I shut my chamber doore, and come, lets goe.

PAGE =149=, ll. 100-4. My punctuation of these lines is a slight

modification of that indicated by _W_ and _JC_, which give the proper

division of the speeches. The use of inverted commas would make this

clearer, but Chambers' division seems to me (if I understand it) to

give the whole speech, from 'But to me' to 'So is the Pox', to Donne's

companion, which is to deprive Donne of his closing repartee. The

Grolier Club editor avoids this, but makes 'Why he hath travelled

long?' a part of Donne's speech beginning 'Our dull comedians want

him'. I divide the speeches thus:--

_Donne._ Why stoop'st thou so?

_Companion._ Why? he hath travail'd.

_Donne._ Long?

_Companion._ No: but to me (_Donne interpolates_ 'which

understand none') he doth seem to be

Perfect French and Italian.

_Donne._ So is the Pox.

The brackets round 'which understand none' I have taken from _Q_.

I had thought of inserting them before I came on this MS. Of course

brackets in old editions are often used where commas would be

sufficient, and one can build nothing on their insertion here in one

MS. But it seems to me that these words have no point unless regarded

as a sarcastic comment interpolated by Donne, perhaps _sotto voce_.

'To you, who understand neither French nor Italian, he may seem

perfect French and Italian--but to no one else.' Probably an eclectic

attire was the only evidence of travel observable in the person in

question. 'How oddly is he suited!' says Portia of her English wooer;

'I think he bought his doublet in Italy, his round hose in France, his

bonnet in Germany, and his behaviour everywhere.' Brackets are thus

used by Jonson to indicate a remark interjected _sotto voce_. See the

quotation from the _Poetaster_ in the note on _The Message_ (II. p.

37). Modern editors substitute for the brackets the direction 'Aside',

which is not in the Folio (1616).

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