THE CRAFT OF FICTION

I

To grasp the shadowy and fantasmal form of a book, to hold it fast, to

turn it over and survey it at leisure--that is the effort of a critic

of books, and it is perpetually defeated. Nothing, no power, will keep

a book steady and motionless before us, so that we may have time to

examine its shape and design. As quickly as we read, it melts and

shifts in the memory; even at the moment when the last page is turned,

a great part of the book, its finer detail, is already vague and

doubtful. A little later, after a few days or months, how much is

really left of it? A cluster of impressions, some clear points

emerging from a mist of uncertainty, this is all we can hope to

possess, generally speaking, in the name of a book. The experience of

reading it has left something behind, and these relics we call by the

book's name; but how can they be considered to give us the material

for judging and appraising the book? Nobody would venture to criticize

a building, a statue, a picture, with nothing before him but the

memory of a single glimpse caught in passing; yet the critic of

literature, on the whole, has to found his opinion upon little more.

Sometimes it is possible to return to the book and renew the

impression; to a few books we may come back again and again, till they

do in the end become familiar sights. But of the hundreds and hundreds

of books that a critic would wish to range in his memory, in order to

scrutinize and compare them reflectively, how many can he expect to

bring into a state of reasonable stability? Few indeed, at the best;

as for the others, he must be content with the shapeless, incoherent

visions that respond when the recollection of them is invoked.

It is scarcely to be wondered at if criticism is not very precise, not

very exact in the use of its terms, when it has to work at such a

disadvantage. Since we can never speak of a book with our eye on the

object, never handle a book--the real book, which is to the volume as

the symphony to the score--our phrases find nothing to check them,

immediately and unmistakably, while they are formed. Of a novel, for

instance, that I seem to know well, that I recall as an old

acquaintance, I may confidently begin to express an opinion; but when,

having expressed it, I would glance at the book once more, to be

satisfied that my judgement fits it, I can only turn to the image,

such as it is, that remains in a deceiving memory. The volume lies

before me, no doubt, and if it is merely a question of detail, a name

or a scene, I can find the page and verify my sentence. But I cannot

catch a momentary sight of the book, the book itself; I cannot look

up from my writing and sharpen my impression with a straight,

unhampered view of the author's work; to glance at a book, though the

phrase is so often in our mouths, is in fact an impossibility. The

form of a novel--and how often a critic uses that expression too--is

something that none of us, perhaps, has ever really contemplated. It

is revealed little by little, page by page, and it is withdrawn as

fast as it is revealed; as a whole, complete and perfect, it could

only exist in a more tenacious memory than most of us have to rely on.

Our critical faculty may be admirable; we may be thoroughly capable of

judging a book justly, if only we could watch it at ease. But fine

taste and keen perception are of no use to us if we cannot retain the

image of the book; and the image escapes and evades us like a cloud.

We are so well accustomed to this disability that I may seem to make

too much of it. In theory, certainly, the book is never present in the

critic's mind, never there in all its completeness; but enough of it,

in a commonly good memory, remains to be discussed and criticized--the

book as we remember it, the book that survives, is sufficient for

practical purposes. Such we assume to be the case, and our criticism

is very little troubled by the thought that it is only directed at

certain fragments of the book which the author wrote, the rest of it

having ceased to exist for us. There is plenty to say of a book, even

in this condition; for the hours of our actual exposure to it were

full and eventful, and after living for a time with people like

Clarissa Harlowe or Anna Karenina or Emma Bovary we have had a lasting

experience, though the novels in which they figured may fall away into

dimness and uncertainty. These women, with some of the scenes and

episodes of their history, remain with us as vividly as though we had

known them in life; and we still keep a general impression of their

setting and their fortunes, a background more or less undefined, but

associated with the thought of them. It all makes a very real and

solid possession of a kind, and we readily accept it as the book

itself. One does not need to remember the smaller detail of the story

to perceive the truth and force of the characters; and if a great deal

is forgotten, the most striking aspects of the case will linger in the

mind as we look back. Dramatic episodes, fine pieces of description,

above all the presence of many interesting and remarkable

people--while there is so much that instantly springs to light when

the book is mentioned, it seems perverse to say that the book is not

before us as we write of it. The real heart and substance of the book,

it might even be urged, stands out the more clearly for the obscurity

into which the less essential parts of it subside.

And true it is that for criticism of the author's genius, of the power

and quality of his imagination, the impressions we are able to save

from oblivion are material in plenty. Of Richardson and Tolstoy and

Flaubert we can say at once that their command of life, their grasp of

character, their knowledge of human affections and manners, had a

certain range and strength and depth; we can penetrate their minds and

detect the ideas that ruled there. To have lived with their creations

is to have lived with them as well; with so many hours of familiar

intercourse behind us we have learnt to know them, and it matters

little that at any particular moment our vision of their work is bound

to be imperfect. The forgotten detail has all contributed to our sense

of the genius which built up and elaborated the structure, and that

sense abides. Clarissa and Anna and Emma are positive facts, and so

are their authors; the criticism of fiction is securely founded upon

its object, if by fiction we mean something more, something other,

than the novel itself--if we mean its life-like effects, and the

imaginative gifts which they imply in the novelist. These we can

examine as long and as closely as we choose, for they persist and grow

more definite as we cultivate the remembrance of them. And to these,

accordingly, we find our criticism always tending; we discuss the

writer, we discuss the people in his book, we discuss the kind of life

he renders and his success in the rendering. But meanwhile the book,

the thing he made, lies imprisoned in the volume, and our glimpse of

it was too fleeting, it seems, to leave us with a lasting knowledge of

its form. We soon reach the end of so much as we have to say on that

subject.

Perhaps we should have more to say of it if we read the book

differently in the first place. I scarcely think we could any of us

claim that in reading a novel we deliberately watch the book itself,

rather than the scenes and figures it suggests, or that we seek to

construct an image of the book, page by page, while its form is

gradually exposed to us. We are much more inclined to forget, if we

can, that the book is an object of art, and to treat it as a piece of

the life around us; we fashion for ourselves, we objectify, the

elements in it that happen to strike us most keenly, such as an

effective scene or a brilliant character. These things take shape in

the mind of the reader; they are recreated and set up where the mind's

eye can rest on them. They become works of art, no doubt, in their

way, but they are not the book which the author offers us. That is a

larger and more complex form, one that it is much more difficult to

think of as a rounded thing. A novel, as we say, opens a new world to

the imagination; and it is pleasant to discover that sometimes, in a

few novels, it is a world which "creates an illusion"--so pleasant

that we are content to be lost in it. When that happens there is no

chance of our finding, perceiving, recreating, the form of the book.

So far from losing ourselves in the world of the novel, we must hold

it away from us, see it all in detachment, and use the whole of it to

make the image we seek, the book itself.

It is difficult to treat a large and stirring piece of fiction in

this way. The landscape opens out and surrounds us, and we proceed to

create what is in effect a novel within the novel which the author

wrote. When, for example, I try to consider closely the remnant that

exists in my memory of a book read and admired years ago--of such a

book as Clarissa Harlowe--I well understand that in reading it I was

unconsciously making a selection of my own, choosing a little of the

story here and there, to form a durable image, and that my selection

only included such things as I could easily work into shape. The girl

herself, first of all--if she, though so much of her story has faded

away, is still visibly present, it is because nothing is simpler than

to create for oneself the idea of a human being, a figure and a

character, from a series of glimpses and anecdotes. Creation of this

kind we practise every day; we are continually piecing together our

fragmentary evidence about the people around us and moulding their

images in thought. It is the way in which we make our world;

partially, imperfectly, very much at haphazard, but still perpetually,

everybody deals with his experience like an artist. And his talent,

such as it may be, for rounding and detaching his experience of a man

or a woman, so that the thing stands clear in his thought and takes

the light on every side--this can never lie idle, it is exercised

every hour of the day.

As soon as he begins to hear of Clarissa, therefore, on the first page

of Richardson's book, the shaping, objectifying mind of the reader is

at work on familiar material. It is so easy to construct the idea of

the exquisite creature, that she seems to step from the pages of her

own accord; I, as I read, am aware of nothing but that a new

acquaintance is gradually becoming better and better known to me. No

conscious effort is needed to make a recognizable woman of her, though

in fact I am fitting a multitude of small details together, as I

proceed to give her the body and mind that she presently possesses.

And so, too, with the lesser people in the book, and with their

surroundings; so, too, with the incidents that pass; a succession of

moments are visualized, are wrought into form by the reader, though

perhaps very few of them are so well made that they will last in

memory. If they soon disappear, the fault may be the writer's or the

reader's, Richardson's if he failed to describe them adequately, mine

if my manner of reading has not been sufficiently creative. In any

case the page that has been well read has the best chance of survival;

it was soundly fashioned, to start with, out of the material given me

by the writer, and at least it will resist the treachery of a poor

memory more resolutely than a page that I did not thoroughly recreate.

But still, as I say, the aspects of a book that for the most part we

detach and solidify are simply those which cost us no deliberate

pains. We bring to the reading of a book certain imaginative faculties

which are in use all the day long, faculties that enable us to

complete, in our minds, the people and the scenes which the novelist

describes--to give them dimensions, to see round them, to make them

"real." And these faculties, no doubt, when they are combined with a

trained taste, a sense of quality, seem to represent all that is

needed for the criticism of fiction. The novel (and in these pages I

speak only of the modern novel, the picture of life that we are in a

position to understand without the knowledge of a student or a

scholar)--the modern novel asks for no other equipment in its readers

than this common gift, used as instinctively as the power of

breathing, by which we turn the flat impressions of our senses into

solid shapes: this gift, and nothing else except that other, certainly

much less common, by which we discriminate between the thing that is

good of its kind and the thing that is bad. Such, I should think, is

very nearly the theory of our criticism in the matter of the art of

fiction. A novel is a picture of life, and life is well known to us;

let us first of all "realize" it, and then, using our taste, let us

judge whether it is true, vivid, convincing--like life, in fact.

The theory does indeed go a little further, we know. A novel is a

picture, a portrait, and we do not forget that there is more in a

portrait than the "likeness." Form, design, composition, are to be

sought in a novel, as in any other work of art; a novel is the better

for possessing them. That we must own, if fiction is an art at all;

and an art it must be, since a literal transcript of life is plainly

impossible. The laws of art, therefore, apply to this object of our

scrutiny, this novel, and it is the better, other things being equal,

for obeying them. And yet, is it so very much the better? Is it not

somehow true that fiction, among the arts, is a peculiar case,

unusually exempt from the rules that bind the rest? Does the fact that

a novel is well designed, well proportioned, really make a very great

difference in its power to please?--and let us answer honestly, for if

it does not, then it is pedantry to force these rules upon a novel. In

other arts it may be otherwise, and no doubt a lop-sided statue or an

ill-composed painting is a plain offence to the eye, however skilfully

it may copy life. The same thing is true of a novel, perhaps, if the

fault is very bad, very marked; yet it would be hard to say that even

so it is necessarily fatal, or that a novel cannot triumphantly live

down the worst aberrations of this kind. We know of novels which

everybody admits to be badly constructed, but which are so full of

life that it does not appear to matter. May we not conclude that form,

design, composition, have a rather different bearing upon the art of

fiction than any they may have elsewhere?

And, moreover, these expressions, applied to the viewless art of

literature, must fit it loosely and insecurely at best--does it not

seem so? They are words usurped from other arts, words that suppose a

visible and measurable object, painted or carved. For criticizing the

craft of fiction we have no other language than that which has been

devised for the material arts; and though we may feel that to talk of

the colours and values and perspective of a novel is natural and

legitimate, yet these are only metaphors, after all, that cannot be

closely pressed. A book starts a train of ideas in the head of the

reader, ideas which are massed and arranged on some kind of system;

but it is only by the help of fanciful analogies that we can treat the

mass as a definite object. Such phrases may give hints and suggestions

concerning the method of the novelist; the whole affair is too

nebulous for more. Even if a critic's memory were infallible, as it

can never be, still it would be impossible for him to give a really

scientific account of the structure of the simplest book, since in the

last resort he cannot lay his finger upon a single one of the effects

to which he refers. When two men stand looking at a picture, at least

their two lines of vision meet at a point upon the canvas; they may

dispute about it, but the picture stands still. And even then they

find that criticism has its difficulties, it would appear. The

literary critic, with nothing to point to but the mere volume in his

hand, must recognize that his wish to be precise, to be definite, to

be clear and exact in his statements, is hopelessly vain.

It is all undeniable, no doubt; from every side we make out that the

criticism of a book--not the people in the book, not the character of

the author, but the book--is impossible. We cannot remember the book,

and even if we could, we should still be unable to describe it in

literal and unequivocal terms. It cannot be done; and the only thing

to be said is that perhaps it can be approached, perhaps the book can

be seen, a little more closely in one way than in another. It is a

modest claim, and my own attempt to assert it will be still more

modest. A few familiar novels, possibly a dozen, by still fewer

writers--it will be enough if I can view this small handful with some

particularity. And I shall consider them, too, with no idea of

criticizing all their aspects, or even more than one. How they are

made is the only question I shall ask; and though indeed that is a

question which incidentally raises a good many others--questions of

the intention of the novelist, his choice of a subject, the manner of

his imagination, and so forth--these I shall follow no further than I

can help. And as for the few novels that I shall speak of, they will

be such as appear to illustrate most plainly the various elements of

the craft; one need not range widely to find them, nor does it matter

if the selection, from any other point of view, should seem arbitrary.

Many great names may be passed over, for it is not always the greatest

whose method of work gives the convenient example; on the other hand

the best example is always to be found among the great, and it is

essential to keep to their company.

But something may first be said of the reading of a novel. The

beginning of criticism is to read aright, in other words to get into

touch with the book as nearly as may be. It is a forlorn

enterprise--that is admitted; but there are degrees of unsuccess.

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