OLD FOGY WRITES A SYMPHONIC POEM

"Definite feelings and emotions are unsusceptible of being embodied in

music," says Eduard Hanslick in his _Beautiful in Music_. Now, you

composers who make symphonic poems, why don't you realize that on its

merits as a musical composition, its theme, its form, its treatment,

that your work will endure, and not on account of its fidelity to your

explanatory program?

For example, if I were a very talented young composer--which I am

not--and had mastered the tools of my trade--knew everything from a song

to a symphony, and my instrumentation covered the whole gamut of the

orchestral pigment.... Well, one night as I tossed wearily on my bed--it

was a fine night in spring, the moon rounded and lustrous and silvering

the lake below my window--suddenly my musical imagination began to work.

I had just been reading, and for the thousandth time, Browning's _Childe

Roland_, with its sinister coloring and spiritual suggestions. Yet it

had never before struck me as a subject suitable for musical treatment.

But the exquisite cool of the night, its haunting mellow flavor, had

set my brain in a ferment. A huge fantastic shadow threw a jagged black

figure on the lake. Presto, it was done, and with a mental snap that

almost blinded me.

I had my theme. It will be the first theme in my new symphonic poem,

_Childe Roland_. It will be in the key of B minor, which is to be

emblematic of the dauntless knight who to "the dark tower came,"

unfettered by obstacles, physical or spiritual.

O, how my brain seethed and boiled, for I am one of those unhappy men

who the moment they get an idea must work it out to its bitter end.

_Childe Roland_ kept me awake all night. I even heard his "dauntless

horn" call and saw the "squat tower." I had his theme. I felt it to be

good; to me it was Browning's Knight personified. I could hear its

underlying harmonies and the instrumentation, sombre, gloomy, without

one note of gladness.

The theme I treated in such a rhythmical fashion as to impart to it

exceeding vitality, and I announced it with the English horn, with a

curious rhythmic background by the tympani; the strings in division

played tremolando and the bass staccato and muted. This may not be clear

to you; it is not very clear to me, but at the time it all seemed very

wonderful. I finished the work after nine months of agony, of revision,

of pruning, clipping, cutting, hawking it about for my friends'

inspection and getting laughed at, admired and also mildly criticized.

The thrice fatal day arrived, the rehearsals had been torture, and one

night the audience at a great concert had the pleasure of reading on the

program Browning's _Childe Roland_ in full, and wondering what it was

all about. My symphonic poem would tell them all, as I firmly believed

in the power of music to portray definitely certain soul-states, to

mirror moods, to depict, rather indefinitely to be sure, certain

phenomena of daily life.

My poem was well played. It was only ninety minutes long, and I sat in a

nervous swoon as I listened to the _Childe Roland_ theme, the squat

tower theme, the sudden little river motif, the queer gaunt horse theme,

the horrid engine of war motif, the sinister, grinning, false guide

subject--in short, to all the many motives of the poem, with its

apotheosis, the dauntless blast from the brave knight as he at last

faced the dark tower.

This latter I gave out with twelve trombones, twenty-one bassett horns

and one calliope; it almost literally brought down the house, and I was

the happiest man alive. As I moved out I was met by the critic of _The

Disciples of Tone_, who said to me:

"Lieber Kerl, I must congratulate you; it beats Richard Strauss all

hollow. _Who_ and what was _Childe Roland_? Was he any relation to

Byron's _Childe Harold_? I suppose the first theme represented the

'galumphing' of his horse, and that funny triangular fugue meant that

the horse was lame in one leg and was going it on three. Adieu; I'm in a

hurry."

Triangular fugue! Why, that was the crossroads before which Childe

Roland hesitated! How I hated the man.

I was indeed disheartened. Then a lady spoke to me, a musical lady, and

said:

"It was grand, perfectly grand, but why did you introduce a funeral

march in the middle--I fancied that Childe Roland was not killed until

the end?"

The funeral march she alluded to was not a march at all, but the

"quagmire theme," from which queer faces threateningly mock at the

knight.

"Hopeless," thought I; "these people have no imagination."

The next day the critics treated me roughly. I was accused of cribbing

my first theme from _The Flying Dutchman_, and fixing it up

rhythmically for my own use, as if I hadn't made it on the spur of an

inspired moment! They also told me that I couldn't write a fugue; that

my orchestration was overloaded, and my work deficient in symmetry,

repose, development and, above all, in coherence.

This last was too much. Why, Browning's poem was contained in my

tone-poem; blame Browning for the incoherence, for I but followed his

verse. One day many months afterward I happened to pick up Hanslick, and

chanced on the following:

"Let them play the theme of a symphony by Mozart or Haydn, an adagio by

Beethoven, a scherzo by Mendelssohn, one of Schumann's or Chopin's

compositions for the piano, or again, the most popular themes from the

overtures of Auber, Donizetti or Flotow, who would be bold enough to

point out a definite feeling on the subject of any of these themes? One

will say 'love.' Perhaps so. Another thinks it is longing. He may be

right. A third feels it to be religion. Who may contradict him? Now, how

can we talk of a definite feeling represented when nobody really knows

what is represented? Probably all will agree about the beauty or

beauties of the composition, whereas all will differ regarding its

subject. To represent something is to exhibit it clearly, to set it

before us distinctly. But how can we call that the subject represented

by an art which is really its vaguest and most indefinite element, and

which must, therefore, forever remain highly debatable ground."

I saw instantly that I had been on a false track. Charles Lamb and

Eduard Hanslick had both reached the same conclusion by diverse roads. I

was disgusted with myself. So then the whispering of love and the clamor

of ardent combatants were only whispering, storming, roaring, but not

the whispering of love and the clamor; musical clamor, certainly, but

not that of "ardent combatants."

I saw then that my symphonic poem, _Childe Roland_, told nothing to

anyone of Browning's poem, that my own subjective and overstocked

imaginings were not worth a rush, that the music had an objective

existence as music and not as a poetical picture, and by the former and

not the latter it must be judged. Then I discovered what poor stuff I

had produced--how my fancy had tricked me into believing that those

three or four bold and heavily orchestrated themes, with their restless

migration into different tonalities, were "soul and tales marvelously

mirrored."

In reality my ignorance and lack of contrapuntal knowledge, and, above

all, the want of clear ideas of form, made me label the work a symphonic

poem--an elastic, high-sounding, pompous and empty title. In a spirit of

revenge I took the score, rearranged it for small orchestra, and it is

being played at the big circus under the euphonious title of _The Patrol

of the Night Stick_, and the musical press praises particularly the

graphic power of the night stick motive and the verisimilitude of the

escape of the burglar in the coda.

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