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ll. 19-24. This stanza, carefully and correctly printed in the 1633

edition, which I have followed, was mangled in that of 1635, and

has remained in this condition, despite conjectural emendations, in

subsequent editions, including those of Grosart and Chambers. What

Donne says is obvious: 'Whatever Love dictated I wrote, but burned the

letters. When she wrote to me, and when (correctly resumed by 'that')

that favour made him (i.e. Love) fat, I said,' &c. The 1650-54

'Whate'er might him distaste,' &c. is obviously an attempt to put

right what has gone wrong. No reading but that of the 1633 edition

gives _any_ sense to 'that favour' and 'convey'd by this'.

ll. 25-7. _reclaim'd ... sport._ In _1633_ 'reclaim'd' became

'redeem'd', probably owing to the frequent misreading of 'cl' as 'd'.

The mistake here increases the probability that 'sports' is an error

for 'sport' or 'sporte'. It is doubtful if 'sports' was used as now.

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