Political bonds." The same figure is found on page 64,

Common Sense.

"To assume among the powers of the earth the separate and equal station

to which the laws of nature and of nature's God entitle them." Here the

crowning thought is that God, through his natural laws, and by natural

proofs, designed a separation. Thus Mr. Paine, in Common Sense, page 37,

says: "The distance at which the Almighty hath placed England and

America is a strong and _natural_ proof that the authority of the one

over the other was never the design of Heaven." ... "Every thing that is

right or _natural_ pleads for separation."

Note also above the phrase, "separate and _equal_ station." The writer

of the Declaration considered England and America equal, and thus Mr.

Paine says, above: "It is proof that the authority of _the one_ over

_the other_ was never the design of Heaven."

"A decent _respect_ for the opinions of mankind requires that they

should declare the causes which impel them to the separation." Note

hereunder the phrase, "_decent respect_." Thus, in his introduction to

his first Letter, which was an indictment and declaration of principles

also, Junius says: "Let us enter into it [the inquiry] with candor and

_decency_. _Respect_ is due to the station of ministers, and, if a

resolution must at last be taken, there is none so likely to be

supported with firmness as that which has been adopted with moderation."

The above are perfect parallels in idea, and in the expression of the

prominent thought, "_decent respect_." But the thought is expanded from

the narrow confines of the British nation to the whole world, and if Mr.

Paine wrote both, as they strongly indicate, to make the conclusion

good we must find this change or mental growth in Mr. Paine to coincide

therewith. Here it is: "In this extensive quarter of the globe, we

forget the narrow limits of three hundred and sixty miles (the extent of

England), and carry our friendship on a larger scale. We claim

brotherhood with every European Christian, and triumph in the generosity

of the sentiment.

"It is pleasant to observe by what regular gradations we surmount local

prejudices as we enlarge our acquaintance with the world. A man born in

any town in England," etc. I wish the reader to read the whole of the

paragraph I have begun. See Common Sense, pages 35 and 36. See also

Crisis, viii, near its close; a noble passage on the same subject. Mr.

Paine frequently takes the pains to tell us how he outgrew his local

prejudices, and how he at last considered the "world his country." He

undertook, also, for America what he calls "_the business of a

world_."--Common Sense, page 63.

Paragraph 2. "We hold these truths to be self-evident: That all men are

created equal; that they are endowed by their Creator with inherent and

inalienable rights." Compare from Common Sense, pages 24, 25, and 28, as

follows: "Mankind being originally equals in the order of creation, the

equality could not be destroyed by some subsequent circumstance." ...

"The equal rights of nature." ... "For all men being originally equals,"

etc. So, also, Junius says: "In the rights of freedom we are all equal."

... "The first original rights of the people," etc. To show that he

believes these rights to be inalienable, he says:

"The equality can not be destroyed by some subsequent circumstance."

"Life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness." Junius uses the terms,

"Life, liberty, and fortune."--Let. 66. And Mr. Paine frequently, "Life,

liberty, and property." But these terms were in quite common use with

many writers.

"To secure these rights, _governments_ are instituted among men." What

is said on government in this paragraph is paraphrased or condensed from

page 21, Common Sense. It is a concise repetition of Mr. Paine's pet

theme and political principles, first given to the world in Junius, and

then elaborated in Common Sense.

"_Prudence_ indeed will dictate." This word _prudence_ is ever flowing

from the pen of Mr. Paine. See an example on page 21, Common Sense. It

is quite common in Junius. The same may be said, also, of the word

_experience_.

"And accordingly all experience hath shown that mankind are more

disposed to _suffer while evils are sufferable_, than to right

themselves by abolishing the forms to which they are accustomed."

Compare Common Sense, page 17, as follows: "As a long and violent abuse

of power is generally the means of calling the right of it in question,

and in matters, too, which might never have been thought of, had not the

_sufferers_ been aggravated to the inquiry," etc.

"_Forms._" That is, the "forms of the constitution." See Junius, Let.

44, where he says: "I should be contented to renounce the forms of the

Constitution once more, if there were no other way to obtain

substantial justice for the people." And here the Declaration is

renouncing the forms.

"But when a long train of abuses and usurpations, all having in direct

object the establishment of an absolute _tyranny_ over these States."

Paine says on _tyranny_: "Ye that oppose independence now, ye know not

what ye do, ye are opening a door to _eternal tyranny_, by keeping

vacant the seat of government." ... "Ye that dare oppose not only the

_tyranny,_ but the tyrant, stand forth." Common Sense, p. 47.

"To prove this, let facts be submitted to a candid world, _for the truth

of which we pledge a faith, yet unsullied by falsehood_." The above

sentence is very peculiar, and I will show wherein. The last member of

the sentence which I have italicised was stricken out of the original

draft by Congress. The peculiarity in it is that "_the truth of a fact_"

is affirmed, and its falsehood implied. Now a fact is always true. There

can be no false facts. What is here meant, is, that we pledge a faith

yet unsullied by falsehood, that the statements are true. Not that the

facts are _true_, but that they are facts. It is the passion (if I may

so express it) for conciseness, to speak of facts being true or false.

Now this is a peculiarity of Junius. In Let. 3 he says: "I am sorry to

tell you, Sir William, that in this article your first fact is false."

It is thus Mr. Paine frequently sacrifices both grammar and strict

definition to conciseness; but never to obscure the sense. An example

from the publicly acknowledged pen of Mr. Paine ought to be here

produced; I, therefore, give one from his letter to the Abbe Raynal,

which is as follows: "His _facts_ are coldly and carelessly stated.

They neither inform the reader, nor interest him. Many of them are

_erroneous_, and most of them are defective and obscure." Here

"erroneous facts," "false facts," and "facts for the truth of which we

pledge a faith unsullied by falsehood," are evidence of the same head

and hand. It is thus an author puts some peculiar feature of his soul on

paper unwittingly; and it lies there a fossil, till the critic,

following the lines of nature, gathers it up to classify, arrange, and

combine with others, and then to put on canvas, or in marble bust. It

may be well to remind the reader that the above peculiarity I can

nowhere find in Jefferson's writings.

I now call attention to the sentence: "But when a long train of abuses

and usurpations [begun at a distinguished period, and pursuing

invariably the same object] evinces a design to reduce them under

absolute despotism, it is their right, it is their duty, to throw off

such government, and to provide new guards for their future security."

I have placed in brackets what has been interpolated by Jefferson. I

conclude this from the following reasons:

1. It breaks the measure.

2. It destroys the harmony of the period, and the sentence is

complete and harmonious without it.

3. "Begun at a distinguished period," is indefinite.

4. It refers to time, and is mixed up with other subject matter,

and is therefore in the wrong place.

5. It is tautology, for two sentences further on it is all

expressed in its proper place, in referring to the history of the

king.

In all of these particulars it is not like Mr. Paine, for he is never

guilty of such a breach of rhetoric. But in all of the above particulars

it is just like Mr. Jefferson.

The above two paragraphs comprise the Introduction and the Bill of

Rights, and are the foundation of the Declaration. It is a basis fit and

substantial, because one of universal principles, so that whatever

special right may be enunciated, it will rest firmly on this foundation;

or whatever special denunciation of wrongs, it will have its authority

therein.

I now pass to consider the indictment under its three

divisions--_Usurpation_, _Abdication_, and _War_.

If the reader will now turn back to page 223, he will find from

paragraphs 3 to 15, inclusive, the whole charge of usurpation included

therein. But, separately, we find paragraph 3 to be a charge of the

abuse of the king's negative; and he concludes in paragraph 15 with the

climax, "suspending our own legislatures, and declaring themselves [the

king and parliament] invested with power to legislate for us in all

cases whatsoever." Now, if the reader will turn to page 41, Common

Sense, which is page 213 of this book, he will find Mr. Paine beginning

the first of his "several reasons" as follows:

"1. The powers of governing still remaining in the hands of the

king, he will have a negative over the whole of this continent."

It will be observed, in a general view, that the _reasons_ given by Mr.

Paine cover the whole thirteen paragraphs; and it will be observed

specially that he begins the reasons the same as he does the

indictment--namely, with the king's negative. Mr. Paine was violently

opposed to the king's negative, and all through life he never fails to

attack it, when the opportunity offered itself. This would weigh most

heavily on his mind, and be most naturally uttered first. On page 59 of

Common Sense will also be found reasons for independence, which come

within this part of the indictment. But pages 41, 42, 43 of Common Sense

cover nearly, or quite all of it. But they are stated _generally_ for

the sake of argument--not _specially_ for the sake of indictment.

Paragraph 16. "He has abdicated government here, withdrawing his

governors, and declaring us out of his allegiance and protection."

Compare with this the following, to be found on page 61 of Common Sense:

"The present state of America is truly alarming to every man who is

capable of reflection. _Without law, without government, without any

other mode of power than what is founded on and granted by courtesy._

Held together by an unexampled occurrence of sentiment, which is,

nevertheless, subject to change, and which every secret enemy is

endeavoring to dissolve. Our present condition is legislation without

law, wisdom without a plan, a constitution without a name."

I now take up the third part of the indictment--_War_.

Paragraph 17. "He has plundered our seas, ravaged our coasts, burnt our

towns, and destroyed the lives of our people."

Paragraph 18. "He is at this time transporting large armies of foreign

mercenaries to complete the works of death, desolation, and tyranny,

already begun, with circumstances of cruelty and perfidy unworthy the

head of a civilized nation."

On the above two counts, which charge war and invasion, I submit from

Common Sense, page 62, as follows: "_It is the violence which is done

and threatened to our persons, the destruction of our property by an

armed force, the invasion of our country by fire and sword_, which

conscientiously qualifies the use of arms; and the instant in which such

mode of defense became necessary, all subjection to Britain ought to

have ceased, and the independence of America should have been considered

as dating its era from, and published by the first musket that was fired

against her."

Under the above, also, may be classed paragraph 19.

Paragraph 20. "He has endeavored to bring on the inhabitants the

merciless Indian savages, whose known rule of warfare is an

undistinguished destruction of all ages, sexes, and conditions of

existence." Compare Common Sense, page 47, as follows: "There are

thousands and tens of thousands who would think it glorious to expel

from the continent that barbarous and hellish power which hath stirred

up the Indians and negroes to destroy us."

Paragraph 21. "He has excited _treasonable insurrection_," etc. Compare

Common Sense, page 61, as follows: "The tories dared not have assembled

_offensively_, had they known that their lives, by that act, were

forfeited to the laws of the State. A line of distinction should be

drawn between English soldiers taken in battle and inhabitants of

America _taken in arms_: the first are prisoners, but the latter

_traitors_--the one forfeits his liberty, the other his head."

The above paragraph and the following one, it will be remembered, were

stricken out by Congress.

I now come to the closing paragraph of this part of the indictment, and,

as it is the most important of all, the author kept it for a climax, and

he throws his whole soul into it. I will transcribe it here:

Paragraph 22. "He has waged cruel war against human nature itself,

violating its most sacred rights of life and liberty, in the persons of

a distant people, who never offended him, captivating and carrying them

into slavery in another hemisphere, or to incur miserable death in their

transportation thither. This piratical warfare, the opprobrium of

INFIDEL powers, is the warfare of the CHRISTIAN king of Great Britain.

Determined to keep open a market where MEN should be bought and sold, he

has prostituted his negative for suppressing every legislative attempt

to prohibit or to restrain this execrable commerce; and, that this

assemblage of horrors might want no fact of distinguished die, he is now

exciting those very people to rise in arms among us, and to purchase

that liberty of which he has deprived them; thus paying off former

crimes, committed against the LIBERTIES of one people, with crimes which

he urges them to commit against the LIVES of another."

The capital words in the above are his own. Let us begin with the last

sentence, and go backward. The substance of the last sentence is, that

by exciting the negroes to rise on the people of this continent, the

king was guilty of a double crime, both against the _liberties_ of the

negroes and the _lives_ of the American people. Compare Common Sense,

page 47, as follows: "He hath stirred up the Indians and _negroes_ to

destroy us; _the cruelty hath a double guilt--it is dealing brutally by

us and treacherously by them_." This is the same complex idea, well

reasoned out, and expressed almost in the same language--certainly in

the same style. But Jefferson "never consulted a single book," so

original was the Declaration to his own mind and habits of thought!

Let us now take the sentence: "This piratical warfare, the opprobrium of

INFIDEL powers, is the warfare of the CHRISTIAN king of Great Britain."

The antithesis above between infidel and Christian, falls upon the mind

with such stunning weight; with such boldness of religious sentiment;

with such emphasis in expression, and with such withering sarcasm toward

the king, that it becomes an epitome of Mr. Paine himself, and a concise

record of his whole life, up to that period. The reader can not fail

here to see the pen of Junius, and to recall the great power of

antithesis in all his Letters. This peculiarity of style is _absolutely

wanting_ in Jefferson.

The first sentence in the paragraph, is in every phrase so like Mr.

Paine, the reader must think it superfluous to comment upon it. The

expressions, "cruel war," "against human nature," "sacred rights," "life

and liberty," "in the persons of," and especially "_prostituted_," are

all to be found in Common Sense and Junius. For the phrase "in the

persons of," see it repeated three times on page 22 of Common Sense.

Thus ends the indictment. It is Article I, of Mr. Paine's Manifesto,

heretofore pointed out. I now proceed with Article II of the Manifesto,

which he states to be "the peaceful methods which we have ineffectually

used for redress." See Common Sense, p. 56. It is as follows:

Paragraph 23. "In every stage of these oppressions we have petitioned in

the most humble terms; our _repeated petitions_ have been answered by

repeated injuries." Compare Common Sense, pp. 39-40, as follows: "Every

quiet method for peace hath been ineffectual. Our prayers hath been

rejected with disdain, and only tended to convince us that nothing

flatters vanity or confirms obstinacy in kings more than in _repeated

petitioning_."

Paragraph 24. "A prince whose character is thus marked by every act

which may define a tyrant, is unfit to be the ruler of a people who mean

to be free. Future ages will scarcely believe, that the hardiness of one

man, adventured within the short compass of twelve years only, to lay a

foundation so broad and so undisguised for tyranny over a people

fostered and fixed in principles of freedom."

The first sentence pronounces the king a tyrant, and is so often

repeated heretofore by Mr. Paine, it is useless to cite any thing in

proof. The second sentence was stricken out of the Declaration by

Congress, and contains new matter which must be attended to. And,

First, "_Future ages will scarcely believe that_." This phrase is

peculiar to Mr. Paine, for his mind was continually dwelling on the

future. So Junius says: "_Posterity will scarce believe that_."--Let.

48. And Mr. Paine says: "_Mankind will scarcely believe that_."--Rights

of Man, p. 94.

I parallel this phrase not so much to show a verbal construction as to

show a mental characteristic which must express itself in the same

language.

Second, "That the hardiness of one man adventured." Compare with this

from Common Sense, page 41: "No man was a warmer wisher for

reconciliation than myself, before the fatal nineteenth of April, 1775;

but the moment the event of that day was made known, I rejected the

_hardened_, sullen-tempered Pharaoh of England forever," etc. How

different is this language in the Declaration, from that used by Mr.

Jefferson in the "Summary View," when speaking of the king. Jefferson

used the word majesty, as though he was speaking to a god; and seems to

delight in the repetition of it. See p. 236.

Third, "Within the short compass of twelve years only." The Declaration

was dated July 4th, 1776. Twelve years would take it back to 1764. This

was the year the stamp act passed, and made an era in colonial troubles.

Now, if Mr. Paine had been speaking of the troubles of the English

people, he would have used the same expression, with the exception of

adding a year; for, as before stated in the first part of this work, Mr.

Paine dated the miseries, oppressions, and invasions on the rights of

the English people from the close of the Seven Years' War, or the

beginning of 1763. And the time was estimated in round numbers as

follows:

Junius says, in the beginning of 1769: "Outraged and oppressed as we

are, this nation will not bear after a _six years' peace_," etc.; and,

also, in the beginning of 1770: "At the _end of seven years_ we are

loaded," etc. Mr. Paine, at the close of the year 1778, says to the

English people: "A period of sixteen years of misconduct and

misfortune," etc. These round numbers all refer back to the beginning of

1763, and the expression in the Declaration, "within the short compass

of _twelve years only_," is not, as it appears, inconsistent with this

peculiarity, for the English era with him was 1763, and the American

1764. Nowhere do I find this mental characteristic in Jefferson. This is

strong proof--it goes beyond proof, it is demonstration. Mr. Jefferson,

nor any man living, could steal this fact; it is one of mental

constitution, stamped there and pointing with fingers of truth both

backward and forward to Thomas Paine, and at right angles to the

character of Thomas Jefferson.

The figure "compass" is often found in Mr. Paine's writings, as "compass

a plan," and the like. But I call attention to the perfect similarity in

style between the Declaration and every passage from Common Sense.

Paragraph 25. "Nor have we been wanting in attention to our British

brethren. We have _warned_ them from time to time," etc. It is the

peculiarity of Mr. Paine to hold up a warning to the sense. See on this

point, page 103 of this work.

"We have reminded them of the circumstances of our emigration and

settlement here." Compare Common Sense, p. 35, as follows: "This new

world hath been the asylum for the persecuted lovers of civil and

religious liberty from _every part_ of Europe. Hither have they fled,

not from the tender embraces of the mother, but from the cruelty of the

monster, and it is so far true of England, that the same tyranny which

drove the first emigrants from home pursues their descendants still."

Thus, also, says the Declaration (and note the style): "These were

affected at the expense of our own blood and treasure, unassisted by

the wealth or strength of Great Britain; that in constituting indeed our

several forms of government we had adopted one _common king_."

I call attention to the phrases, "_common king_," "_common blood_," and

"_common kindred_," in the same paragraph. Mr. Paine was never guilty of

calling England the "parent" or "mother" country, but the "common"

country. (See Common Sense, p. 36.) Junius in Let. 1 says: "A series of

inconsistent measures has alienated the Colonies from their duty as

subjects, and from their _natural affection_ to their _common country_."

Jefferson uses "parent" and "mother" country, both before and after the

writing of the Declaration.

In connection with the above sentence from Junius, I subjoin the same

sentiment in regard to _natural affection_ from the Declaration a few

sentences further on, as follows: "These facts have given the last stab

to agonizing _affection_, and manly spirit bids us to renounce forever

these unfeeling brethren. We must endeavor to forget our former love for

them, and hold them as we hold the rest of mankind, enemies in war, in

peace friends." Compare with this, Common Sense, p. 47, as follows: "To

talk of friendship with those in whom our reason forbids us to have

faith, and our _affections_ wounded through a thousand pores instruct us

to detest, is madness and folly. Every day wears out the little remains

of kindred between us and them." In regard to the phrase "_renounce

forever_" above, as quoted from the Declaration, compare Common Sense,

p. 38, as follows: "That seat of wretchedness [speaking of Boston] will

teach us wisdom and instruct us to _forever renounce_ a power in whom we

can have no trust." See also Common Sense, p. 37, as follows: "And our

duty to mankind at large, as well as to ourselves, instructs us _to_

renounce the alliance."

The expression "forever" will not be mistaken, for it runs through

Junius' and all of Mr. Paine's writings as a common expression.

The figure "to stab" is one which Mr. Paine adopted in Junius and

carried through his whole life. Thus he talks about "stabbing the

Constitution," and "to stab the character of the nation." The former is

found in Junius, the latter in his Letter to the Abbe Raynal.

The italicised phrases in the following expression, "_These facts_ have

given the _last stab_ to _agonizing affection_, and _manly spirit bids_

us to _renounce forever_," etc., are so very like Mr. Paine, and so

entirely unlike Mr. Jefferson, that the cursory reader, with the

commonest understanding, would not fail to pronounce in favor of the

former being the author.

I now call attention to a striking peculiarity in regard to the mention

of the Scotch. It is found in the same paragraph, and is as follows: "At

this very time, too, they [our British brethren] are permitting their

chief magistrate to send over not only soldiers of our _common blood_,

but _Scotch_ and foreign _mercenaries_, to invade and destroy us." The

word mercenaries is used once before in the Declaration.

The writer of the Declaration is speaking of the "British brethren,"

whom he designates as "of our common blood," but excludes the _Scotch_

therefrom. Now, we know Mr. Paine to have been an Englishman, and that

in Junius he often inveighed bitterly against the _Scotch_. The reader

will remember what he said of Mr. Wedderburn, on page 195 of this work.

Mansfield was a Scotchman, and this fact embitters Junius. He speaks of

the Scotch "cunning," "treachery," and "fawning sycophancy," of "the

characteristic prudence, the selfish nationality, the indefatigable

smile, the persevering assiduity, the everlasting profession of a

discreet and moderate resentment." It is quite evident that the writer

of the Declaration did not consider the Scotch as included in the term

"British brethren," whom he warned, as he called them "_mercenaries_;"

nor as having the like origin, nor as being of the same race as the term

"common blood" indicates. These are facts which speak out of the

Declaration, and as such Jefferson could not have written them, for two

reasons:

1. He had no antipathy to the Scotch, but rather a liking. This is

seen in the selection of his teachers, both by his parents and

himself. At nine years of age he studies Latin, Greek, and French

under the Rev. Mr. Douglas, a Scotchman, living with the minister

at the same time. At fourteen, and after his father's death, he

goes away to attend the school of Mr. Murray, a Scotchman; and

when he goes to college at Williamsburg, being then a young man

grown, he becomes strongly attached to one Professor Small, a

Scotchman. In short, Jefferson was peculiarly attached to the

Scotch, and why?

2. Because he was nearer related to them by "_common blood_" than

to the English. He was of Welsh origin--a perfect Celt, and not a

Briton. Now, the Cimbri of Wales and the Gael of Scotland are of

the same blood, build, habits, and instincts. Jefferson, on Scotch

soil, would have been taken, from personal appearance, to be a

red-headed Scotchman, and a fine specimen at that. From "_common

blood_," then, he could not consistently have written it, if he

knew any thing about his origin, or comprehended what he was

writing.

But there is an argument in this connection, which goes toward the whole

instrument, showing that Mr. Jefferson could not possibly be the author

of it. In a special commentary of Mr. Jefferson's on this phrase,

"_Scotch and foreign mercenaries_," he misquotes the Declaration, which

he would not be likely to do if he wrote it. In volume viii, page 500,

of his works, he says: "When the Declaration of Independence was under

the consideration of Congress, there were two or three _unlucky_

expressions in it, which gave offense to some members. The words,

'_Scotch and other foreign auxiliaries_' excited the ire of a gentleman

or two of that country." In the phrase "Scotch and other foreign

auxiliaries," Jefferson is trying to quote the words "Scotch and foreign

_mercenaries_." There is a vast difference between the two words

"auxiliaries" and "mercenaries." But the former expresses the real

spirit of Jefferson, the latter of Paine. Entirely different sentiments

produced the two expressions. The style, also, is changed from Paine's

to Jefferson's, by putting in the word "other." It is thus changed from

the concise to the diffuse. Mr. Jefferson says this expression was

"unlucky;" and it still proves to be, near the close of a century.

Now, the word mercenaries, which, with the author of the Declaration,

means prostituted hirelings, is used twice in the instrument, but

auxiliaries, which would mean honorable allies, _is not used once_. It

is not strange that he should forget, for the sentiment is foreign to

his own character; and I had written my argument, and given my reasons

above why Mr. Jefferson could not possibly be the author of that

sentiment, a month before I found that Jefferson had misquoted the

Declaration. I reason from first principles, which rest on established

facts, the _silent language of nature_, compared with which the vain

babblings of men amount to nothing. For example, John Adams says that he

and Mr. Jefferson met as a sub-committee to draft the Declaration; that

he urged Jefferson to do it; that afterward they both met, and conned it

over, and he does not remember of making or suggesting a single

alteration. This Mr. Jefferson denies. He says there was _no_

sub-committee; that Adams has forgotten about it; that he [Jefferson]

drew it, and turned to neither book nor pamphlet while writing it, and

that Adams _did_ correct it.--Jefferson's Works, vol. vii, pages 304,

305. Here are two men, one eighty and the other eighty-eight, on whose

words history rests, differing materially about historic facts. The one

who can not quote an important passage correctly, as to fact or language

which he says he wrote himself, accuses the other of _forgetting_ about

a committee _which never existed_. _The reader must judge._

"Be it so." Let us find the feeling which produced this expression. It

is peculiar to Junius. See Letters 18, 34, and 44, where the sentence is

used. And now let me remark, _that the reader may be led to a just

criticism, and not ramble after vague and unmeaning expressions_, the

spirit of the writer must be found, the prominent sentiment of the heart

must _be felt_, the cause must be seen which shall give utterance to the

expression, "Be it so." How trifling it appears to the cursory reader!

But let me arrest your attention. Junius uses the expression three

times, and every time in connection with the sentiment of _dignity_. So,

also, in the Declaration. It is only produced in him by a feeling, and

the peculiar and particular feeling of _dignity_, in antithesis to

contempt, littleness, disrepute, or meanness. I will now give the

context. In Let. 18 he says: "You seem to think the channel of a

pamphlet more respectable, and better suited to the _dignity_ of your

cause, than a newspaper. Be it so."

In Let. 34 he says: "We are told by the highest judicial authority that

Mr. Vaughan's offer to purchase the reversion of a patent place in

Jamaica amounts to a _high misdemeanor_. Be it so; and if he deserves

it, let him be punished. _But_ the learned judge might have had a fairer

opportunity of displaying the powers of his eloquence. Having delivered

himself with so much energy upon the criminal nature and dangerous

consequences of any attempt to corrupt a man in your _grace's station_,

what would he have said to the minister himself, to that very privy

counselor, to that first commissioner of the treasury, who does not wait

for, but impatiently solicits the touch of corruption, who employs the

meanest of his creatures in these honorable services, and forgetting the

genius and fidelity of the secretary, _descends to_ apply to his

housebuilder for assistance?"

In Let. 44 he says: "There may be instances of contempt and insult to

the House of Commons, which do not fall within my own exceptions, yet,

in regard to the _dignity_ of the house, ought not to pass unpunished.

Be it so."

In the Declaration, paragraph 25, we read: "We might have been a free

and a great people together, but a communication of grandeur and

freedom, it seems, is below their _dignity_. Be it so, since they will

have it."

So much for the trifling little trinity of words made up of six letters,

when traced to their mental origin. The reader will see an aura of

_dignity_ always darting out from the sentence when used by Mr. Paine.

It might never have this connection in the soul of any other man. This

closes paragraph 25, and I proceed to the conclusion.

Paragraph 26. Here the nation is named. "The United States of America,"

are declared "free and independent States." ... "And for the support of

this declaration we mutually pledge to each other our lives, our

fortunes, and our sacred honor." Compare Common Sense, conclusion, as

follows: "Wherefore, instead of gazing at each other with suspicious or

doubtful curiosity, let each of us _hold out to his neighbor the hearty

hand of friendship_, and unite in drawing a line which, like an act of

oblivion, shall bury in forgetfulness every former dissension. Let the

name of whig and tory be extinct; and let none other be heard among us

than those of _a good citizen, an open and resolute friend, and a

virtuous supporter of the_ RIGHTS OF MANKIND, _and of the_ FREE AND

INDEPENDENT STATES OF AMERICA."

I have now gone through with the Declaration, both in a general and

special manner. In the former regard I have found it to be the soul's

image of Mr. Paine, in style, _order_, and construction, and, in the

latter, a complete synopsis of Common Sense. I have fully and

conclusively shown that the substance of _every paragraph_ is found in

Common Sense, with much of the language the same, and also that many

special, mental peculiarities, common to Mr. Paine, and wanting in Mr.

Jefferson, are found there. Now, Mr. Jefferson never before, nor since,

ever produced any thing like it in any of these particulars. If we take

a hasty review, we will find that in as many particulars as the

Declaration has, in just so many there is a reproduction of Mr. Paine.

In no single fact does the Declaration disagree with Mr. Paine. It does

with Mr. Jefferson in very many. I have shown also that it would be

impossible for Mr. Jefferson to steal it, for he would have to steal the

very soul of Mr. Paine, and write under its influence. This is above

proof, it is demonstration.

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