NOTES

ABRAHAM DREYFUS (1847-) was the author of half a dozen ingenious little

plays, mostly confined to a single act. One of them, 'Un Crane sans un

Tempête,' adapted into English as the 'Silent System,' was acted in New

York by Coquelin and Agnes Booth. Dreyfus was also the author of two

volumes of lively sketches lightly satirizing different aspects of the

French stage,--'Scènes de la vie de théâtre' (1880) and 'L'Incendie des

Folies-Plastiques' (1886).

In the Spring of 1884 he delivered an address on the art of playmaking

before the Cercle Artistique et Littéraire of Brussels. This lecture was

entitled 'Comment se fait une pièce de théâtre;' and it was printed

privately in an edition limited to fifty copies, (Paris: A. Quantin,

1884). In the course of this address he read letters received by him

from ten or twelve of the most distinguisht dramatists of France in

response to his request for information as to their methods of

composition. It was to these letters that the lecture owed its interest

and its value. What M. Dreyfus contributed himself was little more than

a running commentary on the correspondence that he had collected. This

commentary was characteristically clever, brisk, bright and amusing; but

its interest was partly personal, partly local, and partly contemporary.

The interest of the letters themselves is permanent; and this is the

reason why it has seemed advisable to select the most significant of

them and to present them here unincumbered by the less useful remarks of

the lecturer.

Émile Augier (1820-1889) disputes with Alexandre Dumas the foremost

place among the French dramatists of the second half of the nineteenth

century. The 'Gendre de M. Poirier' (which he wrote in collaboration

with Jules Sandeau) is the masterpiece of modern comedy, a worthy

successor to the 'Tartuffe' of Molière and the 'Marriage of Figaro' of

Beaumarchais.

Théodore de Banville (1823-1891) was a poet rather than a playwright.

Altho he composed half-a-dozen little pieces in verse, the only one of

his dramatic efforts which really succeeded in establishing itself on

the stage, was 'Gringoire,' a one-act comedy in prose; and this met with

a more fortunate fate than its more fantastic companions only because

Banville revised and strengthened his plot in accordance with the

skilful suggestions of Coquelin, who "created" the part of the starving

poet.

Adolphe Dennery (1811-1899) was the most adroit and fertile of

melodramatists in the midyears of the nineteenth century. Perhaps his

best play was 'Don César de Bazan'; and perhaps his most popular play

was the 'Two Orphans.'

Alexandre Dumas _fils_ (1824-1895) was the son of the author of the

'Three Guardsmen'; and he inherited from his father the native gift of

playmaking, which he declared in this letter to be the indispensable

qualification of the successful dramatist. His 'Dame aux Camélias' has

held the stage for more than sixty years and has been performed hundreds

of times in every modern language.

Edmond Gondinet (1828-1888) was the author of a host of pleasant pieces,

mostly comedies in from one to three acts, and mostly written in

collaboration. He believed that he preferred to write alone and that

only his good nature kept tempting him into working with others. It was

probably to warn away those who wanted to bring him their manuscripts

for expert revision that led him to assert in this letter that he was "a

detestable collaborator."

Ernest Legouvé (1807-1903) was the collaborator of Scribe in the

composition of 'Bataille de Dames' and 'Adrienne Lecouvreur.' In his

delightful recollections, 'Soixante Ans de Souvenirs' he has a chapter

on Scribe in which he describes the methods of that master-craftsman in

dramatic construction; and in one of his 'Conférences Parisiennes' he

sets forth the successive steps by which another dramatist, Bouilly, was

able to compound his pathetic piece, the 'Abbé de l'Epée';--two papers

which deserve careful study by all who wish to apprehend the principles

of playmaking.

Eugène Labiche (1815-1888) was the most prolific of the comic dramatists

of France in the nineteenth century and the most richly endowed with

comic force. Most of his pieces are frankly farcical, but not a few of

them rise to the level of true comedy. The solid merit of his best work

is cordially recognized in the luminous preface written by Augier for

the complete collection of Labiche's comedies.

Édouard Pailleron (1834-1899) was a comic dramatist of more aspiration

than inspiration; and yet he succeeded in writing one of the most

popular pieces of his time;--the 'Monde où l'on s'énnuie.'

Victorien Sardou (1831-1908) was probably the French playwright who was

most widely known outside of France. In the course of fifty years he was

successful in almost every kind of playwriting, from lively farce to

historic drama. His first indisputable triumph was with 'Pattes de

Mouche,' known in English as the 'Scrap of Paper' and as widely popular

in our language as in the original.

Émile Zola (1840-1902) was a novelist who repeatedly sought for success

as a dramatist, attaining it only in the adaptations of his stories made

by professional playwrights. Yet one of his earlier pieces, 'Thérèse

Raquin' is evidence that he might have mastered the art of the

playwright, if he had not allowed himself to be misled by his own

unfortunate theory of the theatre as set forth in his severe studies of

'Nos Auteurs Dramatiques' (1881).

In the 'Année Psychologique' for 1894 the distinguisht physiological

psychologist, the late Alfred Binet,--to whom we are indebted for the

useful Binet tests--publisht a series of papers dealing with the

psychology of the playwright, in the preparation of which he was aided

by M.J. Passy. The two investigators had a series of interviews with

Sardou, Dumas _fils_, Pailleron, Meilhac, Daudet, and Edmond de

Goncourt. Altho Daudet and Goncourt had written plays they were

essentially novelists with no instinctive understanding of the drama as

a specific art. Nor did either Pailleron and Meilhac make any

contribution of importance. But Dumas and Sardou were both of them born

playwrights of keen intelligence, having a definite understanding of the

principles of playmaking; and what they said to M. Binet and his

associate was interesting and significant.

Dumas declared that he made no notes for any of his plays and that he

never composed a detailed scenario. He thought of only one piece at a

time, brooding over it for long months sometimes, and then throwing it

on paper almost at white heat, if it dealt with passion. If, on the

other hand, it was a comedy of character, a study of social conditions,

the actual composition was necessarily more leisurely and protracted. He

had carried in mind for six or seven years the theme of 'Monsieur

Alphonse;' and he had actually put it on paper in seventeen days. He had

written the 'Princesse Georges' in three weeks and the 'Etrangère' in a

month; and the second act of the 'Dame aux Camélias' had been penned in

a single session of four hours. But he had toiled seven or eight hours a

day for eleven months over the 'Demi-Monde,' the second act alone

costing him two months labor. He rarely modified what he had written by

minor corrections; but sometimes, when his play was completed, he

discovered that it was weak in its structure or inadequate in its

motivation, in which case he reconstructed one or more acts, or even the

whole play, writing it all over again.

M. Dumas admitted that he took little interest in the setting of his

plays or in the manifold details of stage-management. He indicated

summarily the kind of room that he desired; and he put down in his

manuscript only the absolutely necessary movements of his characters.

The rest he left to the manager and the stage-manager.

Here--as indeed everywhere,--Dumas revealed himself in the sharpest

contrast with Sardou, who designed his sets himself and placed his

furniture precisely where he needed it for the action of his play,

sometimes finding that a given scene seemed to him to lose half its

effect if it was acted on the left side of the stage instead of the

right. He was a constant note-taker, putting down suggestions for single

scenes or for striking suggestions, as these might occur to him; and as

a result of this incessant cerebral activity he had always on hand more

or less complete plots for at least fifty plays. When he decided to

write one of these pieces, he assembled his scattered notes, set them in

order, amplified and strengthened them; and when at last he saw his way

clear he made out an elaborate and detailed scenario, containing the

whole story, with ample indication of all the changes of feeling which

might take place in any of the characters in any scene.

Then when he felt himself in the right mood, he feverishly improvized

the play, laughing over the jokes, weeping over the pathetic moments and

objurgating the evil deeds of the more despicable characters. But this

was only a first draft of the play; and it had to be gone over three or

four times, altered, condensed, sharpened, tightened in effect. The

first version was always too long; and the successive revisions reduced

it to scarcely more than a half of its original length. Sometimes he was

able to compact into a single pregnant phrase the substance of a speech

of many lines. And as the play slowly took on its final form Sardou not

only heard every word which every character had to speak, he also saw

every one of the movements which would animate the action. M. Binet

reminded him that when Scribe and Legouvé were collaborating on

'Adrienne Lecouvreur,' Scribe asserted that he visualized all that the

actors would do, while Legouvé heard all that they would say; and Sardou

then claimed that he was fortunate in possessing the double faculty of

both seeing and hearing.

Of course, Sardou stage-managed his plays himself, teaching the

performers carefully, and going upon the stage, if need be, to act the

scene as he wanted it to be acted, indicating the expression, the

intonation and the gesture which he felt to be demanded by the

situation.

He was equally meticulous in designing the scenery and the costumes; and

he was inexorable in insisting on the carrying out of his wishes. He had

a lively interest in painting, in sculpture and in architecture; and, in

fact, he confest, that if he had not been a playwright he would like to

have been an architect. This, it may be noted, is conformation of the

statement that there is a strong similarity between the art of

architecture and the art of the drama, due to the fact that both arts

are under the necessity of providing a solid structure to sustain the

fabric and to support the decoration.

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