CHAPTER XXI

THREE MODES, OR STYLES, OF COMPOSITION

I assert without any hesitation that there are many specific

differences of composition, and that they cannot be brought into a

comprehensive view or within a precise enumeration; I think too that,

as in personal appearance, so also in literary composition, each of us

has an individual character. I find not a bad illustration in painting.

As in that art all painters from life take the same pigments but mix

them in the most diverse ways, so in poetry and in prose, though we all

use the same words, we do not put them together in the same manner. I

hold, however, that the essentially different varieties of composition

are the three following only, to which any one who likes may assign the

appropriate names, when he has heard their characteristics and their

differences. For my own part, since I cannot find recognized names for

them, inasmuch as none exist, I call them by metaphorical terms—the

first _austere_, the second _smooth_ (or _florid_), the third

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εὔκρατον· ἣν ὅπως ποτὲ γίνεσθαι φαίην ἄν, ἔγωγε ἀπορῶ,

καὶ “δίχα μοι νόος ἀτρέκειαν εἰπεῖν,” εἴτε κατὰ στέρησιν

τῶν ἄκρων ἑκατέρας εἴτε κατὰ μῖξιν· οὐ γὰρ ῥᾴδιον

εἰκάσαι τὸ σαφές. μή ποτ’ οὖν κρεῖττον ᾖ λέγειν, ὅτι κατὰ

τὴν ἄνεσίν τε καὶ τὴν ἐπίτασιν τῶν ἐσχάτων ὅρων οἱ διὰ 5

μέσου γίνονται πολλοὶ πάνυ ὄντες· οὐ γὰρ ὥσπερ ἐν μουσικῇ

τὸ ἴσον ἀπέχει τῆς νήτης καὶ τῆς ὑπάτης ἡ μέση, τὸν αὐτὸν

τρόπον καὶ ἐν λόγοις ὁ μέσος χαρακτὴρ ἑκατέρου τῶν ἄκρων

ἴσον ἀφέστηκεν, ἀλλ’ ἔστι τῶν ἐν πλάτει θεωρουμένων ὡς

ἀγέλη τε καὶ σωρὸς καὶ ἄλλα πολλά. ἀλλὰ γὰρ οὐχ οὗτος 10

ὁ καιρὸς ἁρμόττων τῇ θεωρίᾳ ταύτῃ· λεκτέον δ’, ὥσπερ ὑπεθέμην,

καὶ περὶ τῶν χαρακτήρων οὐχ ἅπανθ’ ὅσ’ ἂν εἰπεῖν

ἔχοιμι (μακρῶν γὰρ ἄν μοι πάνυ δεήσειε λόγων), ἀλλ’ αὐτὰ

τὰ φανερώτατα.

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τῆς μὲν οὖν αὐστηρᾶς ἁρμονίας τοιόσδε ὁ χαρακτήρ· 15

ἐρείδεσθαι βούλεται τὰ ὀνόματα ἀσφαλῶς καὶ στάσεις λαμβάνειν

ἰσχυράς, ὥστ’ ἐκ περιφανείας ἕκαστον ὄνομα ὁρᾶσθαι,

ἀπέχειν τε ἀπ’ ἀλλήλων τὰ μόρια διαστάσεις ἀξιολόγους

αἰσθητοῖς χρόνοις διειργόμενα· τραχείαις τε χρῆσθαι πολλαχῇ

καὶ ἀντιτύποις ταῖς συμβολαῖς οὐδὲν αὐτῇ διαφέρει, οἷαι 20

γίνονται τῶν λογάδην συντιθεμένων ἐν οἰκοδομίαις λίθων αἱ

μὴ εὐγώνιοι καὶ μὴ συνεξεσμέναι βάσεις, ἀργαὶ δέ τινες καὶ

1 εὔκρατον EF: κοινὴν PMV   2 κατὰ E: κατὰ τὴν FPMV   3 μίξιν F   4

ἦι P: ἦν F || κατὰ τὴν FPMV: κατὰ E   5 τε καὶ τὴν PMV: τε καὶ F: καὶ

E   6 ἐν om. P   7 νήτης F: νεάτης PMV   8 χαρακτὴρ om. PV   9 ἴσως F

11 ὥσπερ F: ὡς PMV   12 καὶ F: om. PMV || ὅσα εἰπεῖν codd.: ἂν ins.

Schaeferus   13 ἄν μοι F: ἂν οἶμαι PMV || δεήσειε F: δεήσει P: δεήσειν

MV   17 περιφερίας F   18 διατάσεις F   20 οἷαι F: οἳ P: οἷον MV   21

αἱ μη F: αἱ μὴτε P, MV   22 καὶ μὴ F: μὴδε P || ἀργαὶ δὲ] γὰρ αἷδε F

1. Here (and in =246= 11) it is open to question whether κοινήν does

not fit the context better than εὔκρατον.

2. The passage of Pindar is quoted in Cic. _Ep. ad Att._ xiii. 38 “nunc

me iuva, mi Attice, consilio, ‘πότερον δίκᾳ τεῖχος ὕψιον,’ id est utrum

aperte hominem asperner et respuam, ‘ἢ σκολιαῖς ἀπάταις.’ ut enim

Pindaro sic ‘δίχα μοι νόος ἀτρέκειαν εἰπεῖν.’ omnino moribus meis illud

aptius, sed hoc fortasse temporibus.”

3. =κατὰ μῖξιν=: sc. τῶν ἄκρων. —Cp. _de Demosth._ c. 36 οἱ δὲ

συνθέντες ἀφ’ ἑκατέρας τὰ χρησιμώτατα τὴν μικτὴν καὶ μέσην ἐζήλωσαν

ἀγωγήν.

4. =μή ποτ’ ... ᾖ=: a favourite Platonic usage, e.g. _Gorgias_ 462 E

μὴ ἀγροικότερον ᾖ τὸ ἀληθὲς εἰπεῖν, _Apol._ 39 A ἀλλὰ μὴ οὐ τοῦτ’ ᾖ

χαλεπόν, ὦ ἄνδρες, θάνατον ἐκφυγεῖν, ἀλλὰ πολὺ χαλεπώτερον πονηρίαν.

5. The intermediate, or eclectic, styles are numerous and differ

greatly according as they relax or strain the extreme, or pronounced,

styles: cp. _de Demosth._ c. 37 init.

8. A point worth considering is how far this may seem to make for or

against the view that the Dionysian doctrine of styles is Peripatetic

in origin, being derived from Theophrastus.

10. =σωρός=: cp. σωρείτης (Lat. _acervalis_, Cic. _de Div._ ii. 4.

11), in the sense which it bears in Hor. _Ep._ ii. 1. 45-47 and Cic.

_Academ._ ii. 16. 49.

15. Batteux (p. 249) would illustrate the austere style from Rousseau’s

_Ode_ i. 2 (tirée du Psaume xviii.), “Les cieux instruisent la terre

| À révérer leur auteur; | Tout ce que leur globe enserre | Célèbre

un Dieu créateur,” etc.—With c. 22 of the _C.V._ should be compared,

throughout, cc. 38, 39 of the _de Demosth._

18. =ἀπέχειν τε= κτλ.: i.e. it (the austere style) aims at dividing its

clauses from one another by appreciable pauses.

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_harmoniously blended_. How I am to say the third is formed I am at a

loss to know—“my mind is too divided to utter truth”[173]: I cannot

see whether it is formed by eliminating the two extremes or by fusing

them—it is not easy to hit on any clear answer. Perhaps, then, it is

better to say that it is by relaxation and tension of the extremes

that the means, which are very numerous, arise. The case is not as in

music, where the middle note is equally removed from the lowest and the

highest. The middle style in writing does not in the same way stand

at an equal distance from each of the two extremes; “middle” is here

a vague general term, like “herd,” “heap,” and many others. But the

present is not the right time for the investigation of this particular

point. I must say what I undertook to say with regard to the several

styles—not all that I could (I should need a very long treatise to do

that), but just the most salient points.

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