Ovid admitted quadrisyllable endings more freely if they were proper

names. Of the twenty-one quadrisyllable verse-endings in the _Ex Ponto_,

six involve proper nouns: II ii 76 _Dalmatiae_, ix 42 _Alcinoi_, the

present passage, IV iii 54 _Anticyra_, viii 62 _Oechalia_, and ix 80

_Danuuium_. Professor E. Fantham points out to me that Ovid follows

Propertius' similar practice: 42 of the 166 quadrisyllable pentameter

endings in Propertius are proper names (Platnauer 17).

The fifteen other instances in the _Ex Ponto_ of quadrisyllabic

pentameter-endings are II ii 6 _perlegere_, ii 70 _imperium_, iii 18

_articulis_, v 26 _ingenium_, III i 166 _aspiciant_, IV v 24 _officio_,

vi 6 _alterius_, vi 14 _auxilium_, ix 48 _utilitas_, xiii 28 _imperii_,

xiii 46 _ingeniis_, xiv 4 _inuenies_, xiv 18 _ingenio_, xiv 56

_imposuit_, and xv 26 _auxilium_.

For Ovid's use of trisyllabic and pentasyllabic endings, see at ix 26

_tegeret_ (page 294) and iii 12 _amicitia_ (p 181).

=11. FERTILE PECTVS HABES.= Compare _Tr_ V xii 37-38 'denique non paruas

animo dat gloria uires, / et _fecunda_ facit _pectora_ laudis amor'.

=11. INTERQVE HELICONA COLENTES.= Poets are also described as being on

Parnassus at _Tr_ IV i 50, x 23 & x 120. Helicon is the goal of poets at

Hor _Ep_ II i 218 (cited at 36).

=12. PROVENIT= continues the agricultural metaphor of _fertile pectus_.

For _prouenire_ = 'grow', see _AA_ III 101-2 'ordior a cultu: cultis

bene Liber ab uuis / prouenit', _Fast_ IV 617 'largaque prouenit

cessatis messis in aruis', and _Nux_ 10; for the metaphorical sense see

_Am_ I iii 19-20 'te mihi materiem _felicem_ in carmina praebe-- /

_prouenient_ causa carmina digna sua' and _Her_ XV 13-14 'nec mihi

dispositis quae iungam carmina neruis / _proueniunt_'.

For _uberius ... prouenit_ compare Caesar _BG_ V 24 'eo anno frumentum in

Gallia propter siccitates _angustius prouenerat_'.

=13. MITTERE AD HVNC CARMEN.= Burman printed without comment MITTERE

CARMEN AD HVNC, the reading of Heinsius' _fragmentum Louaniense_. It

seems to be a mere normalization of the hyperbaton; the elimination of

the elision (_mittere ad_) may have been a factor as well.

=13. AD HVNC= indicates that Ovid cannot have addressed these words in the

first instance directly to Severus, but must here be recollecting his

earlier thoughts. I have therefore placed the line in quotation marks.

=15. NEC TAMEN.= 'This was the principal reason; a second reason, however,

was that ...'

=15. INGENIVM= = 'poetic talent', as often. Compare viii 66, xvi 2, _Tr_

III vii 47, _EP_ II ii 103, _EP_ II v 21 (quoted at 20 _uena

pauperiore_), _EP_ II v 26, and _EP_ III iv 11.

=15. RESPONDET= introduces the agricultural image of 18 'sed siccum

sterili uomere litus aro', for the word here means 'yield'. _OLD_

_respondeo_ 8c cites for the literal sense Virgil _G_ II 63-64 'truncis

oleae melius, propagine uites / respondent', Columella II 1 3 'humus ...

magno faenore ... colono respondet', Col III 3 4; for a transferred use

see Sen _Ep_ LXXXI 1 'non respondeant [_sc_ beneficia] potius quam non

dentur'.

=16. SICCVM ... LITVS ARO.= Proverbial for a useless activity. See Otto

_harena_ 4 and compare _Tr_ V iv 47-48 'plena tot ac tantis referetur

gratia factis, / nec sinet ille [Ovid] litus arare boues'.

_Sterili_ is transferred by hypallage from _litus_; _siccum_ serves no

purpose beyond providing a balancing epithet.

=17. VENAS EXCAECAT=, the reading of most codices, is obviously correct as

against the VENAS CVM CAECAT of _BCHL_. Ovid uses _excaecare_ again at

_Met_ XV 270-72 'hic fontes natura nouos emisit, at illic / clausit

... flumina prosiliunt aut _excaecata_ [_uar_ exsiccata] residunt'.

=17. IN VNDIS= is probably corrupt; if it is retained, from the context it

must mean 'in the water of springs' (Professor A. Dalzell). Williams

suggests 'in the case of water', marking the analogy with _pectora sic

mea sunt limo uitiata malorum_ in 19.

For _undis_ as a corrupt hexameter ending, compare _Met_ XV 276

'redditur Argolicis ingens Erasinus in aruis [_codd_: in undis _Sen_ NQ

_III 26 4_]', _Met_ VIII 162 'liquidus Phrygiis Maeandros in aruis

[_uar_ liquidis Phrygius ... in undis]', and _Met_ XIV 155 'sedibus

Euboicam Stygiis emergit in urbem [_uar_ sedibus euboicis stigiis

emersus ab undis]'.

The line seems to have passed without comment until Merkel's second

edition: '_in undis_ minus bene positum uidetur; temptabam _hiulcas,_

quod expressisset Statius Theb. VIIII 450 _hiulcis flumina uenis

Suggerit_ ['he (the river Asopos) opens his springs wide and adds his

streams']'. There seems no obvious reason, however, for Ovid to define

the springs as 'gaping'.

Madvig conjectured INVNDANS, the corruption of which would be easy; but

_uenas_ seems more in need of a modifier than _limus_--Professor R. J.

Tarrant suggests APERTAS or AQVARVM, Professor A. Dalzell IN ARVIS.

Professor Tarrant also suggests to me that _in undis_ could well have

originated as a gloss on _uenas_.

=18. LAESAQVE.= There seems no reason to replace this with Merkel's

LAPSAQVE ('flowing back'?), which even seems to contradict the sense of

_resistit_.

The same sense of _laesus_ at _Am_ III vii 32 'deficiunt laesi carmine

['spell'] fontis aquae'.

=20. VENA PAVPERIORE.= The same image of Ovid's poetic talent at _Tr_ III

xiv 33-34 'ingenium fregere meum mala, cuius et ante / fons infecundus

_paruaque uena_ fuit' and _EP_ II v 21-22 'ingenioque meo, _uena_ quod

_paupere_ manat, / plaudis, et e riuo flumina magna facis'.

=23. DA VENIAM FASSO.= As a poet himself, Severus would be particularly

shocked at Ovid's admission he has virtually ceased to write poetry.

Similar phrasing at III ix 45-46 'confesso ignoscite, docti: / uilior

est operis fama salute mea'.

=23. FRENA REMISI.= 'I have let go of the reins' = 'I have stopped writing

poetry'; for the sense, compare _Aen_ VII 599-600 (of Latinus) 'nec

plura locutus / saepsit se tectis rerumque reliquit habenas'.

The metaphor of the poet as driver is found as early as Bacchylides (V

176-78) and Pindar (_Ol_ VI 22 ff). A full list of Greek and Latin

passages is included in Henderson's note on _RA_ 397-98; the image is

particularly frequent in Roman didactic poetry, being found even at

Columella X 215-16. See as well Kenney _Nequitiae Poeta_ 206. In Ovid

the image is found at _AA_ I 39-40 & 264, II 426, III 467-68 & 809-10,

_RA_ 397-98, _Fast_ I 25-26, II 360, IV 10, and VI 586. The only

instances I have found that are not from Ovid's didactic verse are the

present passage and xii 23-24 'tu bonus hortator, tu duxque comesque

fuisti, / cum regerem tenera frena nouella manu'.

=24. DVCITVR.= 'Is formed, written'. The same sense at _Met_ I 649 (of Io)

'_littera_ ... quam pes in puluere _duxit_' and _Met_ X 215-16 'AI AI /

flos habet inscriptum, funestaque _littera ducta_ est'.

=25. IMPETVS ILLE SACER.= 'The famous divine impulse'. Similar phrasing at

_Fast_ VI 5-6 'est deus in nobis; agitante calescimus illo: / impetus

hic sacrae semina mentis habet'.

=25. VATVM PECTORA NVTRIT.= _Nutrit_ here seems to mean 'sustain'. Its

usual transferred sense is 'cause to grow', as at III iv 26 (the only

other passage I have found where the verb is used of poetry) and Hor _C_

IV iv 26.

=27. VIX VENIT AD PARTES ... MVSA.= 'My Muse with difficulty performs her

functions'. _Partes_ in the sense of 'theatrical role' (Ter _Ph_ 27)

early acquired the extended sense of 'role', 'function', or 'duty'.

Burman cites as parallels _Am_ I viii 87 'seruus et _ad partes_ sollers

ancilla parentur' and _Nux_ 68; compare as well _AA_ II 546 'cum, tener,

_ad partes_ tu quoque, somne, uenis' and _EP_ III i 41-42 'utque iuuent

alii, tu debes uincere amicos, / uxor, et _ad partes_ prima uenire

tuas'.

=27. SVMPTAE ... TABELLAE.= Compare _Met_ IX 523-25 'scribit damnatque

_tabellas_ ... inque uicem _sumptas_ ponit positasque _resumit_'.

=29. NE DICAM.= I have found no other instance of the expression in verse,

but it is common in Cicero (Kühner-Stegmann II i 825).

=30. NVMERIS NECTERE VERBA.= 'Bind words to metre'. I take _numeris_ as a

dative; no close parallel presents itself, but compare _Aen_ IV 239-40

'pedibus talaria nectit / aurea'.

=33. NVMEROSOS ... GESTVS.= Compare _Am_ II iv 29 'illa placet _gestu

numerosaque bracchia_ ducit', _AA_ II 305 '_bracchia_ saltantis, uocem

mirare canentis', and Prop II xxii 5-6 'siue aliquis molli diducit

candida _gestu_ / bracchia, seu uarios incinit ore modos'. Heinsius

thought GRESSVS (_I1PF3ul_) possible as well, citing Varro _LL_ IX 5

'_pedes_ male _ponere_ atque imitari uatias ['bow-legged men']

coeperit', Martianus Capella IX 909 'licet pulchris rosea numeris ac

libratis _passibus_ moueretur', and Maximianus (6th century) _El_ III 27

'suspensos ponere _gressus_'. But the strong manuscript authority for

_gestus_ and the parallels in Ovid mark it as clearly preferable to

_gressus_.

=33. PONERE.= The verb seems strange, but Burman cited in its support Val

Max VIII vii 7 'Roscius ... nullum umquam spectante populo _gestum_, nisi

quem domi meditatus fuerat, _ponere_ [_codd_: promere _E. Schulze_]

ausus est'.

=35-36. LAVDATAQVE VIRTVS / CRESCIT.= For this commonplace of ancient

literature see _Otto_ _ars_ 3 and compare _RA_ 393 'nam iuuat et studium

famae mihi creuit honore', _Tr_ V xii 37-38 'denique non paruas animo

dat gloria uires, / et fecunda facit pectora laudis amor', _EP_ III ix

21 'scribentem iuuat ipse fauor minuitque laborem', Prop IV x 3, and Cic

_Tusc_ I 4.

=36. IMMENSVM GLORIA CALCAR HABET.= The same metaphor at _Tr_ V i 75-76

'denique nulla mihi captatur gloria, quaeque / ingeniis _stimulos

subdere_ fama solet', _EP_ I v 57-58 'gloria uos _acuat_; uos, ut

recitata probentur / carmina, Pieriis inuigilate choris', and Hor _Ep_

II i 217-18 'uatibus addere _calcar_ / ut studio maiore petant Helicona

uirentem'.

_Immensum_ seems rather strange; I have found no good parallel for it.

=37. HIC MEA CVI RECITEM ... CARMINA.= A constant complaint of Ovid in

exile. Compare _Tr_ III xiv 39-40 'nullus in hac terra, recitem si

carmina, cuius / intellecturis auribus utar, adest', _Tr_ IV i 89-90,

and _Tr_ V xii 53 'non liber hic ullus, non qui mihi commodet aurem'.

Perhaps it is significant that Ovid does not complain in the present

passage that he has no books available: certainly he must have had a

substantial library at hand when he composed the _Ibis_.

=38. BARBARVS HISTER.= The same phrase in the same position (leaving space

for the disyllable) at _EP_ III iii 26 'et coit astrictis _barbarus

Hister_ aquis'.

_Hister_ was the name of the lower course of the Danube (Pliny _NH_ IV

79). Ovid uses the metrically convenient _Hister_ fifteen times in the

_Ex Ponto_, as against two instances only of _Danuuius_ (IV ix 80 & x

58).

=38. OBIT= _Damsté_ HABET _codd_. In support of _obit_ Damsté cited x 22

'gentibus obliqua quas _obit_ Hister aqua' (_Mnemosyne_ XLVI 32). As

Professor R. J. Tarrant points out, the only meaning that can be

attached to _quasque alias gentes barbarus Hister habet_ is 'the other

people that live in the Danube'; he compares _Her_ VI 135-36 'prodidit

illa patrem; rapui de clade Thoanta. / deseruit Colchos; me mea Lemnos

habet' and _Aen_ VI 362 (Palinurus speaking) 'nunc me fluctus habet'.

_EP_ III ii 43-44 'nos ... quos procul a uobis Pontus et [_uar_ barbarus]

Hister habet', cited by Lenz in support of _habet_, is not a good

parallel in view of the different subject (_Pontus et Hister_ instead of

_Hister_ alone).

Lenz cited _Tr_ II 230 'bellaque pro magno Caesare Caesar obit' for a

variant _habet_; Professor Tarrant cites another instance of the

corruption at _Met_ I 551-52 'pes modo tam uelox pigris radicibus

haeret, / ora cacumen obit'.

=39. MATERIA= = 'means' (_OLD materia_ 8).

=41. NEC VINVM NEC ME TENET ALEA FALLAX.= The same statement at _EP_ I v

45-46 'nec iuuat in lucem nimio marcescere uino, / nec tenet incertas

alea blanda manus'. For Ovid's temperance, compare _EP_ I x 30 'scis

mihi quam solae paene bibantur aquae'.

_Me tenet_ in the present passage should perhaps be translated 'holds my

attention' (_OLD teneo_ 22) rather than 'attracts' (Wheeler).

=41. VINVM.= For wine as a diversion from sorrow, compare Tib I ii 1 'Adde

merum uinoque nouos compesce dolores' (with Smith's note) and Tib I v 37

'saepe ego temptaui curas depellere uino'.

=42. TACITVM TEMPVS.= Similar phrases at _AA_ II 670 'iam ueniet _tacito_

curua senecta pede', _Fast_ VI 771 '_tacitis_ ... senescimus annis', _Tr_

III vii 35-36 'senectus / quae _strepitus passu non faciente_ uenit',

_Tr_ IV vi 17 '_tacito_ pede lapsa uetustas' and _Tr_ IV x 27 '_tacito_

passu labentibus annis'.

=43. QVOD CVPEREM.= At _EP_ I viii 39-62 Ovid, having detailed the urban

pleasures he has lost, speaks of his agricultural pursuits in Italy, and

laments that this diversion is not available to him at Tomis. The two

passages add personal meaning to his description at _Met_ XIV 623-34 of

Pomona's gardening and his prescription at _RA_ 169-98 of agriculture as

a diversion from an unhappy love-affair.

=43. SI PER FERA BELLA LICERET.= Compare _EP_ II vii 69-70 'tempus in

agrorum cultu consumere dulce est: / non patitur uerti barbarus hostis

humum' and _EP_ III viii 6 'hostis ab agricola uix sinit illa [_sc_

loca] fodi'. At _Tr_ III x 57-66 Ovid gives a vivid description of what

could happen to the farmers of Tomis in a raid.

=44. NOVATA= = 'restored to fertility through ploughing'. Ovid more

commonly uses _renouare_, as at _Tr_ V xii 23-24 'fertilis, assiduo si

non renouetur aratro, / nil nisi cum spinis gramen habebit ager', _Am_ I

iii 9, _Met_ I 110 & XV 125, _Fast_ I 159, and _Tr_ IV vi 13.

=45. RESTANT= is not strictly logical, but a similar attraction of number

is confirmed by metre at _Tr_ I ii 1 'Di maris et caeli--quid enim nisi

uota _supersunt_?'; RESTAT (_IP_) must therefore be rejected.

Similar confusions occur in the manuscripts at _Met_ XIV 396 'nec

quicquam antiqui [_Berolinensis Heinsii_: antiquum _codd plerique_] Pico

nisi nomina _restant_' and _Tr_ IV x 85 'si tamen extinctis aliquid nisi

nomina _restant_'.

=47. TV, CVI BIBITVR FELICIVS AONIVS FONS.= For the image of the poet

drinking from Hippocrene see Prop III iii 5-6 'paruaque tam magnis

admoram fontibus ora, / unde pater sitiens Ennius ante bibit'. Both here

and at II x 25 Propertius speaks of Hippocrene as the spring of epic

poetry specifically.

=47. FELICIVS.= 'With happier result'; compare _Ibis_ 559 'nec tibi, si

quid amas, felicius Haemone [=_quam Haemoni_] cedat'.

=47. AONIVS FONS.= Platnauer (13) cites only four instances from the

elegiac poets of hexameters ending in monosyllables: Prop II xxv 17

'amor, qui', _Am_ II ix 47 'Cupido, est', the present passage, and _EP_

IV ix 101 'quibus nos'. Ehwald and Levy compare _Met_ V 573 'quae tibi

causa fugae, cur sis, Arethusa, sacer _fons_'. The coincidence suggests

that in both passages Ovid was recalling a line-ending from an earlier

poet. Alternatively, Professor E. Fantham suggests to me that Ovid may

here have deliberately created an awkward line-ending so as to mock

himself and bear out his claim of waning inspiration.

=47-50.= Ovid returns to the subject of his poem's opening, Severus'

poetry.

=48. VTILITER ... CEDIT.= Similar phrasing at _EP_ II vii 19 '[iam liquet

...] obseruare deos ne quid mihi _cedat amice_'.

=49. MERITO.= 'With justification'; Severus' previous service to the Muses

has brought him fame and not, as in Ovid's case, disaster.

=50. HVC ALIQVOD CVRAE MITTE RECENTIS OPVS.= A similar request at _EP_ III

v 29-30 (to Cotta Maximus) 'quod licet, ut uidear tecum magis esse,

legenda [_Burman_: legendo _uel_ loquendo _codd_] / saepe precor studii

pignora mitte tui'.

=50. CVRAE= = 'poetic toil', as at _Tr_ II 11-12 'hoc pretium _curae_

[_fragmentum Treuirense (saec x)_: uitae _codd plerique_] uigilatorumque

laborum / cepimus', _EP_ I v 61 'cur ego sollicita poliam mea carmina

_cura_?', and _EP_ III ix 29. At xvi 39 and _Tr_ II 1 the word means

'product of poetic toil'.

III. To An Unfaithful Friend

By the time Ovid wrote this poem, the letter of reproach was a genre

familiar to him: each book of the _Tristia_ (with the obvious exception

of II) contains such a poem (I viii; III xi; IV ix; V viii), and in the

_Ibis_ Ovid had, by the extended treatment of a number of standard

topics within the subject, created a poem of over six hundred lines.

Ovid begins the poem by stating that he has heard about his friend's

faithlessness; he asks what possible excuse there might be for this

behaviour (1-28). He then warns his friend that Fortune is changeable,

and gives four examples of famous men who fell from prosperity (29-48).

He ends the poem by stating once again that Fortune is undependable, and

gives his own catastrophe as an instance; his friend should remember

this, and moderate his behaviour accordingly (49-58).

The poem has points of contact with the earlier poems of reproach. _Tr_

I viii is addressed to a friend who failed to visit Ovid after his

disaster: he can scarcely believe his friend is human. In _Tr_ III xi,

Ovid asks his enemy why through his actions he makes his punishment even

worse. _Tr_ IV ix is a warning that if Ovid's enemy does not cease

attacking him, he will through his poetry make his enemy's name infamous

throughout the world. _Tr_ V viii, the poem closest in theme to the

present one, is a warning to his enemy that Fortune is changeable and

Augustus merciful, so he and Ovid might one day change situations.

The _Ibis_, being primarily a catalogue of literary curses, stands

somewhat apart from the other poems of reproach in structure as in size;

yet the opening of the poem, in which Ovid describes his enemy's conduct

and the ways he might respond, offers a number of parallels to the

present poem.

=1. CONQVERAR AN TACEAM.= Kenney (_Nequitiae Poeta_ 204-5), commenting on

_AA_ I 739 'conquerar an moneam', cites other instances of the same

rhetorical device at _Aen_ III 39 ' eloquar an sileam?' and _Met_ IX 147

'conquerar an sileam?', as well as the present passage.

=1. CONQVERAR.= The choice of verb is significant: this poem is a

rhetorical _conquestio_ transferred to verse. Kenney cites Cicero's

definition of _conquestio_ at _Inu_ I 106: 'conquestio est oratio

auditorum misericordiam captans ... id locis communibus efficere

oportebit, per quos Fortunae uis in omnes et hominum infirmitas

ostenditur; qua oratione ... animus hominum ... ad misericordiam

comparatur, cum in alieno malo suam infirmitatem considerabit'.

=1. PONAM SINE NOMINE CRIMEN.= 'Shall I put my accusation in my poem

without naming you?'. The same sense of _ponere_ at _Tr_ I v 7

'_positis_ pro nomine signis', _Tr_ IV iv 7, and _EP_ III vi 1-2 'Naso

suo (_posuit_ nomen quam paene!) sodali / mittit ab Euxinis hoc breue

carmen aquis'.

=2. QVI SIS.= The boundary between adjectival _qui_ and pronominal _quis_

in Latin was not absolute; and just as one finds such forms as _quis

clamor_ (_Met_ III 632), so it seems to have been Latin practice to use

_qui_ before forms of _esse_ in indirect discourse, perhaps in order to

avoid a double _s_-sound. Some instances of this from verse are _Ecl_ I

18 'iste deus _qui sit_ da, Tityre, nobis', _Ecl_ II 19 'nec _qui sim_

quaeris, Alexi', _Aen_ III 608-9 '_qui sit_ fari ... hortamur', _Met_ XIV

841 'mihi nec _quae sis_ dicere promptum est', _Met_ XV 595 'is _qui

sit_ signo, non nomine dicam', _Fast_ V 191 'ipse doce _quae sis_',

_Ibis_ 52 'teque breui _qui sis_ dissimulare sinam', _Ibis_ 61 '_qui

sis_ nondum quaerentibus edo', and _EP_ III vi 57 'teque tegam, _qui

sis_'. In some of these passages _quis_ is found as a variant reading;

given the ease of corruption, the rule should perhaps be made canonical,

and such passages as _Met_ I 248-49 '_quis sit_ laturus in aras / tura'

supplied with forms of _qui_ even when, as in this instance, there is

only weak manuscript support. (Professor R. J. Tarrant prefers, however,

to retain _quis_ at _Met_ I 248, seeing a difference between expressions

of identity [_qui sis ... dicam_] and of description [_sit_ and _laturus_

go closely together]).

The use of _qui_ seems to have extended to past subjunctives of _esse_

as well as present: compare _Met_ XI 719 'qui [_uar_ quis] foret

ignorans'. For discussions see Löfstedt II 79-96 and Shackleton Bailey

on _Att_ III x 2 'possum obliuisci _qui fuerim_, non sentire qui sim?'.

In preclassical Latin _qui_ is found for _quis_ even in direct

questions: _OLD qui_ A4a cites Pl _Capt_ 833 'qui uocat', Ter _Ph_ 990

'qui nominat me', and Scipio minor V 19 Malcovati3 'qui spondet mille

nummum'. The usage must have continued in spoken Latin, for it is found

at Vitruvius VII 5 6 and Petronius 62 8.

=3. NOMINE NON VTAR, NE COMMENDERE QVERELA.= An interesting indication of

the confidence Ovid felt in his poetry. In his earlier poems of

reproach, Ovid had represented his not naming the person as an act of

forbearance (_Tr_ IV ix 1-4; _Ibis_ 51-54).

=3. COMMENDERE QVERELA.= Oxymoron.

=5. DVM MEA PVPPIS ERAT VALIDA FVNDATA CARINA.= The common ancient

metaphor of shipwreck also used of Ovid's exile at _Tr_ I i 85-86, _Tr_

II 99-102, _Tr_ III iv 15-16 'dum tecum uixi, dum me leuis aura ferebat,

/ haec mea per placidas cumba cucurrit aquas', _Tr_ V xii 50, and _EP_

II iii 25-28.

=7. CONTRAXIT VVLTVM.= See at i 5 _trahis uultus_ (p 149).

=9-10= form a tricolon, where each phrase represents the same action in

progressively more specific terms: (1) 'dissimulas etiam' (2) 'nec me

uis nosse uideri' (3) 'quisque sit audito nomine Naso rogas'.

=9. DISSIMVLAS.= The same word in similar contexts at _Tr_ I i 62

'dissimulare uelis, te liquet esse meum', _Tr_ III vi 2, _Tr_ IV iii 54,

_Tr_ IV iv 28, and _EP_ I ii 146.

=9. NEC ME VIS NOSSE VIDERI.= 'You don't want others to think you know

me'. Similar thought and language at _Tr_ IV iii 51 'me miserum si turpe

putas mihi nupta uideri!' and _EP_ II iii 29-30 'cumque alii _nolint_

etiam _me nosse uideri_, / uix duo proiecto tresue tulistis opem'.

=10. QVISQVE SIT. QVIQVE SIT= (_HacP_) could be defended, _sit_

determining the form _qui_, even with the intervening enclitic, but

given the prevalence of relative _quique_ at line-beginnings in Ovid

(compare xvi 9, 11, 15, 19 & 23) it seems better to take it as a trivial

error.

=11, 13, 15, 17. ILLE EGO.= The same idiom to stir someone's memory at

_Fast_ III 505-6 '_illa ego sum_ cui tu solitus promittere caelum: / ei

mihi, pro caelo qualia dona fero' and _EP_ I ii 129-32 '_ille ego sum_

qui te colui, quem festa solebat / inter conuiuas mensa uidere tuos: /

_ille ego qui_ duxi uestros Hymenaeon ad ignes, / et cecini fausto

carmina digna toro'. R. G. Austin, discussing the spurious proem to the

_Aeneid_ (_CQ_ LX, n.s. XVIII [1968] 110-11), cites _Tr_ V vii 55-56

'_ille ego_ Romanus uates--ignoscite, Musae!-- / Sarmatico cogor plurima

more loqui', _Met_ I 757-58 '_ille ego_ liber, / ille ferox tacui',

Statius _Sil_ V v 38 & _Theb_ IX 434, and Silius XI 177-82: 'It will be

noticed ... that all these examples represent the new situation as a fall

from grace'.

=12. AMICITIA.= Ovid allows pentasyllabic words to end the pentameter only

in the poetry of exile (Platnauer 17). There are eight such words in the

_Tristia_, and four in the _Ex Ponto_: I ii 68 _patrocinium_, II ix 20

_Ericthonius_, this passage, and xiii 44 _amicitiae_ (Platnauer 17;

Riese vii). This distribution contrasts with Ovid's increasing fondness

in the _Ex Ponto_ for trisyllabic and quadrisyllabic endings, for which

see at ix 26 _tegeret_ and ii 10 _Alcinoo_.

The later _Heroides_ have two pentasyllabic pentameter-endings, XVI 290

_pudicitiae_ and XVII 16 _superciliis_.

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