THE AUTHOR OF "SAUL."[A]

We are not one of those who believe that the manifestation of any

native, vigorous faculty of the mind is dependent upon circumstances. It

is true that education, in its largest sense, modifies development; but

it cannot, to any serious extent, add to, or take from, the power to be

developed. In the lack of encouragement and contemporary appreciation,

certain of the finer faculties may not give forth their full and perfect

fragrance; but the rose is always seen to be a rose, though never a bud

come to flower. The "mute, inglorious Milton" is a pleasant poetic

fiction. Against the "hands that the rod of empire _might_ have swayed"

we have nothing to object, knowing to what sort of hands the said rod

has so often been intrusted.

John Howard Payne once read to us--and it was something of an

infliction--a long manuscript on "The Neglected Geniuses of America,"--a

work which only death, we suspect, prevented him from giving to the

world. There was not one name in the list which had ever before reached

our ears. Nicholas Blauvelt and William Phillips and a number of other

utterly forgotten rhymesters were described and eulogized at length, the

quoted specimens of their poetry proving all the while their admirable

right to the oblivion which Mr. Payne deprecated. They were men of

culture, some of them wealthy, and we could detect no lack of

opportunity in the story of their lives. Had they been mechanics, they

would have planed boards and laid bricks from youth to age. The Ayrshire

ploughman and the Bedford tinker were made of other stuff. Our inference

then was, and still is, that unacknowledged (or at least unmanifested)

genius is no genius at all, and that the lack of sympathy which many

young authors so bitterly lament is a necessary test of their fitness

for their assumed vocation.

Gerald Massey is one of the most recent instances of the certainty with

which a poetic faculty by no means of the highest order will enforce its

own development, under seemingly fatal discouragements. The author of

"Saul" is a better illustration of the same fact; for, although, in our

ignorance of the circumstances of his early life, we are unable to

affirm what particular difficulties he had to encounter, we know how

long he was obliged to wait for the first word of recognition, and to

what heights he aspired in the course of many long and solitary years.

The existence of "Saul" was first made known to the world by an article

in the "North British Review," in the year 1858, when the author had

already attained his forty-second year. The fact that the work was

published in Montreal called some attention to it on this side of the

Atlantic, and a few critical notices appeared in our literary

periodicals. It is still, however, comparatively unknown; and those into

whose hands it may have fallen are, doubtless, ignorant of the author's

name and history. An outline of the latter, so far as we have been able

to ascertain its features, will help the reader to a more intelligent

judgment, when we come to discuss the author's claim to a place in

literature.

Charles Heavysege was born in Liverpool, England, in the year 1816. We

know nothing in regard to his parents, except that they were poor, yet

able to send their son to an ordinary school. His passion for reading,

especially such the poetry as fell into his hands, showed itself while

he was yet a child. Milton seems to have been the first author who made

a profound impression upon his mind; but it is also reported that the

schoolmaster once indignantly snatched Gray's "Elegy" from his hand,

because he so frequently selected that poem for his reading-lesson.

Somewhat later, he saw "Macbeth" performed, and was immediately seized

with the ambition to become an actor,--a profession for which few

persons could be less qualified. The impression produced by this

tragedy, combined with the strict religious training which he appears to

have received, undoubtedly fixed the character and manner of his

subsequent literary efforts.

There are but few other facts of his life which we can state with

certainty. His chances of education were evidently very scanty, for he

must have left school while yet a boy, in order to learn his

trade,--that of a machinist. He had thenceforth little time and less

opportunity for literary culture. His reading was desultory, and the

poetic faculty, expending itself on whatever subjects came to hand,

produced great quantities of manuscripts, which were destroyed almost as

soon as written. The idea of publishing them does not seem to have

presented itself to his mind. Either his life must have been devoid of

every form of intellectual sympathy, or there was some external

impediment formidable enough to keep down that ambition which always

co-exists with the creative power.

In the year 1843 he married, and in 1853 emigrated to Canada, and

settled in Montreal. Even here his literary labor was at first performed

in secrecy; he was nearly forty years old before a line from his pen

appeared in type. He found employment in a machine-shop, and it was only

very gradually--probably after much doubt and hesitation--that he came

to the determination to subject his private creations to the ordeal of

print. His first venture was a poem in blank verse, the title of which

we have been unable to ascertain. A few copies were printed anonymously

and distributed among personal friends. It was a premature birth, which

never knew a moment's life, and the father of it would now be the last

person to attempt a resuscitation.

Soon afterwards appeared--also anonymously--a little pamphlet,

containing fifty "so-called" sonnets. They are, in reality, fragmentary

poems of fourteen lines each, bound to no metre or order of rhyme. In

spite of occasional crudities of expression, the ideas are always poetic

and elevated, and there are many vigorous couplets and quatrains. They

do not, however, furnish any evidence of sustained power, and the

reader, who should peruse them as the only productions of the author,

would be far from inferring the latter's possession of that lofty epical

utterance which he exhibits in "Saul" and "Jephthah's Daughter."

We cannot learn that this second attempt to obtain a hearing was

successful, so far as any public notice of the pamphlet is concerned;

but it seems, at least, to have procured for Mr. Heavysege the first

private recognition of his poetic abilities which he had ever received,

and thereby given him courage for a more ambitious venture. "Saul," as

an epical subject, must have haunted his mind for years. The greater

portion of it, indeed, had been written before he had become familiar

with the idea of publication; and even after the completion of the work,

we can imagine the sacrifices which must have delayed its appearance in

print. For a hard-working mechanic, in straitened circumstances, courage

of another kind was required. It is no slight expense to produce an

octavo volume of three hundred and thirty pages; there must have been

much anxious self-consultation, a great call for patience, fortitude,

and hope, with who may know what doubts and despondencies, before, in

1857 "Saul" was given to the world.

Nothing could have been more depressing than its reception, if, indeed,

the term "reception" can be applied to complete indifference. A country

like Canada, possessing no nationality, and looking across the Atlantic,

not only for its political rule, but also (until very recently, at

least) for its opinions, tastes, and habits, is especially unfavorable

to the growth of an independent literature. Although there are many men

of learning and culture among the residents of Montreal, they do not

form a class to whom a native author could look for encouragement or

appreciation sufficient to stamp him as successful. The reading public

there accept the decrees of England and the United States, and they did

not detect the merits of "Saul," until the discovery had first been made

in those countries.

Several months had elapsed since the publication of the volume; it

seemed to be already forgotten, when the notice to which we have

referred appeared in the "North British Review." The author had sent a

copy to Mr. Hawthorne, then residing in Liverpool, and that gentleman,

being on friendly terms with some of the writers for the "North

British," procured the insertion of an appreciative review of the poem.

Up to that time, we believe, no favorable notice of the work had

appeared in Canada. The little circulation it obtained was chiefly among

the American residents. A few copies found their way across the border,

and some of our authors (among whom we may mention Mr. Emerson and Mr.

Longfellow) were the first to recognize the genius of the poet. With

this double indorsement, his fellow-townsmen hastened to make amends for

their neglect. They could not be expected to give any very enthusiastic

welcome, nor was their patronage extensive enough to confer more than

moderate success; but the remaining copies of the first small edition

were sold, and a second edition--which has not yet been

exhausted--issued in 1859.

In February, 1860, we happened to visit Montreal. At that time we had

never read the poem, and the bare fact of its existence had almost faded

from memory, when it was recalled by an American resident who was

acquainted with Mr. Heavysege, and whose account of his patience, his

quiet energy, and serene faith in his poetic calling strongly interested

us. It was but a few hours before our departure; there was a furious

snow-storm; yet the gentleman ordered a sleigh, and we drove at once to

a large machine-shop, in the outskirts of the city. Here, amid the noise

of hammers, saws, and rasps, in a great grimy hall smelling of oil and

iron-dust, we found the poet at his work-bench. A small, slender man,

with a thin, sensitive face, bright blonde hair, and eyes of that

peculiar blue which burns warm, instead of cold, under excitement,--in

the few minutes of our interview the picture was fixed, and remains so.

His manner was quiet, natural, and unassuming: he received us with the

simple good-breeding which a gentleman always possesses, whether we find

him on a throne or beside an anvil. Not a man to assert his claim

loudly, or to notice injustice or neglect by a single spoken word; but

one to take quietly success or failure, in the serenity of a mood

habitually untouched by either extreme.

In that one brief first and last interview, we discovered, at least, the

simple, earnest sincerity of the man's nature,--a quality too rare, even

among authors. When we took our seat in the train for Rouse's Point, we

opened the volume of "Saul." The first part was finished as we

approached St. Albans; the second at Vergennes; and twilight was falling

as we closed the book between Bennington and Troy. Whatever crudities of

expression, inaccuracies of rhythm, faults of arrangement, and

violations of dramatic law met us from time to time, the earnest purpose

of the writer carried us over them all. The book has a fine flavor of

the Elizabethan age,--a sustained epic rather than dramatic character,

an affluence of quaint, original images; yet the construction was

frequently that of a school-boy. In opulence and maturity of ideas, and

poverty of artistic skill, the work stands almost alone in literature.

What little we have learned of the history of the author suggests an

explanation of this peculiarity. Never was so much genuine power so long

silent.

"Saul" is yet so little known, that a descriptive outline of the poem

will be a twice-told tale to very few readers of the "Atlantic." The

author strictly follows the history of the renowned Hebrew king, as it

is related in I Samuel, commencing with the tenth chapter, but divides

the subject into three dramas, after the manner of Schiller's

"Wallenstein." The first part embraces the history of Saul, from his

anointing by Samuel at Ramah to David's exorcism of the evil spirit,

(xvi. 23,) and contains five acts. The second part opens with David as a

guest in the palace at Gibeah. The defeat of the Philistines at Elah,

Saul's jealousy of David, and the latter's marriage with Michal form the

staple of the _four_ acts of this part. The third part consists of _six_

acts of unusual length, (some of them have thirteen scenes,) and is

devoted to the pursuits and escapes of David, the Witch of Endor, and

the final battle, wherein the king and his three sons are slain. No

liberties have been taken with the order of the Scripture narrative,

although a few subordinate characters have here and there been

introduced to complete the action. The author seems either to lack the

inventive faculty, or to have feared modifying the sacred record for the

purposes of Art. In fact, no considerable modification was necessary.

The simple narrative fulfils almost all the requirements of dramatic

writing, in its succession of striking situations, and its cumulative

interest. From beginning to end, however, Mr. Heavysege makes no attempt

to produce a dramatic effect. It is true that he has availed himself of

the phrase "an evil spirit from the Lord," to introduce a demoniac

element, but, singularly enough, the demons seem to appear and to act

unwillingly, and manifest great relief when they are allowed to retire

from the stage.

The work, therefore, cannot be measured by dramatic laws. It is an epic

in dialogue; its chief charm lies in the march of the story and the

detached individual monologues, rather than in contrast of characters or

exciting situations. The sense of proportion--the latest developed

quality of the poetic mind--is dimly manifested. The structure of the

verse, sometimes so stately and majestic, is frequently disfigured by

the commonest faults; yet the breath of a lofty purpose has been

breathed upon every page. The personality of the author never pierces

through his theme. The language is fresh, racy, vigorous, and utterly

free from the impress of modern masters: much of it might have been

written by a contemporary of Shakspeare.

In the opening of the first part, Saul, recently anointed king, receives

the messengers of Jabesh Gilead, and promises succor. A messenger

says,--

"The winds of heaven,

Behind thee blow: and on our enemies' eyes

May the sun smite to-morrow, and blind them for thee!

But, O Saul, do not fail us.

"_Saul._ Fail ye

Let the morn fail to break; I will not break

My word. Haste, or I'm there before you. Fail?

Let the morn fail the east; I'll not fail you,

But, swift and silent as the streaming wind,

Unseen approach, then, gathering up my force

At dawning, sweep on Ammon, as Night's blast

Sweeps down the Carmel on the dusky sea."

This is a fine picture of Saul steeling his nature to cruelty, when be

has reluctantly resolved to obey Samuel's command "to trample out the

living fire of Amalek":--

"Now let me tighten every cruel sinew,

And gird the whole up in unfeeling hardness,

That my swollen heart, which bleeds within me tears,

May choke itself to stillness. I am as

A shivering bather, that, upon the shore,

Looking and shrinking from the cold, black waves,

Quick starting from his reverie, with a rush

Abbreviates his horror."

And this of the satisfied lust of blood, uttered by a Hebrew soldier,

after the slaughter:--

"When I was killing, such thoughts came to me, like

The sound of cleft-dropped waters to the ear

Of the hot mower, who thereat stops the oftener

To whet his glittering scythe, and, while he smiles,

With the harsh, sharpening hone beats their fall's time,

And dancing to it in his heart's straight chamber,

Forgets that he is weary."

After the execution of Agag by the hand of Samuel, the demons are

introduced with more propriety than in the opening of the poem. The

following passage has a subtle, sombre grandeur of its own:--

"_First Demon._ Now let us down to hell: we've seen the last.

"_Second Demon._ Stay; for the road thereto is yet incumbered

With the descending spectres of the killed.

_'Tis said they choke hell's gates, and stretch from thence

Out like a tongue upon the silent gulf_;

Wherein our spirits--even as terrestrial ships

That are detained by foul winds in an offing--

Linger perforce, _and feel broad gusts of sighs

That swing them on the dark and billowless waste_,

O'er which come sounds more dismal than the boom,

At midnight, of the salt flood's foaming surf,--

Even dead Amalek's moan and lamentation."

The reader will detect the rhythmical faults of the poem, even in these

passages. But there is a vast difference between such blemishes of the

unrhymed heroic measure as terminating a line with "and," "of," or

"but," or inattention to the cæsural pauses, and that mathematical

precision of foot and accent, which, after all, can scarcely be

distinguished from prose. Whatever may be his shortcomings, Mr.

Heavysege speaks in the dialect of poetry. Only rarely he drops into

bald prose, as in these lines:--

"But let us go abroad, and in the twilight's

Cool, tranquillizing air discuss this matter."

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