"November 15. 1813.
"Mr. Hodgson has looked over and _stopped_, or rather _pointed_,
this revise, which must be the one to print from. He has also made
some suggestions, with most of which I have complied, as he has
always, for these ten years, been a very sincere, and by no means
(at times) flattering intimate of mine. _He_ likes it (you will
think _fatteringly_, in this instance) better than The Giaour, but
doubts (and so do I) its being so popular; but, contrary to some
others, advises a separate publication. On this we can easily
decide. I confess I like the _double_ form better. Hodgson says, it
is _better versified_ than any of the others; which is odd, if
true, as it has cost me less time (though more hours at a time)
than any attempt I ever made.
"P.S. Do attend to the punctuation: I can't, for I don't know a
comma--at least where to place one.
"That Tory of a printer has omitted two lines of the opening, and
_perhaps more_, which were in the MS. Will you, pray, give him a
hint of accuracy? I have reinserted the _two_, but they were in the
manuscript, I can swear."
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