CHAPTER VII

PERSONIFICATION AND ABSTRACTION IN EIGHTEENTH CENTURY POETRY

In the Preface of 1798, when Wordsworth formulated his theories with

regard to poetical language, the first “mechanical device of style”

against which he directed his preliminary attack was the use of

“personifications of abstract ideas.”[195] Such personifications, he

urged, do not make any natural or regular part of “the very language

of men,” and as he wished “to keep the reader in the company of flesh

and blood,” he had endeavoured “utterly to reject them.” He was ready

to admit that they were occasionally “prompted by passion,” but his

predecessors had come to regard them as a sort of family language, upon

which they had every right to draw. In short, in Wordsworth’s opinion,

abstractions and personifications had become a conventional method of

ornamenting verse, akin to the “vicious diction,” from the tyranny of

which he wished to emancipate poetry. The specific point on which he thus

challenged the practice of his predecessors could hardly be gainsaid, for

he had indicted a literary device, or artifice, which was not only worked

to death by the mere poetasters of the period, but which disfigures not a

little the work of even the great poets of the century.

The literary use of abstraction and personification was not, it is

needless to say, the invention of the eighteenth century. It is as old

as literature itself, which has always reflected a tendency to interpret

or explain natural phenomena or man’s relations with the invisible

powers that direct or influence human conduct, by means of allegory,

English poetry in the Middle Ages, especially that of Chaucer, Langland,

and their immediate successors, fitly illustrates the great world

of abstraction which had slowly come into being, a world peopled by

personified states or qualities—the Seven Deadly Sins, the Virtues, Love,

etc.—typifying or symbolizing the forces which help man, or beset and

ensnare him as he makes his pilgrim’s progress through this world.

Already the original motive power of allegory was considerably

diminished, even if it had not altogether disappeared, and, by the time

of the “Faerie Queene,” the literary form which it had moulded for itself

had become merely imitative and conventional, so that even the music

and melody of Spenser’s verse could not altogether vitalize the shadowy

abstractions of his didactic allegory. With “Paradise Lost” we come to

the last great work in which personified abstractions reflect to any real

extent the original allegorical motive in which they had their origin.

Milton achieves his supreme effects in personification in that his

figures are merely suggestive, strongly imagined impressions rather than

clean-cut figures. For nothing can be more dangerous, from the poetic

point of view, than the precise figures which attempt to depict every

possible point of similarity between the abstract notion and the material

representation imagined.[196]

It is sometimes considered that the mania for abstraction was due

largely to the influence of the two poets who are claimed, or regarded,

as the founders or leaders of the new classical school—Dryden and Pope.

As a matter of fact, neither makes any great use of personification.

Dryden has a few abstractions in his original works, such as,

Far from her sight flew Faction, Strife and Pride

And Envy did but look on

(“First Epistle”)

but his examples are mainly to be found in his modernizations or

translations, where of necessity he takes them from his originals.[197]

Pope makes a greater use of the figure, but even here there is no excess.

There is not a single personification in the four pastorals of “The

Seasons,” a subject peculiarly adapted to such treatment. In “Eloisa to

Abelard” there are two instances where some attempt at characterization

is made.[198] More instances, though none very striking, are to be found

in “Windsor Forest,” but the poem ends with a massed group, forming a

veritable catalogue of the personified vices which had done so much

service in poetry since the days of the Seven Deadly Sins.

In other poems Pope uses the device for humorous or satiric effect, as in

the “Pain,” “Megrim,” and “Ill nature like an ancient maid” (l. 24) of

“The Rape of the Lock;” or the “Science,” “Will,” “Logic,” etc., of “The

Dunciad,” where all are invested with capital letters, but with little

attempt to work up a definite picture, except, as was perhaps to be

expected, in the case of “Dullness,” which is provided with a bodyguard

(Bk. I, 45-52).

Though, as we have already said, there is no great use of such figures in

the works of Pope, they are present in such numbers in his satiric and

didactic works as to indicate one great reason for their prevalence in

his contemporaries and successors. After the Restoration, when English

literature entered on a new era, the changed and changing conditions

of English life and thought soon impressed themselves on poetry. The

keynote to the understanding of much that is characteristic of this new

“classical” literature has been well summed up in the formula that “the

saving process of human thought was forced for generations to beggar the

sense of beauty.”[199] The result was an invasion of poetry by ideas,

arguments, and abstractions which were regarded both as expressing

admirably the new spirit of rationalism, as well as constituting in

themselves dignified subjects and ornaments of poetry.

This is well illustrated in the case of several of Pope’s contemporaries.

In the works of Thomas Parnell (1679-1718) abstractions of the

conventional type are plentiful, usually accompanied by a qualifying

epithet: “Fortune fair-array’d” (“An Imitation”), “Impetuous Discord,”

“Blind Mischief,” (“On Queen Anne’s Peace”), “the soft Pathetic” (“On

the Different Styles of Poetry”). These are only a few of the examples

of the types favoured by Parnell, where only here and there are human

traits added by means of qualifying epithets or phrases. In one or two

instances, however, there are more detailed personifications. Thus,

in the “Epistle to Dr. Swift,” which abounds in shadowy abstractions,

Eloquence is fully described for us:

Upon her cheek sits Beauty ever young

The soul of music warbles on her tongue.

Moreover, already in Parnell it is evident that the influence of Milton

is responsible for some of his personifications. In the same poem we get

the invocation:

Come! country Goddess come, nor thou suffice

But bring thy mountain-sister Exercise,

figures which derive obviously from “L’Allegro.”

In the case of Richard Savage (1696-1743) there is still greater freedom

in the use of personified abstractions, which, as here the creative

instinct is everywhere subjected to the didactic purpose, become very

wearisome. The “Wanderer” contains long catalogues of them, in some

instances pursued for over fifty lines.[200]

The device continued to be very popular throughout the eighteenth

century, especially by those who continue or represent the “Ethical”

school of Pope. First amongst these may be mentioned Edward Young

(1681-1765), whose “Night Thoughts” was first published between

1742-1744. Young, like his contemporaries, has recourse to

personifications, both for didactic purposes and apparently to add

dignity to his style. It is probable, too, that in this respect he owes

something to “Paradise Lost”; from Milton no doubt he borrowed his

figure of Death, which, though poetically not very impressive, seems to

have captured the imagination of Blake and other artists who have tried

to depict it. The figure is at first only casually referred to in the

Fourth Book (l. 96), where there is a brief and commonplace reference to

“Death, that mighty hunter”; but it is not until the fifth book that the

figure is developed. Yet, though the characterization is carried to great

length, there is no very striking personification: we are given, instead,

a long-drawn-out series of abstractions, with an attempt now and then to

portray a definite human figure. Thus

Like princes unconfessed in foreign courts

Who travel under cover, Death assumes

The name and look of life, and dwells among us.

And then the poet describes Death as being present always and everywhere,

and especially

Gaily carousing, to his gay compeers

Inly he laughs to see them laugh at him

As absent far.

But Young has not, like Milton, been able to conjure up a definite and

convincing vision, and thus he never achieves anything approaching the

overwhelming effect produced by the phantom of Death in “Paradise Lost,”

called before us in a single verse:

So spake the grisly Terror.

(P.L., II. 704)

For the rest, Young’s personifications, considering the nature of his

subject, are fewer than might be expected. Where they occur they often

seem to owe their presence to a desire to vary the monotony of his moral

reflections; as a result we get a number of abstractions, which may be

called personifications only because they are sometimes accompanied by

human attributes.

Young has also certain other evocations which can scarcely be called

abstractions, but which are really indistinct, shadowy beings, like the

figures of a dream, as when he describes the phantom of the past:

The spirit walks of every day deceased

And smiles an angel, or a fury frowns

(ll. 180-181)

or the grief of the poet as he ever meets the shades of joys gone for

ever:

The ghosts

Of my departed joys: a numerous train.

Here the poet has come near to achieving that effect which in the hands

of the greatest poets justifies the use of personification as a poetic

figure. The more delicate process just illustrated is distinct both from

the lifeless abstraction and the detailed personification, for in these

cases there is a tinge of personal emotion which invests these shadowy

figures with something of a true lyrical effect.

The tendency, illustrated in the “Night Thoughts,” to make a purely

didactic use of personification and abstraction is found to a much

greater extent in Akenside’s “Pleasures of the Imagination,” first

published in 1744, to be considerably enlarged in 1767. The nature of

Akenside’s subject freely admitted of the use of these devices, and he

has not been slow to avail himself of them.

Large portions of the “Pleasures of the Imagination” resolve themselves

into one long procession of abstract figures. Very often Akenside

contents himself with the usual type of abstraction, accompanied by a

conventional epithet: “Wisdom’s form celestial” (I, 69), “sullen Pomp”

(III, 216), etc., though sometimes by means of human attributes or

characteristics we are given partial personifications such as:

Power’s purple robes nor Pleasure’s flowery lap.

(l. 216)

And occasionally there are traces of a little more imagination:

thy lonely whispering voice

O faithful Nature![201]

But on the whole it is clear that with Akenside abstraction and

personification are used simply and solely for moral and didactic

purposes, and not because of any perception of their potential artistic

value. Incidentally, an interesting side-light on this point is revealed

by one of the changes introduced by the poet into his revision of his

chief work. In the original edition of 1740 there is an invocation to

Harmony (Bk. I, ll. 20 foll.), with her companion,

Majestic Truth; and where Truth deigns to come

Her sister Liberty will not be far.

Before the publication of the revised edition, Akenside, who at one time

had espoused the cause of liberty with such ardour as to lead to his

being suspected of republicanism, received a Court appointment. In the

revised edition the concluding lines of the invocation became

for with thee comes

The guide, the guardian of their majestic rites

Wise Order and where Order deigns to come

Her sister Liberty will not be far.

(138 foll.)

The same lavish use of abstractions is seen, not only in the philosophic

poetry proper, but also in other works, which might perhaps have been

expected to escape the contagion. Charles Churchill (1731-1764), if we

set aside Johnson and Canning, may be regarded as representing eighteenth

century satire in its decline, after the great figures of Pope and Swift

have disappeared from the scene, and among the causes which prevent his

verse from having but little of the fiery force and sting of the great

masters of satire is that, instead of the strongly depicted, individual

types of Pope, for example, we are given a heterogeneous collection

of human virtues, vices, and characteristics, most often in the form

of mere abstractions, sometimes personified into stiff, mechanical

figures.[202] Only once has Churchill attempted anything novel in the

way of personification, and this in humorous vein, when he describes the

social virtues:

With belly round and full fat face,

Which on the house reflected grace,

Full of good fare and honest glee,

The steward Hospitality.

Churchill had no doubt a genuine passion for poetry and independence,

but the _saeva indignatio_ of the professed censor of public morals and

manners cannot be conveyed to the reader through the medium of mechanical

abstractions which, compared with the flesh-and-blood creations of Dryden

and Pope, show clearly that for the time being the great line of English

satire has all but come to an end.

Eighteenth century ethical poetry was represented at this stage by

Johnson and Goldsmith, at whose work it will now be convenient to

glance. The universal truths which Johnson as a stern, unbending

moralist wished to illustrate in “London” (1738) and “The Vanity of

Human Wishes” (1749), might easily have resulted in a swarm of the

abstractions and personifications fashionable at the time.[203] From this

danger Johnson was saved by the depth of feeling with which he unfolds

the individual examples chosen to enforce his moral lessons. Not that

he escapes entirely; “London” has a few faint abstractions (“Malice,”

“Rapine,” “Oppression”); but though occasionally they are accompanied

by epithets suggesting human attributes (“surly Virtue,” “persecuting

Fate,” etc.), as a rule there is no attempt at definite personification,

a remark which also applies to the “Vanity of Human Wishes.” In his

odes to the different seasons he has not given, however, any elaborate

personifications, but has contented himself with slight human touches,

such as

Now Autumn bends a cloudy brow.

Of Johnson’s poetical style, regarded from our present point of view, it

may be said to be well represented in the famous line from “London”:

Slow rises Worth by Poverty depressed,

where there is probably no intention or desire to personify at all, but

which is a result of that tendency towards Latin condensation which the

great Doctor and his contemporaries had introduced into English prose.

Goldsmith’s poetry has much in common with that of Johnson, in that both

deal to some extent with what would now be called social problems. But it

is significant of Goldsmith’s historical position in eighteenth century

poetry as representing a sort of “half-way attitude,” in the matter of

poetical style, between the classical conventional language and the

free and unfettered diction advocated by Wordsworth, that there are few

examples of personified abstractions in his works, and these confined

mainly to one passage in “The Traveller”:

Hence Ostentation here with tawdry Art

Pants for the vulgar praise which fools impart, etc.

At this point it is necessary to hark back for the purpose of considering

other works which had been appearing alongside of the works just

discussed. It has already been remarked that in this matter of the use of

abstraction and personification the influence of Milton early asserted

itself, and there can be no doubt that a good deal of it may be traced

to the influence more especially of the early poems. Indeed, the blank

verse poems, which attempted to imitate or parody the “grand style” of

the great epics, furnish few examples of the personified abstraction.

The first of these, the “Splendid Shilling” and “Cyder” of John Philips

(1705-1706) contains but few instances. In Somerville’s “Chase” there is

occasionally a commonplace example, such as “brazen-fisted Time,” though

in his ode “To Marlborough” he falls into the conventional style quickly

enough. In the rest of the blank verse poems Mallet’s “Excursion” (1738),

and his “Amyntor and Theodora” (1744), comparatively little use is made

of the device, a remark also applicable to Dyer’s “Ruins of Rome” (1740),

and to Grainger’s “Sugar Cane” (1764).

The fashion for all these blank verse poems had been started largely by

the success of “The Seasons,” which appeared in its original form from

1726 to 1730, to undergo more than one revision and augmentation until

the final edition of 1744. Though Thomson’s work shows very many traces

of the influence of Milton, there is no direct external evidence that

his adoption of blank verse was a result of that influence. Perhaps, as

has been suggested,[204] he was weary of the monotony of the couplet,

or at least considered its correct and polished form incapable of any

further development. At the same time it is clear that having adopted

“rhyme-unfettered verse,” he chose to regard Milton as a model of

diction and style, though he was by no means a slavish imitator.

With regard to the special problems with which we are here concerned,

it must be noted that when Thomson was first writing “The Seasons,” the

device of personified abstraction had not become quite so conventional

and forced in its use as at a later date. Nevertheless examples of the

typical abstraction are not infrequent; thus, in an enumeration of the

passions which, since the end of the “first fresh dawn,” have invaded

the hearts and minds of men, we are given “Base Envy,” withering at

another’s joy; “Convulsive Anger,” storming at large; and “Desponding

Fear,” full of feeble fancies, etc. (“Spring,” 280-306). Other examples

are somewhat redeemed by the use of a felicitous compound epithet, “Art

imagination-flushed” (“Autumn,” 140), “the lonesome Muse, low-whispering”

(_ibid._, 955), etc. In “Summer” (ll. 1605 foll.) the poet presents one

of the usual lists of abstract qualities (“White Peace, Social Love,”

etc.), but there are imaginative touches present that help to vitalize

some at least of the company into living beings:

The tender-looking Charity intent

On gentle deeds, and shedding tears through smiles—

and the passage is thus a curious mixture of mechanical abstractions with

more vivid and inspired conceptions.

Occasionally Thomson employs the figure with ironical or humorous

intention, and sometimes not ineffectively, as in the couplet,

Then sated Hunger bids his brother Thirst

Produce the mighty bowl.

(“Autumn,” 512)

He is also fond of the apostrophic personification, often feebly, as

when, acting upon a suggestion from Mallet,[205] he writes:

Comes, Inspiration, from thy hermit seat,

By mortal seldom found, etc.

(“Summer,” l. 15)

As for the seasons themselves, we do not find any very successful

attempts at personification. Thomson gives descriptive impressions rather

than abstractions: “gentle Spring, ethereal mildness” (“Spring,” 1),

“various-blossomed Spring” (“Autumn,” 5); or borrowing, as often, an

epithet from Milton, “refulgent Summer” (“Summer,” 2); or “surly Winter”

(“Spring,” 11).

But in these, and similar passages, the seasons can hardly be said

to be distinctly pictured or personified. In “Winter,” however,

there is perhaps a more successful attempt at vague but suggestive

personification:[206]

See Winter comes, to rule the varied year,

Sullen and sad, with all his rising train

Vapours, and clouds and storms.

But on the whole Thomson’s personifications of the seasons are not,

poetically, very impressive. There is little or no approach to the

triumphant evocation with which Keats conjures up Autumn for us, with

all its varied sights and sounds, and its human activities vividly

personified in the gleaner and the winnower

sitting careless on a granary floor

Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind,

or the couplet in which Coleridge brings before us a subtle suggestion

of the spring beauty, to which the storms and snows are but a prelude:

And winter, slumbering in the open air

Wears on his smiling face a dream of Spring.

(“Work without Hope”)

Yet Thomson, as might be expected in a forerunner of the Romantic school,

is not altogether without a gift for these embryonic personifications,

as they have been called, when by means of a felicitous term or epithet

the whole conception which the poet has in mind is suddenly galvanized

into life and endowed with human feelings and emotions. Such evocations

are of the very stuff of which poetry is made, and at their highest

they possess the supreme power of stirring or awakening in the mind of

the reader other pictures or visions than those suggested by the mere

personification.[207]

Though some of Thomson’s instances are conventional or commonplace, as in

the description of

the grey grown oaks

That the calm village in their verdant arms

Sheltering, embrace,

(“Summer,” 225-227)

and others merely imitative, as,

the rosy-footed May

Steals blushing on,

(“Spring,” 489-490)

yet there are many which call up by a single word a vivid and picturesque

expression, such as the “hollow-whispering breeze” (“Summer,” 919) or the

poet’s description of the dismal solitude of a winter landscape

It freezes on

Till Morn, late rising o’er the drooping world

Lifts her pale eyes unjoyous

(“Winter,” 744)

or the beautiful description of a spring dawn:

The meek-eyed Morn appears, mother of dews

At first faint-gleaming in the dappled east.

(“Summer,” 48-49)

Adverting to the question of Milton’s influence on the prevalent mania

for personification, it is undoubted that the early poems may be held

largely responsible. Their influence first began noticeably to make

itself felt in the fifth decade of the century, when their inspiration

is to be traced in a great deal of the poetic output of the period,

including that of Joseph and Thomas Warton, as well as of Collins and

Gray. Neglecting for the moment the greater poets who drew inspiration

from this source, it will be as well briefly to consider first the

influence of Milton’s minor poems on the obscure versifiers, for it

is very often the case that the minor poetry of an age reflects most

distinctly the peculiarities of a passing literary fashion. As early as

1739 William Hamilton of Bangour[208] imitated Milton in his octosyllabic

poem “Contemplation,” and by his predilection for abstraction

foreshadowed one of the main characteristics of the Miltonic revival

among the lesser lights. A single passage shows this clearly enough:

Anger with wild disordered pace

And malice pale of famish’d face:

Loud-tongued Clamour get thee far

Hence, to wrangle at the bar:

and so on.

Five or six years later Mason’s Miltonic imitations appeared—“Il

Bellicoso” and “Il Pacifico”—which follow even more slavishly the style

of “L’Allegro” and “Il Penseroso,” so that there is no need for Mason’s

footnote to “Il Bellicoso” describing the poem with its companion piece

as this “very, very juvenile imitation.”[209] “Il Bellicoso” begins with

the usual dismissal:

Hence, dull lethargic Peace

Born in some hoary beadsman’s cell obscure,

and subsequently we are introduced to Pleasure, Courage, Victory, Fancy,

etc. There is a similar exorcism in “Il Pacifico,” followed by a faint

personification of the subject of the ode, attended by a “social smiling

train” of lifeless abstractions.

The pages of Dodsley[210] furnish abundant testimony to the prevalence

of this kind of thing. Thus “Penshurst”[211] by F. Coventry is

another close imitation of Milton’s companion poems, with the usual

crowd of abstractions. The same thing is met with in the anonymous

“Vacation,”[212] and in the “Valetudinarian,” said to be written by Dr.

Marriott.[213]

It is unnecessary to illustrate further the Milton vogue, which thus

produced so large a crop of imitations,[214] except to say that there is

significant testimony to the widespread prevalence of the fashion in the

fact that a parody written “in the Allegoric, Descriptive, Alliterative,

Epithetical, Fantastic, Hyperbolical, and Diabolical Style of our

modern Ode writers and monody-mongers”[215] soon appeared. This was

the anonymous “Ode to Horror,” a humorous burlesque, especially of the

“Pleasures of Melancholy.” The Wartons stand high above the versifiers at

whose productions we have just looked, but nevertheless there was some

justification for the good-humoured parody called forth by their works.

In 1746 there appeared a small volume entitled “Odes on Various

Subjects,” a collection of fourteen odes by Joseph Warton.[216] The

influence of Milton is especially seen in the odes “To Fancy,” “To

Health,” and to “The Nightingale,” but all betray definitely the source

of their inspiration. Thus in the first named:

Me, Goddess, by the right hand lead

Sometimes thro’ the yellow mead

Where Joy and White-robed Peace resort

And Venus keeps her festive court.

All the odes of Warton betray an abundant use of abstractions, in the

midst of which he rarely displays anything suggestive of spontaneous

inspiration. His few personifications of natural powers are clearly

imitative. “Evening” is “the meek-eyed Maiden clad in sober gray” and

Spring comes

array’d in primrose colour’d robe.

We feel all the time that the poet drags in his stock of personified

abstractions only because he is writing odes, and considers that such

devices add dignity to his subject.

At the same time it is worth noting that almost the same lavish use of

these lay figures occurs in his blank verse poem, “The Enthusiast,” or

“The Lover of Nature” (1740), likewise written in imitation of Milton,

and yet in its prophetic insight so important a poem in the history of

the Romantic revival.[217] Lines such as

Famine, Want and Pain

Sunk to their graves their fainting limbs

are frequent, while there is a regular procession of qualities, more

or less sharply defined, but not poetically suggestive enough to be

effective.

The younger of the two brothers, Thomas Warton, who by his critical

appreciation of Spenser did much in that manner to help forward the

Romantic movement, was perhaps still more influenced by Milton. His ode

on “The Approach of Summer” shows to what extent he had taken possession

of the verse, language, and imagery of Milton:

Haste thee, nymph, and hand in hand

With thee lead a buxom band

Bring fantastic-footed Joy

With Sport, that yellow-tressed boy;

Leisure, that through the balmy sky,

Chases a crimson butterfly.

But nearly all his poems provide numerous instances of personified

abstraction, especially the lines “Written at Vale Abbey,” which seems

to exhaust, and present as thin abstractions, the whole gamut of human

virtues and vices, emotions and desires.[218]

There is a certain irony in the fact that the two men who, crudely,

perhaps, but nevertheless unmistakably, adumbrated the Romantic doctrine,

should have been among the foremost to indulge in an excess against

which later the avowed champion of Romanticism was to inveigh with all

his power. This defect was perhaps the inevitable result of the fact

that the Wartons had apparently been content in this respect to follow

a contemporary fashion as revealed in the swarm of merely mechanical

imitations of Milton’s early poems. But their subjects were on the whole

distinctly romantic, and this fact, added to their critical utterances,

gives them real historical importance. Above all, it is to be remembered

that they have for contemporaries the two great poets in whom the

Romantic movement was for the first time adequately exemplified—William

Collins and Thomas Gray.

The first published collection of Collins’s work, “Odes on Several

Descriptive and Allegorical Subjects” (1746), was, as we have seen, if

not neglected or ignored by the public, at least received with marked

indifference, owing largely no doubt to the abstract nature of his

subjects, and the chiselled severity of his treatment.[219] In other

words, Collins was pure classical and not neo-classical; he had gone

direct back to the “gods of Hellas” for his inspiration, and his verse

had a Hellenic austerity and beauty which could make little or no appeal

to his own age. At the same time it was permeated through and through

with new and striking qualities of feeling and emotion that at once

aroused the suspicions of the neo-classicists, with Johnson as their

mentor and spokesman. The “Odes” were then, we may say, classical in form

and romantic in essence, and it is scarcely a matter for surprise that a

lukewarm reception should have been their lot.[220]

Collins has received merited praise for the charm and precision of his

diction generally, and the fondness for inverting the common order of

his words—Johnson’s chief criticism of his poetical style[221]—is to

the modern mind a venial offence compared with his use of personified

abstractions. On this point Johnson has nothing to say, an omission which

may be regarded as significant of the extent to which personification had

invaded poetry, for the critic, if we may judge from his silence, seems

to have considered it natural and legitimate for Collins also to have

made abundant use of this stock and conventional device.

It is probable, however, that the extensive use which Collins makes of

the figure is the result in a large measure of his predilection for the

ode—a form of verse very fashionable towards the middle of the century.

As has already been noted, odes were being turned out in large numbers

by the poetasters of the time, in which virtues and vices, emotions and

passions were invoked, apostrophized, and dismissed with appropriate

gestures, and it is probable that the majority of these turgid and

ineffective compositions owed their appearance to the prevalent mania for

personification. Young remarked with truth[222] that an ode is, or ought

to be, “more spontaneous and more remote from prose” than any other kind

of poetry; and doubtless it was some vague recognition of this fact, and

in the hope of “elevating” their style, that led the mere versifiers to

adopt the trick. But as they worked the mechanical personification to

death, they quickly robbed it of any impressiveness it may ever have had.

This might quite fairly be described as the state of affairs with regard

to the use of personified abstraction when Collins was writing his

“odes,” but while it is true that he indulges freely in personification,

it is scarcely necessary to add that he does so with a difference; his

Hellenic training and temperament naturally saved him from the inanities

and otiosities of so much contemporary verse. To begin with, there are

but few examples of the lifeless abstraction, and even in such cases

there is usually present a happy epithet, or brief description that sets

them on a higher level than those that swarm even in the odes of the

Wartons. Thus in the “Ode on the Poetical Character,” “the shadowy tribes

of mind,” which had been sadly overworked by Collins’s predecessors and

contemporaries, are brought before us with a new and fresh beauty that

wins instant acceptance for them:

But near it sat ecstatic Wonder

Listening the deep applauding thunder

And truth in sunny vest arrayed

By whom the tassel’s eyes were made

All the shadowy tribes of mind

In braided dance their murmurs joined.

Instances of the mechanical type so much in favour are, however, not

lacking, as in this stanza from the “Verses” written about bride-cake:

Ambiguous looks that scorn and yet relent,

Denial mild and firm unaltered truth,

Reluctant pride and amorous faint consent

And melting ardours and exulting youth.[223]

The majority of Collins’s personified abstractions are, however, vague

in outline, that is to say, they suggest, but do not define, and are

therefore the more effective in that the resulting images are almost

evanescent in their delicacy. Thus in the “Ode to Pity” the subject is

presented to us in magic words:

Long pity, let the nations view

Thy sky-worn robes of tender blue

And eyes of dewy light,

whilst still another imaginative conception is that of “Mercy”:

who sitt’st a smiling bride

By Valour’s armed and awful side

Gentlest of sky-born forms and best adorned.

The “Ode to the Passions” is in itself almost an epitome of the various

ways in which Collins makes use of personification. It is first to be

noted that he rarely attempts to clothe his personifications in long and

elaborate descriptions; most often they are given life and reality by

being depicted, so to speak, moving and acting:

Revenge impatient rose,

He threw his blood-stained sword in thunder down,

And with a withering look

The war-denouncing trumpet took;

Yet still he kept his wild unaltered mien

Whilst his strained ball of sight seemed bursting from his head.

Even the figures, seen as it were but for a moment, are flashed before us

in this manner:

With woful measures wan Despair

Low sullen sounds his grief beguiled

and

Dejected Pity at his side

Her soul-subduing voice applied

and the vision of hope with “eyes so fair” who

smiled and waved her golden hair.

In this ode Collins gives us also imaginative cameos, we might call them,

vividly delineated and presented like the figures on the Grecian urn that

inspired Keats. Thus:

While as his flying fingers kissed the strings,

Love framed with mirth a gay fantastic round.

and, with its tinge of probably unconscious humour—

Brown exercise rejoiced to hear,

And Sport leapt up and seized his beechen spear.

From these and similar instances, we receive a definite impression of

that motion, which is at the same time repose, so characteristic of

classical sculptuary.

Most of the odes considered above are addressed to abstractions. In the

few instances where Collins invokes the orders or powers of nature even

greater felicity is shown in the art with which he calls up and clothes

in perfect expression his abstract images. The first of the seasons is

vaguely but subtly suggested to us in the beautiful ode beginning “How

sleep the brave”:

When Spring with dewy fingers cold

Returns to deck their hallowed mould,

She there shall dress a sweeter sod

Than fancy’s feet have ever trod.

This is rather a simile than a personification, but yet there is conveyed

to us a definite impression of a shadowy figure that comes to deck the

earth with beauty, like a young girl scattering flowers as she walks

along.

But the workmanship of Collins in this respect is seen in its perfection

in the “Ode to Evening.” There is no attempt to draw a portrait or chisel

a statue; the calm, restful influence of evening, its sights and sounds

that radiate peace and contentment, even the very soul of the landscape

as the shades of night gather around, are suggested by master touches,

whilst the slow infiltration of the twilight is beautifully suggested:

Thy dewy fingers draw

The gradual dusky veil.

The central figure is still the same evanescent being, the vision of a

maiden, endowed with all the grace of beauty and dignity, into whose lap

“sallow Autumn” is pouring his falling leaves, or who now goes her way

slowly through the tempest, while

Winter, yelling through the troublous air

Affrights thy shrinking train,

And rudely rends thy robe.

If we had no other evidence before us, Collins’s use of personified

abstraction would be sufficient in itself to announce that the new poetry

had begun. He makes use of the device as freely, and even now and then

as mechanically, as the inferior versifiers of his period, but instead

of the bloodless abstractions, his genius enabled him to present human

qualities and states in almost ethereal form. Into them he has breathed

such poetic life and inspiration that in their suggestive beauty and

felicity of expression they stand as supreme examples of personification

used as a legitimate poetical device, as distinct from a mere rhetorical

figure or embellishment.

This cannot be said of Gray, in whose verse mechanical personifications

crowd so thickly that, as Coleridge observed in his remarks on the lines

from “The Bard,”

In gallant trim the gilded vessel goes

Youth at the prow and Pleasure at the helm

it depends “wholly on the compositors putting or not putting a small

Capital, both in this and in many other passages of the same poet,

whether the words should be personifications or mere abstractions.”[224]

It is difficult to account for this devotion of Gray to the “new

Olympus,” thickly crowded with “moral deities” that his age had brought

into being, except on the assumption that contemporary usage in this

respect was too strong for him to resist. For it cannot be denied that

very many of the beings that swarm in his odes do not differ in their

essential character from the mechanical figures worked to death by the

ode-makers of his days; even his genius was not able to clothe them

all in flesh and blood. In the “Eton College” ode there is a whole

stanza given over to a conventional catalogue of the “fury passions,”

the “vultures of the mind”; and similar thin abstractions people all

the other odes. Nothing is visualized: we see no real image before

us.[225] Even the famous “Elegy” is not without its examples of stiff

personification, though they are not present in anything like the excess

found elsewhere. The best that can be said for abstractions of this kind

is that in their condensation they represent an economy of expression

that is not without dignity and effectiveness, and they thus sometimes

give an added emphasis to the sentiment, as in the oft-quoted

Let not Ambition mock their useful toil,

Their homely joys and destiny secure,

Nor Grandeur hear with a disdainful smile

The short and simple annals of the poor.

Gray rarely attempts to characterize his figures other than by the

occasional use of a conventional epithet, and only here and there has the

personification been to any extent filled in so as to form at least an

outline picture. In the “Hymn to Adversity,” Wisdom is depicted

in sable garb arrayed

Immersed in rapturous thought profound,

whilst other slight human touches are to be found here and there: as

in “Moody Madness, laughing wild” (“Ode on a Distant Prospect”). His

personifications, however, have seldom the clear-cut outlines we find

in Collins, nor do they possess more than a tinge of the vividness and

vitality the latter could breathe into his abstractions. Yet now and then

we come across instances of the friezes in which Collins excels, moving

figures depicted as in Greek plastic art

Antic sports and blue-eyed Pleasures,

Frisking light in frolic measures

(“Progress of Poesy”)

or the beautiful vision in the “Bard,”

Bright Rapture calls and soaring as she sings,

Waves in the eyes of heaven her many-coloured wings.

And in the “Ode on Vicissitude” Gray has one supreme example of the

embryonic personification, when the powers or orders of nature are

invested with human attributes, and thus brought before us as living

beings, in the form of vague but suggestive impressions that leave to the

imagination the task of filling in the details:

Now the golden Morn aloft

Waves her dew-bespangled wing

With vernal cheek and whisper soft

She woos the tardy spring.

But in the main, and much more than the poet with whom his name is

generally coupled, it is perhaps not too much to say that Gray was

content to handle the device in the same manner as the uninspired

imitators of the “L’Allegro” and “Il Penseroso.” Not that he was

unaware of the danger of such a tendency in himself and others. “I

had rather,” he wrote to Mason[226] when criticizing the latter’s

“Caractacus,” “some of the personages—‘Resignation,’ ‘Peace,’ ‘Revenge,’

‘Slaughter,’ ‘Ambition’—were stripped of their allegorical garb. A

little simplicity here and there in the expression would better prepare

the high and fantastic harpings that follow.” In the light of this most

salutary remark, Gray’s own procedure is only the more astonishing. His

innumerable personifications may not have been regarded by Johnson as

contributory to “the kind of cumbrous splendour” he wished away from the

odes, but the fact that they are scarce in the “Elegy” is not without

significance. The romantic feeling which asserts itself clearly in the

odes, the new imaginative conceptions which these stock figures were

called upon to convey, the perfection of the workmanship—these qualities

were more than sufficient to counterweigh Gray’s licence of indulgence in

a mere rhetorical device. Yet Coleridge was right in calling attention

to this defect of Gray’s style, especially as his censure is no mere

diatribe against the use of personified abstraction: it is firmly and

justly based on the undeniable fact that Gray’s personifications are for

the most part cold and lifeless, that they are mere verbal abstractions,

utterly devoid of the redeeming vitality, which Collins gives to his

figures.[227] It is for this reason perhaps that his poetry in the

mass has never been really popular, and that the average reader, with

his impatience of abstractions, has been content, with Dr. Johnson, to

pronounce boldly for “The Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard.”

Before proceeding to examine the works of the other great poets who

announce or exemplify the Romantic revival, it will be convenient at

this point to look at some of the Spenserian imitations, which helped to

inspire and vitalize the revival.

Spenser was the poet of mediaeval allegory. In the “Faerie Queene,”

for the first time a real poet, endowed with the highest powers of

imagination and expression, was able to present the old traditional

abstractions wonderfully decked up in a new and captivating guise. The

personages that move like dream figures through the cantos of the poem

are thus no mere personified abstractions: they are rather pictorial

emblems, many of which are limned for us with such grandeur of conception

and beauty of execution as to secure for the allegorical picture a

“willing suspension of disbelief,” whilst the essentially romantic

atmosphere more than atones for the cumbrous and obsolete machinery

adopted by Spenser to inculcate the lessons of “virtuous and gentle

discipline.”

Though the eighteenth century Spenserians make a plentiful use of

personified abstraction, on the whole their employment of this device

differs widely from its mechanical use by most of their contemporaries:

in the best of the imitations there are few examples of the lifeless

abstraction. Faint traces at least of the music and melody of the “Faerie

Queene” have been caught and utilized to give a poetic charm even to

the personified virtues and vices that naturally appear in the work of

Spenser’s imitators. Thus in William Thompson’s “Epithalamium” (1736),

while many of the old figures appear before us, they have something of

the new charm with which Collins was soon to invest them. Thus,

Liberty, the fairest nymph on ground

The flowing plenty of her growing hair

Diffusing lavishly ambrosia round

Earth smil’d, and Gladness danc’d along the sky.

The epithets which accompany the abstractions are no longer conventional

(“Chastity meek-ey’d,” “Modesty sweet-blushing”) and help to give touches

of animation to otherwise inanimate figures. In the “Nativity” (1757)

there is a freer use of the mere abstraction that calls up no distinct

picture, but even here there are happy touches that give relief:

Faith led the van, her mantle dipt in blue,

Steady her ken, and gaining on the skies.

In the “Hymn to May” (1787) Thompson personified the month whose charms

he is singing, the result being a radiant figure, having much in common

with the classical personifications of the orders or powers of nature:

A silken camus, em’rald green

Gracefully loose, adown her shoulder flow.

In Shenstone’s “Schoolmistress” (1737-1742) instances of personification

are rare, and, where they do occur, are merely faint abstractions like

“Learning near her little dome.” It is noteworthy that one of the most

successful of the Spenserian imitations should have dispensed with the

cumbrous machinery of abstract beings that, on the model of the “Faerie

Queene,” might naturally have been drawn upon. The homely atmosphere of

the “Schoolmistress,” with its idyllic pictures and its gentle pathos,

would, indeed, have been fatally marred by their introduction.

The same sparing use of personification is evident in the greatest of

the imitations, James Thomson’s “Castle of Indolence” (1748). A theme

of this nature afforded plenty of opportunity to indulge in the device,

and Thomson, judging from its use of the figure in some of his blank

verse poems, might have been expected to take full advantage. But there

are less than a score of examples in the whole of the poem. Only vague

references are made to the eponymous hero: he is simply “Indolence” or

“tender Indolence” or “the demon Indolence.” For the rest Thomson’s few

abstractions are of the stock type, though occasionally more realistic

touches result, we may suppose, from the poet’s sense of humour as

The sleepless Gout here counts the crowing cock.

Only here and there has Thomson attempted full-length portraits in the

Spenserian manner, as when Lethargy, Hydropsy, and Hypochondria are

described with drastic realism.[228]

The works of the minor Spenserians show a greater use of personified

abstraction, but even with them there is no great excess. Moreover,

where instances do occur, they show imaginative touches foreign to the

prevalent types. Thus in the “Vision of Patience” by Samuel Boyce (d.

1778),

Silence sits on her untroubled throne

As if she left the world to live and reign alone,

while Patience stands

In robes of morning grey.

Occasionally the personified abstractions, though occurring in

avowedly Spenserian imitations, obviously owe more to the influence of

“L’Allegro”; as in William Whitehead’s “Vision of Solomon” (1730), where

the embroidered personifications are much more frequent than the detailed

images given by Spenser.[229]

The work of Chatterton represents another aspect of this revival of the

past, but it is curious to find that, in his acknowledged “original”

verse there are not many instances of the personified abstraction,

whilst they are freely used in the Rowley poems. Where they do occur

in his avowedly original work they are of the usual type, though more

imaginative power is revealed in his personification of Winter:

Pale rugged Winter bending o’er his tread,

His grizzled hair bedropt with icy dew:

His eyes a dusky light congealed and dead,

His robe a tinge of bright ethereal blue.

From our special point of view the “antiquarianism” of the Rowley

poems might almost be disproved by the prevalence of abstractions and

personifications, which in most instances are either unmistakably of

the eighteenth century or which testify to the new Romantic atmosphere

now manifesting itself. The stock types of frigid abstraction are all

brought on the stage in the manner of the old Moralities, and each is

given an ample speaking part in order to describe his own characteristics.

But in addition to these lifeless abstractions, there are to be

found in the Rowley poems a large number of detailed and elaborate

personifications. Some of these are full length portraits in the

Spenserian manner, and now and then the resulting personification is

striking and beautiful, as when, in “Ælla” (59), Celmond apostrophizes

Hope, or the evocation of Truth in “The Storie of William Canynge.”

Chatterton has also in these poems a few personifications of natural

powers, but these are mainly imitative as in the lines (“Ælla,” 94)

reminiscent of Milton and Pope[230]:

Bright sun had in his ruddy robes been dight

From the red east he flitted with his train,

The hours drew away the robe of night,

Her subtle tapestry was rent in twain.

But the evocation of the seasons themselves, as in “Ælla” (32),

When Autumn sere and sunburnt doth appear

With his gold hand gilding the falling leaf

Bringing up Winter to fulfil the year

Bearing upon his back the ripened sheaf,

conveys a fresh and distinct picture that belongs to the new poetry, and

has in it a faint forecast of Keats.

It remains to look at the work of the later eighteenth century poets,

who announce that if the Romantic outburst is not yet, it is close at

hand. The first and greatest of these is William Blake. His use of

personification in the narrower sense which is our topic, is, of course,

formally connected with the large and vital question of his symbolism, to

treat of which here in any detail is not part of our scheme.

In its widest sense, however, Blake’s mysticism may be connected with

the great mediaeval world of allegory: it is “an eddy of that flood-tide

of symbolism which attained its tide-mark in the magic of the Middle

Ages.”[231] But the poet himself unconsciously indicates the vital

distinction between the new symbolism, which he inaugurates, and the

old, of which the personified abstractions of his eighteenth century

predecessors may be regarded as faint and faded relics. “Allegory

addressed to the intellectual powers,” he wrote to Thomas Butts,[232]

“while it is altogether hidden from the corporeal understanding, is my

definition of the most surprising poetry.”

On its formal side, and reduced to its simplest expression, we may narrow

down for our present purpose the whole system to the further distinction

drawn by Blake between Allegory and Vision. Allegory is “formed by the

daughters of Memory” or the deliberate reason; Vision “is surrounded by

the daughters of Inspiration.” Here we have a key to the classification

of personified abstractions in the eighteenth century, and, for that

matter, at any and every period. Abstractions formed by the deliberate

reason are usually more or less rhetorical embellishments of poetry, and

to this category belong the great majority of the personifications of

eighteenth century verse. They are “things that relate to moral virtues”

or vices, but they cannot truly be called allegorical, for allegory is a

living thing only so long as the ideas it embodies are real forces that

control our conduct. The inspired personification, which embodies or

brings with it a real vision, is the truly poetical figure.

In Blake’s own practice we find only a few instances of the typical

eighteenth century abstraction. In the early “Imitation of Spenser” there

are one or two examples:

Such is sweet Eloquence that does dispel

Envy and Hate that thirst for human gore,

whilst others are clearly Elizabethan reminiscences, like

Mournful lean Despair

Brings me yew to deck my grave,

or

Memory, hither come

And tune your merry notes.

“The Island in the Moon” furnishes grotesque instances, such as that

of old Corruption dressed in yellow vest. In “The Divine Image,” from

the “Songs of Innocence,” while commonplace virtues are personified,

the simple direct manner of the process distinguishes them from their

prototypes in the earlier moral and didactic poetry of the century:

For Mercy has a human heart

Pity a human face

And Love, the human form divine

And Peace the human dress.[233]

An instance of personification raised to a higher power is found in

Blake’s letter to Butts[234] beginning

With Happiness stretch’d across the hills,

In a cloud that dewy sweetness distils,

whilst elsewhere personified abstractions appear with new epithets, the

most striking example being in “Earth’s Answer,” from the “Songs of

Experience”:

Prison’d on watry shore

_Starry_ Jealousy does keep my den.

Moreover, Blake’s figures are often presented in an imaginative guise

that helps to emphasize the gulf fixed between him and the majority of

his contemporaries and predecessors. Thus “Joy” is twice depicted as a

bird:

Joys upon our branches sit

Chirping loud and singing sweet

(“Song”—“Poetical Sketches”)

and

Welcome, stranger, to this place

Where Joy doth sit on every bough.

(“Song by a Shepherd”)

In Blake’s youthful work the personifications of natural powers, though

in most cases clearly imitative are yet striking in their beauty and

power of suggestion. The influence of “Ossian” is seen in such “prose”

personifications as “The Veiled Evening walked solitary down the Western

hills and Silence reposed in the valley” (“The Couch of Death”), and

“Who is this that with unerring step dares to tempt the wild where only

Nature’s foot has trod, ’Tis Contemplation, daughter of the Grey Morning”

(“Contemplation”). Here also are evocations of the seasons which,

whatever they may owe to Thomson or Collins, are new in that we actually

get a picture of Spring with “dewy locks” as she looks down

Thro’ the clear windows of the morning

of summer with

ruddy limbs and flourishing hair,

of the “jolly autumn,”

laden with fruits and stained

With the blood of the grape;

and of winter,

a dreadful monster whose skin clings

To her strong bones.

Thomson, we have seen, had not been altogether successful in his

personification of the seasons: here they are brought vividly and

fittingly before us. When we think of the hosts of puppets that in the

guise of personified abstractions move mechanically through so much of

eighteenth century verse, and compare them with the beautiful visions

evoked by Blake, we know from this evidence alone that the reign of

one of the chief excesses of the poetical language of the time is near

its end. It is not that Blake’s conceptions are all flesh and blood

creations: often they are rather ethereal beings, having something in

common with the evanescent images of Collins. But the rich and lofty

imagination that has given them birth is more than sufficient to secure

their acceptance as realities capable of living and moving before us; the

classical abstraction, cold and lifeless, has now become the Romantic

personification clothed in beauty and animated with life and inner

meaning.

In the year of the “Poetical Sketches” (1783) George Crabbe published

“The Village,” his first work to meet with any success. But whilst Blake

gloriously announces the emancipation of English poetry, Crabbe for the

most part is still writing on in the old dead style. The heroic couplets

of his earliest works have all the rhetorical devices of his predecessors

in that measure, and amongst these the prevalence of personified

abstractions is not the least noteworthy. The subject of his first poem

of any length, “Inebriety” (1775), afforded him plenty of scope in this

direction, and he availed himself fully of the opportunity.[235] The

absence of capital letters from some of the instances in this poem may

perhaps be taken to reflect a confusion in the poet’s mind as to whether

he was indulging in personification or in mere abstraction, to adopt

Coleridge’s remark anent Gray’s use of this figure.[236]

In “The Village,” Crabbe’s first poem of any real merit, there is a

more sparing use, yet instances are even here plentiful, whilst his

employment of the device had not died out when in the early years of the

nineteenth century he resumed his literary activities. Among the poems

published in the 1807 volume there is a stiff and cumbrous allegory

entitled “The Birth of Flattery,” which, introduced by three Spenserian

stanzas, depicts Flattery as the child of Poverty and Cunning, attended

by guardian satellites, “Care,” “Torture,” “Misery,” _et hoc omne genus_.

They linger on to the time of the “Posthumous Tales,” where there is a

sad, slow procession of them, almost, we might imagine, as if they were

conscious of the doom pronounced years before, and of the fact that they

were strangers in a strange land:

Yet Resignation in the house is seen

Subdued Affliction, Piety serene,

And Hope, for ever striving to instil

The balm for grief, “It is the heavenly will.”

(XVIII, 299 foll.)

It is not perhaps too fanciful to see in this lament a palinode of the

personifications themselves, sadly resigning themselves to an inevitable

fate.

Towards the ultimate triumph of the new poetry the work of William Cowper

represents perhaps the most important contribution, judging at least from

the viewpoint both of its significance as indicating new tendencies in

literature, and of its immediate influence on readers and writers. In

the narrow sense of style the “simplicity” which was Cowper’s ideal was

only occasionally marred by the conventional phraseology and bombastic

diction which he himself laid to the charge of the “classical” school,

and his gradual emancipation from the tenets and practices of that school

is reflected in his steady advance towards the purity of expression for

which he craved. And in this advance it is to be noted that the gradual

disappearance of personified abstractions is one of the minor landmarks.

The earlier work furnishes instances of the common type of mere

abstraction where there is no attempt to give any real personification.

Even in the “Olney Hymns” (1779) such verses as

But unbelief, self-will

Self-righteousness and pride,

How often do they steal

My weapon from my side

only seem to present the old mechanical figures in a new setting.[237]

The long series of satiric poems that followed draw freely upon the same

“mythology,” and indeed the satires that appear in this 1782 volume

recall to some extent the style of Churchill.[238] There is a somewhat

similar, though more restricted, use of personified abstraction, and, as

in Churchill’s satires, virtues and vices are invested with slight human

qualities and utilized to enforce moral and didactic truths. Thus,

Peace follows Virtue as its sure reward

And Pleasure brings as surely in her train

Remorse and Sorrow and Vindictive Pain.

(“Progress of Error”)

Among the short pieces in this volume are the famous lines put into

the mouth of Alexander Selkirk, which contain a fine example of the

apostrophic personification, the oft-quoted

O Solitude! where are thy charms

That sages have seen in thy face,

where the passion and sincerity of the appeal give dignity and animation

to an otherwise lifeless abstraction, and, despite the absence of detail,

really call up a definite picture.

From the blank verse of his most famous work nearly every trace of the

mechanical abstraction has disappeared—a great advance when we remember

that “The Task” is in the direct line of the moral and didactic verse

that had occupied so many of Cowper’s predecessors.

The first Books (“The Sofa”) contain but one instance and that in a

playful manner:

Ingenious Fancy, never better pleased

Than when employed to accommodate the fair.

(ll. 72 foll.)

The Fourth Book (“The Winter Evening”) is entirely free from instances of

the mechanical abstraction, but the vision of Oriental Empire, and the

fascination of the East, is effectively evoked in the personification of

the land of the Moguls:

Is India free? and does she wear her plumed

And jewelled turban with a smile of peace.

(ll. 28-9)

“The Task,” however, has two examples of the detailed personification.

The first is an attempt, in the manner of Spenser, to give a full length

portrait of “a sage called Discipline”:

His eye was meek and gentle and a smile

Played on his lips, and in his speech was heard

Paternal sweetness

(Bk. II, l. 702 foll.)

where there is a depth of feeling, as well as a gentle satiric touch in

the delineation, that animate it into something more than a mere stock

image; it embodies perhaps a reminiscence of one who at some time or

other had guided the destinies of the youthful Cowper.

The second instance is of a more imaginative kind. It is the

presentation, in the Fourth Book, of Winter, with

forehead wrapt in cloud

A leafless branch thy sceptre,

almost the only occasion on which Cowper, despite the nature of his

subject, has personified the powers and orders of nature.[239] Cowper

has also invested the Evening with human attributes, and despite the

imitative ring of the lines,[240] and the “quaintness” of the images

employed, there is a new beauty in the evocation:

Come, Evening, once again, season of peace;

Return, sweet Evening, and continue long!

Methinks I see thee in the streaky west

With matron step slow-moving, while the night

Treads on thy sweeping train.

The darkness soon to fall over the landscape is suggested in the added

appeal to Evening to come

Not sumptuously adorned, nor needing aid

Like homely-featured Night, of clustering gems,

where the compound epithet emphasizes the contrast between the quiet

beauty of the twilight skyscape and the star-sprinkled gloom of the night.

Finally, one of the last instances of the personified abstraction to be

found in the work of Cowper may perhaps be taken to reflect something of

the changes that have been silently working underneath. This is in the

lines that suddenly bring “Yardley Oak” to an end:

History not wanted yet

Leaned on her elbow watching Time whose course

Eventful should supply her with a theme.

At first glance we seem to have here but the old conventional figures,

but there is an imaginative touch that helps to suggest a new world of

romance. “History leaning on her elbow” has something at least of that

mysterious power of suggestion that Wordsworth himself was to convey by

means of the romantic personification, such as those shadowy figures—Fear

and Trembling Hope, and Death the Skeleton, and Time the Shadow—which

gathered round and hallowed the shade of the yew trees in Borrowdale.

But even while the old poetry was in its death agony a champion was at

hand, daring to maintain a lost cause both by precept and example. This

was Erasmus Darwin, whose once-famous work “The Botanic Garden,” with

its two parts, “The Loves of the Plants” (1789), and “The Economy of

Vegetation” (1791), has earlier been mentioned.

It met with immediate success. Darwin seems to have fascinated his

contemporaries, so that even Coleridge was constrained in 1802 to call

him “the first literary character in Europe.”[241] He had, however,

little real admiration for “The Botanic Garden,” and later expressed

his opinion unmistakably.[242] “The Botanic Garden” soon died a natural

death, hastened no doubt by the ridicule it excited, but inevitably

because of the fact that the poem is an unconscious _reductio ad

absurdum_ of a style already doomed.[243] The special matter with which

we are concerned in this chapter had for Darwin a marked significance,

since it fitted in admirably with his general doctrine or dogma that

nothing is strictly poetic except what is presented in visual image. His

“theory” was that, just as the old mythologies had created a whole world

of personified abstractions to explain or interpret natural phenomena

of every description, exactly by the same method the scientific thought

and developments of his own age could be poetically expounded so as

to captivate both the hearts and minds of his readers. It was his

ambition, he said, “to enlist imagination under the banner of science.”

This “theory” is expounded in one of the interludes placed between the

different cantos. “The poet writes principally to the eye,” and allegory

and personifications are to be commended because they give visible

form to abstract conceptions.[244] Putting his theory into practice,

Darwin then proceeds with great zeal to personify the varied and various

scientific facts or hypotheses of physics, botany, etc., metamorphosing

the forces of the air and other elements into sylphs and gnomes and so

on. Thus,

Soon shall thy arm, Unconquered

Steam afar

Drag the slow barge or drive the

Rapid car.

(E.V., Canto I, 289, 290)

In the same way all the plants, as classified by Linnæus, are personified

as “swains” or “belles” who “love” and quarrel, and finally make it up

just as ordinary mortals do:

All wan and shivering in the leafless glade

The sad Anemone reclin’d her head

(L.P., Canto I, 315-6)

or

Retiring Lichen climbs the topmost stone

And drinks the aerial solitude alone.

(_Ibid._, 347-8)

The whole poem is thus one long series of mechanical personifications

which baffle and bewilder and finally wear out the reader. It is strange

now to think that “The Botanic Garden” was at the height of its vogue

when the “Lyrical Ballads” were being planned and written, but the

easy-flowing couplets of Darwin, and the “tinsel and glitter” of his

diction, together with most of the “science” he was at such pains to

expound (though he was a shrewd and even prophetic inquirer in certain

branches, such as medicine and biology), have now little more than a

faint historical interest. Yet his theory and practice of poetry—the

“painted mists that occasionally rise from the marshes at the foot of

Parnassus,” Coleridge called them—so dominated the literature of the last

decade of the eighteenth century as to be capable of captivating the mind

of the poet who was about to sound their death-knell.

While Wordsworth inveighed against “personification” in the great

manifesto, his earliest poetry shows clearly, as has been noted, that in

this as in other respects he had fallen under the spell and influence of

“The Botanic Garden.” The “Evening Walk” and the “Descriptive Sketches”

swarm with instances of personifications of the type that had flourished

apace for a hundred years, “Impatience,” “Pain,” “Independence,” “Hope,”

“Oppression,” and dozens similar.[245] There is thus a certain comic

irony in the fact that the poet, who was the first to sound the revolt

against “personifications” and similar “heightenings” of style, should

have embarked on his literary career with the theft of a good deal of

the thunder of the enemy. Later, when Wordsworth’s true ideal of style

had evolved itself, this feature of the two poems was in great measure

discarded. The first (1793) draft of the “Descriptive Sketches” contains

over seventy examples of more or less frigid abstractions; in the final

draft of the poem these have dwindled down to about a score.[246]

In our detailed examination of personification in eighteenth century

poetry we have seen that in general it includes three main types. There

is first the mere abstraction, whose distinctive sign is the presence

of a capital letter; it may be, and often is, qualified by epithets

suggestive of human attributes, but there is little or no attempt to give

a definite picture or evoke a distinctive image. This is the prevalent

type, and it is against these invertebrates that the criticism of

Wordsworth and Coleridge was really directed.

Their widespread use in the eighteenth century is due to various causes.

In the first place they represent a survival, however artificial and

lifeless, of the great mediaeval world of allegory, with its symbolic

representation derived from the pagan and classical mythologies, of

the attributes of the divine nature, and of the qualities of the human

mind, as living entities. But by now the life had departed from them;

they were hopelessly effete and had become consciously conventional and

fictitious.[247]

They also owed their appearance, as indicated above, to more definite

literary causes and “fashions”; they swarm especially, for instance, in

the odes of the mid-century, the appearance of which was mainly due to

the influence of “L’Allegro” and “Il Penseroso.” The virtues and vices,

the “shadowy tribes of the mind,” which are there unceasingly invoked

and dismissed are mechanical imitations of the figures that the genius

of Milton had been able to inspire with real poetic value and life. They

play their part similarly and just as mechanically in the didactic and

satirical verse characteristic of the period.

But whether regarded as a sort of literary flotsam and jetsam, or as one

of the symptoms of “Milton-mad” verse, these personifications are nearly

all enfeebled by weaknesses inherent in their very genesis. Only a deep

and intense conception of a mental abstraction can justify any attempt

to personify it poetically; otherwise the inevitable result is a mere

rhetorical ornament, which fails because it conveys neither the “vast

vagueness” of the abstract, nor any clear-cut pictorial conception of the

person. Even with Gray, as with the mere poetasters who used this figure

to excess, it has the effect of a dull and wearisome mannerism; only

here and there, as in the sonorous lines in which Johnson personified

Worth held down by Poverty, does the display of personal emotion give any

dignity and depth to the image.

Again, the very freedom with which the conventional abstractions are

employed, allowing them to be introduced on every possible occasion,

tends to render the device absurd, if not ludicrous. For the versifiers

seemed to have at their beck and call a whole phantom army upon which

they could draw whenever they chose; for them they are veritable gods

from the machines. But so mechanical are their entrances and exits

that the reader rarely suspects them to be intended for “flesh and

blood creations,” though, it may be added, the poetaster himself

would be slow to make any such claim. To him they are merely part of

his stock-in-trade, like the old extravagances, the “conceits,” and

far-fetched similes of the Metaphysical school.

The second type of personification found in eighteenth century verse

needs but brief mention here. It is the detailed personification where

a full-length portrait is attempted. Like the mere abstraction it, too,

is a survival of mediaeval allegory, and it is also most often a merely

mechanical literary process, reflecting no real image in the poet’s mind.

It is not found to any large extent, and in a certain measure owes its

presence to the renewed interest in Spenser. The Spenserian imitations

themselves are comparatively free from this type, a sort of negative

indication of the part played by the revival in the new Romantic movement.

The third type is perhaps best described as the embryonic

personification. It consists in the attributing of an individual and

living existence to the visible forms and invisible powers of nature, a

disposition, deeply implanted in the human mind from the very dawn of

existence, which has left in the mythologies and creeds of the world a

permanent impress of its power. In eighteenth century literature this

type received its first true expression in the work of Thompson and

Collins, whilst its progress, until it becomes merged and fused in the

pantheism of Wordsworth and Shelley, may be taken as a measure of the

advance of the Romantic movement in one of its most vital aspects.

Regarded on its purely formal side, that is, as part and parcel of the

_language_ of poetry, the use of personification may then be naturally

linked up with the generally literary development of the period. In the

“classical” verse proper the figure employed is, as it were, a mere word

and no more; it is the reflex of precisely as much individual imagination

as the stock phrases of descriptive verse, _the flowery meads_, _painted

birds_, and so on. There was no writing with the inner eye on the

object, and the abstraction as a result was a mere rhetorical label,

corresponding to no real vision of things.

The broad line of advance in this, as in other aspects of eighteenth

century literature, passes through the work of those who are now looked

upon as the forerunners of the Romantic revolt. The frigid abstraction,

a mere word distinguished by a capital letter, is to be found in “The

Seasons,” but alongside there is also an approach to definite pictorial

representation of the object personified. In the odes of Collins the

advent of the pictorial image is definitely and triumphantly announced,

and though the mechanical abstractions linger on even until the new

poetry has well established itself, they are only to be found in the

work of those who either, like Johnson and Crabbe, belong definitely as

regards style to the old order, or like Goldsmith and, to a less extent,

Cowper, reflect as it were sort of half-way attitude towards the old and

the new.

With Blake the supremacy of the artistic personification is assured. His

mystical philosophy in its widest aspect leads him to an identification

of the divine nature with the human, but sometimes this signification

is to be seen merging into a more conscious symbolism, or even sinking

into that “totally distinct and inferior kind of poetry” known as

allegory. Yet with Blake the poet, as well as Blake the artist, the

use of personified abstraction is an integral part of the symbolism he

desired to perpetuate. His imagination ran strongly in that direction,

and it has been aptly pointed out that his most intense mental and

emotional experiences became for him spiritual persons. But even where

the presence of a capital letter is still the only distinguishing mark

of the personification, he is able, either by the mere context or by

the addition of a suggestive epithet, to transform and transfigure the

abstraction into a poetical emblem of the doctrine whose apostle he

believed himself to be.

It is hardly necessary to say that the use of personification and

abstraction, even in their narrower applications as rhetorical ornaments

or artifices of verse, were not banished from English poetry as a result

of Wordsworth’s criticism. Ruskin has drawn a penetrating distinction

between personification and symbolism,[248] and it was in this direction

perhaps that Wordsworth’s protest may be said to have been of the

highest value. His successors, for the most part, distrustful of mere

abstractions, and impatient of allegory, with its attendant dangers of

lifeless and mechanical personification, were not slow to recognize

the inherent possibilities of symbolism as an artistic medium for the

expression of individual moods and emotions, and it is not too much to

say that in its successful employment English poetry has since won some

of its greatest triumphs.

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